读后续写人与动物：鸽子与猎鹰(1) 学案 高三英语二轮专题

本次命题就是从青少年角度进行的，融合了动物保护和个人成长的品质两个主题进行设题，体现了新课标中的“人与自我”和“人与自然”话题的巧妙结合，这是非常精准的。【原文再现】Danny'sgrandfatherlovedtokeeppigeons,andGoldiewasoneofthem.Goldiehadgoldeneyes,whichwasveryrareinpigeons.

Grandfathersaidhehadneverhadapigeon

likeher.Goldiewasachampionracingpigeonandhadwonloadsofcups.Butonce,aroundthetimeGoldiewasreleasedtwohundredmilesawayforarace,Danny’sgrandfatherwas

hospitalizedwithaheartattack.

TheresponsibilityofwaitingforGoldieandtakingcareoftheotherpigeonsthenfellonDanny.However,

Goldiedidnotflybackontimeasusual.Inordernottoupsethisgrandfather,whilevisitinghimthatnightwithhisparents,

DannyliedthatGoldiehadalreadyreturnedandwonthefirstplace.

“Iknewit”,

saidDanny’sgrandfather,settlingbackonhispillows,

“Ialwaysknewshewasawinner.

She'soneinamillion.”

Grandfatherbelievedthelie.Sometimesgrandfather’sracingpigeonsgotlostduetobadweatherorgotattackedby

falcons(猎鹰)andnevercamebackhome,butthosehadneverhappenedtoGoldie.Shealwayscamehome,rightontime.

“Goldiemusthavebeeneatenbythosefalconsnestinginthequarry(采石场)onherwaybackhome”,

Dannythoughttohimselfbitterlyandhischestwasburning.

Dannysworetohimselftotakerevenge.“Theyareathreat,thosefalcons!Imustgetridofthemandpulldowntheirnest.”ItonlytookDannyfiveminutestoreachthequarry.

Dannylookedaroundthequarrywallsandfoundtheirnestonasteepestside,

whichwasalongwayup.

Heclimbedfasttherewereoldtreerootstograbholdof.

Hishandswerebleeding.Buthedidn'tfeelthepain.Hewashangingontherockwallwithhisfinger-tipslikeastarfish.

Hisarmsweresoweakandtrembling,buthewasfinallythere.Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’

nest,

hesuddenlysawthe

baby-falconsinit._________________________________

Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wing-brokenbutstillalive.________________________________________【故事梗概】Danny的爷爷爱好养鸽子，其中一只罕有的长着金黄色眼睛的叫Goldie，深得爷爷的喜爱。Goldie是训练有素的冠军赛鸽，赢得过很多奖杯。但就在一次Goldie被放飞参加比赛期间，Danny的爷爷因心脏病发作而住院。Goldie没有像往常那样按时飞回来，Danny不知道如何向住院的爷爷交代，为了不让爷爷失望，只好向爷爷撒谎说Goldie已经返回并获得赛鸽比赛的冠军，这让并不知情的爷爷很是满意。Danny觉得Goldie一定是在飞回的路上被栖居在采石场的猎鹰吃掉了，怒火中烧的他决定报复。他只身一人前往采石场，想端掉猎鹰的老巢。丹尼费劲辛苦，爬上了陡峭的采石场的岩壁，待终于爬到了猎鹰的巢穴并要将其捣毁时，却看到了......【名著词句】1.Youwilllivetoenjoythebeautyofthefrozenworld,foryoumeanagreatdealtoZuckermanandhewillnotharmyou,ever.

(from

Charlotte’sWeb)2.Everyanimalstirredandlifteditsheadandbecameexcitedtoknowthatoneofhisfriendshadgotfreeandwasnolongerpenneduportiedfast.(from

Charlotte’sWeb)3.Wilburshuthiseyes.Ferngotupfromherstoolandstartedforhome,hermindfullofeverythingshehadseenandheard.

(from

Charlotte’sWeb)4.Shesoonrefuses,thenagrees,andeventuallyrefuses,insistingthateitherbothgoorbothstaywiththeboat.Sheisatwarwithherself,tornbetweenherdesireforfunandherloveofhim.

(from

TheBorderTown)5.Templetonworkedawayatthejob,andmanagedtocutthesacadriftandcarryittotheground,wherehedroppeditinfrontofWilbur.

(from

Charlotte’sWeb)6.Wilburheavedagreatsighofrelief.

(from

Charlotte’sWeb)7.Theoldgentlemansoftlystrokedherhair,andstoopeddowntokissheronthecheek,saying—(from

LittleWomen)8.Thebarnwaspleasantlywarminwinterwhentheanimalsspentmostoftheirtimeindoors,anditwaspleasantlycoolinsummerwhenthebigdoorsstoodwideopentothebreeze.

(from

Charlotte’sWeb)9.Iwatchedhimturnandwalkwithdifficultyacrossthemarshes,thechainhangingclumsilyaroundhisleg.ThenIranhomeasfastasIcould.原文：makethebestuseofmylegs，更加形象。(from

GreatExpectations)10.‘Really,Mr.Pip,tolosesomuchcash!’hesaid.‘Yousee,Compeysonwassodeterminedtogethisrevengethatyoucouldn'thavesavedMagwitch.

(from

GreatExpectations)【下水作文】Just

ashe

reachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’

nest,hesuddenlysawthebaby-falconsinit.

Hishandfrozeintheair.

Hearingsomesounds,thebaby-falcons

liftedtheirheads,

singingto

himmerrilyandhaving

noideaofthecomingdanger.

Thenaimage

of

Goldie’s

babies

jumpedintoDanny’smind---

theywereallbabies,neededto

be

protected.

Dannywas

at

warwithhimself,

tornbetweenthethoughtoftakingrevengeandthepoorbabies.

At

that

time,the

sweetsings

broughthimbackdowntoearth.

Staringatthebaby-falcons’

goldeneyes,withasigh

of

reliefinhis

heart,heheldouthishand,andstroked

theirheads,thenheturned

aroundandclimbeddown

the

side.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wing-brokenbutstillalive.

Pleasantlysurprised

yet

heartbroken,

hequicklygotclosetoGoldie,

and

cupped

itinhandssoftly.Goldiemadebestuse

ofhis

legsto

get

home.Underthe

assistance

of

hisfather,they

managedtomake

Goldie

well

treated.Severalweekslater,

when

grandfatherrecovered

andreturned

from

hospital,

Dannytoldthewholestor