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话题4个人成长与感悟经典3+2Writing1

[2022新高考Ⅰ卷]Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened."Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably."Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide."Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.经典3+2Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.经典3+2注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式作答。Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________经典3+2写作指导

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故事梗概越野跑那天,来自小镇周边的七所小学的学生们正在热身,身体残疾的David独自待在篱笆旁。原来教练担心其他学校的孩子会嘲笑他,就让他选择参加与否,他选择放弃比赛。他虽患有脑疾,但是他的同学将他视为正常的孩子。无论同学们在做什么,他总是尽自己最大的能力参与其中。

续写思路根据续写第一段首句可确定第一段的写作思路——面对David不愿看我一眼的情况,我是如何和他交流的?我说服他了吗?他是否决定参加比赛?根据续写第二段首句可确定第二段的写作思路——走路不便的David是否克服了困难?在比赛中发生了什么事?他最后取得胜利了吗?同学们对他的态度怎么样?经典3+2佳作展台

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Iquietlysaid,"David,ifyoudon’twanttoruntoday(if引导条件状语从句),nooneisgoingtomakeyoudo.Butifyou’renotrunningbecauseyou’reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that’snotagoodenoughreason.Therewillalwaysbesomeonewhowilllaughandsaymeanwords(who引导定语从句).Therearepeoplelikethat,andthat’sjustthewayitis.Therealquestioniswhetheryouaregoingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufromdoingsomethingyoureallywanttodo(whether引导表语从句,里面包含了省略了that的定语从句).Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,thenyourun!"IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithfiercebutquietdetermination,"I’mgonnarun."

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IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Thestarter’sgunsounded,andDavidlurchedforwardwiththeotherchildren.Buthehadonlygoneafewmetresbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundmeappearedtoo.Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.ThiswasDavid’srun.Hehadworkedforit,andhewouldn’tgiveup!Atlast,heraised

hisarmsintriumphashecrossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.Attheendoftheyear,thetrackcoachaskedtheclasstonominateoneoftheirclassmatesfortheathleticawardfortheirgrade.WithouthesitationthewholeclassvotedforDavid,sayingthatnoonehadworkedharderforthatawardthanhe(现在分词短语作伴随状语,第一个that引导宾语从句).答案经典3+2Writing2

[2023广东六校一联]Asasinglemother,I’veneverdoubtedmydaughterJane’sdreamtobeasingeronthestage.Atanearlyage,shewascrazyaboutsinging.Whenevershehadachance,shewouldsingtoherheart’scontent.Hersweetandcharmingvoicetendedtogetpeoplearoundattractedtohersongs.Livinginasmallcity,Itookseveraloddjobs,determinedtodoeverythinginmypowertosupporther.SoonafterJaneattendedschool,hermusicteacherMarynoticedhertalentbychanceandvolunteeredtogivehersomeguidanceonhowtosing.Janepracticedsohardthatbeforelongshemadegreatprogressinsinging.Unfortunately,atnoononedayayearlater,Janewascrossingthestreetwhenacarelessdriverknockedherdown.Shewasrushedtothehospital.WhenIhurriedthere,thedoctortoldmethatmydaughterwouldprobablynotstandonherownfeet.Ifrozewithshock,feelingasifIhadbeenthrownintoadarkworld.Weakanddizzy,Iwasabouttofalltothegroundwhensomeonetookholdofme.ItwasMarywhogotthenewsandracedhere.Shecomfortedme,sayingfirmly,"Grace,Janeneedsyou.Youmuststaycalmandstrong."Inodded.Havingcalmeddown,IenteredthewardwithMary.经典3+2Thatnight,Janerecoveredherconsciousness(知觉)andopenedhereyes.Holdingherhand,Isaid,"Mydear,everythingwouldbefine."Marycomfortedhergently,"Iknowyouareastronggirl,Jane.Don’tworry.We’llbestandingbyyou."IwasheartbrokentoseetearsstreamingdownJane’scheeks.Aftertwomonths,wereturnedhomefromthehospital.Herteachersandfriendsfrequentlyvisitedher.Janeeventuallyacceptedthefactthatshewouldhavetogetaroundinawheelchair.Neverdidsherefertothesubjectofsingingagain.Iknewshewasaniceandunderstandinggirl,whowasafraidthattalkingaboutheroriginaldreamwouldupsetthetwoofus.经典3+2注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式作答。Oneday,however,Marycamewithgoodnews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenthehostannounceditwasJane’sturn,shewaswheeledontothestage.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________经典3+2写作指导

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故事梗概作者的女儿Jane梦想成为歌手,在她的音乐老师Mary的帮助下,Jane为了她的梦想努力取得进步。一年后的一天中午,Jane遭遇了车祸,以后走动必须依靠轮椅,Jane再也没有提过唱歌的话题。

续写思路由续写第一段首句可知,第一段可描写Mary告诉Jane希望她代表班级唱歌,Jane在Mary的帮助下继续练习。由续写第二段首句可知,续写第二段可描写Jane的歌声得到了老师和同学们的赞扬,Jane重新找回了追求梦想的信心。经典3+2佳作展台

Oneday,however,Marycamewithgoodnews.ShetoldJanetheschoolmusicfestivalwastobeheldthenextmonthandthatherclassmatesallexpectedhertosingonbehalfoftheirclass."Really?"Janeexclaimedwithexcitementbutimmediatelywithherheaddrooping(with复合结构),shemurmured,"I’mafraidI’mnotcompetentinit."Perceivingherhesitationandlackofconfidence(现在分词短语作时间状语),MaryandIsaidsomeencouragingwordsandpersuadedhertosignupforit.Inthefollowingmonth,Janeengagedherselfwholeheartedlyinpracticingsinging,beautifulsongsechoinginourhouseagain.UnderMary’sguidance,shemaderapidprogressandherconfidencewasalsobuildingup.Daystickingby(独立主格结构),finallythebigdaycamewhenJanewouldgivehersingingperformanceonthestage.

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WhenthehostannounceditwasJane’sturn,shewaswheeledontothestage.

Nervousasshewas(倒装结构),shetriedtocollectherselfandstayfocused.Asshebegantosing,theaudiencegotenchantedwithhercharmingvoice.Secondsafterherperformance,alltheaudiencerosewiththunderousapplauseandcheers.Nosoonerhad

Janebeenwheeledoffthestagethanshewassurroundedbyherexcitedclassmatesandteacherswithbunchesofflowersinhands(nosooner...than...句型).Shewassomovedthatsheutteredinatremblingvoice,"Withoutyoursupportandencouragement,Iwouldn’tmakeittoday(虚拟语气)."Withmoisteyes,shethrewherarmstightlyaroundMaryandcouldn’tspeakanythingatthatverymoment.ItwasJane’spersistenteffortsandstrongfaiththatpavedthewayforrealizingherdream(强调句).答案经典3+2Writing3

[2023江苏南京六校调研]EverygirldreamedwhenshewasyoungandCindywasnoexception.HerfavoriteballetwasSwanLakeandshehadreaddozensofbooksfromthelibraryorinthebookstoreonhowtobecomeaballerina.Sheanxiouslyhopedthatonedayherdreamwouldcometrue.Shehadtakenballetlessonsandallherteachersconfirmedthatshewasagoodstudentandfullofpotential,whichmadeherlookforwardtothefuture.Onedayshesawanadvertisementthatafamousballerinatroupe(表演团)wouldbeperforminginherhometown.Herthoughtsranwild."Imustmeetupwiththeleaderofthetroupeandshowhimmyskills,"shemurmuredtoherself.Shedressedherselfinherballerinacostumeandmanagedtoavoidtheguardsandhidinthedressingroomtowait,withherheartpounding.Itwasuncertainwhethershecouldseetheleader.Luckily,theleaderenteredandshetimidlyknockedatthedoor.Shebravelyapproachedhimandhandedhimabunchofredroses.Andinherexcitement,shepricked(刺)herfingeronthethornsbutshedidnotmakeabigthingaboutthepain.Theleaderobservedheraction,noddinghisheadslightly,asshetoldhimherdream."Allright,youdanceandIwillgiveyoumyjudgment."经典3+2Buthalfwaythroughthedancehestoppedherandsaidwithanimpish(顽皮的)smileCindydidn’tnotice,"I’msorryyou’renotgoodenough!"Onhearingthis,Cindywastooashamedtoasktheleaderthereasonandrancryingaway,asfastasherlegscouldcarryherwithoutabriefstay.Shakinghisheadindisappointment,theleadersaidtohimself,"Persistencemattersmorethantalent."Threeyearspassing,shewasstillchasingherdream.Thenonedaysheheardthatthesameballettroupewasperforminginhertownagain.Bittermemoriesoftheleader’sharshwordscamefloodingbacktoher.Thistimeshewasdeterminedtofindoutwhytheleaderhadtoldhershewasnotgoodenoughwhenallherteachersthoughtotherwise.经典3+2注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式作答。TheleaderglancedatCindyinpeace,"Irememberhowyouhadprickedyourselfbutyoucarriedonbravely."_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthethought,sheranaftertheleaderimmediately.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________经典3+2写作指导

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故事梗概Cindy喜欢芭蕾舞,梦想着有一天能成为芭蕾舞演员,她对未来充满期待。一个芭蕾舞女演员表演团来她的家乡演出时,她穿上芭蕾舞服,设法见到了领导并开始了表演。可是,领导对她的舞蹈不满意,演到一半就让她停下了。她哭着离开了。她坚持练舞,三年后,那个芭蕾舞女演员表演团再次来到她的家乡。她决心要找出领导当年那样评价的原因。

续写思路根据续写的第一段首句"TheleaderglancedatCindyinpeace,‘Irememberhowyouhadprickedyourselfbutyoucarriedonbravely.’"可确定第一段的写作思路——领导是否解释了当时对她评价不佳的原因?领导对她有什么期待?Cindy对领导的话有何感悟?Cindy有何心理活动?根据续写的第二段首句"Atthethought,sheranaftertheleaderimmediately"可确定第二段的写作思路——追上领导后,Cindy提出了什么要求?Cindy第二次展示芭蕾舞了吗?领导的第二次评价如何?Cindy的感受如何?经典3+2佳作展台

TheleaderglancedatCindyinpeace,"Irememberhowyouhadprickedyourselfbutyoucarriedonbravely.""Sowhat?"Cindyaskedanxiously.Theleadercontinued,"Ijustwonderedifyoucouldtreatballetlikethat(if引导宾语从句).However,youletmedown.Actually,ifyoudidnotgiveupsoeasily,youstilldeservemyfurtherjudgment!"Withthesewordstheleaderwentaway,leavingCindyfrozentherechewingoverhiswords(现在分词短语作结果状语).Cindyfeltabreathoffireburninginherbody,"Didhejusttestmyloyaltytoballetonpurpose?"

Withthethought,sheranaftertheleaderimmediately."Oneisabletoovercomethedifficultiesmainlythroughself-help.Iamstillcrazyaboutballetandyoungenough..."shetalkedtoherself.Thenshefoundtheleaderintherehearsalhall.Itseemedasiftheleaderwaswaitingforher.Cindygatheredcourageandcameup,beggingforanotheropportunity.Thistime,hergracefuldancingwontheleader’sapplause,whichwasbeyondherexpectations(which引导非限制性定语从句)."Itisyourdevotionandpersistencethatmakeyourtalentmorebrilliantandimpressive(强调句型),"theleadersmiled,lookingsincerelyintoCindy’seyes.答案经典3+2Writing4

[2023辽宁五校联考]EveryafternoonIhadtogotothestorewithmyfather,andthepeopletherewouldgiveusthingsthatwerepasttheexpirationdate(有效期)buthadn’tgonebad.Usuallywereceivedthingslikeslicedvegetables,piecesoffruit,bread,andslicesofcakeorpie.Wegavethesetothehomelessalongwiththesandwichesandtea.Myfatherandseveralvolunteersgatheredeverydayintheparktofeedthehungry.IwasgladIdidn’thavetogothere.Itwasenoughtroublejustgettingeverythingready.Ireallydidn’tunderstandwhymyfatherbotheredwithit.Icouldn’twaitforhimtoleave.IlookedforwardtoawholeSaturdaybymyself.Iplannedtowatchsometelevision,talkwithmyfriendsonthephone,andmaybedosomeshoppingduringtheafternoon.Itdidn’ttakelongformyplanstochangeandmyhappinesstodisappear.DadcameinwhileIwasfinishingandstoodbehindme."I’mgoingtoneedyourhelptoday.Someoftheothersthatusuallyhelpmewon’tbeabletomakeit.""Dad,Ican’ttoday,"Icomplained."Ihaveplans,television,friends,shopping,andIwasmaybegoingtogotothepool."经典3+2Hejustgavemetheyou-should-be-ashamed-of-yourselflook."Fine,"Ihadtogivein."It’snotlikeIhavealife."Iwasreallyupsetthatmydaywasruined.IfinishedpackingthesandwichesandfollowedDadouttothevan.Iwantedtocry.Thiswasgoingtobetheworstdayever.Mydadalwaysdrovethevan,whichalsocontainedclothesandsmallbagsfilledwithpersonalitemsaswellassomechairsandalongtable.Hepulledoutofthedrivewaytoheaddowntown.Ilookedoutofthewindowandwatchedaswedrovepastkidsplayingintheirfrontyards.Ifeltlikeaprisonerforcedtoperformcommunityservice.经典3+2注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式作答。Whenwearrivedatthepark,peoplealreadygatheredunderatreewaitingforus.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeingtheirsmiles,Iunderstoodwhymyfatherdidsomuchtohelpthem.______________________________________________