读后续写-振兴烘培店讲义 高考英语二轮复习作文专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AramandRossi'sBakery

Walkingalongthenarrowbricksidewalk,Aramtookadeepbreath.Theairsmelledoflemonsandbakedbreadandcoffee,comingfromRossi’sItalianBakery.Hewasalmostthere.

Aramstillcouldn'tbelievehisluck.Allhisfriendswereworkingboringsummerjobs—waitingtablesandbabysitting.Andherehewas,abouttostartasanactualbaker'sassistant,doingwhatheloved.ItwasallthankstohisAuntRita.SheknewMrsRossiandhadarrangedeverything.Itwastheperfectexperienceforhisfuturecareer.Rossi'sBakery,hewassure,wouldonedaybeknownastheplacewherehegothisstart.

Ah,herehewas—thebakery.Afadedwoodensignoverthedoorread"Rossi'sBakery."Aramstraightenedhisshouldersandentered.MrsRossiwassittingatthecounter,lookingoldandwise.Aramgreetedherandstuckouthishand.MrsRossilookedatitforasecondbeforeturningaroundandwavinghiminside.

“I’mreadytolearneverything,”

Aramsaid.

“Great.Let’sstartwiththecashregister,”

Mrs.Rossisaid,"becausethat’swhatyou'llbedoing."Sheshowedhimhowtousethecashregister.Itwasn'thard.Thepastrytrayswereallmarkedbyprice,andthereweren'tthatmanychoicesanyway."That'sit?"Aramsaid,hisheartsinking."Butwhendowebake?"

"Bake?Iorderwholesalenow.Nomorebaking.

I’mtooold.,,ThenMrsRossisilentlyheldupherhands.Aramtookinherknotted,swollenfingers,andheunderstood.Awaveofdisappointmentstruckhim.Sadnessoverwhelmedhimsosuddenlythathecouldn'tthinkofawordtosay.

Hesighed,andMrsRossisighed,too."Iusedtobakeitall.Breadandcakes.

Andnoonediditbetterthanme.Butthatwaswhenthesethingsworked,"

saidMrsRossiholdingupherhandsoncemoreandglancingacrosstheshelvesfilledwithemptybottleslabeledwithnamesofthevariousingredients(配料)

sheonceused.Suddenlyshecamealive,wavingherarthritic(关节炎的)

hands."Peopleusedtolineuparoundthecorner.Everyonewantedmybakedbread.”

注意：1.

续写词数应为150左右；

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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:ThenathoughtoccurredtoAramthathecouldaskMrsRossitoteachhim.

Paragraph2:MrsRossifinallysaid,"Let'sbuytheingredientsfirst."文本分析：标题最明显的暗示是标题。有标题的读后续写中，标题常常暗示主旨或线索。例如读后续写文章标题“AramandRossi’sBakery”暗示主人公最终会和文中的Rossi一同经营面包店，并且店门口的招牌应该加上Aram，也就是“我”的名字。2.故事大意主人公Aram渴望将来做一个烘焙师，在暑期的时候想去MrsRossi的烘焙店学习烘焙，但MrsRossi年纪大了，无法再做烘焙，只叫Aram做收银员。回忆起当年做面包和蛋糕的情景，MrsRossi精神为之一振。这时，Aram想到了一个主意，他可以让MrsRossi教他烘焙。故事会怎么样发展呢？3.文本特点这篇故事以主人公想学习烘焙但MrsRossi年迈已放弃烘焙的冲突为线索，要求学生续写后面的故事。整篇故事简单易懂，冲突明显。从文章标题AramandRossi'sBakery来看，最后的结局可能是MrsRossi教会Aram做烘焙，并一起将烘焙店开下去。Whatistheconflict?AramwantedtolearneverythingaboutbakeryfromMrsRossibutRossididn'tbakeanymore.5.Whatisthetheme?1.Oneshouldsticktohis/herdreamnomatterwhathappens.2.Oneshouldkeeplearningwhathe/shelikestoenrichhis/herlife.3.TheirloveforbakeryandtheirdreamtorejuvenatetheRossi's.Bakerycoincided.续写关键第一段Focus:AramaskedMrsRossitoteachhim.WhatdidAramdoandsaythen?WhatwasMrsRossi'sresponse?Howtoendthisparagraph?第二段Focus:AramaskedMrsRossitoteachhim.1.WhatwasAram'sresponse?2.Whatwouldtheydothen?3.Whatwastheendingofthestory？6.描写制作蛋糕的场景Igotthemilkandfoureggsandthesugar.Thehardestpartwouldbebreakingtheeggsontheedgeofthebowl.Isifted(饰)theflourandbakingpowdertogetherfirst.Andsalt.Iparticularlyrememberedthatbecauseitseemedstrangetoputsaltinacake.Iputallingredientstogetherandmixedthem.Itlookedcreamyanddelicious.Ipoureditintothebakingpanandputitintotheoven.Afterwefinishedtidyingup,Iopenedtheovendoorandpeeked.Thecakehadrisenandturnedtan.WithhotpadsIcarefullytookitoutandputitonthetable.参考答案：Para1：ThenathoughtoccurredtoAramthathecouldaskMrs.Rossitoteachhim.Hesitatingforawhile,hepluckedupallhiscouragetospeaktoMrs.Rossi,“Mrs.Rossi,I’mnotheretobeacashier,Iamheretolearntobeabaker.Couldyoupleaseteachme?”

Raisinghereyebrowsinsurprise,Mrs.Rossifroze,asifrootedontheground.

Scratchingherknotted,swollenfingers,shesighed,“Iamtoooldtodothisnow.Lookatmyhands!”“ButIcanbeyourhands!”Aramrepliedwithatremblingbutdeterminedvoice.Movedbyhiswords,Mrs.Rossinoddedherheadslowly.Para2：MrsRossifinallysaid,"Let’sbuytheingredientsfirst."Hearingthis,Aramjumpedupinhappiness,withhiseyessparklinglikeshiningstars.Alltheingredientshavingbeenbought,allthoseemptybottleswerefilled.

Mrs.RossitaughtAramhowtomakeacakestepbystep.WithMrs.Rossi’sguidance,Aramputallingredientstogetherandmixedthem.Itlookedcreamyanddelicious.Then,hepoureditintothebakingpanandputitintotheoven.Thewholehousewasquietexceptfortheslightsoundmadebythem.Totheirsatisfaction,whent