大学英语四级写作专题课件

大学英语四级写作专题辅导

大学英语四级写作专题辅导大学英语四级作文评分标准一、评分原则

1．CET检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。

2．CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(AwardScores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

3．从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

大学英语四级作文评分标准一、评分原则

1．CET检查考生是4．避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

5.字数不足以应酌情扣分。二、评分标准

1．本题满分为15分

2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一份。

3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。

4．避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分分数档4．评分标准

2分

(33)—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分

(39)—基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分

(45)—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分(57)—切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分(67)—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。]

分数档4．评分标准

2分(33)—条理不清，思路紊乱，语CET4写作评分标准高分作文基本要求：思想表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误高分要求：★句型的多样性★经典词组短语的运用★亮点词汇CET4写作评分标准高分作文写作题型议论文1.主题型（topic）①健康对人类的幸福必不可少；②如何保持健康；③结论2.观点对比型（A&B）①有人认为，英语对中国经济发展很重要；②另有人认为，英语对中国经济发展没有意义；③我的观点说明文①很多人不注重日常卫生习惯；②不注意卫生习惯的后果；③如何解决这一问题写作题型议论文写作题型描写文（图表作文）①描写图表内容（现象）；②分析现象的原因；③观点或解决办法应用文（包括书信、便条、通知、海报等）①主题；②相关细节；重申主题写作题型描写文（图表作文）写作原则内容简单化（“简单”是指适合在30分钟内表达）结构模式化（主题句-分论点-总结）语言要包装错误要回避写作原则内容简单化（“简单”是指适合在30分钟内表达）写作技巧宏观结构◎三段式⑴开头要开门见山，写出主旨句；⑵段落内部结构：主题句+扩展句（+结尾句）写作技巧宏观结构微观结构◎学会遣词造句⑴词汇★准确使用词汇，在此基础上尽量使用高级词汇★多使用词组、短语★恰当运用过渡词汇★避免多次重复使用同一词汇，可以用同义词或同根词替代⑵句型★注意变化句式★简单句复合句交叉使用★适当使用插入语，倒装句等◎恰当使用修辞微观结构建议平时多注意收集有用词汇句式注意模仿建议平时多注意收集有用词汇句式题目：Bicycles—AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途题目：模板的提炼过程：思路和表达BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople---manandwoman,oldandyoung---ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.模板的提炼过程：思路和表达Bicyclesarevery单复数错误：manandwoman→menandwomen词性错误：oldandyoung→theoldandtheyoung专有名词：第一个和最后一个单词首字母大写，其他：实词（名动形副代数）首字母大写；虚词（介连冠）首字母不大写。单复数错误：manandwoman→menand2006.12Direction:

１．许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会

２．但有些人提出取消春节晚会．

３．我的看法．

2006.12句式提炼：BicyclesareverypopularinChina.词性转化：popular→popularityInChina,bicycles

havegainedwide/greatpopularityamongChinesepeople.句式提炼：Bicyclesareverypopular2011-06现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚Intherecentdecade,onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularityamongyoungsters.2011-062010-06如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视单词拼写InChina,Englishlearninghasgainedwidepopularityamongstudents.However,…2010-062009-12建设绿色校园很重要Inthecontemporarysociety,theconceptofgreencampuseshasgainedwidepopularityamonguniversitiesorcolleges.2009-122009-06越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？Inthepresent-daysociety,freeadmissiontomuseumsisenjoyingwidepopularityamongChinesecitizens.2009-062008-12一次性塑料袋曾经广泛的使用Duringthepastdecades,disposableplasticbagsgainedwidepopularityamongpeopleintheworld.

2008-122008-06娱乐活动多种多样Inthisdayandage,avarietyofrecreationalactivitieshavegainedwidepopularityamongindividuals.

2008-06BicyclesareverypopularinChina.→??BicyclesareverypopularinCInmyeyes,youarethemostbeautiful.Inmyeyes,nooneismorebeautifulthanyou.Inmyeyes,youarethemostb高分句式结构：No___is/aremore___than___.BicyclesareverypopularinChina.→InChina,nomeansoftransportismorepopularandimportantthanbicycles.高分句式我能想到最浪漫的事就是和你一起慢慢变老。？？我能想到最浪漫的事就是和你一起慢慢变老。高分句式：双重否定句型：否定词(no/not/never/nothing…)+有否定意义或否定前缀或否定后缀的名词、形容词、副词、动词、介词、连词等高分句式：双重否定Nothinggreatwaseverachievedwithoutenthusiasm.—RalphWaldoEmersonNothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.—HeywoodNomanisuselessinthisworldwholightenstheburdenofsomeoneelse.—CharlesDickensTheword“impossible”isnotinmydictionary.—BonaparteNapoleonNothinggreatwaseverachieve2011.12Directions:You'reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I'vedoneithundredsoftime.”You'dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Outlines:1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。3.学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才。2011.12意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。→Peoplecannot

accomplishgreatmissionswithout

astrongwill.→Noonecan

undertakeagreatmissionwithoutastrongwill.→Nomanisunlikelytohavebrilliantachievementswithanironwill.→Hewillnotsucceedwhowillnotpersevere.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。被动表达→No

greatmissioncanbeaccomplished

without

astrongwill.→Nosuccesscannotbeachievedwithanironwill.被动表达NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

Nogreatworkcanbeperformedwithoutwill.Weenvyfamousmenandimaginethatfamewasduetosomestrokeofluck.Butwhenweknowtheirhistories,wefindthatitislongyearsofwillandconstanteffortthathavebroughtabouttheirsuccess.Justaswecan'treachthetopofamountainwithoutclimbing,wecan'tachievesuccesswithoutwill.

Themodernsocietyprovidespeoplewithmoreopportunitiesthanbefore,andtherearestorieswhichtellusthepossibilityofbecomingsuccessfulovernight.Actuallythatisnotthecase.Beforethesepeoplebecomesuccessful,alotofhardworkhasbeendone,unnoticedmostly.Whatweusuallyseeistheresult,butwhatweignoreisalongprocessofstrugglingforwardandwrestlingwithinternalorexternalobstacles.Take"quittingsmoking"forexample,whichis,tomostpeople,adifficulttask,sopeoplealwaysgiveuptheideafortheydon'thavethestrongwill.

Inanutshell,strongwillisanimportantconditionorroleofthesuccesstheindividualshoulddesiretomaintainforever.Thereisnoinstantsuccessinthisworld.Strongwillisthebestpolicytomakeyourlifedistinctandyourdreamscometrue.

大学英语四级写作专题ppt课件高分句式：排比句式Icame;Isaw;Iconquered.—JuliusCaesarGovernmentofthepeople,bythepeopleandforthepeople,shallnotperishfromtheearth.—AbrahamLincolnStudiesservefordelight,forornament,andforability.—FrancisBacon

Somebooksaretobetasted,otherstobeswallowed,andsomefewtobechewedanddigested.—FrancisBacon高分句式：排比句式排比句式Itcannotbedeniedthattechnologydoeshelpusalot.Internetprovidesuswitheasyaccesstovariousaspectsofknowledgeandinformation;mobilephonesmakeitmoreconvenientforustocommunicatewithoneanother;agrowingnumberofman-madesatelliteshavebeenlaunchedtoprobeintothesecretsoftheuniverse.Withouttechnology,theworldwouldstopdeveloping.Thatiswhyweshouldbeproudofadvancedscienceandtechnologyinthecontemporaryage.排比句式排比句式somediscardlitterseverywhere;somecheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somethrowoffensive/insultingremarksatothers;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.排比句式2009.12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建设绿色校园很重要

2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境......3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该......2009.121.建设绿色校园很重要Theconceptof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesecitizens.Almosteveryuniversityhas

beenawareoftheimportanceofbuildingagreencampus.Withoutgreenenvironmentitisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyable/agreeablelifeintheIvoryTower.Furthermore,agreencampusisofbenefittobroaden/consolidatestudents’awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.CreatingaGreenCampus1.建设绿色校园很重要CreatingaGreenCa2.绿色校园不仅仅指绿色的环境…Inadditiontogreenenvironment,greencampusesalsorefertodecentbehaviors.However,takingalookaround,wecanfindagoodmanyexamplesofinappropriateones:somediscardlitterseverywhere;somecheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somethrowoffensive/insultingremarksatothers;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.Infact,ithasbecomeatrendformanystudentstoturnablindeyetotheirownbadacts.2.绿色校园不仅仅指绿色的环境…3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该…Accordingly,itisimperative/urgentforustotakemeasurestomaintaingreencampuses.Foronething,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttobanthesenegativebehaviors.Foranother,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestorefusealluncivilizedacts.Ifwedoourutmosttodoso,thefutureofourcollegelifewillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该…友情提醒：高分句式灵活运用NowadaysEnglishlearningisverypopularinChina.→Inrecentdecades,Englishlearninghasgained/isenjoyingwidepopularityamongChinesestudents.NowadaysEnglishlearningismoreandmorepopularinChina.→Inrecentdecades,Englishlearninghasgained/isenjoyinggrowingpopularityamongChinesestudents.→Inrecentdecades,EnglishlearninghasfounditsgrowingpopularityamongChinesestudents.友情提醒：高分句式灵活运用首段首尾句句式选择（呼应式写法）1)___has/havegained(is/areenjoying)widepopularityamong___.2)___has/havefoundits/theirwayamong___.3)①Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendfor___to___.②Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendthat___.4)①Thereisagrowingtrendof___.②Thereisagrowingtrendthat___.

注：首句前加上适当的时间状语首段首尾句句式选择（呼应式写法）2011-06现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚Inthecontemporarysociety,onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularitythroughouttheworld.Forthesakeofconvenience,agrowingnumberofpeoplemakepurchasesonavarietyofshoppingwebsiteseveryday.Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforyoungsterstoshoponline.2011-06Inthecontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforyoungsterstoshoponline.Forthesakeofconvenience,agrowingnumberofpeoplemakepurchasesonavarietyofshoppingwebsiteseveryday.Onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularitythroughouttheworld.Inthecontemporarysociety,iInthecontemporarysociety,thereisagrowingtideofyoungstersshoppingonline.Forthesakeofconvenience,agrowingnumberofpeoplemakepurchasesonavarietyofshoppingwebsiteseveryday.Onlineshoppinghasgainedwidepopularitythroughouttheworld.Inthecontemporarysociety,t2009-12建设绿色校园很重要Inthepresent-daysociety,theconceptof“GreenCampus”isenjoyingwidepopularityamonguniversities.WithoutgreenenvironmentitisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyableandagreeablelifeintheIvoryTower.

Thusithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforuniversitiestocreategreencampuses.2009-122010-06如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视单词拼写Inrecentdecades,Englishlearninghasgainedwidepopularityamongstudents.Thereisagrowingtrend/tideoflearningEnglishinChina.However,…2010-06题目：MyViewonDoubleBADegree提纲：

1.现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见

2.对此，人们看法不一

3.我对这一现象的看法练笔题目：MyViewonDoubleBADegreeMyviewonDoubleBADegreeInthecontemporarysociety,thesystemofdoublebachelor’sdegreehasgainedwidepopularityamonguniversitiesorcolleges.Onmanycampusesithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforstudentstohavetwomajorsatthesametime.MyviewonDoubleBADegreeTothisphenomenon,differentstudentstakedivergentattitudes.Somestronglyapproveofitinthatadoublebachelor’sdegreecanbroadentheirvision,thus

puttingtheminamorefavorablepositioninthejob-seekingmarket.Onthecontrary,thosewhostandfirmlyopposedtoitalsohavecogentreasons.Foronething,twomajorsmakeitdifficultforthemtofocusononeparticularfield;foranother,theycanexpandtheirscopeofknowledgebyreadingextensivelyratherthanpursuingadoublebachelor’sdegree.Tothisphenomenon,differentPersonally,Iamslightlynegativeaboutdoublebachelor’sdegree.Inthisdayandage,themoreskilledweareinonespecificrealm,thebetterwecanmeetthesociety’sneeds.

Accordingly,itisadvisablethatweshouldmakethemostofourcollegelifetoacquiremorespecializedknowledgeandskillstosetthestageforourfuture.

Personally,Iamslightlynega观点对比型模板提炼Tothisphenomenon/issue,different___takedivergentattitudes.Somestrongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocateitinthat/as___.Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitcogently/convincinglycontendthat___.观点对比型模板提炼Tothisphenomenon/issue,different___takedivergentattitudes.Somewhostrongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocateitarecogentlyconvincedthat___.Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitcontendthat___.Tothisphenomenon/issue,diffTothisphenomenon/issue,different___takedivergentattitudes.Somestrongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocateit.Theyholdtheviewthat___.Moreover/Furthermore,___.Inaddition,___.Onthecontrary/Bycontrast,thosewhoare/keep/standstrongly/firmly/constantlyopposedtoitalsohavecogent/soundreasons.Foronething,___;foranother,___.Tothisphenomenon/issue,diff(时间状语),___has/havegained(is/areenjoying)widepopularityamong___.Ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendfor___to___.Some___strongly/firmly/constantlyapproveof/advocate___inthat/as_____.(Some___strongly/firmly/constantlyapprov