2024届高考英语英语读后续写素材-比赛活动类

专攻解题方法与技巧英语读后续写-比赛活动类一、活动/比赛前l.努力准备1.Thesettingsunwitnessinghisunremittingefforts(不懈的努力），hekeptsharpeninghisskillregardlessofhisachingmuscle.2.Notuntilthedarknessswallowedeverythingonthehorizon(黑夜吞噬地平线上的一切）didhestoptraininganddraggedachinglegshome.（倒装：notuntil...didhe..直到...才）3.Thefollowingdayswitnessedhimpracticingfreestylehard.4.Hedraggedhisachinglegsdowntheroadtohome,armstremblingwithfatigue.(独立主格：疲惫的细节描写）2.遇到困难/挫折（曲折性原则）1.Hardashetrained,hestillmadelittleprogress,whichputhimonthevergeofcollapse.2.Thefactthathemadelittleprogressthrewhimintolowspirits.3.受到鼓舞（人物B互动）1.Wheneverhewasexhausted/fulloffatigue,Eddie’swordsechoed/flashedinto/poppedintohismind,andsuppliedenergytohim/whichinstillpowerintohim.2.Hewasabouttoquit/giveupwhenmyteachercastanencouragingglanceathim.（beabouttodo...when...正要做某事的时候，突然...)3.Agustofexcitementsurgedthroughhimashemadeananotherattempt.二、比赛中（过程描写）1.Thencamethebigday.（倒装）2.Withthesoundofthestartinggunpiercing（穿透/刺破）throughtheair,theracebeganasexpected.3.Icouldfeelthatalltheeyeswerefixedonus.Astrongsenseofnervousnesssurgedthroughme.我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我们。一种强烈的紧张感涌上我的全身。4.Thenthenextfewminuteswitnessedfiercecompetitionbetweenothercompetitors.5.Sodynamicwashethatheswamswifterthanever.Withhisarmwaving,hecutthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.（so+adj+谓+主+that...)他活力四射，游得比以前更快了。他挥动着手臂，像飞鱼一样平稳地划水。6.Sandrofoundhimselfflexiblelikeadolphininthewater,propelling（推动）himselfforwardswiftly.（比喻）7.Swiftlyadjustinghisbreath,heswamforwardlikeanarrowoffthebowstring.(像离弦的箭）8.150meterscovered，hewasleftbehindbytwocompetitors.Inthelast50meters，heswamtothefinishlinewithallhisstrength,withhisarmspushingforwardfastandhislegshittingthewaterhard.(游泳的过程）9.Myheartdropped,becauseIwasafraidallthetrainingthatIhaddonewasinvain.Yettherewassomethinginsidemepushingmetowinthecompetition.Myheartbeatingwildly,Itriedmybestandgotclosertotheotherrunners.三、比赛后（名次+互动+感悟）1.WhentheresultwasannouncedthatSandrowonfirstplace,otherplayersrushedtohimandcongratulatedhim,theaudiencesinthestadiumburstingintothunderousapplauseandcheers.(获奖+祝贺）2.whentheracefinished,neverinhiswildestdream（做梦也没有想到）hadheexpectedthathewonthefirstprize（倒装）./hecamefirst/tookthefirstplace/clinched(赢得）thechampionintherace.（获得名次）3.Withbeadsofsweatrunningdownmyfaceandmyheartpoundinginmychest,Iknewthatthegrueling（艰辛的）hoursofpractice/painstakingeffortshadpaidoffasIclaimedthetopspotonthepodium（领奖台）.汗珠顺着我的脸流下来，我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳，我知道艰苦的练习时间得到了回报，因为我在领奖台上占据了头把交椅。4.Uponfinishingthetalk/competition,Itrotted（小跑）towardsMareyaandgaveherabearhug.Meanwhile,thunderous/astormofapplauserangthroughtheclassroom.5.Asthefinalwhistleblew,Thecheersfromthecrowdechoed/rangthroughthestadium,andIcouldn'thelpbutfeelarushofexcitementasIbasked/wasimmersedinthegloryofourvictory.（can'thelpbutdo不得不）人群的欢呼声回荡在体育场内，当我沉浸在胜利的荣耀中时，我不禁感到一阵兴奋。6.Despitethephysicalandmentalexhaustion,Icouldn'twipethesmileoffmyfaceasIreflectedontheincrediblememoriesandlessonslearnedfromthecompetition.7.Itishishardworkandpersistencethatwonhimrecognitionandmorefriends.（结尾强调句：回扣主题）8.Thisexperienceservedasareminderthatthebestwaytogainrecognition/fitintoanewenvironmentistodisplay