新高中考试英语 15 灾难故事- 专项突破“读后续写”

专题15高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—灾难故事灾难，我们没法控制，但是可以用温暖呵护承受灾难的人……01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIworkedasanurse,Iwasondaydutywhilemyworkmateswereonnightduty.Ononeshift,Isensedsomethingjustbeforegoingoffdutyat11am.Iputdownthetray(托盘）onthetableandsuddenlyitfelloffthetable.AtfirstIthoughtIhadaccidentallyknockeditover,butthenIfeltthewholebuildingshakingandheardpatientswerescreaming.

Irealizedthatanearthquakewashappening.Iquicklycaughtholdofanearbypatient,whowasterriblyfrightenedandpushedherunderabed.Andthen,Igotunderanotherbedmyself.

Assoonastheearthquakestopped,Idecidedtotryandgetthepatientsafelyoutside.Icarriedheroutandhelpedherdowntothegrassland,whereseveralotherpeoplehadgathered.Afraidthatmyotherworkmateswereindanger,Iwentbackinsidethebuildingagain.WhenImetLucy,ourwardsister(护士长），Ifoundherpatientcouldn'twalk.Wemadeaseatforthepatientbylinkingourhandsandarms,andcarriedheroutsidetogether.Wewentbackthroughthebuildingtochecknoonewasleftbehindinourward(病房）.Justthen,wesawthatamandoctorwascallingforvolunteerstogodowntootherwardswithhimtohelpmorepeople.Sowewenttogether.Thedoctorwentaheadofusandfoundoneofthenursespartiallycoveredwithrubble（碎石），luckilystillalive.Suddenly,theaftershock(余震）struckandthedoctororderedustoleave.Thebravedoctorintendedtostayaloneandriskhisownlifetosavethenurse.注意：续写字数应为150词左右。Paragraph1:However,withoutanyhesitation,wemadeupourmindstostaywiththedoctorandsavethenursetogether.Paragraph2:Laterintheafternoon,Ihadtimetolookaroundandsawsomedestroyedbuildings.【答案】However,withoutanyhesitation,wemadeupourmindstostaywiththedoctorandsavethenursetogether.Thedoctorencouragedthetrappednursetostaycalm,andinthemeanwhile,wefocusedoureffortsonremovingthebricksandtherubblethattrappedherbody.However,sometimeswewerefacedwithfallingrubblefromtimetotime,despitewhichwecontinued.Graduallyandslowly,weliftedthenurseoutoftherubble.Thedoctorputthenurseonhisbackandwalkedoutofthebuildingwiththehelpofus.Finally,all,includingpatients,nursesanddoctors,wereinthesafeplace.Laterintheafternoon,IIhadtimetolookaroundandsawthesomedestroyedbuildings.Mybeautifulworkplacelaybeyondrecognition,evensomeinruins.Atthesightofthis,Ifeltaweightinmychest.Suddenly,thegentlewinddancedaroundme,whichmademethoughtofallthepeoplesurvivingtheearthquakewithourhelp.Itwasourteamworkthatmadeadifference.Iheldthefirmbeliefthatsomedayinthefuturemyworkplacewouldcamebacktolifeandtookonanewlook,wherewewouldcontinueworkingtogethertosavemorepatients.【解析】本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。②由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。2.续写线索：和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建3.词汇激活行为类①集中在…上：focusedon/fixon②面对：werefacedwith/face③继续：continued/keepon情绪类①保持镇定：staycalm/keepcalm②感觉有压力：feltaweightinmychest/feelstressed【点睛】[高分句型1]Thedoctorencouragedthetrappednursetostaycalm,andinthemeanwhile,wefocusedoureffortsonremovingthebricksandtherubblethattrappedherbody.（由that引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]However,sometimeswewerefacedwithfallingrubblefromtimetotime,despitewhichwecontinued.（由which引导的定语从句）[高分句型3]Iheldthefirmbeliefthatsomedayinthefuturemyworkplacewouldcamebacktolifeandtookonanewlook,wherewewouldcontinueworkingtogethertosavemorepatients.（由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）02KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(风雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.Almostimmediately,thesnowbeneaththeirfeetgaveway.Inamillisecond,Paulrealizedwhatwashappening.“Avalanche!(雪崩)”heyelledtoScott,whowasnotfarbehind.Scottresponded.Thesuddensnowslidecausedfearinhisvoice.“Thisishappening!”Instantly,bothwerehitbyamassofsnowthatwouldhitandcarrythemsome500feetdownthemountain.Scottfeltitsurroundingandenclosinghim,movingquicklyuphisbackandoverhisshoulders,thenheavyagainsthisneck.Snowfilledthespaceinfrontofhimandpileduparoundthewholeofhim.Paul,too,wassweptdownhill.Theyrememberedtheavalanchesurvivallessonstheyhadlearned.Keepyourheadup.Trytoswim.Stayontopofthesnow.Butthesnowwastoopowerfulandtheyfeltthemselvesrollinglikealoadofclothesinawashingmachine.WhenScottfinallycametorest,hewaslyingonhisleftsideandcompletelyburied,skisandpolesstillattached.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Sofortunatewashethatmostofthesnowhadgoneoverhisbodyandcontinueddownthehill.Insuchashallowburial,hebegantoshakeoffthesnow,scoopedsnowawaywithbarehands,andmanagedtopullhimselfout.Lookingaroundtheworldofsnow,hedesperatelyshoutedScott’snamebutreceivednotraceofresponses.Paulunzippedhisparkaandpulledoutthephonetomaketheemergencycall.Shortlyafterwards,therescueteamarrived.Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.Para2Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.Whenburiedundersnowintheenclosedspace,Scottdriftedbetweenterrorandpanic,hopingthathisfriendPaulwasnotburiedsodeep.Heheldontothatfaintpossibilitylikearopewhichcouldpullhimtosafety.Hepainstakinglytookonlytinybreaths,fightingtostaypositivebyfocusingonthisbreathing.Timetickedawayslowly.Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.Inthatone-in-a-millionchance,theymadeit.Withthedullskyclearingup,bothPaulandScottbreathedinthefreshairwithabandon,feelingtherebirthoflife.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了经验丰富的滑雪爱好者肯·斯科特和好友保罗结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“保罗比较幸运，部分被埋葬，很可能还活着。”可知，第一段可描写保罗如何脱险，以及脱险后寻找好友和寻求救援。②由第二段首句内容“回忆起那次可怕的经历，斯科特感谢了他的朋友和救援队伍。”可知，第二段可描写当被埋在封闭空间的积雪下时，斯科特的心理活动及获救后的感激之情。2.续写线索：结伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——寻求援助——获救——感激3.词汇激活行为类1.到达：arrivein/reach2.遇见：comeacross/meet3.集中:focuson/concentrateon情绪类1.高兴的：exhilarated/pleased2.惊恐：terror/panic【点睛】[高分句型1].Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.（as引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）03Jackstillremembersthatonemorningwhenhewasonlytenyearsold.HewasathomewithhiseldersisterLily.Jackwasdoinghishomeworkwhenheheardraisedvoices.Atfirst,hethoughtnothingofitsincecustomers'voiceinthemotorcycleshopdirectlybelowtheirflatoftenbecameloud,buthesoonrealizedthistimeitwasdifferent.“Quick!Quick!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshop.”someoneshouted.Thenathickburningsmellfilledtheair.WhenJackopenedthefrontdooroftheirflattoinvestigate,athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim.Themotorcycleshophadcaughtfireandpeoplewererunningandcrying.Lily,whohadbeenplayingtheviolininherroom,hurriedtothelivingroom.Theyrushedoutofthedoorandalongthecorridorthroughthesmoke.TheywereheadingtowardsthestairwayatthefarendofthecorridorwhenLilystoppedinhertrack.Sheturnedaroundandheadedbackthewaytheycame.Jackhadnoideawhatshewasdoing,buthefollowedher.Lilyhadsuddenlyrememberedtheladyinher70swholivednextdoortothem,whotheycalledMakcik,Malayforauntie.LilybeganbangingonMakcik’sdoor,butgotnoanswer.Asthesmokethickenedaroundthem,Jackcouldseemanyoftheirneighbors—somestillintheirpyjamas—runningforsafety.Thethoughtoffearcrossedhismind.“Shemighthaverunforsafetylikeeveryoneelse!”Jackcried.However,Lilyrefusedtogiveup.“IknowMakcik'sstillinside.”ShesaidshewasfamiliarwithMakcik'sdailyroutineandwascertainshewouldstillbesleeping.Shepoundedthedoor.“Godownstairs.Gonow!Go!”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Justatthattime,Jacknoticedtheflamewasreachingup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Luckily,alltheneighborswentdownstairsandanambulancecame.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Justatthattime,Jacknoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.Hecompre-hendedthegravityofthesituationandheldJane'shandtightly.Bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.JackbeggedLilytorunforsafetyasquicklyaspossible.Lilytriedtoshieldhernosefromthechokingsmokeandshookherhead.Shekeptpoundingagainstthedoor.Jackburstoutcrying.Paragraph2:Luckily,alltheneighborswentdownstairsandanambulancecame.AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinLily'smind.ShetoldthemMs.Makcikmustbestillintheroom.Theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandLilyandJackwereveryhappy.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者杰克十岁那年的一个早晨，他和姐姐莉莉在家，他们所在的公寓发生了火灾，他们正朝走廊尽头的楼梯走去，这时莉莉停下了脚步和杰克返回去叫醒住在他们隔壁的那位70多岁的老人。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“就在那时，杰克注意到火焰正在蔓延。”可知，第一段可描写尽管很危险杰克和莉莉努力的去敲老人的门。②由第二段首句内容“幸运的是，所有的邻居都下楼了，救护车来了”可知，第二段可描写他们和邻居合力将老人救出。2.续写线索：火势严峻————二人并没有放弃敲门——门被推开——老人被送往医院3.词汇激活行为类阻止鼻孔吸到烟：shieldhernosefromthechokingsmoke/preventhernosefromthechokingsmoke取代：replace/taketheplaceof突然大哭起来：burstoutcrying/burstintotears情绪类快乐的：glad/pleased无意识的：unconscious/unaware【点睛】[高分句型1]hewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.（由where引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.（though引导的让步状语从句）04Besieged(被包围的)Pariswassufferingfromfamine(饥荒).Eventhesparrowsontheroofsandtheratsinthesewersweregrowingrare.Peoplewereeatinganythingtheycouldget.AsMonsieur(法语，先生)Morissot,watchmakerbyprofessionandidler(懒汉)fortheoccasion,waswalkingalongtheboulevardonebrightJanuarymorning,hishandsinhistrouserspocketsandstomachempty,hesuddenlycamefacetofacewithhisfriend—MonsieurSauvage,afishingfriend.BeforetheWorldWarIIbrokeout,Morissothadbeeninthehabit,everySundaymorning,ofsettingforthwithabamboorod(杆子)inhishandandatinboxonhisback.HetooktheArgenteuiltrain,gotoutatColombes,andwalkedtotheIleMarante.Themomenthearrivedatthisplaceofhisdreamshebeganfishingandfishedtillnightfall.EverySundayhemetinthisveryspotMonsieurSauvage,afat,happy,littleman,adraperintheRueNotreDamedeLorette,andanwarm-heartedfisherman.Theyoftenspenthalfthedaysidebyside,rodinhandandfeetdanglingoverthewater,andawarmfriendshiphadsprungupbetweenthetwo.Somedaystheydidnotspeak;atothertimestheychatted;buttheyunderstoodeachotherperfectlywithouttheaidofwords,havingsimilartastesandfeelings.Inthespring,aboutteno'clockinthemorning,whentheearlysuncausedalightmisttofloatonthewaterandgentlywarmedthebacksofthetwoenthusiasticanglers,Morissotwouldoccasionallyremarktohisneighbour:"My,butit'spleasanthere."Towhichtheotherwouldreply:"Ican'timagineanythingbetter!"Andthesefewwordssufficedtomakethemunderstandandappreciateeachother.Abeautifuldayinautumn,theydecidetogofishinginColombeswhichisnotfarfromthebaseofGermans.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly,agunpointedatMorissot.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Abeautifuldayinautumn,theydecidetogofishinginColombeswhichisnotfarfromthebaseofGermans.Abreezestirredthelake,andtheywerebathedinthebrightsunshine.Whatasunnyday!Thepeacefulsightmadethemfeelrelaxed.Theytookouttheirequipmentandpreparedtofish.Dayswerehardwhenpeoplewereeatinganythingtheycouldget.Thereasonwhytheychosethisdangerousplacewasthatthereweremorefishtocatch.Theyneedtofeedthefamily,andtheyhavenochoicebuttotaketherisk.Itseemedthattheychosetherightplacebecausetheycaughtmorefish.Bothofthemwereexcitedandtheydecidedtogohome.Whattheydidn’trealizeisthatseveralsoldierswerecomingtowardthem.

Suddenly,agunpointedatMorissot.ThesolideraskedthemwhatweretheydoinghereinGerman.Theyfeelscaredandansweredinterror"weweresohungrythatwejustwanttofish".Thesoldersdidn’tbelievewhattheysaid.theysearchedallovertheirbody,hopingtofindsomeevidence,butinvain.Finally,theyfoundthefishtheycaughtandbelievedwhattheysaid.Butthesolderswarnedthemnevertocameheretofish.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了第二次世界大战爆发之前，灾难严重，被围困的巴黎正在遭受饥荒。甚至屋顶上的麻雀和下水道里的老鼠也越来越少了。人们吃了他们能吃到的任何东西。Morissot习惯了每个星期天早上去钓鱼并且和Sauvage先生一起钓鱼，在一个秋天，他们决定去哥伦布钓鱼，那里离德国人的基地不远。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“一个美丽的秋日，他们决定去哥伦布钓鱼，那里离德国人的基地不远。”可知，第一段可描写他们在德军基地哥伦布钓鱼的情况。②由第二段首句内容“突然，一支枪指着莫里索。”可知，第二段可描写他们被德军发现后的事情。2.续写线索：饥饿——钓鱼——危险——转危为安3.词汇激活行为类①一起走路：walktogether/keephimcompany②回家：gobackhome/returnhome情绪类①害怕：scared/interror【点睛】[高分句型1]ThesolideraskedthemwhatweretheydoinghereinGerman.（由连接词what引导的宾语从句作ask的宾语）[高分句型2]Thereasonwhytheychosethisdangerousplacewasthatthereweremorefishtocatch.（由关系词why引导限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句）05Atfirst,Michaeldidn’tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindowsofhisneighbors’home.Heandhiswifehadjustparkedaroundthecornerfromtheirownhousewhentheygotacallfromoneofhisdaughters:“Thehousenextdoorisonfire!”Hewenttocheck.That’swhenhesawtwowomenandagirlhelplessandheartbrokenontheirdoorway.“Thebaby’sinthere!”oneofthewomencried.Thoughthefiredepartmenthadbeencalled,Michael,then64,immediatelyraninside.“Thebaby”was8-year-oldTiara,thewoman’sgranddaughterandaplaymateofMichael’sthreeyoungestkids.Enteringtheburninghousewaslike“runningintoabucketofblackpaint”.ThethicksmokecausedMichaeltostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.Theconditionswouldhavebeendangerousforanyone,butforMichael,whohasseverelungdisease,theywerelife-threatening.Afterafewminutesinthesmoke-filledhouse,heretreatedoutsidetocatchhisbreath.“WhereisTiara?”heaskeddesperately.“Thesecondfloor,”herauntshoutedback.Michaelknewhecouldn’tholdhisbreathforlong.However,takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.Thedarknesswasoverwhelming.Yetbecausethehousehadasimilardesigntohis,hemadeittothesecondfloor.Heturnedtotherightandwasmetbyintenseheat.Hewasalreadyoutofbreath.“Babygirl,whereareyou?”Histhroatandlungsburnedasifhe’dinhaledfireinsteadofthesmokeintheair.Everyblinkstunghiseyes.Allhecouldhearwasthecracklingandpoppingofburningwood.Thenasoftbutdistinctmoanemerged.Stillunabletosee,Michaelfelltohiskneesonthehotwoodfloor.Hecrawledtowardthesound,feelingaroundforanysignofthegirl.Anunluckythoughtcrossedhismind:I’mprobablygonnadieuphere.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph