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专题29书面表达记叙文/短文投稿/报道类2023年Writing1【2023▪全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累著名的:well-known→famous人物:figure→person强调:emphasize→stress基础:foundation→basis2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.拓展句:HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,whichfosteredrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Writing2【2023▪全国乙卷】请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.ThatwasthefirsttimeIhadwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginners.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthenotesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimplybecausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1.词汇积累机会:opportunity→chance使沮丧:demoralize→discourage满意的:satisfied→content空闲的:leisure→spare2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.拓展句:Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.2022年Writing1【2022年全国甲卷】你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇应用文,就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿,阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越:moreandmore→increasingly重视:placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的:key→significant此外:what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句:WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主语从句)Writing2【2022年天津卷第二次】假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员,口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示,撰写视频的文字稿:(1)向同学们发出入社邀请;(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动);(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionHello,everyone!I’mLiJin,amemberoftheSpokenEnglishClubofourschool.I’mheretoinviteyoutojoinus.ThiswillbeagoodchanceforallEnglishlovers.Thecluboffersvariousinterestingactivities.WecanparticipateinEnglishspeechcontests,watchclassicEnglishmovies,singEnglishsongsandattendinspiringlectures.AllofthemhelptostimulateourinterestinlearningEnglishandmakeourschoollifemuchmoreenjoyable.Theclubactivitieshavebenefitedmealot.IhavenotonlyimprovedmyspokenEnglish,butalsomadealotoffriends.Now,it’syourturntojoinus.Wearelookingforwardtohavingyouintheclub!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿,向同学们发出邀请,并介绍口语社的主要活动,分享入社以来的收获。【详解】1.词汇积累机会:chance→opportunity参加:participatein→takepartin→joinin愉快的:enjoyable→joyful激发:stimulate→motivate→activate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Theclubactivitieshavebenefitedmealot.拓展句:TheclubactivitieswhichIhavejoinedinhavebenefitedmealot.2021年Writing1【2021年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【解析】第一步:审题体裁:说明文时态:一般现在时结构:总分法第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求:1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点①四川的地理位置:中国西南部②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨沟是自然保护区②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3.你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲(重点词组)belocatedin;world-famous;placesofinterest;anaturereserve;impressive;multi-levelwaterfalls;haveachancetodo…;rareanimals;scenicspot;datefrom;playanimportantpartin;beamazedby第三步:连词成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇1.表递进关系:whatismore2.表转折关系:however3.表示列举:suchas,like【点睛】[高分句型1]Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(what引导的主语从句)[高分句型2]Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(现在分词作状语)2020年Writing1【2020·新课标Ⅰ】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。第一步:审题体裁:应用文。时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。结构:总分法。要求:1.人物简介:2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步:列提纲(重点短语)Asforme;sparesometime;listentomepatiently;第三步:连词成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序:介绍人物;阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系:Asfor;and;but;So第五步:润色修改Writing2【2020·新课标Ⅱ】上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好。题目:MyWeekend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyWeekendLastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpackedupthefruits.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareandhowpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。第一步:审题体裁:应用文。时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。结构:总分法。要求:1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受第二步:列提纲(重点短语)tookpartin;wasresponsiblefor;ameaningfulday;shouldtreasure第三步:连词成句1.Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.2.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruitstheotherpackedupthefruits.3.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit4.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序:介绍农场;描述采摘过程;个人感受2.表示并列补充关系:and;But;Through第五步:润色修改2018年【2018年江苏卷】请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversionone:Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.Possibleversiontwo:Nowadays,mostcommoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings,easytoaccess,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomers'purchasedecision.However,resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers,buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow,mostoftheratingsarebasedonothers’judgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentcomesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently,blindlyfollowingothers'advicewillaffectourownjudgment.Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheoutcomeofacarefulmanipulationofcompaniesorsellers.Ithasbecomeacommonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.【解析】今年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,表明态度,作出价值判断。文章首段要简要介绍两段材料,第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭,看了on-linerating,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出onlinerating的不靠谱。然后写你对onlinerating的看法,表明观点,注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。文章属于议论文,要注意主题句的使用,论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时,第三人称来写。2016年Writing1【2016年浙江卷】“Planningisgood,butdoingisbetter”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。要求如下:1.简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾。注意:1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数):2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否则按作弊行为认定。PlanningIsGood,ButDoingIsBetter_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnePossibleVersionPlanningIsGood,ButDoingIsBetterPlanningisgoodasitdecidesindetailhowwedowhatwewanttodo.However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.MyexperienceintheEnglishspeechcontestlastOctoberisacaseinpoint.Amonthbeforetheevent,Ispenthoursworkingoutascheduleoutliningmygoalsandpracticalsteps.Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.Ifinallycameoutofthecontestasthefirstprizewinner.IknowhowIachievedmysuccess.Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoingcombined.【解析】本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写,不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面:1.简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后,还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。考点:考查开放式作文Writing2【2016年四川卷】某中学生英文报正举办“TheSeasonILikeBest”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.你最喜欢的季节;2.你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如:气候、景色、活动、感受……)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好;3.行文连贯,语篇完整;4.文中不得透露个人真实信息。【参考范文】TheSeasonILikeBestEachofusknowsthattherearefourseasonsayear.Differentpeoplelikedifferentseasons;myfavouriteseasonisspring.Ilovetosmellthefragranceofflowers,seethenewgreentreesandhearthesingingofsmallbirds.Therearemanybusybutterfliesandbeesovertheflowers.Sometimesitrains,butusuallyrainsquietly.Therainmoistensthetreesandtheflowers.AndIcanplayoutsidetoo!Whetherwelikeridingbikes,joggingorgoingonlongwalks,springallowsustoenjoyoutdooractivitiesthatwehadtoputonthebackburnerduringwinter.Ofcourse,therearemanyotherreasonstoexplainwhyI’msoexcitedaboutthespring.Thankyou,spring!2015年Writing1【2015年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华,你校英文报"外国文化"栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit’sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.运用了过去分词作后置定语,AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.运用了宾语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如bepopularamong,solongas,lookforwardto,hearfrom等。Writing2【2015年浙江卷】在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion”为题,用英文写一篇100~120个词“短文。要求如下:1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试作弊行为认定。WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion【参考答案】WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.WhenIhaveabetteridea,Iwouldchoosetosticktoit.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmyselfclearly.Oncewewerediscussingwheretogoforanouting.MostofmyclassmateswantedtogotoaparkwhileIhadanideaofgoingtoanicerpeace.Imanagedtopersuademyclassmatesintoacceptingmyidea.Wedidhaveagoodtimethatday.Goodopinionsareworthstickingtobecausetheycanbenefitusall.Analternativestudentversion:WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.WhenIhaveadifferentopinion,Imaychoosetogiveitupandrespecttheopinionofthemajority.Themainreasonformychoiceisthatbeingbroughtupinacultureemphasizingcollectivism;Itendtosacrificemyowninterestforthegroupbenefit.Oncewewerelefttodecidewhethertohaveapicnicinaparkorgotoamuseum.Iwouldlovetogotoamuseum,butmostofmyclassmateswantedtogoforapicnic.Withouthesitation,Idecidedtofollowthemandwedidhavelotsoffunthatday.Sometimesgivingupalittlecanmeangettingmore.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如notonly…butalso…不仅而且。运用连词while表对比观点。运用because表达原因。运用了表语从句表达原因Themainreasonformychoiceisthat…。运用了宾语从句decidewhetherdohavea…;discusswheretogoforanouting运用了介词短语Bydoingso,Withouthesitation.运用了强调句wedidhavealotsoffunthatday.此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如beworthdoingsth;sticktosth.;haveagoodtime;havelotsoffun,tendtodo等。Writing3【2015年重庆卷】请就以下话题,按要求用英文写作。Ifyoucouldgiveyouryoungerselfonepieceofadvice,whatwouldyousay?要求:(1)作出回答并说出理由;(2)词数不少于60;(3)在答题卡上做答。【参考答案】WereIthreeyearsyoungerthanIamnow,IwouldstronglyrecommendthatIsetmorepracticalandspecificgoals.Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutaclearandachievableaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.Comparedwithmanyabstractobjectives,practicalonescanbringusmorecourageandconfidencewheneverwemakeonestepforward.IfonlyIcouldgobackandresetmygoals.【解析】试题分析:本文属于考查开放性作文写作,给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,使用了多种句式和结构。比如IwouldstronglyrecommendthatIsetmorepracticalandspecificgoals.宾语从句;Comparedwithmanyabstractobjectives,practicalonescanbringusmorecourageandconfidencewheneverwemakeonestepforward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词;IfonlyIcouldgobackandresetmygoals.还运用到虚拟语气。Writing4【2015年安徽卷】某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancyyourselfasaninterviewer"为主题的征文活动,请你以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview"为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:1.采访的对象;2.采访的原因;3.想提的问题。注意:1.词数120左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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