第2课时　体裁类比突破(2)-告知信Vs邀请信

第2课时体裁类比突破(2)——告知信

邀请信一、“告知信”写作增分指导[写作题目](2020·浙江7月高考改编)假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．询问近况；2.分享班级最新消息；3．表达祝愿。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]DearPeter，We'reverysorrytohearthatyouaskedforsickleaveandreturnedtoIrelandtheotherday.Haveyoubeengettingmuchbetternow?Weallmissyouverymuchandhopeyouwillrecoversoon.Hereissomegoodnewsforyou.Asexpected,wewonthefirstplaceinourschoolartfestivalyesterday.Thedramayoudirectedgotabighand.Itwaswellreviewedbyjudgesbecauseofitsperfectplotsaswellasourwonderfulperformance.Weowedoursuccesstoyourkindandpatientguidance.Itwasyouwhoshouldwalkontothestageandreceivetheaward.Wishyouafullrecoverysoonandlookforwardtoseeingyouagain.Yours，LiHua学亮点写法1．学亮丽开头

开头使用We'reverysorrytohearthat...很自然地引出老师生病这一背景，接下来用一个疑问句和一个陈述句表达了对老师的关心、想念和祝福，体现了邮件中语言的交流互动感。其中，现在完成进行时havebeendoing结构运用得非常准确。2．学高级表达(1)使用高级词块，如：askforsickleave,theotherday,getabighand,aswellas,owe...to...,afullrecovery等，体现了作者娴熟的语言表达技巧和能力。(2)准确运用高级句式，如：省略结构Asexpected；省略关系词的定语从句youdirected；强调句结构Itwasyouwho...，充分表达了对老师的感激之情。3．学精彩结尾

在文章的结尾，作者用wish开头的祈使句结尾，呼应第一段，再次祝愿老师早日康复，感情真挚，符合写作背景。4．学情感表达

本邮件第二段作者通过分享班级最新消息来表达对老师的感激之情，与第一段和尾段表达对老师的关心与想念之情融为一体，邮件全文充满了浓浓师生情，行文流畅。[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]Ⅰ.开头部分：简要说明写信目的1．Learningthatyouwant/desire/wouldliketo...，I'mwritingtoinformyouof/getyouinformedofrelevantinformation/I'mwritingtoletyouknowthat...2．Delighted/Thrilledtolearnthatyouareplanningto...,I'dliketobrieflyintroduce...toyou.3．Asforyourlastletterasking/requiringabout...,Iamdelightedtotellyousomethingindetails.4．Newsreachesmethatyouarewillingto...,andIcanhardlywaittokeepyouinformedofthefollowingdetails.Ⅱ.主体部分：详细介绍告知内容1．Meant/Designedto...，variousactivitiesareorganizedregularly.2．Tohelpoutpeopleinneedaswellasenrichourschoollife,thecluborganizesvarious/diversevoluntaryactivities.3．Aimedatraisingourawarenessofservingthepublicandhelpingtheneedy,thecluboffersmanydifferentactivities.4．Thematchwilltakeplace...Inordertowinthematchweshould...Pleasecometotheschoolgym...5．Awiderangeofmeaningfulactivitieswillbeheldinthelecturehall,including...Ⅲ.结尾部分：表达期望或补充说明1．Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.2．Ifirmlybelievethat...willliveuptoyourexpectation.3．RemembertosubmityourapplicationattheschoolwebsitenolaterthanMay10th.4．Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthat...5．Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,feelfreetoaskme/don'thesitatetoaskme.[建写作模型·展规范形体]Dear

，Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtoinformyouof___________________(某事/某种情况).Inorderto/To

(某事/情况的目的)，wewill

(事情或情况的内容一).Besides，

(事情或情况的内容二).Anyway,

(补充某事/某情况的其他细节)．Wishyouallthebest./Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua二、“邀请信”写作增分指导[写作题目](2022·新高考Ⅰ卷改编)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1．节目介绍；2．访谈的时间和话题。注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearCaroline，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua

[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]DearCaroline，IamLiHua,headof“TalkandTalk”，anEnglishprogramfromtheCampusBroadcastingStationandIamwritingtoinviteyouasanintervieweeabouthowtoimproveoralEnglish.Aimingtopromotestudents'Englishlevel,theprogramhasenjoyedpopularityoncampus,owingtoitscasualandeasystyle.EveryinterviewedteacherwilltalkfreelytoshareinterestingEnglishwithus.Ianticipatewecangainalotthroughthecominginterview.IfitisconvenientforyounextMonday,Iexpecttohaveawonderfultalkwithyoufrom5pmto6pm.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.Yourssincerely，LiHua

学亮点写法1．学亮丽开头

开头首先用anEnglishprogramfromtheCampusBroadcastingStation作“TalkandTalk”的同位语，简明扼要地介绍了该英语节目，随后又用Iamwritingtoinviteyouas...这一经典句式对外教Caroline发出邀请。邀请态度诚恳，易于认同。2．学高级表达(1)使用高级词块，如：aimto,enjoypopularity,owingto,casualandeasystyle,gainalotthrough等，丰富了文章的语言表达。(2)准确运用高级句式，如：非谓语动词作状语Aimingtopromotestudents'Englishlevel；宾语从句wecangainalot...；条件状语从句Ifitisconvenient...；虚拟语气Iwouldappreciateitif...等，使得语言表达错落有致，亮点纷呈。3．学精彩结尾

结尾用IfitisconvenientforyounextMonday,Iexpectto...委婉地表达了自己的期待，并用Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.表达感谢，突出诚恳的态度。4．学语言真实

本邮件介绍英语节目“TalkandTalk”旨在提高学生的口语，被采访人要用轻松自由的风格分享趣味英语的内容符合生活实际，凸显了语言的真实性。[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]Ⅰ.开头部分：介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方1．Iamwritingtoinviteyou...2．Iwonderifyouwouldliketocometo...3．Wouldyouliketojoinusin...?4．Iamgreatlyhonouredtoextendoursincereinvitationtoyoufor...(活动)tobeheldat/in...(地点)on/at...(时间)．5．We'rethrowingasurprisepartyfor...We'dliketoinviteyouto...6．Iamsincerelyinvitingyoutoparticipatein...onbehalfof...Ⅱ.主体部分：介绍活动的具体内容，并说明受邀人参加的理由1．Thefollowingaresomedetailsabout.../Herearesomedetailsaboutthisactivity./Somedetailsabout...areasfollows.2．Itwillbeginat...(时间)andlastabout2hours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.3．Initially,wewillhavetheopportunitytoadmiretraditionalChinesearchitecture.4．Additionally,therewillbeanumberofactivitiessuchas...,whichwill.../Thiswillbefollowedby...5．Byparticipatingintheactivity,notonlycanwe...butalsowecan...6．Firstly,wewill...Besides,therewillbealotofactivitiessuchas...whichwill...Ⅲ.结尾部分：期待对方接受邀请，并给予尽快回复1．Wouldyoupleasedropmealinetoletmeknowifyoucancometo...?2．MyfamilyandIwouldfeelmuchhonouredifyoucouldcome.3．Wewouldbelookingforwardtoyourcomingwithgreatpleasure.4．Iwouldliketomeetyouthereandpleaseletmeknowyourdecisionsoon.5．Iwouldliketoseeyourpresenceat...6．Yourgraciouspresencewillbehighlyappreciatedandencouragingforus.7．I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyou./Idohopethatyoucanmakeitto.../Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.[建写作模型·展规范形体]Dear

，Knowingthatyou'reinterestedin/fondof/keenon

(感兴趣或喜欢的事物),I'mwriting/I'dliketoinviteyoutoj