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特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第9练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空(2023·毕节一模)TheLabaFestivalstandsforthebeginningofconventionalcelebrationsoftheChineseNewYear.__1__(celebrate)ontheeighthdayofthelastlunarmonth,LainChinesemeansthe12thlunarmonthandBameanstheeighthdayofthemonth.Thereare__2__(differ)talesabouttheoriginofthisfestivalandwecannottellwhichoneistrue.However,weagreethisfestivalstartedasasacrificialofferingtoancestors.Itwasalsoaday__3___theancientChineseprayedthattherewouldbea__4__(good)harvestthanever.Labaporridgeisakindof__5__(tradition)foodforthefestivalandit__6__(make)ofeightingredients,includingsweetrice,redbeans,peas,sorghum,etc.__7__thisspecialday,peopleareeager__8__(eat)theporridgebelievingitwillbringpeaceandgoodhealthinthecomingyear.AnothercustomistosoakLabagarlic.Thepracticeisverysimple.Putthegarlicinto__9__jar,pourvinegarintoitandthensealit.We'llfinditwillturngreen,__10__(watch)thecolorofthegarliccarefully.BythetimeoftheSpringFestival,wecantasteitwheneatingdumplings.锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第1题的提示词为动词。本题容易误填成Celebrating,原因是有些考生不清楚该词与主语之间的逻辑关系。请尝试分析现在分词和过去分词作状语的区别吧。微点：现在分词与过去分词位于句首作状语时，前者表达主动意义，后者表达被动意义，因此，作答时需先确定提示词与主语之间是主动关系还是被动关系。二、短文改错Lastweek,Ipaidavisitanewly-openedriversidepark,whereislocatedinthesoutheastofthecity.Theskyisclearandblue.Itookafreelywalkinthepark,withagentlewindtouchmyface.Theflowersalongthepathwereimpressedmealot.Thebeautifulscenerygavemeasenseofrefreshandlife.Alongtheway,Itooksuchmanyphotosthatmycellphoneranoutofpowerintheend.Thetriphelpedusrecoverfromthebusyschedule.Whatamazingthepowerofnatureis!I'mlookingforwardtoonemoretrip.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少关注本文中人称代词的误用。本文中的人称代词主要以第一人称为主，而且以单数形式出现。尝试找出文中误用的代词。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：感谢信)假定你是李华，上周在英国参加了“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：1．交流活动中的收获；2.难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；3.感谢她送你英文词典。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：文化交流周CulturalExchangeWeekDearKelly，I'vebeenbackhomesafelyfromEngland.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升DearKelly，I'vebeenbackhomesafelyfromEngland.IamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourhospitalityandkindnessduringmystayinEngland.Lastweek，IparticipatedintheCulturalExchangeWeekforChinesestudents,whichprovidedmewithavaluableopportunitytolearnaboutBritishcultureandshareChineseculture①.Throughvariousactivitiesanddiscussions,Igainedadeeperunderstandingoftheculturaldifferencesandsimilaritiesbetweenthem.Especially,IwanttoexpressmyappreciationfortheunforgettabledaysIspentatyourhome②.Ienjoyedourconversationsandthedeliciousmealswesharedtogether.IsincerelythankyoufortheEnglishdictionaryyougiftedme.Itisapracticalgiftthat③willgreatlyassistmeinimprovingmyEnglishlanguageskills.Ihopewecanstayintouchandcontinueourfriendshipinthefuture④.Yourssincerely，LiHua,学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙本文共分为三段，层次清晰，表达条理。第一段开门见山地点出写信的目的；第二段详细说明了感谢Kelly的原因；第三段表达了期望。(二)学语言表达之美1．本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，并运用了充满感激之情的语气行文。2．准确使用了一些高级词汇，如participatein,provide...with...,various,gainadeeperunderstandingof,expressmyappreciation,practical等。3．灵活运用高级句式，体现了作者深厚的语言功底，如非限制性定语从句(如①句)，省略关系代词的定语从句(如②句)，强调句型(如③句)，宾语从句(如④句)。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)DearKelly，I'vebeenbackhomesafelyfromEngland.ThankyouforyourhelpduringmystayinEngland.Lastweek,IjoinedintheCulturalExchangeWeekforChinesestudents.Ihadagoodtimeinyourcountry.[Wevisitthecitymuseumandsomeplacesofinterest.①][ThoseplacesmademehaveabetterunderstandoftheEnglishsociety,cultureandhistory.②]Ofcourse,Ialsomademanynewfriends.What'smore,Iwasluckyenoughtostayatyourhome.[Butwespentmanydaystogether.③][I'llneverforgetthosedays.④]HereIespeciallythankyouforthedictionaryyougavemeasagift.[TolearnEnglishwellisagreathelpforme.⑤]Iwilltreasureandmakefulluseofit.WelcometoChinawhenit'sconvenientforyou!YourssincerelyLiHua(一)3个错误要避免1．动词时态误用：第五句中visit→visited2．词性误用：第六句中understand→understanding3．连词误用：第九句中But→And(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．joinedin→participated_in2．hadagoodtime→enjoyed_myself3．gave→offered(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用定语从句合并①②句We_visited_the_city_museum_and_some_places_of_interest,_which_made_me_have_a_better_understanding_of_the_English_society,_culture_and_history.2.用过去分词短语作定语合并③④句And_I'll_never_forget_those_days_spent_together.3．用it作形式主语改写⑤句It's_a_great_help_for_me_to_learn_English_well.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了腊八节的寓意以及饮食习俗。1．Celebrated考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，空处应填非谓语动词，腊八节与动词celebrate之间为被动关系，应用过去分词表示被动，作状语，空处位于句首，首字母需大写。故填Celebrated。2．different考查形容词。结合句意及空后的名词tales可知，空处应填形容词different，作定语。3．when考查定语从句。此处为定语从句，先行词为aday，在句中作时间状语，应用