2024年高考英语一轮复习讲义（新人教版）写作规范汇编

写作规范练（一）

I.应用文写作——求助信

假定你是李华，临近高考，心理压力特别大，于是向学校心理老师Tom写一封信，求助

如何缓解压力，在高考中取得优异成绩。要点如下：

1.自我介绍；

2.压力大的原因；

3.希望得到老师的帮助。

注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出）；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearTom,

IamLiHua,aSenior3student._______________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearTom,

IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching,Ifeel

greatpsychologicalpressure.SoI'mwritingtoyou,askingforhelponhowtorelievethepressure

andgetexcellentresultsinthecollegeentranceexamination.

rmencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,Ihavetospendsomuchtime

onmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetodosports.Moreover,thehighexpectationsfromthe

teachersandmyparentsmakemeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon'twanttoletthemdown.What

troublesmemostisthatit，sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.

Facedwiththeaboveproblems,I'manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseofferme

someadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?

Yourssincerely.

LiHua

II.读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Mymothereyedmewithsuspicion（'怀疑）.Idarednotlookather.KnowingthatIwaslatefor

schoolfivedayscontinuously,Icouldnotofferanacceptableexplanation.!knewshedidnot

believethatIhadextraclasseseverydayandarrivedhomeafter5pm.However,realizingshehad

littlechoicebuttobelieveinme,shetoldmethatdinnerwasintherefrigerator.Shehadtorushfor

hernightshiftatthelocalclinic.

Eversincewelostourdadinanaccident,mymotherbecamethebreadwinner.Iwastheeldest

amongthefoursiblings（兄弟姐妹）anditfelluponmyshouldertoensurethattheycouldbecome

responsibleadulls.Besideshelpingmotherwiththehousework,Iregularlycoachedthemintheir

studies.Thankfully,neveroncedidIhavetoraisemyvoiceorforcethemtocompletetheir

homework.Butallofusmisseddadverymuch.Hewasamodelfatherandhusband.Lifewascruelly

takenawayfromhimataveryyoungageof42.

However,mymothermanagedtopullthroughandfoundajobattheclinic.ltwasverytough

onsomeonelikeherwhohadneverworkedbeforeinherlife.Butmoneywasscarceandtherewere

fivemouthstofeed.Daddidnotleavemuchbehind.Heneversuspectedhewoulddiesoyoung.We

stoppeddiningoutandhadourmealsmostlyathome.Webasicallylivedfromhandto

mouth.That,swhenitdawnedonmethatIhadtodomypartforthefamily.Iknewmotherwould

notagreebutIthrewcautionoutofthewindowandmanagedtogetapart-timejobatafast-food

restaurant.IworkedthreehoursadayandmanagedtobringhomemoneysothatmysiblingsandI

couldgooutforoccasionalmoviesormeals.Iwassurethatmothersuspectedsomething.Butshe

couldnotquitepointthefingertothesourceofhersuspicion.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Oneday,whileIwasbusyservingthecustomers,Iwasshockedtoseemotherstanding

oppositethecounter.__________________________________________________________________

Mothermademesitdown.Shewasalreadycrying,soweremysiblings.

【参考范文】

Oneday,whileIwasbusyservingthecustomers,Iwasshockedtoseemotherstanding

oppositethecounter.SosurprisedwasIthatIdarednotlookintohereyes.Sheappearedshocked

whenIclumsilytookherordersandsawherstaggeringtoatableoccupiedbymysiblings!My

supervisorsawmywoniedexpressionand,knowingaboutmyfamilysituation，quickly

volunteeredtotakeovermyduties.Slowly,Iremovedmyapronandjoinedmyfamily.

Mothermademesitdown.Shewasalreadycrying,soweremysiblings.Shecoveredmyhands

withhersandtoldmethatshewasgratefulformyhelp.Icouldnotholdbackmytearsandhugged

her.Howguilt-riddenIwas!Itoldmymotherthatcontributingfinanciallytothefamilywasthe

leastIcoulddotorelieveherburden.Tomygreatrelief,mybelovedmotherunderstoodmy

situationandreassuredmeeverythingwouldbealright.ltwasthenthatIcametorealizethatI

shouldnothavehiddensuchabigsecretfromher.

写作规范练（二）

I.应用文写作——介绍一次活动

假定你是李华。4月23日是“世界读书日”，为此，你校开展了系列活动。请给你的笔

友Tom写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍活动内容；

2.分享个人收获。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearTom,

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearTom,

WiththeWorldReadingDayover,Iamwritingtosharesomerelatedinformationwithyou.

It'swidelyacknowledgedthatreadingbenefitsusinmanyways.Notonlycanitbroadenour

horizonsbutitcanalsodeepenourthoughts.Therefore,aseriesofactivities,suchasReading

Salon,aSecond-handBookExchange,tookplaceonthatday.

Whatdeservedtobementionedmostwasthethemeofthereadingday—ReadingChinese

ClassicsandInheritingChineseCulture.Fromthenon,westudentsrealizedthatitwashightime

thatweshoulddomorereadingandpassonChineseculture.

HowIwishyouhadjoinedus!

Yours,

LiHua

n.读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmydaughterPeggyinasmall

apartment,strugglinghardtomakeendsmeet.

Oneday,Iheadedtothedowntownforaninterview.!satdowninthestreetcar,andthere

againsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrolls,

amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.

Onimpulse（冲动）Ideterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthestreetcarintheheavy

rainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthe

name,Ifounditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenaladyanswered.

“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement,"Itwasmyumbrellawhichhadbeen

stolenmorethanayearbefore.n

SoappealingwasherpleasurethatIforgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytoher

smallhouse.Shetooktheumbrella,withtearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethatthe

umbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找回）thisspecial

possessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherrewardwouldhavespoiledsomething,soIrefused

herofferandleft.

Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icouldonlyobtaintemporaryemployment,forasmall

salary.Whatwasworse,IhadjustlostmylastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollars

left.Unlessamiraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,hungryandjobless.Ihadprayed

steadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeennoanswerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.

TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingandchildrenshoutinginthe

bitterduskoftheevening.ButthereshouldbenoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogifts,no

remembrancewhatsoever.

Thinkingofthis,Icouldn,tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,butImanagedasmilesoI

couldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthedoorfbrmeandthrewherselfinmyarms,screaming

joyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.ThereIstood,frozen,overwhelmedby

misery.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.

Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.

【参考范文】

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSanta

Claus.ThenIheardamantalkingheartilytoherandwenttothedoor.Hewasadeliveryman,and

hisarmswerefullofparcels."Thisisamistake,“Isaid,buthereadthenameontheparcelsand

theywereforme.Whenhehadgone,Ididn,tknowwhattodo.Later,PeggyandIsatonthefloor

lookingateachother.Whatasurprise!Ilookedforthenameofthesender.

Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipickedupthenote,whichread

uThanksforreturningtheumbrella.MerryChristmas!”Itwassentbythelady.Holdingthenote

tightly,Iwasonthevergeoftears,withastreamofwarmthspreadingthroughmybody.Onthat

coldChristmas,IforgotIhadnomoneyfortherentandonlyfifteendollarsinmypocket.Wejust

satinoursmallapartmentunwrappingthegiftswithhappiness.Asweetpeacefloodedmelikea

blessingwhichmademehopefulagain.

写作规范练（三）

I.应用文写作——报道

上星期三下午你班举行了“劳动最光荣”的主题班会。请你用英语为校报英文栏目写一

篇报道，内容包括：

1.班会目的；

2.班会过程；

3.你的感受。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.标题已给出，不计入总词数。

LaborIstheMostGlorious

【参考范文】

LaborIstheMostGlorious

TostimulatethestudentsJenthusiasmforlabor,ourclassheldaclassmeetingwiththe

theme—LaborIstheMostGloriouslastWednesdayafternoon.

Theclassmeeting,consistingofthreeparts,beganwithatouchingvideoaboutastudentbeing

avolunteerinhiscommunity.Afterthat,wetalkedaboutthetopicfreelyingroups.Finally,some

studentssharedtheirstoriesofdoinghouseworkathome.

Throughtheclassmeeting,notonlydowebetterunderstandthevalueoflabor,butwealsotry

tobuildabeautifulsocietywithourhands,

n.读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

ThatDecember,withChristmasapproaching,mymotherwasoutatworkwhenIletmyself

intoherbedroomoneafternooninsearchofasafetypin.Itookthekeyhiddenunderthecarpet,

unlockedthedoorandsteppedin.Standingagainstthewallwasabig,blackbicyclewithballoon

tires.Irecognizeditinstantly.ltwasthesamesecond-handbikeVdbeenadmiringinaBaltimore

Streetshopwindow.Somehowmymothermusthavescrapedtogetherenoughforadownpayment

andmeanttosurprisemewiththebicycleonChristmasmorning.

Iwasdeeplymovedbythediscoveryandyetsickenedbytheknowledgethat,burstinginto

herroomlikethis,Ihadrobbedherofthepleasureofseeingmeastonishedanddelightedon

Christmasday.Iimmediatelybackedout,putthekeybackinitshidingplace,andthoughtover

whattodo.

IdecidedthatbetweennowandChristmasImustdoabsolutelynothingtorevealtheslightest

hintofmyterribleknowledge.Nothingmustdenyherthehappinessofseeingmecompletely

amazedonChristmasday.Ievenstartedpracticingmysurprisedfaceinfrontofthemirror,testing

exclamationsofdelight:"Wow!”“Abikewithballoontires!Idon'tbelieveit.”

ThedayfinallycamewhenChristmasarrived.Mymotherwokemeandmysisterearlyinthe

morning."GoandseewhatSantaClausbroughttoyou.”

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Heartbeatracing,Icameoutofmybedroom.________________________________________

Iwasabouttogointomyroomdisappointedlywhenmymomcriedbehindme,"Wait!

There'ssomethinginmybedroomIforgotallabout.”

【参考范文】

Heartbeatracing,Icameoutofmybedroom.Tomydisappointment,onlyafewsmallbrightly

wrappedpackageswerelyingundertheChristmastree.Nobicycle.Myheartsankasifbeing

splashedbycoldwater.SlowlyIopenedmypackage,onlytoseeashirtlyinginside.WhatIfeltwas

bitterdispleasure.Whathappenedtomybicycle?Icouldn,thelpthinkingmymomhadfoundthe

bikejusttooexpensiveandeventuallysentitback.IcouldfeeltearswellingupinmyeyesasI

clenchedtheshirt.

Iwasabouttogointomyroomdisappointedlywhenmymomcriedbehindme,"Wait!

There'ssomethinginmybedroomIforgotallabout."Shewenttoherroom,andamomentlater

camebackwheelingthebigblackbicyclewithballoontires.Ididn'thavetopretendthe

excitementandsurpriseasthebicyclecameintomysight.Iembracedmymomandkissedher

spontaneously."Thankyou,mom!ThisisthebestChristmasgiftI'veeverhad!”Abrilliant

grinbloomedonmymom,sfaceassheheldmetightly.Hidingherpleasureofseeingmy

surprisedface,shesaid，”Allrightnow,it'sonlyabicycle.”

写作规范练(四)

I.应用文写作——申请信

假定你是李华，在澳大利亚悉尼做交换生，得知该城市会展中心(SydneyConventionand

ExhibitionCenter)近日将举办中国丝绸展，需要志愿者讲解。请你写一封信，申请当志愿者。

内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.个人优势；

3.表达期望。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearSirorMadam,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearSirorMadam,

rmLiHua,anexchangestudentwhoisstudyinginSydney.HavinglearnedthataChinese

SilkExhibitionwillbeheldinSydneyConventionandExhibitionCenter,I'mwritingto

recommendmyselfasavolunteer.

BorninZhejiangProvince,IlearnedmoreaboutChinesesilk,whichmakesiteasyformeto

recognizetheextraordinarybeautyhiddenbehindsilk.What?smore,whatmakesmefitforthejob

ismyoutgoingpersonalitycombinedwithmygoodcommandofEnglishthatwillgeneratesmooth

communication.Moreimportantly,IampassionateaboutspreadingChineseculture.

Ihopethatmyapplicationwillmeetwithyourapproval.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

n.读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

IcouldfeeltheexcitementrisinginmeasIheldthebeautifullywrappedpresentinmyhands.I

wasunabletocontainmycuriosityanylonger.Iopenedit.ltwasabrandnewlaptop（笔t己本电脑）.I

hadscoredstraightAsformyO-levelexaminationandthiswasmyreward.Ihadalwaysenviedmy

friendswhowereexchangingnewsaboutchatrooms,instantmessagingande-mailing,allofwhich

Iknewnothingabout.NowIwasgoingtofindout.

Itstartedoutsimplyenough.IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossa

socialnetworkingsite.SoonIbecameaddictedtochattingwithmynew-foundfriendonthe

Internet.IbegantospendmoreandmoretimeonYouTubeandbecameenslavedbyFacebookand

Twitter.Ihadneverimaginedthatthedaywouldcomewhen1wouldbestuckbytheglowingscreen

beforeme.WheneverIdicin'tsurfthesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthrough

conversationaboutboringthingsorfashionwebsites.

Astimepassed,IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet.Duringweekends,whenIhad

moretimeonmyhands,Icouldeasilyspendafewhoursonmylaptop.ltcametoapointwhereI

chosetolockmyselfinmyroom,refusingtocomeoutandtakepartinfamilydiscussions.I

preferredtostayconnectedtothepeopleIbefriendedontheInternetalthoughIhadnevermet

them.SoonIwasspendingtheearlyhoursofthemorningsurfingtheIntemet.Sleepwasreplaced

bynaps（打盹）andmygradesatschoolalsodroppedquickly.

Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsstartedvoicingtheirdisapproval.ltbecameobviousto

themthatIwasspendingtoomuchtimeontheInternet.Iwasaskedtodecreasemyusageofthe

laptop.Yet,howeverhardItried,Iwasunabletopullmyselfaway,unabletoendmychatsessions,

andunabletoconcentrateonmylessons.Iwasdesperateforjustanotherclick,justanotherlookat

mye-mailormessageboard.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.

IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewleaf.

【参考范文】

Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.Ibeggedandevenquarreledwithhim.Ifought

foralongtime,butwhateverIdid,itwasnouse.Dadhadmadeuphismind-hewouldn'tallow

metouseit.Overtime,IrealizedthatDadandMumhadalwayswantedthebestforme.ltwasthen

thatIdecidedtotakethebigstep-toconquermyInternetaddiction.QuittingwasharderthanIhad

expected.Butwithgreatdetermination,IknewthatIwouldbeabletodoit.

IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewleaf.SoImadeadetailedplanfbrmy

everydaylife.Imanagedtochangemydailyroutine.AfterIgotup,thefirstthingIdidwasrunfor

halfanhour,whichcouldhelpmeforgetaboutgoingonline.Afterschool,Iwouldplaybasketball

withmyclassmates,whichmademehealthierandstronger.Allthishelpedmeconquermy

addiction.Nowmylifehasreturnedtonormalandmygradeshavegoneupagain.

写作规范练（五）

I.应用文写作——感谢信

假定你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？

请根据以下要点用英语给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1.感谢养育之恩；

2.感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给予鼓励和安慰：

3.感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；

4.表达对父亲的爱。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearFather,

WithFather,sDayapproaching,_____________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

Dea】Father,

WithFather'sDayapproaching.Iwanttoexpressmygratitudetoyouforbringingmeup

fromthebottomofmyheart.NeverwillIforgetthetimelyencouragementandcomfortyougave

mewheneverIwasfacedwithdifficultiesandtheprideinyoureyeswhenIachievedmy

goals.Withoutyou，Iwouldnotgofurtherconfidentlyandbravely.

YourlovecanneverberepaidbutIamdeterminedtoworkhardandnevermakeyou

disappointed.!loveyou，Father!

Yours,

LiHua

II.读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

AGirlwithStageFright

Itwasobviouslygoingtobeoneofthosedays.Studentswerepreparingforasingingcontest

actively.Paul,amusicteacher,madecommentsonthestudentsJperformanceattheendofa

rehearsal（彩排）.AgirlnamedLisadidthepoorestpreparation.Paulwasveryannoyedandentirely

frustratedwithher.Hedoesn,trecallhowheclosedtherehearsal,buthe'ssurethewordshe

chosewerenotwordsthatwouldliftthegirl'sspiritsbutrathersatisfyhisselfishneedtopunish

herforthepoorperformance.

ThemomentPauldismissedthestudents,Lisa,theveryreservedfreshmangirl,madeapath

straighttowardhim.Shelookedhimrightintheeyeandsaid,“Ihateyou!”Paulwastaken

abackandfrightenedbythepassionandhonestyinhervoice.Thoughentirelyshocked,hewas

somehowabletocollecthimselfandstaycalm.Helookedherrightintheeyeandsaid,"Well,

that'sashame,butit'smydutytoremindyouandinspireyou.”Shedidn'treact,butrather

stormedaway，herangerunchanged.

Severaldayslater,theyhadtheoccasiontospeakinprivate.LisaaskedifPaulrememberedthe

timewhenshetoldhimthatshehatedhim.Howcouldheforget?Shewentontoadmitquiteopenly

andhonestlythatitwasherself,nothim,whoshehated.Themomentgotheavyandshebeganto

tellhimofherfearandpressurewhenstandingonthestage.Shebelievedthatnomatterhowwell

sheprepared,shewouldperformterriblyonthestage.Paulbecameawarethatshehadseriousstage

frightandalsorealizedthatmaybehehaddonesomethingimproperseveraldaysago.Thenhe

talkedtoherpatientlyandsincerely,hopingtohelpherbuildtheconfidence.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Thedaybeforethecontest,shewaspracticingforthesingingcompetitionalone.

However,thenextmorning,whenshestoodonthestage,herfaceturnedpale.

【参考范文】

Thedaybeforethecontest,shewaspracticingforthesingingcompetitionalone.Shethought

abouthowtosingeverykeyandpracticedittimeandtimeagain,sothatshecouldprepareherself

wellenough.Atthatmoment,Paulcametoherandtoldherthatactuallyhehimselfwasalsoa

personwithstagefrightwhenhewasyoung.Buthebelievedthataslongashepracticedhard,he

wouldwin.Finaily,hedidbeatthestagefright.Hearingthat,Lisaknewthatshewouldbeanother

Paul.

However,thenextmorning,whenshestoodonthestage,herfaceturnedpale.Looking

around,shesawPaulsittingintheaudience,smilingather.LisarememberedwhatPaulhadtold

her,andshebelievedthatshehadgotwellprepared.Gradually,shefoundherselflostinsingingher

songandforgotallthebadfeelings.Afterherperformance,thewholeaudienceapplaudedfor

her.Shewon.

写作规范练（六）

I.应用文写作——道歉信

假设你是李华，你本来计划周六下午要去参加好朋友Tom的生日晚会，但你因故不能赴

约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1.表示歉意；

2.解释原因；

3.祝福他生日快乐。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearTom,

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?

rmterriblysorrythatI'mnotabletogotoyourbirthdaypartythisSaturday

afternoon.TminBeijingnowbecausemymotherisseriouslyillandwillhaveanoperation

here.Sheisbadlyinneedofmycarethesedays,soTmstayingheretotakecareofherinthe

hospital.

Iwishyouahappybirthdayandhopeeverythingwillgowellwiththeparty.Bytheway,I

havesentyouthelatestCDofXuSong.Ihopeyou'11likethisbirthdaypresent.

rmlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

II.读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

They'dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya,smother,Helenaloved

hostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'dmakeherSweetSixteena

hundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededtobe.Theyselectedathemeeveryyear

andstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe“SnowWhile”andherninthhadbeenthe

“Frozen”.Theynevertoldherwhatthethemewasthedaybefore.Sheydjustwakeupher

birthdaymorning,abrand-newbirthdayoutfit(一套月艮装)laidneatlyonherdresser(anoutfit

relatedtothetheme,ofcourse)andshewouldopenherdoortoseetheadventurethatlayaheadof

herthatday.

Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear'sthemewouldbe.AplayonthewordsuSweet

Sixteen,,waslikely—acandythemedparty,perhaps?Butshe,dhadabakingpartyafewyears

before-andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn,thaveanyinterestincars,soshe

doubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She,dtriedtolookthroughhermother'spurchase

historyonline,buthermotherhadbeencarefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.Sotheonlyclue

leftwasthebirthdayoutfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.

May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandshelovedthedaythat

herbirthdaytookplace.ltwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitneverrained.Thismorningwasno

differentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinherbedandlookedtoherdresserbeforeslipping

outofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.Sheunfoldeditandhelditagainstherbody,seeinghowitwas

like.ltreacheddown,justabovetheankle.Myadressed,eyedherselfinthemirrorandfounditwas

notsomuchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.ltwastotallyoneforblue-collarworkers!

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

【参考范文】

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.Helenawalkedin,"Whatismybirthday

themethisyear,Mum?”Myaasked.Labor!”Helenaansweredinafirmvoice.uButIwas

expectingaparty!”hervoicesoundedshaky.Oh,howcouldsheforgetshewasbornonLabor's

Day!Mya'sfeetbroughthersmallstepstofollowHelenatothevan.Onarrivingatafarm,she

noticedthevastlandofwheatspreadingoverthehorizonthatmadeasplendidviewitself.Theirjob

wastoremovetheweeds.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.Severaldropsofsweattracedapath

onherredandpinkcheeksandsheturnedtoHelena：”Thisisnotbad,MumandIfeelI've

grownupenoughtohelpyouwithsomething.vHelenapulledMyaintoherarmsandplantedabig

kissonherfbrehead.ThesuninMaywasshiningbrighterthaneverlikeafireball.Picturingthe

goodharvestofthisyear,theyhittheroadwithahappybirthdaysongechoinginthevan.

写作规范练（七）

I.应用文写作——祝贺信

假设你是李华，来自美国的交换生Peter在你班学习半年，并与你成为好朋友。目前,

他即将完成学业回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别赠言。要点包括：

1.祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；

2.取得成绩的原因；

3.你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearPeler,

Ifeeldelightedthatyouhaveachievedyourgoal.Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulations

onyourachievement.

ItisexcellentofyoutogetsuchahighmarkintheChinesetest,forafterallyouhavejust

beenstayingwithusforonlysixmonths.Youarealwaysdiligentandactive,whichisvitalfor

Chineselearning.Moreover,yourgreatinterestinreadingenablesyoutohaveagoodmemoryfbr

Chinesecharacters.Soyoudeserveit.

StillIknowit'stimeforustosaygoodbye.Iwillrecallthosebeautifuldayswespent

togetherandwhenwehelpedeachother.Ihavethousandsofblessingsforyou.Wishyouall

possiblejoy!

Yours,