Module9写作能力提升练课件英语八年级下册

Module9FriendshipModule9写作能力提升练⁠

⁠素材典藏单词separate,explain,treat,lonely,regret,patient,encourage,friendly,treasure短语

explain

sth.to

sb.,

feel

lonely,in

silence,encourage

sb.to

do

sth.,

day

by

day句型1.

I

was

lonely,and

afraid

to

make

friends

with

anyone.2.

It

made

me

feel

happy,lively

and

warm.3.

It

was

like

a

hidden

treasure

and

changed

my

life.⁠

⁠经典例题Dear

Li

Ling

,I

have

a

problem

in

the

new

school.I

often

feel

lonely

and

worried.I

have

no

close

friends

and

I

don't

know

how

to

get

along

well

with

my

classmates.What

should

I

do

?

Yours,

Wang

Xiaowei［审题指导］1.体裁：

应用文2.人称：

以第二人称为主3.时态：

一般现在时为主［思路构建］［范文欣赏］DearWangXiaowei，Gladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter，yousaidyoufeltlonelyandworried.Don’tworryaboutit.Hereissomeadvice.First，friendshipisatreasureforeveryonebecauseitbringsalotofhappiness.Whetheryouareatschoolornot，trytomakefriendswithyourclassmates.Second，youshouldtrytohelpothers.

Helpingothersisagoodwaytodevelopfriendship.Third，

pleaseremembertogiveeveryoneasmileeveryday.Ifso，youwillbehappyandhavemorefriends.Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourself.Bestwishes.Yours，LiLing⁠

⁠写作实践朋友是我们生命中最重要的存在。你的朋友是怎样的一个人呢？为什么你们会成为朋友？请写一篇短文来向我们介绍你的一位朋友吧。要点：1.描述自己与朋友的相同点和不同点；2.至少举一个例子说明你们成为朋友的原因；3.谈谈你对友谊的感悟。要求：

词数：不少于90。

MyFriend

Ihavealotoffriends.AndmybestfriendisKate.Weareinthesameclass.Sheisastallasme.Herhairislongerthanmine.SheisoutgoingandfunnybutIamquiet.WhenIamsad，sheoftenmakesmelaugh.Wehavethesameinterest.Webothlikereadingbooks.ShelikesnovelsandIlikestories.Weoftentalkaboutourbookswitheachother.MyFriend

Ihavealotoffriends.AndmybestfriendisKate.Weareinthesameclass.Sheisastallasme.Herhairislongerthanmine.SheisoutgoingandfunnybutIamquiet.WhenIamsad，sheoftenmakesmelaugh.Wehavethesameinterest.Webothlikereadingbooks.ShelikesnovelsandIlikestories.Weoftentalkaboutourbookswitheachother.HerEnglishisgoodbutIampooratit.WhenIhaveproblems，shealwayshelpsme.Shetellsmesomegoodlearningmethods.Withoutherhelp，myEnglishwon’timprovesomuch.

Itreasureourfriendshipverymuch.Ithinkitisthemostpreciousthinginmylife.Imusttakegoodcareoftheboatofourfriendship.

⁠HerEnglishisgoodbutIampooratit.WhenIhaveproblems，shealwayshelpsme.Shetellsmesomegoodlearningmethods.Withoutherhelp，myEnglishwon’timprovesomuch.

Itreasureourfriendshipverymuch.Ithinkitisthemostpreciousthinginmylife.Imusttakegoodcareoftheboatofourfriendship.

⁠一、话题分析本模块以“friendship(友谊)”为话题,讨论了拥有朋友的重要性及怎样寻求建议或帮助解决朋友之间出现的问题。书面表达中要求同学们能够运用所学的知识介绍自己的朋友或友谊，并能对朋友间出现的问题提出合理化建议。同学们要学会运用所学知识和技能,积极乐观地生活学习,诚实交往,与朋友一起成长进步。二、写作方法“三要素”法写友谊类话题作文1.展示主题，确立中心。2.围绕中心，分层陈述。3.总结全文，表达感想。三、素材积累1.“友谊”类话题的常用词汇：friendship//important//treat//suggestion//difficult//share//solvetheproblem//feel//respect//honest//friendly//trustyourfriend//understandothers//eachother...2.“友谊”类话题的常用句子：开头句1.Everyoneneedsfriendship.2.Friendshipisveryimportantineveryone’slife.3.Ithinkfriendshipisthebrightestfeelingintheworld.4.I’llgiveyousomeadviceonmakingfriends.中间句1.Youaresupposedtorespectthem.2.Thenyouwillmakemorefriends.3.We’vebeenfriendsfor...4.Trytomakefriendswithyourclassmateswhetheryouareatschoolornot.5.Youshouldtrytohelpthemwhentheyareintrouble.6.First,youshouldbefriendlytoothers.结尾句1.Ifyoudoso,Ibelievethatyou’llhavemorefriends.2.Inmyopinion,friendshipisveryimportantandweshouldtreasureitinourlife.四、写作任务友谊是我们生活中的重要组成部分。请你结合下面的汉语提示用英语谈谈在生活中应该如何对待朋友。提示：1.学会倾听和分享；

2.彼此坦诚,不要说谎；3.互相信任是很重要的；4.我们应该理解朋友的感受；5.当遇到困难,我们要互相帮助。【写作模板】展示主题，确立中心围绕中心，分层陈述总结全文，表达感想Friendshipisanimportantpartinourlife.Friendsaretheimportantpartinourlife.First,learntolistenandshare.Second,behonesttoothers.Third,trustyourfriends.Fourth,weshouldunderstandfriends’feelings.Finally,helpeachother.友谊【高分作文】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Friendshipisanimportantpartinourlife.Howshouldwetreatourfriendsinourlife?First,learntolistenandshare.Whenourfriendstalktous,weshouldlistentothemcarefully.Second,behonesttoothers.Don’tlietoourparents,teachersorfriends.Third,trustyourfriends.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It’simportantto