高考英语经典专练13短文改错语法填空书面表达（教师版）

短文改错短文改错+语法填空+书面表达经典专练十三一、(一、(2018届东北三省三校高三第一次联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Afewyearsbefore,myfamilywenttoaseafoodfestivalinFlorida.Thefoodwasdelicious,theweatherwaslovely,buttheboatridewasgreat.Thelastthingwastogoonhelicopterride.Mylittlesisterwassoyoungtogobyherself,soIvolunteeredtoacpanywithherontheride.WhenIgotintothehelicopter,Iattempttoclosethedoor.Airplaneshavedoors.Sodoahelicopter.Wrong!Thepilottoldmethattherewasnodoorastheywentskywards100,000feetintotheair.Ihadneverbeenmorefrighteninginmylife.It’sagoodthingwhichtheridelastedforonly15minutes.Nomoreairridesforme,Iswear!【答案】Afewyearsbefore,myfamilywenttoaseafoodfestivalinFlorida.Thefoodwasdelicious,theweatherwaslovely,agobuttheboatridewasgreat.Thelastthingwastogoon∧helicopterride.Mylittlesisterwassoyoungtogobyherself,andasoIvolunteeredtoacpanywithherontheride.WhenIgotintothehelicopter,Iattempttoclosethedoor.Airplanestooattemptedhavedoors.Sodoahelicopter.Wrong!Thepilottoldmethattherewasnodoorastheywentskywards100,000feetintodoeswetheair.Ihadneverbeenmorefrighteninginmylife.It’sagoodthingwhichtheridelastedforonly15minutes.Nomorefrightenedthatairridesforme,Iswear!【解析】1.习惯用法：afewdaysago几天前。故把beforeago。2.句意：食物很美味，天气很好，乘船也很好。此处表示递进的并列关系，故把butand。3.句意：最后一件事是乘坐直升飞机。根据句意可知在helicopter前加a。4.句意：我的小妹妹太小而不能独自去。故把sotoo。5.句意：我自愿陪她一起去兜风。acpany陪伴，是及物动词，故把后面的the去掉。6.句意：当我进入直升机的时候，我试图关上门。根据句意可知主句用一般过去时态，故把attemptattempted。7.句意：直升飞机也是这样。句子用一般现在时态，主语是ahelicopter，单数第三人称，故把dodoes。8.句意：当我们向空中飞了10万英尺的时候，飞行员告诉我，没有门。根据句意可知把theywe。9.句意：在我的生活中，我从未如此害怕过。此处是“感到害怕”，故把frighteningfrightened。10.句意：这段旅程只持续了15分钟是件好事。此处it是形式主语，that引导的主语从句是真正的主语。故把whichthat。二二、（2018届河南省高三三阶段测评四）阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。Sincelastwinter,smog_____1_____(occur)severaltimes,whichhasdonegreatharmtous.Tosolvetheproblem,theChineseleadersinBeijinghaveattachedgreatimportance____2____protectingtheenvironment.Theyaretakingbigstepstodealwithclimatechangeandpollution,_____3_____someofChina’scitiesareactingtoo.Nanjing,thecapitalofChina’seasternJiangsuProvince,likemanymajorcitiesinChina,istryingtoimprovetheesituationby____4____(get)aVerticalForest,asetoftwogreenresidentialtowersthatwillmakethecitymore___5___(appeal)andwillprovideresidentsandvisitorswithfreshair.Thisbrilliantidea_____6_____(put)forwardbyStefanoBoeriArchitetti.______7______architectbasedinMilan,Italy.Andin2014thefirstVerticalForest____8____(build)inAsia,anditwillhostatotalof1,100treesfrom23localspeciesand2,500shrubswiththecapabilitiesofprovidingaround25tonsofCO₂absorptioneachyearand____9____(possible)producing132poundsofoxygeneachday.OtherChinesemajorcities,likeChongqingandShanghai,arereportedtobeplanningtobuildupsimilargreen___10___(structure).【答案】1.hasoccurred 2.to 3.and 4.getting5.appealing6.wasput 7.an 8.built 9.possibly 10.structures【解析】

雾霾对我们造成伤害，中国政府非常重视保护环境，他们正在采取重大措施来应对气候变化和污染，并且中国的一些大城市也行动起来。1.根据Sincelastwinter可知句子用现在完成时态，主语是smog，单数第三人称，故答案为hasoccurred。occur发生，是不及物动词，无被动语态。2.固定搭配：attachedgreatimportanceto非常重视,其中to是介词，后面用sth./doing做宾语。故答案为to。3.句意：他们正在采取重大措施来应对气候变化和污染，并且中国的一些大城市也在实施。此处是表示递进关系的并列句，故答案为and。4.固定搭配：bydoingsth.通过做某事，故答案为getting。5.句意：一套能使城市更有吸引力的绿色住宅塔楼。make+宾语+形容词（宾语补语），根据句意可知答案为appealing。6.句意：这个绝妙的主意是StefanoBoeriArchitetti提出的。句子用一般过去时态的被动语态，答案为wasput。7.句意：总部设在意大利米兰的一名建筑师。architect建筑师，以元音开头，故答案为an。8.此处是过去分词做后置定语，答案为built。9.副词修饰动词，答案为possibly。10.句意：计划建相似的绿色建筑物。根据句意可知此处用名词复数，故答案为structures。三、（三、（2018届安徽省六校教育研究会高三第二次联考）网络时代，许多年轻的父母沉溺于玩或电脑，而忽视了与孩子的沟通。某英文报社现以Howtodevelopabetterparentchildrelationship为题向你征稿。请你分析产生这种现象的原因并提出合理化建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。HowtodevelopabetterparentchildrelationshipNowadaysmanyyoungparentsareaddictedtotheirelectricdeviceslikesmartphonesorputers,payinglessornoattentiontotheirkids.【答案】HowtodevelopabetterparentchildrelationshipNowadaysmanyyoungparentsareaddictedtotheirelectricdeviceslikesmartphonesorputers,payinglessornoattentiontotheirkids.Thenhowdoesiteabout?Admittedly,thesmartphoneindeeddramaticallychangesourlife.Withit,peoplecandonearlyeverythingtheywant,suchassurfingtheInternetforinformation,watchingfilmsorvideos,doingsomeonlineshoppingandplayinggamesaswell.Thus,asmartphoneservesasaplatformforthemtogetfuninafortableandconvenientway.Asaresult,moreandmoreyoungparentsarebeingattracted.However,nothingcanreplacefacetofacemunicationbetweenparentsandkids,whichrequiresparentstothinkabouttherealmeaningoflife,spendmoretimewiththechildrenan