新高考英语一轮复习考点过关练考点22 应用文写作：祝贺信、慰问信（解析版）

考点22应用文写作：祝贺信、慰问信（解析版）【命题解读】书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。 以下对祝贺信、慰问信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。祝贺信【布局思维导图】【基本模板】Dear______(称谓)Iamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______(祝贺事由).As______(身份关系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhen______(祝贺事由).Fortheseyears,you______(被祝贺人过去的经历).Notonlydid/have/were______(被祝贺人的努力),butalso______(被祝贺人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______(被祝贺人的优点). Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua【写作实操技巧】 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。 1.祝贺他获奖； 2.肯定他付出的努力； 3.询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。中国诗词大会ChinesePoetryContest______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMichael(称谓)IamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeofyourgroupintheChinesePoetryContest(祝贺事由).Asyourfriend(身份关系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhenIknowyoursuccess(祝贺事由).Fortheseyears,you’veshowngreatinterestinChinesepoetryandkeptonrecitingpoemseveryday(被祝贺人过去的经历).NotonlyhaveyouaccumulatedmuchknowledgeaboutChinesepoetry(被祝贺人的努力),butalsoyouhaveformedadeepunderstandingofit(被祝贺人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyourappreciationtowardsthosepoems(被祝贺人的优点). Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿写演练】 假设你是李华，来自美国的交流生Peter在你班学习半年，与你成为好朋友。目前，他即将完成学成回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别留言。要点包括：

1.祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；

2.取得成绩的原因；

3.你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearPeter(称谓)Iamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourachievementinyourstudy(祝贺事由).Asyourfriend(身份关系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhenIknowhaveachievedyourgoal(祝贺事由).Forthepastsixmonths,youastonisheduswithyouramazingtalentinlearningChinesewellinashortoftime(被祝贺人过去的经历).Notonlyareyoudiligentandactive,whichisvitalforChineselearning(被祝贺人的努力),butalsoyouhaveshowedyourgenuinepassionforChinesereading,whichenablesyoutohaveagoodmemoryforChinesecharacters(被祝贺人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyourenthusiasm(被祝贺人的优点). StillIknowit’stimeforustosaygoodbye.

Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua慰问信【布局思维导图】【基本模板】Dear______(称谓)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthat______(写信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou(Ihopethattheunexpectedfailure/troublewon’tletyoudown).Youmust______(表达对遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnotto______(悲观失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,______(提供建议或帮助).Remember,

I

won’tbefaraway.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful（Hopeyoucanhaveyourtroublesremovedsoon）.Yoursincerely,LiHua【写作实操技巧】 假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(TyphoonMujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家园。你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1.

表示安慰和关心；2.

提供帮助。注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearWangGang(称谓)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatahorribleandsevereTyphoonMujigaehityourhometownandyourhouseisinruins(写信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou.Youmusthavesufferedalotfromtheaccident(表达对遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnottoletoutacry(悲观失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,wewillsparenoefforttohelpyou.We’vemadeadonationofsomemoney,expectingitcanhelpyougothroughthedifficulty.Asfor

thelessonsyouhavemissed,Iamwillingtohelpyoumakethemup(提供建议或帮助).Remember,I

won’tbefaraway.Hopeyoucanhaveyourtroublesremovedsoon.Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿写演练】 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好，因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中，他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信，内容如下：1.表示安慰；2.

提出建议。注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMike(称谓)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend(写信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou.Youmusthavebeeninbadmood(表达对遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnottobedepressed(悲观失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,theessence

ofcompetition

liesnotin

victory

butin

participation.Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyourlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsandweaknesses(提供建议或帮助).Remember,I

won’tbefaraway.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Yoursincerely,LiHua【真题1】（2008全国1）假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1、 自我介绍；2、 祝贺苏琳生日；3、 感谢工作人员；4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________