02 全国甲与乙卷（全国I、II、III卷） (2024-2020) 近五年高考英语真题满分作文汇编

全国甲&乙卷2024年高考英语作文真题【甲卷】英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday’sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormousdevelopment.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscoresChina’sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.Inshort,China’stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇激活提供：offer→provide极大地：dramatically→tremendously减少：reduce→decrease总之：inshort→inanutshell2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility.【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)【文本解读】发言稿是指在公开场合发表讲话的文稿。发言人可以针对某个具体问题来交流思想和感情、表达见解和主张、宣传倡议某种精神或活动，如介绍自己的学习、工作、经验等等。发言的目的是为了引起听众的共鸣，并使其在思想上认同或信服发言人的观点。因此，发言稿通常论点鲜明，逻辑性强，具有针对性、条理性和激励性的特点，容易使读者信服并在思想上产生共鸣。发言稿主要由标题语、称谓语、问候语、说明语、主体正文、结束语及致谢语构成。本题目要求考生根据提供的图片内容写一篇演讲稿，内容涵盖共享单车、高铁、新能源汽车三个方面，展现中国交通的发展。这一题目体现了高考作文贴近时代、关注社会热点的特点，同时也考查了考生的观察分析能力、语言组织能力和创新思维。【思路点拨】通过审题我们知道本题要求考生写一篇发言稿。发言稿具有说服和号召的功能，所以语言要有力度，有感染力。第一段提出演讲主题——中国的交通发展；第二段结合图片详细说明中国的交通发展状况，结尾可以发表感悟，如为国家的富强和民族的复兴感到自豪等；第三段感谢聆听【满分范文】范文一Goodmorning,everyone!Today,I'mgreatlyhonoredtoaddressthetopic"TheDevelopmentofTransportinChina".Inourrapidlyevolvingsociety,justtakesharedbikes,high-speedrails,andnewenergyvehiclesasexamples.Sharedbikeshavetrulybroughtgreatconveniencetoourshort-distancetravels.Theyenableustomovefreelyinthecitieswithsuchease,minimizingthetroubleofrelyingonpublictransportationorprivatecars.Itisindeedasimpleandeco-friendlywaytogetaround.High-speedrailsareanoutstandingachievementintransportation.Theyconnectcitiesatastonishingspeeds,greatlyshorteningthetraveltimebetweendistantlocations.Withtheircomfortandefficiency,theyhaverevolutionizedthewaywetravellongdistances,makingitmoreaccessibleandpleasant.Newenergyvehiclesarealsoplayinganincreasinglycrucialrole.Theyrepresentashifttowardsamoresustainableandenvironmentallyfriendlytransportationalternative.Thesecarsarereducingourdependenceonfossilfuelsandhelpingtocreateacleanerandgreenerfuture.Thechangesinthesetransportationmodesreflecttheprogressoftechnologyandourpursuitofabetterlife.Theynotonlyenhanceourtravelexperiencebutalsohaveaprofoundimpactontheeconomyenvironment,andsocialdevelopment.Wearewitnessinganexcitingeraoftransportationinnovation,andthesechangeswillcontinuetoshapeourlivesinthecomingyears.Thankyouforlistening!DevelopmentofTransportinChina范文二Goodmorning,mydearteachersandfellowstudents,IfeelsohonoredtostandheretotalkabouttheremarkabledevelopmentoftransportationinChina.Aswediveintothistopic,wewillexplorethreespecificadvancements:sharedbicycles,newenergyvehicles,andhigh-speedtrains.Thedevelopmentoftransportationhasprofoundlychangedourlives.Thesharedbicyclesandthenewenergyvehicleshaveofferedaconvenientandeco-friendlymodeoftransportation,promotingahealthierandmoresustainableurbanenvironment.Asforthehigh-speedtrains,IhavetosaythattheyreallyhaverevolutionizedtravelwithinChina,connectingcitiesandregionslikeneverbefore,whichnotonlyboosteconomicgrowthbutalsofosterculturalexchangeandunitybybringingpeopleclosertogether.So,myfellowstudents,letustakeprideinournation'sachievementsdrawinginspirationfromourpasttofuelourjourneytowardsabrighterfutureandcontributetothecontinuedprogresstoshapeabettertomorrow.Thankyou.范文三It'sagreathonourtoaddressyouall!ThetopicIwanttosharewithyoutodayis"TheProgressofTransportinChina",illustratedthroughsharedbikes,high-speedtrains,andnewenergyvehicles.Thepastfewdecadeshaveseenremarkableprogressinthecountry'stransportsystem,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Sharedbikesnowdotcitystreets,providingagreenandconvenientcommutingoption.Meanwhile,high-speedtrains,especiallythebullettrain,havedrasticallyreducedtraveltimesacrossthisexpansivenation.Furthermore,withtheemergenceofnewenergyvehicles,Chinaissteppingtowardsamoreeco-friendlyandsustainablefuture.ThesedevelopmentsnotonlyshowcaseChina'stechnologicalprogressbutalsoitscommitmenttoenvironmentalsustainability.Inshort,China'stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.范文四Dearfellowstudents,ThesethreepicturesencapsulatetheremarkabletransformationofChina'stransportationlandscape.Thefirstimage,featuringrickshawsandhorses,evokesabygoneeraofslow-paced,agrarianlife.Thesecondimage,showcasingbicycles,symbolizesChina'sentryintothemoderneraanditsburgeoningurbanization.Finally,thethirdpicture,brimmingwithcarsandbuses,vividlyillustratesthecountry'seconomicgrowthandurbantransformation.Thistransformationisnotmerelyaquantitativechange;itrepresentsaqualitativeleapinChina'sdevelopmentanditspursuitofmodernization.Itreflectsashiftfromadependenceonhumanandanimallabortoaneraofmechanizationandautomation,ajourneythathasfundamentallyalteredthewayweliveandwork.Thankyou.范文五Dearfriends,Today,I'dliketodiscusstheremarkableadvancementsintransportationtechnologyinChina.Threekeydevelopmentsstandout:sharedbicycles,high-speedrail,andnewenergyvehicles.Firstly,sharedbicyclesrevolutionizeurbanmobility,encouraginggreenandhealthytravel.Secondly,ourhigh-speedrailnetworkhastransformedintercitytravel,connectingdistantregionswithunprecedentedspeed.Lastly,newenergyvehiclesrepresentasignificantsteptowardsreducingcarbonemissionsandpromotingenvironmentalsustainability.Inconclusion,theseinnovationsnotonlyenhanceourdailylivesbutalsocontributetoagreenerandmoreefficientfuture.Let'scelebratetheseachievementsandembracetheexcitingpossibilitiesahead.Thankyou.2023年高考英语作文真题【甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解读】本试题要求考生以“一位中国历史人物”为题写一篇短文投稿，参加主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。内容有两个要点：人物简介及事迹，意义或启示。该题考查了考生的英语写作表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对中国历史人物的了解程度。这一命题旨在向世界展示中华文明，讲述体现中国精神的中国故事，引导学生传承和弘扬中华优秀传统文化，增强文化自信和价值观自信，厚植爱国主义情怀。【思路点拨】宏观思维：类型：短文-记叙文；主人称：第三人称+第一人称；主时态：过去+现在写作思路分析：第一段：whowhenwhat写谁，点题指出所写人物+介绍【生活的时期和身份等】，第二段：why为什么写他：重要性-最为哦突出的事迹和重大社会影响【显示文化素养】第三段：what对我有什么影响：你现在或者以后会怎么做【满分范文】范文一LiBaiisarenownedpoetinChinesetraditionalculture.Hewaspopularfromhisowndaytothepresentasageniusandaromanticfigurewhotooktraditionalpoeticformstonewheights.Hehasthenickname“Shixian”,meaning“ImmortalPoet”,whichsetsahighvalueonhisworks.LiisbestknownfortheextraordinaryimaginationandstrikingTaoisminhispoetry.Thoughconsideredtobeagenius,hewouldn’tbothertositfortheImperialExaminationtobecomeanofficial.Hespentmuchofhislifetravellingaroundthecountry,enjoyingwineandleadingacarefreelife,whichisreflectedinhispoetry:placeshevisited,descriptionsofnature,joyshefeltwhendrinkingandsoon.Uptonow,aboutathousandpoemscomposedbyLiBaihavesurvived,thirty-fourofwhichareincludedinthecollection300TangPoemspublishedinthe18thcentury.InthesamecenturytranslationsofhispoemsbegantoappearinEurope.范文二InChina'shistorywithfivethousandyears,thestarsareshining,suchasShenNong,whotastedhundredsofherbs,Confucius,ateacherforallages,andLiBai,thePoetryImmortal,tonamejustafew.Ofallthoserenownedones,ZhugeKongmingismyfavorite.ZhugeKongming,afamousstatesman,strategistandinventorinChinesehistory,wastheprimeministerofShuinTheThreeKingdomsperiod.HeassistedLordLiuBeiandledtheBattleofRedCliff,whichformedasituationwherethecountrywasdividedmainlyintothreekingdoms.AfterthedeathofLiuBei,hewentontoassisthissuccessorLiuChan,fightingagainstWeiKingdomforfivetimes,inordertorepayLiuBei'skindness,andfinallydiedofillnessfromoverwork.Especiallyadmirablearehisoutstandingtalentandnoblequality,fromwhichIlearntobeloyaltomycause,mypursuitaswellasmycommitment,andsticktoitforlife!(162words)范文三DuFuwasconsideredtobethegreatestofalltime.Althoughhewaslittle-known,hisworkscametobehugelyinfluentialinChineseliteraryculture.HehasbeencalledtheSageofPoetryandawiderangeofhisworkshavebeenintroducedtoWesternreaders.Hisgreatambitionwastoservehiscountryasasuccessfulcivilservant.Buthislife,likethecountry,wasdestroyedbytheAnLushanRebellionandhislastfifteenyearswereatimeofalmostconstantunrest.Hewroteaboutthesuccessandfailureofthegovernment,ortheeffectsofthetimesinwhichhelivedonhimselfandontheordinarypeople.HislyricalcommentsarebasedonemotionandhisworksmadehimthecentralfigureofChinesepoetichistory.范文四InthedistinguishedChinesehistory,manypeoplemakegreatcontributionstothedevelopmentofourcountry,amongwhomZhangQianstandsoutparticularly.IntheWesternHanDynasty,followingtheemperor’scommand,ZhangQianmadehisjourneytotheWesternRegions.SellingtraditionalChineseproductsliketeaandsilkandimportingavarietyofitems,heopenedthedoortothefriendshipbetweenChinaandmanycountriesinCentralAsia.Throughhistraveling,theSilkRoadcameintobeingandhegreatlypromotedthespreadofChineseculture.Nowadays,withmoreandmoreinternationalexchange,itisagreattimeforustolearnfromZhangQiantospreadourbrilliantculturetothewholeworld.范文五LiQingzhaowasborninJinan,ShandongProvince.Herfatherwasanopen-mindedimperialcourtofficial,whoofferedhisdaughtertheprivilegeofaverygoodeducation.Thankstoherexceptionaltalent,Liestablishedherselfearlyasapeerlesswriterofpoemsandparticularlylyricpoems.

Herlifewasabittersweetstory.Atthebeginning,Liledacarefreelife.Mostofherlyricpoemsdescribedthelonelylifeandmelancholyfeelingsofyoungwomenfromtheuppersociety.Afterthedeathofherhusband,herlifechanged.Hardshipandsufferingmadeherpoeticstylewidelydifferentfromearlierworks.Itturnedtobemelancholyandimposing,reflectingthehardship.

LidevelopedadistinctiveYi'anstyleoflyricpoems,whichfeaturesplainlanguage,adelicaterestraint,theblendingofintensepassionandliteraryimages,andbeautifulmelodiousrhythms.What’smore,herlyricpoemsareveryeasytorecite.【2023全国乙卷】学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:1.简要概述;

2.体验和感受。注意:1.字数100字左右;2.题目已为你写好。LearningANewSkill______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解读】记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。在高考英语写作中，记叙文的命题形式主要是提纲式，提示信息一般包括人物事迹及其对你的影响（写人）或活动时间、地点、目的、具体内容及活动感受（记事）等。这种写人、记事类半开放性记叙文，要按照记叙文的六要素（时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果）安排内容，有一定的灵活性，把事件、人物或场景交代清楚即可。另外，文章要言之有物，尊重事实，有中心，有重点，有逻辑。【思路点拨】本篇作文要求考生写一篇短文投稿。文章可分为三段，首段可以讲述在什么时候学到的新技能；第二段详细叙述新技能的内容；最后一段描述自己从中获得的体验和感受。写作时可适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接成分使文章结构清晰、语言流畅，过渡自然。模板：✎篇首句1.LastsummerholidaywasmemorablebecauseIlearnedanewskill,whichwasquiteuseful.去年暑假是难忘的，因为我学到了一项相当有用的新技能。2.Lastweek,Ihelpedmyuncletoharvestteainhisgarden,andIlearnedhowtopicktealeaves,

whichwasverymeaningful.上周，我帮助叔叔在他的花园里采茶，我学会了如何采摘茶叶，这很有意义。3.Lastmonth,mybestfriendinvitedmetojoinaswimmingclub,whereIlearnedhowtoswim.上个月，我最好的朋友邀请我加入一个游泳俱乐部，在那里我学会了游泳。✎篇中句1.First,heshowedthemoves,andthenItriedtoimitatewhathedid.Atlast,Imastered...首先，他展示了动作，然后我试着模仿他的动作。最后，我掌握了……2.Itriedmybesttodoit,butcouldn’tlearnhowtokeepthebalance.我尽了最大的努力去做，但却无法学会如何保持平衡。✎篇尾句Thisexperienceisquitevaluable.NotonlydidIlearnanewskillthatcanhelpmeinemergency,butitalsoenrichedmysummerlife.这次经历很有价值。我不仅学到了一项新技能，它可以在紧急情况下为我提供帮助，而且也丰富了我的暑假生活。2.Throughthisexperience,Irealizedtheimportanceofmasteringanewskill.通过这次经历，我认识到了掌握一项新技能的重要性。【满分范文】范文一LearningaNewSkillLearningaNewSkillItisimportantforustomastersomebasiclivingskillstoprepareusforourfuturelife.ThatiswhyIlearnedhowtocookduringtheMayDayholiday.Sincemymotherisskilledatcooking,Idecidedtolearnfromher.Earlyinthemorningweboughtsomeingredients,includingsomevegetables,meatandafishinthelocalmarket.Oncewegotbackhome,Ibegantowashandcutthemcarefully.Undertheguidanceofmymother,Iturnedonthegascooker.Ifirststir-friedtwovegetables.ThenIcookedmeatwithpotatoes.Themostdifficulttasktodowascookfishwithtomatoes.However,Ifinallydidit.ThemomentIputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbs-up.IfeltsoproudthatIsharedhouseworkwithmyparents,whichalsoshowedIhadgrownup.范文二LearningaNewSkillItis

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,themoreproficientyouwillbecome.范文五LearningaNewSkillMylong-awaitedsummervacationfinallyarrived.Lastweekend,itwasveryhot.MydaughterandIcametotheswimmingclassfortrainingasusual.Iwasworriedandwithbutterflyinmystomach,butmydaughterencouragedmetobebraveanddetermined.Onceintheswimmingpool,thegreenwatermademefeelcalm.Ijumpedintotheswimmingpool.Itwascoolandcomfortable.Thecoachtaughtmetobreathefirst.Thecoachsaid,"takeabreath,andthenbreathethroughyournose."Ididitfiveorsixtimes,andIlearnedit.Thenthecoachtaughtmetoslapwater.Igraspedtherailing,slappedthewaterwithmylegsandfeet,andfeltverytiredafterafewtaps.Inordertolearnhowtoslapwater,Istillpracticed,andfinallylearnedhowtoswiminwater.Simple!Ilearnedfreestyle.Swimmingmakesmeconfidentandkeepthegoodfeelingandhighspirit.Iampositiveandhappynow,Iwillinsistonthishobbyallthetime,whichmakesuscoolinthehotsummerdays.Anyway,swimmingisajoyfulactivityinthehotsummer.2022年高考英语作文真题【甲卷】你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解读】试题要求考生根据所给的情境写一封100词左右的投稿。内容是关6月8日是世界海洋日。要求写出海洋的重要性以及保护海洋的倡议。试题有一个半开放性的特点。内容要紧扣这个世界海洋日的主题。要求考生对这个环保对于海洋的事情有所了解，并且，适当增加某种细节。从而明确写信目的，海洋日的海洋的重要性，这几个方面去展开描写。并且发出保护海洋的倡议，这点让保护环境这个主题得以升华。【思路点拨】【解题思路（分段落，列提纲）】第一段：作用：开篇。要求：开门见山，点名主题。篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。DoyouhaveideaaboutJune8?ItisnotonlythecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseseniorschoolstudents,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans.第二段：作用：文章主体内容。要求：层次分明，逻辑清晰，要点齐全。篇幅：4-5行，4-5个句子。Theoceanisthecradleofalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Finally,greeninitiative,greenlife,nottotheocean,sewage,handinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,beasmallguardtoprotecttheblueland.第三段：作用：收尾，点题，补充其他细节等。要求：概括，得体。篇幅：2行左右，1-2个句子。ThethemeofOceanDay2022is"ProtectingtheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenmanandnatureintheMarineEcosystem".HandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.【满分范文】范文一OurOceans，OurResponsibilityDoyouknowJune8,whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans?Theoceanisthecradleofalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Doyouagreewithme?Ifso,let’shandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.（160）点评：文章用了中规中矩的手法，和读者用疑问句进行交流，倡议书内容交代的比较自然流畅。范文二OurOceans，OurResponsibilityTodayisJune8,WorldOceansDay,whosethemeof2022is"ProtectingtheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenmanandnatureintheMarineEcosystem".Theworldisdevelopingtoofasttocareforitshealth.Itisourpitytosacrificetheharmonyofoceantoachieveeconomicdevelopment：thepollutedoceans,thedyingmarinecreatures,thedestroyedundersearesources,etc,areallcryingforourhelp.ItishightimethatwestrengthenthestudyofMarineknowledgeandenhancetheawarenessofMarineprotection.DeepentheunderstandingandunderstandingofMarinemothers,effectivelyenhancetheawarenessandresponsibilityofprotectingtheblueland,andstrivetobeasmallexpertinprotectingtheMarineecologicalenvironment.Let’sreturnthemermaidtoacleanocean,andmaketheirlifemorehappy.(145)点评：文章用了比喻类比的手法，采用了现实生活中破坏海洋的危害为例子，说明海洋保护的重要性。最后以还给美人鱼一个美丽的家园为比喻，表达美好期盼。范文三OurOceans，OurResponsibilityThereiscomprehensiveevidencethatwehumansarenottakinggoodcareoftheocean,posingalotofproblems,suchasplasticpollution,oilleak,risingsealevelsaswellasextremeweathers.Asaconsequence,greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtoprotectourocean.Admittedly,intenseattentionshouldbepaidandtirelesseffortsbemadebypeopleallovertheworld.Initially,governmentsneedtoconsidermakingpoliciesandtakingpropermeasurestotoconserveourocean.Inaddition,whatisofutmostimportanceisthatweindividualsshouldraiseourawarenessofenvironmentprotection,reducingourfootprintandlivingagreenlifestyle.Hopefully,withourjointefforts,weareboundtobuildanenvironmental-friendlyplantsharedbywehumanbeing.范文四OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8wasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceanDay.It’sadaytostresstheimportanceofoceanandremindpeopletoprotectit.It’sgenerallyacknowledgedthatoceanplaysanimportantroleinmanyaspects.Firstofall,withrichbiologicalresources,oceanprovidessamplesforbiologicalscienceresearchintermsofthediversityofglobalbiologicalresources.Inaddition,itsabundantfoodresourcesandenergyintheoceanmakeitpossibleforlivingthingstosurvive.Equallyimportantly,theabundantwaterresourcesintheoceanbeartheoperationoftheglobalwatercirculationsystem,whichaffectorevendeterminetheglobalclimatechange.Somanybenefitsdoesoceanbringtohumanbeingsthatgreatimportancecan’tbeattachedenoughtoprotectit.Ofcourse,it’severybody’sdutytoshoulderthisresponsibility.Foronething,it’sagoodideatowidelystudyknowledgeconcerningoceanandthinkofeffectiveapproachestoprotectit.Foranother,let’sstopourbadbehaviorswhichmayindirectlypolluteocean.Smallthingsmakeabigdifference.Ibelieve,withourjointeffort,atrulygreenwillalwayssurroundus.范文五OurOceans，OurResponsibilityAsisknowntoall,theWorldOceanDayfallsonJune8thannually.Oceanplaysanindispensableroleinwatercirculation,carbonstorageaswellasclimateadjustment.Itisalsohometoalargevarietyofmarinespeciessuchasfish,coralandalgae,allofwhichconstituteabigpartintheoceanbiologicalchain.Therefore,itisnoexaggerationtosaythathardlycanwehumangoaboutourlivesshouldoceanbeeliminatedfromourplanet.Consideringtheabovemeritsofocean,Iappealtoeveryonetodoourbitinpreservingourcommunaltreasurehouseaswellastheoriginofalllifeforms-thedeepbluesea.(113)【2022年全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述：2.简单评论;3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【文本解读】本试题设置了读图表、写短文的形式，特别突显了高中英语课标中所增添的“看”的考查，强调了读图能力。设置的写作情境是校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论，要求考生阅读有关学生英语学习活动调查结果情况的图表，使用图表中的调查结果信息写一篇带有个人思考的、有记叙有说明有议论的小短文。这精心设计的试题情境使写作形式更加灵活，内容更加开放。这封信中会涉及到考生“我”、参与英语学习活动情况调查的“学生们”，因此第一、三人称都可能会用到；表达学习活动状况描述和简单评论，主要用一般现在时；关于建议，为将来的事情，因此时态会用一般将来时，或者用情态动词来表达建议。写作时要根据主要内容的顺序来写，适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接词使文章通顺、语言流畅。【思路点拨】【写前四审】1.审题材：投稿2.审时态：一般现在时为主3.审人称：第一、三人称为主4.审要点：构思文章是否符合题目要求，主旨突出，内容要点齐全，写作对象明确，语言的选用得当，符合要求等。【整体思路】1.叙述并说明英语学习活动调查的原因及目的。2.分两方面阐述：英语学习活动调查结果柱状图描述，并加以简单评论。3.你实用的建议。【满分范文】范文一LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.Arecentsurveysuggeststhatthemajorityofstudentsbeinginterviewed,about65%,tendtolearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs.50%ofthestudentschoosetowatchEnglishmoviesasawayoflearning.ReadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningsitesprovetobethelesspopularwaysaccountingfor18%and12%respectively.Overall,theresultsarequiteinteresting,indicatingthatlanguagelearningcanbeintegratedwithpersonalhobbiesandentertainment.Inthefuture,IthinkourschoolcouldprovidesomeactivitiessuchasbookclubsorEnglishcornerstofurtherinspirestudentsinterestinlearningEnglish.范文二LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanyth