做人与做事（人与自我 ）-2024年高考英语话题写作攻略（试卷）

专题08做人与做事（人与自我）

【写作指导】

做人做事为主题的文章涉及现实生活中各个方面的学问，如社区邻里、学校生活、亲人、朋友、职业、

事件等。此类读后续写则是通过阅读文本信息，结合现实生活加以提炼总结，最后得出具有普遍意义的规

律来进行续写部分的升华。续写一定要呈现正能量，如踏踏实实做人，实实在在办事；再如拼搏努力，挑

战自我等。具体写作过程如下：

1.读懂原文，划分要素（记叙文六要素）

2.读透首句，确定情节发展（梳理故事情节和发展脉络，提炼故事主要事件）

3.列出大纲，紧扣主题个人成长（突出改变和成长，如：克服困难、克服自卑等）

4.写出句式，句句升级（多变句式如：定语从句、名词性从句、强调句、非谓语短语等灵活运用）

5.检查错误，书写优美（字迹工整，检查时态、语法、单词拼写等错误）

【素材宝库】

词汇积累（单词类）

道德的_______________参加；参与_______________

公平_______________控告；谴责

不公平_______________雇佣_______________

获得；购得_______________道歉_______________

最终_______________追求_______________

判断_______________犹豫_______________

勤勉的，刻苦的_______________有幽默感的_______________

聪明的_______________独立的_______________

坚持不懈的_______________诚实的_______________

笳

（动词短语类）

开启你的职业生涯金钱的价值

向某人道歉_______________增强信心_______________

出生在…_______________来自于一个富裕家庭_______________

对某人苛刻的_______________出生于一个农民家庭_______________

句式积累

1.Youdon'twanttolookbackinyearstocomeandsay,“IwishIhadthoughtmoreaboutwhatI

reallywantedtodo.^^

你不想回顾未来的岁月，然后说：“我希望我能更多地思考我真正想做的是什么。”

2.1amanhonest,easy-going,alwayssmiletothelife.

热爱生命，尊老爱幼，善良温柔，活泼大方，为人诚实，助人为乐、注重情感。

3.Shewasaveryhonestpersonwhowasincapableofdissembling.

她是一个非常诚实的人，不会伪装。

4.Hesitantlyatfirst,thenabruptly,arippleofapplauserosefromtheonlookers.

起初有些犹豫，然后突然，旁观者发出了一阵阵阵掌声.

5.People'sgenerousandselflessactionswillcreatearippleofgoodness,whichwillbepassedinturnfromperson

toperson.

人们的慷慨无私的行为将会带动一系列的善举，着反过来又会在不同人之间传递。

6.Shegavehimadazzlingsmile.

她冲着他粲然一笑。

7.Hearingwhathesaid,Alicegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher.

听见他说的话，Alice咧开嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。

8.Hearinghiswordsonthephone,Ihungmyheadshamefully,awaveofguiltsweepingovermewithmyface

burning.

电话里，听见他的话，我羞愧得低下头，一阵愧疚向我袭来，脸上发烫。

9.Inoddedback,feelingtearswellupinmyeyes.

我点了点头回应着并且感觉到泪水夺框而出。

10.Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks/tearswellingupinhiseyes.

他静静地站着，眼泪随着他的cheeks./tears在他的眼睛里涌出。

11.Ruthhesitated,uncertainofhowtocombinehonestyanddiplomacyinheranswer.

露丝犹豫了，她不知道怎样回答才能既诚实又婉转。

12.Shewastornbetweenherloveofdancingandherfearofperforminginpublic.（矛盾为难）

她内心充满矛盾，既热爱舞蹈又害怕公开表演。

13.Hewastornbyangerandworry.

他的内心被愤怒和忧虑撕扯着。

14.Tornbyangerandworry,hecouldn^/couldhardlysleepallnight.

他被愤怒和焦虑折磨，整晚睡不着。

15.Indeeditseemsthatmostofusalreadyhaveafirmbeliefinfreewillandsowe'realreadybenefiting.

确实，我们已然对自由意志有了坚定的信念，并且已经从中获益。

16.Theonlywaytoimproveisthroughhardworkanddoggedperseverance.

更上一层楼，唯一的途径就是艰苦奋斗，不屈不挠。

17.Filledwithhappinessandexcitement,JimhuggedTimwithgratitudeandthewholeclassbrokeinto

thunderousapplause.

充满了幸福和兴奋，吉姆感激地拥抱了蒂姆，全班同学都爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。

18.Seizedbyasenseofhappinessandrelief,Jimnoddedathisstudentswithasmile.

感受到一种快乐和宽慰，Jim微笑着向他的学生们点了点头。

19.Confusedbywhathissonwasdoing,Jimasked,t4Whatareyoubusywiththesedays?”

吉姆对儿子的行为感到困惑，他问：“这些天你在忙什么？”

20.Somovedweretheythattheystoodup,expressedtheirsinceresorrytoJim.

他们非常感动，于是站了起来，向吉姆表达了真诚的歉意。

谚语积累

1.Beahonestman,dotrueheartedbusiness.

真诚做人，认真做事。

2.Peopleareafraidofignoranceanddogsareafraidoftailing.

人怕没理，狗怕夹尾。

3.Tosubduethepopulationbyforceandthepeoplebyreason.

以势服人口，以理服人心。

4.Onehundredfeetpolehead,gofurther.

百尺竿头，更进一步。

5.Threehundredandsixtyrows,rowoutthefirstprize.

三百六十行，行行出状元。

6.Idon'tknowthewarmthofspringwithoutwinter.

不经冬寒，不知春暖。

7.Oldgingertasteshotandspicy,andoldpeoplehavemoreexperience.

老姜辣味大，老人经验多。

8.Horseslookattheirteethandpeoplelookattheirwordsanddeeds.

马看牙板，人看言行

9.Ifyouarenotafraidofghosts,youareafraidofpeople.

不怕鬼吓人，就怕人吓人。

10.Ahandfulofrunningwatercanquenchthirst.

万句言语吃不饱，一捧流水能解渴。

11.Peopledependontheirheartsandtreesdependontheirroots.

人靠心好，树靠根牢。

12.Fragrantflowersarenotnecessarilygood-looking,theymaynotbecompetent.

香花不一定好看，会说不一定能干。

13.Peopleshouldbeharderthanstonesandsofterthanflowers.

人，应该比石头还坚硬，比花还温柔。

14.Dowhatyoudon'twanttodotoothers.

己所不欲，勿施于人。

15.Beatingwaterintowaves,rocksintofire,provokingdisaster.

击水成波，击石成火，激人成祸。

16.Speaking,laughingandlaughing,notutor.

说归说，笑归笑，动手动脚没家教。

17.Betterbealazymanthanakidnapper.

宁当懒汉，不去拐骗。

18.1don'tknowifit'spossibleforapersontobelieveit.

人而无信，不知其可也。

19.Betterhavenomoneythanbeshameless.

宁可无钱，不可无耻。

20.People*sheartsareseparatedfromtheirbellies,andpeopleseetheiractions.

人心隔肚皮，看人看行为。

21.Peopleareafraidofpoliteness.

事怕合计，人怕客气。

22.Peoplechangeheartsandminds,eightortwochangehalfakilogram.

人心换人心，八两换半斤。

23.Thegentlemanhelpsotherstoachievetheirmoralperfectionbutnottheirevilconduct.

君子成人之美，不成人之恶。

24.Nocloudinthesky,norain,noreasonintheworld.

天上无云不下雨，世间无理事不成。

25.Theambitionisnottobeold,buttobeahundredyearsold.

有志不在年高，无志空长百岁。

26.Tenyearsofgoodliterarytalent,tenyearsoftrainingcannotbeTianXiucai.

十年练得好文秀才，十年练不成田秀才。

27.Thetongueislongandfleshy,butthefactisthatitisbeatenwithiron.

舌头是肉长的，事实是铁打的。

28.Thegentlemanisopenandmagnanimous,thevillainislongandsorrowful.

君子坦荡荡，小人长戚戚。

29.Forwardfoot,backfoot,wrongstep,wrongstep.

前脚走，后脚到，一步错，步步错。

30.Manpracticesintheworld,andknivesgrindonstones.

人在世上练，刀在石上磨。

31.Speakkindlytoothers,warmtoclothandsilk;hurtothers,deeptospear.

与人善言，暖于布帛；伤人以言，深于矛戟。

32.Ifyoudon'tgotothetiger'sden,youwon'tgetthetiger'sson.

不入虎穴，焉得虎子。

33.Povertyisgoodforitself,whileattainmentisgoodfortheworld.

穷则独善其身，达则兼善天下。

34.Besincereincriticizingothersandmodestinlisteningtotheiropinions.

批评别人要诚恳，听取意见要虚心。

35.Theroadistrampledbygrasspedestriansandotherssaythattheirmindisnotright.

大路有草行人踩，心术不正旁人说。

36.Agentlemantalksandavillainacts.

君子动口，小人动手。

37.Stealingneedlesinanhourisbiggerthanstealinggold.

小时偷针，大了偷金。

38.Gentlemendifferfromeachother,andvillainsdifferfromeachother.

君子和而不同，小人同而不和。

39.It'stoolatetochange.

过而不改，是谓过矣。

40.It*sbettertobreakapieceofjadethantofinishit.

宁可玉碎，不能瓦全。

41.Birdscherishfeathers,tigerstheirskins,andpeople'sfaces.

鸟惜羽毛虎惜皮，为人处世惜脸皮。

42.Althoughtheroadisendlessandfaraway,Istillwanttopursuethetruthintheworld.

路漫漫其修远兮，吾将上下而求索。

43.Peopleareafraidoflosingfaceandtreesareafraidoflosingbark.

人怕没脸，树怕没皮。

万能写作模板

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

AHeartyWelcome

Chasecountedhisnewyeargiftsonemoretimeasheputarobot-shapederaserintoeachenvelope.""Twenty,

twenty-one,twenty-two.^^

“Doyouhaveoneforeveryoneinyourclass?”Momasked.

"Yep!"Chasesaid."I'mreadyforthepartytomorrow!?,

WhenChasegottoschoolthenextday,hesawanewgirlinhisclassroom.ShestoodnearMs.Robinsand

lookedaroundshyly.

“ThisisEva,^^saidMs.Robins.atWillsomeonevolunteertoshowheraroundtoday?”Chaseraisedhishand

sincehelikedshowingthenewkidsaroundandhelpingthemfeelwelcome.

“Thanks,Chase,"Ms.Robinssaid."Nowlefsgetdowntoourwork.”

ThafswhenChaserealizedhedidn'thaveanewyeargiftforEva.Nooneelsewouldhaveoneeither.Chase

picturedhisclassmates5deskscoveredwithgiftswhileEva'sdeskwasempty.Hefeltsadaboutthat.

Atabreak,hewascarefulnottomentionthepartyasheshowedEvaaroundtheplayground.Atlunchtime,he

walkedEvatothelunchroom,stillworriedaboutwhatwouldhappenattheparty.Evahadbroughtapackedlunch,

soChaseshowedherwhereshewassupposedtositandintroducedhertosomeofthekidsathertable.

Whileeating,Chasesuddenlyrememberedthatkidsoftenincludedcandyheartswiththenewyeargiftsthey

exchanged.Thiswon'tbeaNewYear'sDayforEvawithnogifts.Butashesatdownathistable,anideaflooded

intohishead.Hewhisperedittothekidsaroundhim.Sooneveryoneatthetablewasnoddingandwhispering.

Whentheywerebackintheclassroomafterlunch,ChasetoldMs.Robinsabouttheirplan.Ms.Robinssmiled.

"That'sverythoughtful,"shesaid."Let'sgoforit.”

Itwasmathtime,soChaseinvitedEvatostudywithhim.HemadesureEvasatwithherbacktotheroomso

shewouldn'tnotice.

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位登作答。

Meanwhile,hernewclassmateswerebusyingworkingonsomething.

“Here'syournewyeargift,Eva.It'sfromeveryone,9,saidChase.

【高考真题】

（2021年浙江卷1月读后续写）

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschool

activities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamily

expenses.

Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass（超过）

anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.

Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,

preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmy

trombone（长号）.

ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkin

hisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweeds

tospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwe

beganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,

lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardto

thepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.

Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."

Mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.

Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn*tinterested.I

decideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；笳

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Thepayarrivedatlast

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.

［名校模拟题提升练】

1.（2023-2024・湖南•阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

Ramustartedabusinesswithgreatenthusiasmbutjustafterafewmonthshisbusinesswentunder.Time

passedbutRamudidn'tstartanynewwork.Histeachergottoknowabouthissituationandcalledhimtohishome.

Theteacherasked,“Whydon'tyoustartsomeotherwork?”

Ramureplied,"1gavemyeverythingtomybusinessandyetitstillfailed.^^

Theteachertriedtocomforthim,saying"Butthafslife.Sometimeswegetsuccessandsometimeswedon't.

Thisdoesn'tmeanthatwestopworking.9,

“What'sthepointofdoingwork,whenIcan'tbesureofsuccess?^^Ramurepliedwithabitofannoyance.

TheteachertookRamutoaroomandshowedhimadeadtomatoplant.Ramuwasconfusedandsaid,"It's

dead.Whyareyoushowingittome?”

Theteacherreplied,tuWhenIsoweditsseed,Idideverythingrightforit.Iwateredit,fertilizedit,sprayedit

withpesticide（杀虫齐！J）.Itookgreatcareofitbutitstilldied.^^Hestoppedforawhileandthensaid,“Doingwork

isthesame...Nomatterhowhardyoutry,youcannotdecidewhathappensintheend.However,youcancontrol

thosethingsinyourhands.Justdoyourbest!”

Ramuasked,"Butifthereisnoguaranteeofsuccessthenwhafstheuseofdoinganything?^^

Theteachersaid,"You'dbetternotthinklikethat...^^

"What'swrongwiththat...Ihavegivensomuchhardwork,somuchmoney,somuchtime;ifsuccessisonlya

matterofchance,thenwhatistheuseofdoingsomuch?^^saidRamuandhewasabouttoleave.

Justthentheteacherstoppedhimandsaid,"'Beforeyouleave,Iwanttoshowyouonemorething.9,

注意：

续写词数应为150左右；

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

HetookRamutoanotherroomandopenedthedoor.

Atthatverymoment,Ramureadthelessonofsuccess.

2.（2023年•安徽•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的

短文。

Jean'sdreamwastobeagreatchefsowhenshewas20,shetravelledtoFrance,whichhasthemostfamous

cuisineintheworld,tolearntocook.Aftertwelveyears,shewasamongthebest.

Herfather,Bob,wasgettingold,andshewantedtobenearhim.Jeanacceptedanofferfromoneof

Washington'stoprestaurants.Themanagerofferedherahandsomesalary,and30%ownershipoftherestaurant.

Thenextday,Jeanwenttosignthecontract.Asshegotoutofthecar,shecaughtsightofagreensunshade.Instead

ofgoingtomeetthemanager,shecrossedthestreettowardstheoldrestaurant,Fargonetti9s.Shepushedopenthe

doorandthememoriescamefloodingback.

Jean'smumdiedwhenshewasjust11,andherfatherlosthisjobandwasforcedtofreelance（从事自由职业）.

Moneywasveryshort.WhenJeanturnedthirteen,BobhadmadeareservationatFargonetti^,thecapitafsbest

restaurant.

'Tmnothungry,babygirl.Ihadahugebreakfast,Bobsaid."Thisisallforyou!^^"Oh,"Jeancried."Daddy

wassosilly!He'sbeensavingtocomehereforlunchforMONTHSandnowheruinedhisappetitewithbreakfast!?,

Thewaiter,CarlBader,immediatelyrealisedwhatwasgoingonandwenttoMrFargonetti,therestaurantowner,

andtoldhimaboutJeanandBob.

Anhourlater,surprisingly,thewaiterbroughtwonderfuldishesandsetthembeforethefatheranddaughter.

“LunchisonthehousewithMrFargoneti?scompliments（致意）,“Carlsaid.ForBobandJean,itwasafreebut

magicalmeal.Theywereoncloudninewhentheywalkedout."Jean,“saidBobhappily."Ifeelourluckhas

changed!?,Anditdid!Thenextday,oneofBob'soldfriendscalledandofferedhimajobatanewmagazine,and

JeanbelievedFargonetti'shadmadeitallhappen.Thatwaswhenshedecidedtobecomeachef!

Twentyyearslater,theoldrestaurantlookedrun-downandsad,butJeanrecognisedthewaiterimmediately.

"Carl?”sheaskeddelightedly.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Themanlookedsurprised.

JeanwasstaringatCarlandabrilliantideawastakingshapeinhermind.

3.（2023年•全国•专题练习）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity（社区）inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequired

tograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.It

seemedlikeagoodthingtodo.

Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoing

everythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixingsaladdressingto

separatingfrozenmeat.Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,butalreadyoutsidethebuilding

manyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasn'tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbegan

servingdinner.

Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:How

shouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthe

peoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididn'thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.I

wasassigned（分酉己）toservethesaladwiththaladynexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she'd

berightthere,whichIfoundquitecomfoiting.

Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemwore

clothesthatweretomanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemaking

thebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealand

awarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn'thaveaplacetocallhome

andtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.

Paragraph2:

IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.

4.（2023-2024学年•杭州•一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完

整的短文。

MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStalecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,

whichwouldbetheclimax（顶,点）ofmyexistence.

Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworking

towardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerand

waswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstrips

toseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd-tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingout

mytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.Wespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsof

Arizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairy

farm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwithevery

stepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.

Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormal-toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwith

thesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchand

schoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,

worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.

Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleading

uptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingme

withitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；