Unit1Themassmedia（读后续写）-高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）

Unit1Themassmedia单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）（读后续写）三年考情（20222024）命题趋势2024新高考I卷&II卷：人与社会（打车费）

浙江1月：人与自我（校园话题）2023

新高考I卷&II卷：人与自我（老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣）2022新高考I卷&II卷；人与自我（鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑）

浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务）浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务）新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。网络通讯1.virtualreality虚拟现实 2.withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展 to...crazyabout'addictedto...着迷于，狂热于……4.beconnectedto被连接到……5.gain/obtain/haveaccessto/beaccessibleto有权进入……6.searchengine搜索引擎狂7.beoptimistic/pessimisticabout对……感到乐观/悲观8.textmessage短信;文本信息9.share...with.与……分享 10.take/have/showinterestin对……感兴趣 11.takeaction/measurestodosth.采取行动/措施12.shoponline网上购物13.makegooduseof/takegoodadvantageof充分利用14.be/beepopularwith..受……欢迎15.getthemessageacross传播信息 16.chatonline网上聊天 17.surftheInternet上网浏览信息 18.beignorantof忽视 19.clickonsth.用鼠标点击 20.downloadinformationfromtheInternet从网络信息 21.IT(informationtechnology)信息技术 22.payattentionto/focusone'sattentionon专注于… 23.tabletpersonalputer平板电脑 24.portableputer手提电脑 1.Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganimportantrole/partinourdailylife.众所周知，因特网在我们生活中起着重要的作用.2.Mostimportantly,thewideuseoftheputerhasbroughtusmoreconvenienceinourlives.最重要的是，电脑的广泛使用给我们的生活带来了更多的方便.3.However,spendingtoomuchtimeonputerhasagreatnegativeeffectonourstudy.但是，花太多的时间在电脑上对我们的学习有很不良的影响.4.What'sworse,thebadinformationontheInternetdoesgreatharmtous.而且，因特网上的不良信息对我们有害.5.Welistentomusic,enjoyfilmsaswellasplayputergamesontheInternet.我们在因特网上听音乐、看电影和玩电脑游戏。from...to....urveyindicatesthatstudents’useofWeChathasincreasedfrom...to....调查表明学生的微信使用已经由……上升到……7.Withthehelpoftheputer,itwillbepossibleforhumanstoworkathome.在电脑的帮助下，人们在家办公是件可行的事。8.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatwearegoingtoseeahugegrowthinshoppingontheInternet.不言而喻，网上购物将有很大的增长。9.Weibo/Microblogcanprovideaplatforntoshowourtalentandreleaseourpressure.微博能给我们提供一个展示天赋、释放压力的平台。（2024届浙江省温州市普通高中高三下学期三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan’tsleep?Youalsocan’teat.Youcan’tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular“IsEmilystillalive”check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I’mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou’reingwithme!”“Why?”Iprotested.“Becauseit’llmakeyoufeelbetter.”

Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.IfeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricksIcouldn’trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leash(狗绳)inhandanddogatherside.Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.“I’mtired!It’sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?”“Notyet,”she’dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光焕发).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Theheavinessthathadweighedmedownbeforeseemedtohavelifted,ifonlyslightly.Thesimpleactofbeingoutside,feelingthewarmthofthesun,andhearingthechirpingofbirdshadsparkedsomethinginsideme.Itwasaglimmerofhope,atinyrayoflightinthedarknessofmydepression.Irealizedthatmaybe,justmaybe,therewasstillsomethingworthlivingfor.Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Thistime,itwasmewhosuggestedthewalk.Aswestrolledthroughthefamiliarpaths,Inoticedthesubtlechangesinthescenery.Thetreeswerestartingtobud,flowerswerebeginningtobloom,andthepondwasalivewiththesoundsoffrogsandinsects.Itwasasifnatureitselfwasingalive,mirroringthenewfoundsenseoflifestirringwithinme.Witheachstep,Ifeltalittlelighter,alittlemorealive.Andaswereturnedhome,Irealizedthatsometimes,thesimplestmomentscanhavethemostprofoundimpactonourlives.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者曾经抑郁，于是妈妈让作者去遛狗，妈妈停下来跟每一个从身边经过的慢跑者、遛狗者、跑步者和骑自行车的人打招呼，散步以后，作者也开始感到轻松起来。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当我回到家时，一种新的感觉似乎被唤醒了”可知，第一段可描写作者散步以后感到轻松。②由第二段首句内容“一个新的星期六，我问妈妈我能不能带狗出去”可知，第二段可描写作者开始注意到大自然，找回活力。2.续写线索：散步回家——感觉轻松——点燃希望——主动提出散步——作者感悟3.词汇激活行为类①注意到：notice/takenoticeof/spot②意识到：realize/beawareof③返回：return/getback情绪类①沮丧：depression/upset②深远的：profound/farreaching【点睛】[高分句型1] Irealizedthatmaybe,justmaybe,therewasstillsomethingworthlivingfor.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Andaswereturnedhome,Irealizedthatsometimes,thesimplestmomentscanhavethemostprofoundimpactonourlives.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)1.（2024届湖北省荆州中学高三三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Emilywasashygirlwhooftenpreferredthefortofherownpany.Shefounditchallengingtoexpressherselfandlackedconfidenceinherabilities.However,herbestfriendAdaalwaysbelievedinherandencouragedhertostepoutofherfortzone.Oneday,asEmilysatinherartclass,herteacher,Mrs.Anderson,announcedanupingartpetition.Thepetitionshowcasedthetalentsofstudentsfromvariousschoolsinthecity.Theroombuzzedwithexcitement.Hermindflashedbacktoherbedroomwhereimpressiveartworkwasdisplayedonthewalls,eachpieceseeminglymoreattractivethanthelast.Emily’sheartskippedabeatatthethoughtofparticipating,buthershynessheldherback.Selfdoubtcreptin,whisperingthatherworkwouldn’tmeasureuptothetalentsurroundingher.Emilywonderedifshehadmadeamistakebyevenconsideringentering.Ada,noticingEmily’sexcitementandfear,whispered,“Emily,youshouldtotallyenterthepetition!Yourartisfantastic,andthiscouldbeagreatopportunityforyoutoshowcaseyourtalent.”Emilyhesitatedforamoment,contemplating(思忖)Ada’swords.Agentlebreezewaftedthroughtheopenwindows,carryingthedistantsoundsoflaughterandchatterfromoutside.Emilyclosedhereyes,tryingtocalmherracingthoughts.Sheremindedherselfofthecountlesshoursshehadspenthoning(磨炼)hercraft,thelatenightsandearlymorningsdedicatedtoperfectinghertechnique.Shehadpouredherheartandsoulintoherart,andthispetitionwasachancetoshowcaseherpassiontoawideraudience.Withadeepbreath,shefinallygatheredthecouragetoapproachMrs.Andersonafterclass.“Mrs.Anderson,I’minterestedinparticipatingintheartdesignpetition,”Emilysaid,hervoiceslightlytrembling.Mrs.Andersonsmiledwarmly,recognizingEmily’spotential.“That’swonderful,Emily!Ithinkit’sabouttimeyoushouldshareyourincredibletalentwiththeworld.I’llprovideyouwithalltheguidanceandsupportyouneed.”注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Overthefollowingweeks,Emilydedicatedherselftocreatinghermasterpiece.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onthedayofthepetition,Emilynervouslydisplayedherartwork.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Overthefollowingweeks,Emilydedicatedherselftocreatinghermasterpiece.Shespentcountlesshoursintheartroom,experimentingwithdifferenttechniquesandmaterials.Adaoftenjoinedher,providingencouragementandhelpfulsuggestions.Asthepetitionapproached,Emily’sconfidencegrewstronger,andshebecamemoredeterminedtoshowcasehertalent.WithMrs.Anderson’sguidance,Emilypletedherartwork,abeautifulpaintingthatcapturedtheessenceofnature.Witheverythingfullyprepared,shewasdifferentlyconfidentforthepetition.

Onthedayofthepetition,Emilynervouslydisplayedherartwork.Thejudgesandaudiencemembersadmiredherpiece,andmanyplimentedheronherskills.Althoughshedidn’twinthetopprize,Emilyreceivedpositivefeedbackandfeltproudofheracplishment.Herparticipationinthepetitionnotonlyboostedherselfesteembutalsoinspiredothershystudentstostepoutoftheirfortzones.Emilyrealizedthattakingrisksandembracingchallengescouldleadtopersonalgrowthandsuccess.【导语】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了害羞的女孩Emily在好友Ada的鼓励下决定参加艺术比赛，经过思考后她鼓起勇气向老师报名。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“在接下来的几周里，Emily全身心投入创作她的杰作。”可知，第一段可描写Emily认真准备比赛作品的过程以及朋友和老师的帮助。②由第二段首句内容“在比赛当天，Emily紧张地展示她的作品。”可知，第二段可描写比赛现场的情况以及Emily的感受和收获。2.续写线索：准备作品——得到帮助——完成作品——比赛现场——紧张展示——获得认可——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①提供：provide/offer②完成：plete/finish③导致：leadto/giveriseto情绪类①自信：confident/selfassured②自豪：feelproudof/takepridein【点睛】[高分句型1]Shespentcountlesshoursintheartroom,experimentingwithdifferenttechniquesandmaterials.（使用现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]WithMrs.Anderson’sguidance,Emilypletedherartwork,abeautifulpaintingthatcapturedtheessenceofnature.（使用了介词短语作状语、关系代词that引导的定语从句）2.（2024届河北省沧州市沧县中学高三三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasabusymorningandIhadseveraltaskstodobeforethedaybecametoohotoutside.Whilewalkingbythesideofabusyroad,Inoticedanoldlady,maybeinher80sstandingindangerclosetothetraffic.Althoughmymindwasoccupied,IthoughttomyselfthatIshouldwarnhernottostandsoclosetothetrafficrushingby.WhenIreachedthespotwheretheoldladywasstanding,Irecognizedthatshewastryingtogetattentionofpassersbywhoofcourseweretoobusytotakenoteofher.Shekeptpointingtothemiddleoftheroad.WhenItriedtogentlymoveherbackfurtherawayfromtheedgeofthebusyroad,shesaidthatshewasstandingtherebecauseshehaddroppedherhousekeyinthemiddleoftheroadandwasunabletoopenherhousewithoutthekey.Ilookedaroundandnooneseemedtobeinterestedinthetwoofus.IknewIwasgettingdelayedbutdecidedtohelp.Thetrafficwasbusyontheroadwithpeopleontwowheelersandofficegoersincarsaswellasschoolbusesrushingwithschoolchildren.Itwastheworsttimeofthedaytocrossabusyroadwithoutatrafficlight.Afteraskingtheoldladytostayatasafedistance,Itookadeepbreath,steppedontotheroad,andwavedmyhandswildly,expectingnottobehitbytheingvehicles.AtfirstonelanestoppedandthenImovedfurtherontothemiddleoftheroad,continuingtowavemyhand.JustthenaschoolbuswasapproachingmeandIsteppedinfrontofittostopit.Myexperiencehasbeenthatschoolbusdriversarealwaysconsiderateofreckless(鲁莽的)pedestrianslikeme.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Theschoolbusstoppedexactlyoppositethespotwherethekeyhadfallen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AsIturnedtocontinuemyhurriedwalk,theoldladypulledmebymyhand.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Theschoolbusstoppedexactlyo