11.Unit6Atonewithnature(概要写作)(原卷版)

Unit6Atonewithnature单元写作深度指导概要写作单元话题语篇展示概要写作The'SmartFit'bracelet,anewwearabledevice,issettorevolutionizehealthandfitnessmonitoring.Developedbyateamofengineersandscientists,itaccuratelytracksvariousbiometricdatasuchasheartrate,bloodpressure,andsleeppatterns.Italsoprovidesrealtimefeedbackonactivitylevelsandcalorieexpenditure.WithGPScapabilities,userscantrackworkoutsandroutes.Thebraceletisdesignedtobefortable,lightweight,andsleek,makingitsuitablefordailywear.Itsinnovativefeatureshavegarneredattentionfromfitnessenthusiastsandtechexperts,andthedevelopersareconfidentitwillappealtoawideaudienceandimpactthewearabletechnologymarket.‌英语概要写作要求考生在理解原文的基础上，‌用较为简短的篇幅‌准确、‌完整地再现原文的主要信息。‌这要求考生具备良好的阅读理解、‌信息筛选和语言表达能力：（1）‌阅读理解‌：‌考生需要准确理解原文的主旨、‌细节以及作者的态度和观点。‌(2)‌信息筛选‌：‌从原文中提炼出关键信息，‌包括主要观点、‌重要事实、‌数据等。‌(3)‌语言表达‌：‌使用简洁、‌准确的语言对原文进行概括，‌避免使用原文中的具体细节和例子。‌(4)‌逻辑结构‌：‌保持原文的逻辑结构，‌确保概要的条理清晰。考向分析与应对策略英语概要写作的技巧主要包括以下几点：‌‌理解原文‌：‌首先需要仔细阅读原文，‌确保完全理解文章的主旨和要点。‌‌删除细节‌：‌概要写作要求简洁明了，‌因此需要删除原文中的具体细节和例子，‌只保留主要观点和信息。‌‌简化描述‌：‌使用概括性的词语和短语来替代原文中的具体描述，‌使概要更加精炼。‌‌句式变换‌：‌通过改变句式结构，‌如将复合句变为简单句，‌或使用不同的表达方式，‌来避免直接引用原文句子。‌‌逻辑连贯‌：‌在概要中保持信息的逻辑连贯性，‌使用适当的连接词和过渡句来组织内容。‌‌检查修改‌：‌完成初稿后，‌仔细检查并修改概要，‌确保没有遗漏重要信息，‌且语言表达准确流畅。‌概要写作是要求学生对一篇文章进行归纳概括,用简洁的语言总结文章要点。所表达的信息要忠实于原文,但不可原句照搬。I.话题词汇(1)目前:currently=nowadays=presently(2)常见的现象:amonphenomenon=It’smonforsb.todo...(3)与……有联系;与……有关:beassociatedwith,connectwith(4)导致:contributeto,leadto,resultin(5)解释:accountforII.话题句式1．常用开头语(1)议论文...passage/authorarguesthat...本文/作者主张……...passage/authorhighlightstheimportanceof...本文/作者强调了……的重要性。...passage/authordiscussestheimpactof...本文/作者讨论了……的影响。......ssage/authorpares...with...本文/作者比较了……与……(2)说明文...ordingtothepassage,wecanknow...根据文章我们可知……...spassage/articleismainlyabout...这篇文章主要是关于……...thepassage,thewriter/authormainlytellsus...在这篇文章中作者主要告诉我们……...ewstudyfound...一个新的研究发现……...purposeofthereportistoshow...这一报告的目的是表明……(3)记叙文...passage/storyismainlyabout...本文/这个故事主要是关于……...authortellsusastoryabout...作者告诉我们一个关于……的故事...passageisastoryabout...本文是一个关于……的故事2．要点连接词(1)顺序firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally首先，第二，第三，最后；tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally首先，然后，其次，最后；tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally首先，然后，其次，最后。(2)并列......las也；notonly...but(also)...不仅……还……；including/included包括。(3)对比............and...ontheotherhand...一方面……另一方面……；foronething...foranother...一方面……另一方面……；onthecontrary与此相反；nevertheless然而；paredto与……相比；incontrastwith与……形成对比；though/inspiteof尽管。(4)递进even甚至；besides除了……之外(还)；what'smore还有；moreover而且；furthermore此外；inaddition另外；worsestill＝what'sworse＝tomakemattersworse更糟糕的是。(5)例证asamatteroffact/infact事实上；forexample/forinstance例如。(6)强调especially特别；indeed确实；atleast至少；atmost最多；notatall根本不；orrather更确切地说；particularly特别地。(7)因果thanksto多亏；asaresult结果；becauseof/asaresultof/onaccountof/dueto因为；owingto多亏；forthisreason由于这个原因。(8)总结inshort总之；generallyspeaking一般来说；briefly/inbrief简言之；tosumup＝tosummarize＝insummary/toconclude总之。III.模版框架1．进行概要写作时要注意以下四点：(1)一般使用第三人称。(2)不可加入自己的观点。(3)一定不可对原文内容加以评论。(4)一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。2．概要写作步骤在写概要时，要按照“六步法”的程序进行，具体操作方法如下：(1)Scanthepassage—览全文，定体裁(2)Underlinethemainpoints—划要点(3)Missthedetails—省细节(4)Analysethestructure—析结构(5)Restatethepoints—换表达(6)Organizethemainpointsintoapassage—连全文阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Herbalmedicine(草药),whichhasbeenusedformedicinalpurposes,istheuseofplantstotreatdiseases.Manyherbalistsusetheentireplant,fromtheflowers,stems,leaves,androots,intheformofeverythingfromteastopills.Theseplantscontainnatural,chemicalthingsthatcantreatthebodyforavarietyofdiseases—suchasallergies,asthma,rheumatoidarthritis,migraine,chronicfatigue,andcancer,amongothers.Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofpeopleprefertoadopttheseplantstotreattheirdiseasesbecauseparedwithchemicalmedicine,herbalmedicinehasitsownadvantages.Herbalmedicineandremedies(治疗)aremoreeffectivethanchemicalmedicineforcertaindiseases.Thechemicalmedicinegivenbyachemistcouldhavecertainnegativesideeffects.However,manyoftheherbalmedicineandremediesdonothavenegativesideeffects.Ifany,theyaresofterthanchemicalmedicine.Obesityisthecauseofmanyofthehealthproblems.Herbalmedicinecanhelpweightlossmoreeffectivelyandimproveoverallhealth.However,thecureusingherbalmedicineandsupplements(营养品)wouldtakesometime,andthereforepeoplearesupposedtopossessenoughpatience.Worsestill,herbalmedicinecontainsavarietyofingredients(成分)andpeoplehavetobesurethattheirbodyagreeswiththeingredientsandthatitisnotallergic(过敏的).Whenusedcorrectlyanddirectedbydoctors,herbscanhelptreatavarietyofdiseases.Butkeepinmindthattheherbalmedicineindustryisnotregulated,soherbalproductsareoftenmisleadingandmaycontainadditives(添加剂)andthatarenotlistedonthelabel(标签).Someherbsmaycauseallergicreactionsorinteractwithotherdrugs,andsomearepoisonousifusedimproperlyorathighdoses(剂量).Takingherbsonyourownincreasesyourrisk.【写作分析】[结构梳理]Introduction→Paragraph1.DefinitionConclusion→ Paragraph4.Advice[要点提炼]Paragraph1.Herbalmedicineistheuseoftheentireplantstotreatavarietyofdiseases.Paragraph2.Unlikechemicalmedicine,herbalmedicineismoreeffectiveandhasnoorfewernegativesideeffects.Paragraph3.However,herbalmedicinealsohasdisadvantages,suchastimeconsumingandpossibleallergy.Paragraph4.Peopleshoulduseherbalmedicinecautiously.[要点改写]Paragraph1.Herbalmedicineisawayoftreatingsomediseases_____________________containingpowerfulthingsinvariousforms.

Paragraph2._____________________chemicalmedicine,herbalmedicineisbetterinseveralwayssuchasitsmoreeffectivenessandfewernegativesideeffects.

Paragraph3.Herbalmedicinerequires_____________________forrecoveryandtendsto_____________________aswell.

Paragraph4.Peopleshoulduseherbmedicine_____________________.

[衔接成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、短语翻译1.Thiscasewill_________________________________________________________________________________________________________(对……有积极影响)judicialpractice.2.IfIwereyou,Iwould____________________________________________________________________________________(花更多时间在)English.3.Thereis_______________________________________________________________(没什么比……更好)toseesmilingfaceofyou.4.When__________________________________________(有疑问),callthedoctor.5.Enoughmoney____________________________________________________________________________________(允许她旅行)aroundtheworld.6.Theteacher_______________________________________________________________(和,还有)hisstudentsvisitedthefamousmuseum.7.Hefellasleep____________________________________________________________________________________(蜡烛点着).8.Youshould__________________________________________(反省)yourmistakeseveryday.二、语篇翻译（2425高二上·全国·课后作业）短文汉译英当你饿了的时候你喜欢去哪家餐馆？这条街上有各种各样（饮食风格）的餐馆，不同的餐馆满足几乎所有的口味。有些餐馆以美味中餐而闻名，有些以西餐而闻名，也有些以其当地特色而闻名。不管你喜欢哪一个，不管你喜欢什么，总会有一家很棒的，能够吸引你的餐馆。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三．书面表达阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Bambooisoneoftheworld'smostusefulplants.Forthousandsofyearsbamboohasbeenusedinmanydifferentways—fromfoodtomedicinetoclothingand,insmallways,asabuildingmaterial.However,bambooisnotoftenusedasabuildingmaterialinthedevelopedworld.AprofessorattheUniversityofPittsburghinPennsylvaniaistryingtochangethat.Theprofessorandhisstudentsaretestingthestrengthofbamboo.Theyaretestingitsradialload,orhowmuchpressureorweightitcantakebeforebreaking.KentHarriesisaprofessorattheUniversityofPittsburgh.Harriessaysthattestingmethodsforbambooneedtobethesameforall.Theyneedtobestandardized.Harriessaysbambooisstronginnature.Thestrengthofatleastthreespeciesofbambooissimilartosteel.Besidesitsstrength,Harriessaysthatbamboohasotherfeaturesthatmakeitagreatbuildingmaterial.Hesaysitisresilient,meaningitkeepsitsshapeandstrengthevenunderpressure.Bambooalsogrowsquickly.Bamboothatissuitableforconstructionneedsmuchlessresourcesthanwood.Theharvestcycleofbambooisabout3years.Softwoodssuchascedar,pineandsprucehaveaharvestcycleofabout10years.Andhardwoodsthatefromfloweringplantssuchasoak,mapleandwalnutneedmorethan30years.Bambooiswidelyusedasfoodforpandabears.Itisalsousedforflooringandwindowcovers.However,forbuilding,bambooisnotusedmuchoutsideitsnativegrowingarea.Thisismostlybecauseofitsroundshape.Butthereareotherreasonstoo.Peoplethinkthatbambooisalow­qualitybuildingmaterial.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2018·浙江11月高考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushou