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2025届河南省联盟高三下学期高考适应性考试（创新发展联盟三模）（全科）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasbeginningonmyfirstevervolunteeringtrip!Itwasspringbreak,andthirtysixofusfromouruniversity'sStudentAssociationwereheadingtoTampa,Floridatoservethelessfortunate.Ihadwrestledwiththedecisiontogoonthetripformonths.MyapprehensioncamemostlyfromthefactthatIhadneverimaginedmyselfsaying“yes"toaweekofserviceawayfromhomebecauseofmycerebralpalsy(CP)(大脑性瘫痪),whichmakesthemusclesinmyleftlowerbodyinaconstantstateofspasm(痉李).Mypainisunpredictable.Somedays,I'mfine.Onothers,myleftfootdragslikeconcreteblockstiedtoanankle,everystepcausingspasmsuptomychest,Thehardestpartoflivingwithunpredictablepainarethedayswhenmyheartissaying“go",butmylegissaying“no”,Goingonthis“adventure”(that'showeveryonearoundmewasencouragingmetothinkofit)wasalreadyaleapoffaith,andnotknowinghowmymuscleswouldfeeladdedawholeotherdegreeofanxiety.ThelastthingIwantedwastospendmyspringbreakwatchingfromthesidelineswithanicebag!Onthefirstmorningofthetrip,Iwokeupfeelingliketwistedwood.Sleepingonanoldcarpetonthefloorhaddoneanumberonmyleg,hipsandback,Itwasn'teven8a,m,andIwasalreadyfeelingdefeated,ylowerbackachedinrhythmwiththeindustrialfridge'snoise,fingersdiggingintomywalkingstick'srubberhandleuntiltheyturnedwhite.Butitwasourfirstdaytripoffsitetoservethehungry,andIwasdeterminedtomakethemostofit,ImadeupmymindthatIwouldpushthrough,evenifthatmeantcollapsingfromexhaustionattheendoftheday.Iwassonervous,butIwantedtobeabletohelppeopleandheartheirstories.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Assistingawomaninwheelchairatthefoodcupboard,Iforgotmyowndisfort.Paragraph2:Byafternoon,mylegfeltweakwhileloadingboxes,nearlydroppingone.

2025届河南省联盟高三下学期高考适应性考试（创新发展联盟三模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasbeginningonmyfirstevervolunteeringtrip!Itwasspringbreak(时间),andthirtysixofus(背景人物)fromouruniversity'sStudentAssociationwereheadingtoTampa,Floridatoservethelessfortunate(一类人，交代故事的背景信息).Ihadwrestledwiththedecisiontogoonthetripformonths.MyapprehensioncamemostlyfromthefactthatIhadneverimaginedmyselfsaying“yes"toaweekofserviceawayfromhome(同位语从句)becauseofmycerebralpalsy(CP)(大脑性瘫痪),whichmakesthemusclesinmyleftlowerbodyinaconstantstateofspasm(痉挛).Mypainisunpredictable(后文的伏笔).Somedays,I'mfine.Onothers,myleftfootdragslikeconcreteblocks(无灵主语句)tiedtoanankle(过去分词做后置定语),everystepcausingspasmsuptomychest(独立主格).Thehardestpartoflivingwithunpredictablepainarethedayswhenmyheartissaying“go",butmylegissaying“no”.Goingonthis“adventure”(动名词短语做主语)(that'showeveryonearoundmewasencouragingmetothinkofit)wasalreadyaleapoffaith,andnotknowinghowmymuscleswouldfeeladdedawholeotherdegreeofanxiety.ThelastthingIwantedwastospendmyspringbreakwatchingfromthesidelineswithanicebag(主人公纠结的原因)!Onthefirstmorningofthetrip,Iwokeupfeelingliketwistedwood(现在分词做伴随动作).Sleepingonanoldcarpetonthefloor(动名词短语做主语)haddoneanumberonmyleg,hipsandback(名词并列).a.mwasn'teven8a.m,andIwasalreadyfeelingdefeated(人物情绪描写).Mylowerbackachedinrhythmwiththeindustrialfridge'snoise(无灵主语句，描述我的痛苦),fingersdiggingintomywalkingstick'srubberhandle(独立主格刻画痛苦的程度)untiltheyturnedwhite.Butitwasourfirstdaytripoffsitetoservethehungry,andIwasdeterminedtomakethemostofit.ImadeupmymindthatIwouldpushthrough,evenifthatmeantcollapsingfromexhaustionattheendoftheday.Iwassonervous,butIwantedtobeabletohelppeopleandheartheirstories(冲突点的交代).注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Assistingawomaninwheelchairatthefoodcupboard,Iforgotmyowndisfort.Paragraph2:Byafternoon,mylegfeltweakwhileloadingboxes,nearlydroppingone.

1.文章分类及续写思路分析文章类型：个人励志/社会活动类（主角克服身体障碍，通过志愿服务实现自我突破）续写构思方向：主题：坚持与自我超越，通过帮助他人淡化自身痛苦。情感基调：从焦虑、疼痛到专注、成就感，最终情感升华。关键冲突：身体疼痛与志愿服务需求的矛盾。布局与框架：段落内容重点衔接原文要素第一段主角在帮助轮椅女士时忘记疼痛，体现服务他人的意义。承接“determinedtomakethemostofit”和“heartheirstories”。第二段体力不支时获得团队支持，感悟团队精神与自我价值。呼应“leapoffaith”和“collapsingfromexhaustion”。实施要点：承接原文：保留第一人称视角、疼痛描写（如“legfeltweak”）、心理挣扎（“nervous”到“forgotdisfort”）。巧妙设计：通过他人反应（如轮椅女士的感谢）或团队协作（同学帮助搬箱子）强化主题。2.故事山模式与原文分析故事山模式：开端：主角因脑瘫犹豫是否参加志愿活动。发展：首日身体疼痛但决心坚持。高潮：服务他人时暂时忘记痛苦（续写第一段）。回落：体力不支时获助（续写第二段）。结局：领悟坚持的意义（需在续写中暗示）。伏笔与冲突点：伏笔：“walkingstick’srubberhandle”（暗示后续体力问题）。“collapsingfromexhaustion”（预示体力极限）。冲突点：身体疼痛vs.服务决心。隐含线索：团队的存在（“thirtysixofus”可能提供支持）。解决方案：通过他人帮助或精神力量克服困难。3.原文要素分析表分析角度内容原文反应句人物刻画主角坚韧但自卑“thelastthingIwantedwastowatchfromthesidelines”.情感层次焦虑→决心“Iwassonervous,butIwantedtohelppeople”.关键情节点决定参加志愿活动“wrestledwiththedecisionformonths”.语言特色比喻生动“leftfootdragslikeconcreteblocks”.关键词分析“leapoffaith”象征克服恐惧的勇气。心理描写自我怀疑“myheartissaying‘go’,butmylegissaying‘no’”.动作描写疼痛表现“fingersdiggingintowalkingstickuntilwhite”.环境描写艰苦条件“sleepingonanoldcarpet”.隐含主题助人即自助“heartheirstories”暗示成长。情感转折挫败→坚定“feelingdefeated”→“determinedtopushthrough”.空间转换大学→佛罗里达“headingtoTampa”拉开故事场景。时间过渡首日早晨a.m.stmorning”“noteven8a.m.”.4.续写注意事项情感连贯：从“defeated”过渡到“forgotdisfort”，避免突兀。细节呼应：使用“walkingstick”“boxes”等原文道具。主题深化：通过他人反馈（如轮椅女士微笑）或内心独白点题。合理结局：可暗示主角未来更积极（如计划下次志愿活动）。3.推荐英文例句及高级替换词动作描写（ActionDescriptions）Shegrippedthewalkingsticktightly,herknucklesturningwhite.（她紧紧抓住拐杖，指节发白。）Helimpedforward,eachstepsendingsharppainsuphisleg.（他一瘸一拐地向前走，每一步都让腿部传来剧痛。）Herhandstrembledasshehandedoutthefoodpackages.（她的手在分发食物包裹时颤抖着。）Withadeepbreath,hesteadiedhimselfagainstthewall.（他深吸一口气，扶着墙稳住自己。）Shekneltbesidethewheelchair,adjustingthewoman’sblanketgently.（她跪在轮椅旁，轻轻为那位女士整理毯子。）Hislegswobbledundertheweightofthebox,threateningtogiveway.（他的腿在箱子的重压下颤抖，几乎支撑不住。）Shebitherlip,forcingherselftotakeanotherstep.（她咬着嘴唇，强迫自己再迈一步。）Heshiftedhisweighttohisrightleg,tryingtoeasethestrain.（他把重心移到右腿，试图减轻压力。）Herfingersfumbledwiththestraps,frustrationcreepingin.（她的手指笨拙地摆弄着带子，挫败感渐渐袭来。）Withafinalpush,hemanagedtolifttheboxontotheshelf.（最后用力一推，他终于把箱子抬上了架子。）心理描写（PsychologicalDescriptions）Awaveofdeterminationwashedoverher,pushingthepainaside.（一股决心涌上心头，暂时压过了疼痛。）Doubtgnawedathim—whatifhecouldn’tkeepup?（疑虑啃噬着他——如果他跟不上怎么办？）Shefeltaflickerofprideasthewomansmiledather.（当那位女士对她微笑时，她感到一丝自豪。）Hismindraced,searchingforawaytohidehisdisfort.（他的思绪飞速转动，想找个办法掩饰自己的不适。）Fearclenchedherstomach,butsherefusedtobackdown.（恐惧攥紧了她的胃，但她拒绝退缩。）Asenseofacplishmentwarmedhischest,despitetheexhaustion.（尽管疲惫，一种成就感温暖了他的心。）Sheswallowedhard,pushingawaythevoicetellinghertoquit.（她咽了咽口水，赶走那个让她放弃的声音。）Guiltprickedathim—hedidn’twanttobeaburden.（内疚刺痛了他——他不想成为累赘。）Relieffloodedthroughherwhenateammateofferedhelp.（当队友伸出援手时，她感到一阵轻松。）Foramoment,heforgothispain,lostinthegratitudeintheireyes.（有那么一刻，他忘记了疼痛，沉浸在他们眼中的感激里。）环境描写（EnvironmentalDescriptions）Thehumoftheindustrialfridgefilledthecrampedkitchen.（工业冰箱的嗡嗡声充斥着狭小的厨房。）Sunlightstreamedthroughthedustywindows,castinglongshadows.（阳光透过积灰的窗户洒进来，投下长长的影子。）Thescentofwarmbreadmingledwiththedampnessoftheoldbuilding.（新鲜面包的香气与旧建筑的潮湿气味混合在一起。）Acoolbreezebrushedagainstherskin,offeringabriefrespite.（一阵凉风拂过她的皮肤，带来短暂的舒缓。）Theunevenfloorboardscreakedunderhisuncertainsteps.（摇晃的地板在他不稳的脚步下吱呀作响。）Raintappedlightlyagainsttheroof,asoothingrhythminthebackground.（雨轻轻敲打着屋顶，背景里是一种舒缓的节奏。）Thechatterofvolunteersandrecipientscreatedalivelyatmosphere.（志愿者和受助者的交谈营造出热闹的氛围。）Asingleflickeringbulbcasteerieshadowsinthedimhallway.（一盏闪烁的灯泡在昏暗的走廊里投下诡异的影子。）TheweightofthehumidFloridaairmadeeverymovementfeelheavier.（佛罗里达潮湿的空气让每一个动作都显得更吃力。）Thedistantsoundoflaughterremindedherwhyshewashere.（远处的笑声提醒着她自己为何而来。）4.高级替换词&常见搭配解析高级替换词（按场景分类）普通词高级替换词适用场景painagony,throbbing,disfort身体疼痛描写helpassist,aid,lendahand志愿服务场景tiredexhausted,drained,weary疲惫心理描写happycontent,fulfilled,gratified成就情感描写walklimp,shuffle,trudge行动受限描写常见固定搭配"Wrestlewiththedecision"（纠结于决定）近义词：strugglewith,grapplewith反义词：decideeasily,settleon例句：Shewrestledwiththeideaofquitting.（她纠结于是否放弃。）Hehadwrestledwithguiltforyears.（他多年来一直与内疚斗争。）"Aleapoffaith"（信念的飞跃，冒险尝试）近义词：aboldmove,arisk反义词：asafechoice,hesitation例句：Startingabusinesswasaleapoffaith.（创业是一次信念的飞跃。）Shetookaleapoffaithandmovedabroad.（她冒险尝试，搬到了国外。）"Doanumberonsomeone"（对某人造成伤害/影响）近义词：takeatollon,affectbadly反义词：benefit,improve例句：Thelongflightdidanumberonhisback.（长途飞行让他的背很不舒服。）Stresscandoanumberonyourhealth.（压力会对健康造成严重影响。）"Pushthrough"（坚持完成）近义词：persevere,endure反义词：giveup,quit例句：Despitethepain,hepushedthroughtherace.（尽管疼痛，他坚持跑完了比赛。）Shepushedthroughherfearsandspokeup.（她克服恐惧，勇敢发言。）"Collapsefromexhaustion"（因疲惫而倒下）近义词：breakdown,giveout反义词：staystrong,endure例句：Afterthemarathon,hecollapsedfromexhaustion.（马拉松后，他因疲惫倒下。）Shenearlycollapsedfromlackofsleep.（她差点因睡眠不足而倒下。）可积累的语料（生词短语）"Constantstateofspasm"（持续痉挛状态）词义：肌肉持续抽搐词性：nounphrase例句：Hislegwasinaconstantstateofspasmduetotheinjury.Themedicationhelpedreducetheconstantstateofspasm."Twistedwood"（像扭曲的木头一样僵硬）词义：形容身体僵硬疼痛词性：simile例句：Afterthelongdrive,hisbackfeltliketwistedwood.Shewokeupfeelingliketwistedwoodaftersleepingonthefloor."Makethemostofit"（充分利用）词义：尽力做好某事词性：phrase例句：Eveninpain,shewasdeterminedtomakethemostofthetrip.Hedecidedtomakethemostofhistimeincollege."Fingersdigginginto"（手指深深掐入）词义：因紧张或疼痛紧握词性：verbphrase例句：Herfingersdugintothearmrestduringtheturbulence.Hisfingersdugintohispalmsinfrustration."Acheinrhythmwith"（与……同步疼痛）词义：疼痛随着某种节奏发生词性：verbphrase例句：Hisheadacheachedinrhythmwiththeloudmusic.Herbackachedinrhythmwithherfootsteps.总结动作描写：多用动态动词（grip,limp,wobble）增强画面感。心理描写：结合比喻（waveofdetermination,doubtgnawedathim）深化情感。环境描写：利用感官细节（sound,scent,touch）增强代入感。高级替换：避免重复，提升语言丰富度（如用

"agony"

代替

"pain"）。固定搭配：掌握地道表达（"leapoffaith","pushthrough"）让续写更自然。

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thelessfortunate

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"Thankyou"

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mywalkingstick

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thirtysixofus

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"We’vegotyou,"

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collapsingfromexhaustion

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“Thankyou,dear.You’redoingsomethingwonderful.”

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“Hey,letmetakethat,”

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“You’rekindtohelp,”

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“Easythere,”

shesaid,hertonefirmbutgentle(独立主格).

“We’vegotbackupsforareason.”

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“Teamworkisn’taboutequalstrength.It’saboutequalheart.”

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“Blessyou,”

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