新课堂高考英语一轮复习专题训练专题二短文改错

专题二短文改错(一)(2017年泉州高三高考适应性模拟)life.Mywork.Theycook.We,myfamilyandIstartedworkingtowardsagreenerlife.Mymomanddaddrivelessandoftentakethebustowork.Theyarecarefullytosavegaswhentheycook.Werecyclethingsandwegiveoldclothesandfurniturestocharities.do.Forteeth.Takingealotmorethingswecando.Forexample,wewilltrytousefewerwaterbyturningoffthetapwhilewebrushusteeth.Takingshortershowerswillhelp,either.effort.Althoughneedseveryone'seffort.Althougheachoneofusmayonlydoalittle,buttogetherwecanmakeabigdifferent.(二)(2017年湖北高考预测密卷一)water.Iclothes.Whilehimself.Ifirst.Whentball,IsawMotherwastakingalotofdirtyclothestowashorabuckettocarrywater.IthoughtMotherwasverytiring,soIdecidedtohelpherwashtheclothes.WhileIwasdoingthewashing,LiMingcameandaskedmetoplayfootballwithhimself.IrefusedhimandtoldhimthatIwillhelpMotherfinishthehouseworksfirst.WhenIgotthehouseworkdone,IwasveryexhaustedthatIwassweatingallover.clothes.Shechild.Iacktohome,shefoundIhadwashedallthedirtyclothes.ShegladlysaidthatIwasgoodchild.Ifeltveryhappily.(三)(2017年江西高考押题卷一)nephew.Hehair.Becausehim.Thereforeweekend.Wesupermarket.Inephew.Heisa8­year­oldboywithbigeyesandblackhair.Becausehisparentswasverybusy,theyhadnotimetotakecarehim.Therefore,theyaskedmetolookafterherovertheweekend.Weboughtsomevegetableandfruitinthesupermarket.Ialsoboughthimatoy,thathelovedverymuch.Onourwaybackhome,heofferstohelpmewiththebags.Seeingthislovelyandhappyboy,andIcouldn'thelpthinkofmychildhood.Howunforgettablyatimeitwas!(四)(2017年福州高三5月质检)DearBen，Asgraduationisdrawnear,I'dliketoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourkind.Inthelastthreeyears,youhadsharedmyjoysandsorrows,makingmyschoollifeunforgettable.IrememberverymuchthatyousentmetohospitalwhenIhadmyleftlegbreak.DuringthedayswhenIhadtostayinthebed,youfortedmeandhelpedmemylessons.Itisyourfriendshipwhichfillsmylifewithsunshine.IhopemyfriendshipwilllastforeverandIalsohopeallyourdreamswilletrulyinthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours，LiHua(五)(2017届武汉市高中毕业生五月调研测试)Duringthesummervacation,myfamilytraveledtoHainanbytheair.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetakenaplane.Inthebeginning,Iwasextremelyexcitingtogetintotheplane.Butthemomenttheplanetookoff,itfeltsonervousthatIwasafraidtolookoutthewindow.Besides,thefeelingdidn'tlastlong.Soon,Iwashighlyupinthesky.Itwassafeandfortable.Iopenedmyeyesandenjoyedtheviewofmountains,fieldsandrivers,thatremainsinmymemories.I'mlookingforwardtoflyagain.(六)(2017年深圳市高三第二次调研考试)IthasbeenseveralweeksinceIcametomynewschool.Itwasaclean,beautifulandmodernone,withalargeplaygroundandanamazeddigitalreading­room.Alltheteachersarefriendlyandkindly.Amongthem,IlikemyEnglishteacherbest,whoisenthusiasticbutpopularwithus.Heisalsostricttous.Heteachesusinanunusualway.Besides,healwaysavoidsmakingustofeelembarrassedinclass.Allmyclassmatesworkshard.We'reenjoyingsuchnewlifeandtryingtodevelopusforthefuture.(七)(2017年宜春二模)DearLiMing，Thesummerholidayisaroundcorner.Doyouhaveanyplanforthem?IplantoreadsomeEnglishbookduringtheholidayandIneededyourremendations.Firstly,IwanttoimprovemyEnglishlevel,hopeonedayIcangotoabroadforfurtherstudyinothercountries,suchasAmericaandEngland.Secondly,Ialsodesirestoknowmorehistory,geographyasgoodasculturesandtraditionsaboutthesecountries.Butcanyoumakealistofthebooksofmetoread?Thankyousincerelyinadvance.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.LiHua(八)(2017年河南百校联盟英语试题)Itseemsthatiftheresultisbad,whichpeopleworkforwillbemeaningless.Personallyspeak,theprocessoffightingforthegoalislessimportantthantheresult.Whenwefightforourgoals,wewillbedevotedwhatwearedoingandtrytoimproveus.Ifwefailintheend,whenwelookbackonthebeginning,wewillfindthatwearenolongerthechildishone.Wehavegrownup.What'sthemore,intheprocessoffighting,wegotclosetosuccess,asthesayinggoesthatfailurearethemotherofsuccess.Sodon'ttreattheresultsoserious;justenjoytheprocess.(九)(2017年河南省六市高三第二次联考)Hello,I'mLiHua,chairmanofStudentUnion.We'regoingtoorganizeabicycletriptoourschoolfarmonthisSunday.Itwaslocatedinthewesternsuburb,coveredanareaofabout50acres.Therearedifferentkindsofcattleraisedandvariousvegetableplanted,withoutsomeharmfulthingsinthefeedorthefertilizer.Theproductsareprovidedfortheschoolcanteen,whichweenjoyahealthdiet.Onthefarmyoucanbineyouhavelearnedwithpracticetothefullest.Youareexpectedtoarrivethereatabout9o'clock.Remember:followingtheworkersanddon'ttrytodoanythingstrangetointeresttheanimalsordodamagetotheplantsduringmyvisit.(十)(2017年哈三中三模)OneafternoonJackiswalkingdownariveralone.Itwasverycolddayandontheriverfewboatscouldbeseen.Whenhestoppedonabridgeandlookeddown,hesawaterriblescene.Aboyfellofacanoe(独木筏)andwasstrugglinginthewater.Withoutthinkabouthimself,Jackjumpedintotheriverandtosavetheboy.Hewasabouttodragtheboytotheriverbankthenhesawsomepeoplestandinamotorboatunderthebridge.OneofthemholdingacamerainhishandsstaredJackandsaidangry,“Theyaremakingafilmandyou'vespoiledourwholeafternoon'swork！”(十一)(2017年枣阳白水高中高三六模)I'mwritingthise­mailtoaskyouforhelp.AsanEnglishsonglover,IhaveastrongdesiretotakingpartintheEnglishsongcontesttobeheldinnextmonth.ThesongI'vedecidedtosingwasSkyfall.Tosingthissongbetter,Iamwonderingifyoucouldtellmeanythingaboutthebackgroundinformationsofthesong.What'smoreimportant,couldyouspendsometimelisteningtothesongandgivingmyselfsomeadvice?Sinceyou'renativeEnglishspeakerandexpertinsinging,Isincerehopeyoucangivemeahand.Iwouldappreciateitwhetheryoucouldsendmeareplyatyourearliestconvenient.Thankyouinadvance.(十二)(2017年成都市九校高三第四次联合模拟考试)Iattendedaprogramcallingthe“HappySchool”intheholidays.Itwasgivenbysomevolunteersfromtheuniversitiesinourcity.Therewerepaintingandmanyothercoursesforustochoose.Thesecourseswereintendedtohelpusleft­behindmiddleschoolstudentinthecountryside,ourparentsareworkinginothercities,makeuseofourholidays.Thevolunteerstookgoodcareofus,showedthemhowtodoourhomeworkandmakesureofoursafety.Ilearnedalotfromtheinterestedprogram.Iwillattendsoprogramsonceagainthenextsummerifthereisany.(十三)(2017年辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校高三八模)Maria,a91­year­oldwoman,hasanunbelievableexperiencelastweek.Agroupofthievesbrokeinherhousebuttooknothingawaywiththem.Mariarecalledthatthewindowswerebrokenandthatallherboxwereopened,butnothingwasmissing.Instead,shefoundahandwrittennoteonthetablethatwassaid,“Thisishelpyoutogetby.”Besidethenotetherewassomemoney.ItseemedthatthethievesrealizedhowpoorMarialivedanddecidednottotakesomething—buttohelp.Onepolicemanwhohasbeenworkingfor40yearsissurprisingbythiseventtoo.LaterMariakeptthenotereceivedfromherfriendlythievesorusedthemoneytobuysweetsforhisgreatgrandchildren.专题二短文改错(一)第一处：started前加have。根据时间状语“Overthelastfewyears”可知用现在完成时。第二处：the→a。此处“takeabus”为乘坐某种交通工具，不特指某辆公交车。第三处：carefully→careful。系动词are后接形容词，构成系表结构。第四处：furnitures→furniture。furniture为不可数名词。第五处：fewer→less。此处使用less，修饰其后的不可数名词water。第六处：us→our。此处使用形容词性物主代词our修饰名词teeth。第七处：either→too。too和either都表示“也”，但肯定句中使用too。第八处：Save→Saving。此处动名词短语“Savingtheplanet”做句子主语。第九处：去掉but。Although引导让步状语从句，其后是主句，不再需要连词but。第十处：different→difference。此处考查短语搭配makeabigdifference。(二)第一处：playing→play。beabouttodo是一个不定式结构，后面要接动词原形。第二处：or→and。妈妈拿着很多衣服和一个装水的桶为并列结构。第三处：tiring→tired。tiring意为“令人疲劳的”，用来修饰物。妈妈“感到很累”，要用tired来修饰人。第四处：himself→him。李明叫我和“他”一起去踢球。用宾格，而不是反身代词。第五处：will→would。全文都是过去时，这里也要用过去将来时。第六处：houseworks→housework。housework是不可数名词，没有复数形式。第七处：very→so。这是“so...that...”的搭配。第八处：去掉to。home是副词，前面不用介词搭配。第九处：was后加a。child是单数可数名词，前面要有冠词修饰。第十处：happily→happy。felt在这里是系动词，后面接形容词做表语，表示“开心的”。(三)第一处：a→an。8­year­old是以元音音素开头，故用不定冠词an。第二处：was→were。主语是复数名词parents，故谓语动词用复数形式。第三处：care后加of。takecareof照料，照顾，为固定搭配。第四处：her→him。从上文可知此处指代男孩，故把her改为him。第五处：vegetable→vegetables。vegetable是可数名词，故用复数形式。第六处：that→which。非限制性定语从句中缺少宾语，指代atoy,that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故把that改为which。第七处：offers→offered。文章讲述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。第八处：去掉I前的and。“Seeingthislovelyandhappyboy”是非谓语动词短语做状语，不和句子构成并列关系，故去掉and。第九处：think→thinking。can't/couldn'thelpdoingsth.情不自禁做某事。第十处：unforgettably→unforgettable。系动词was后面应该用形容词。(四)第一处：draw→drawing。毕业“正在”临近，用进行时。第二处：kind→kindness。在形容词性物主代词your后用名词。第三处：had→have。“Inthelastthreeyears”是现在完成时的时间状语。第四处：much→well。从上下文看，我对这件事记得“很好，很牢”，而不是“很多”。第五处：break→broken。做“myleg”的宾语补足语，与之是被动关系，要用过去分词。第六处：去掉bed前的the。stayinbed是固定搭配，表示“卧床”。第七处：mylessons前加with。这是“helpsb.withsth.”的结构。第八处：which→that。这是一个强调句。第九处：my→our。是“我们”之间的友谊，而不是“我的”友谊。第十处：truly→true。e在这里是系动词，后接形容词做表语。同时，“梦想成真”也是一个固定用法，即“thedreamwilletrue”。(五)第一处：去掉the。byair坐飞机，不用冠词。第二处：have→had。Itwasthefirsttimethat是过去时间，从句要用过去完成时。第三处：exciting→excited。表示“我感到兴奋”，应用excited。第四处：it→I。代词错误，此处是“我”感到紧张。第五处：out后加of。lookoutof是固定搭配。第六处：Besides→However。besides是“除此之外”，however是“然而”。这里有轻微的转折的意思，要用however。第七处：highly→high。考查词性。表示“我高高的在空中”，这里用形容词做表语。第八处：that→which。在非限制性定语从句中，只用which代替物而不用that，做从句的主语。第九处：memories→memory。memory是不可数名词。第十处：fly→flying。to在此做介词，后面要跟v.­ing。(六)第一处：week→weeks。week是可数名词，被several修饰要用复数形式。第二处：was→is。这里说的是学校的现状，用一般现在时。第三处：amazed→amazing。digitalreading­room表示物，修饰物用amazing。第四处：kindly→kind。friendly是形容词，应与形容词kind并列，做表语。第五处：but→and。这里“enthusiastic”和“popular”是并列关系，而不是转折关系。第六处：to→with。bestrictwithsb.对某人严格，为固定搭配。第七处：去掉to。make后的宾语补足语省略不定式符号to。第八处：works→work。主语是classmates，是复数，谓语也要用复数形式。第九处：such后加a。life这里是抽象名词具体化，前面要有冠词。第十处：us→ourselves。我们要发展“我们自己”，用反身代词。(七)第一处：around后加the。aroundthecorner即将到来，为固定搭配。第二处：them→it。这里要代替的是holiday，是单数，用it。第三处：book→books。book是可数名词，有some修饰要用复数。第四处：needed→need。全文用一般现在时，故need也用一般现在时。第五处：hope→hoping。“我希望……”是主动语态，现在分词做伴随状语。第六处：去掉to。abroad是副词，goabroad不需要介词。第七处：desires→desire。主语是I，不用第三人称单数形式。第八处：good→well。aswellas是固定搭配，表示“还，也，和”。第九处：But→So。这里是因果关系，而不是转折关系，要用So。第十处：第二个of→for。“为我列一个清单”用介词for。(八)第一处：which→what。what引导主语从句，做从句中workfor的宾语。第二处：speak→speaking。personallyspeaking就我个人而言，是固定用法。第三处：less→more。过程比结果“更重要”。第四处：devoted后加to。bedevotedto投入于，是固定搭配。第五处：us→ourselves。我们要提高“我们自己”，用反身代词。第六处：one→ones。这里代替的是we，要用复数ones。第七处：去掉the。What'smore是固定搭配，意为“更重要的是”。第八处：got→get。这里讲的是一贯的事情，应用一般现在时。第九处：are→is。主语是failure，是不可数名词，谓语用单数形式。第十处：serious→seriously。修饰谓语treat做状语，用副词seriously。(九)第一处：去掉on。习惯用法，thisSunday前不要介词。第二处：was→is。考查时态。农场的位置是一贯的，用一般现在时。第三处：covered→covering。考查非谓语动词的用法。农场占地50英亩是主动语态，用现在分词。第四处：vegetable→vegetables。前面有“differentkindsof”强调种类，vegetable为可数名词，要用复数形式。第五处：some→any。any和前面的without连用，表示“没有任何有害物质”。“任何”用any。第六处：which→where或which前加in。在这个非限制性定语从句中，关系词做从句的地点状语，故而要用关系副词where或用inwhich的结构。第七处：health→healthy。修饰名词diet要用形容词healthy。第八处：bine后加what/all。bine后是一个从句，要么加what引导一个宾语从句，要么加all变成一个省略关系词that的定语从句。第九处：following→follow。这是一个祈使句，直接用动词原形开头。第十处：my→your。全文都是用第二人称，在这里也要保持人称的一致，指“在你的参观过程中”。(十)第一处：is→was。oneafternoon是表示过去的时间状语，此处应用过去时态。第二处：was后加a。day是可数名词，前面要加冠词。第三处：of→off。falloff意为“从……上掉下来”。第四处：think→thinking。without是介词，后要接动名词thinking。第五处：去掉and。不定式做目的状语，没有和它并列的对象，不用并列连词and。第六处：then→when。考查固定句型“beabouttodo...when...”。第七处：stand→standing。seesb.doing看到某人正在做，此处表示“他看到有些人正站在桥下的摩托艇里”。第八处：stared后加