基础篇19：人与社会（一）-2026年高考英语读后续写讲练

基础篇19：人与社会（一）

一、素材积累

短语积累

1.changeone,smind改变某人的主意

2.keeptrackof记录；与..保持联系

3.lookon观看；旁观；看待

4.commitoneselftodo承诺；保证（做某事、遵守协议或安排第）

5.bedistinctfrom不同于..

6.ina...manner以一种..的方式；带着一副...的样子

7.onthebasisof在某事的基础匕根据某事

8.iobehonest说实话；坦率地说

9.succeedindoingsth.成功做某事

10.carrysb.throughsth.帮助某人渡过难关

句型赏析

1.Amanisknownbyhisfriends.

什么人交什么朋友。

1.I,dliketosuggestatoasttoourcooperation.

我想建议为我们的合作干一杯。

2.Somepeopleliketoworkalone,whileothersliketoworkasateam.

有些人喜欢单独工作，而有些人则喜欢团队合作。

3.WhenIsawhim,hewasstandingbyasmallriverflowingintothevalley.

当我看见他时，他正站在一条流进山谷的小河旁。

4.Wheneverheisaskedtoexpresshimself,healwayshesitatesforamoment.

无论何时让他表述自己的看法，他总是迟疑片刻。

5.1ranacross/ranintomyformerclassmate,whohaschangedalmostbeyondrecognition.

我偶然遇到我从前的同学，他变得几乎认不出来了。

二、写作技巧提炼——动作描写鉴赏及练习（一）

1.与“哭”相关的短语

cryone'seyesout（口语）痛哭流涕，哭得很伤心

例：Cecilcamearoundlater,cryinghiseyesout,askingmetoforgivehim.

赛西尔后来来了，哭得很伤心，请求我原谅他.

bringtearstosomebody'seyes（因伤感而）流泪

例：Theoldsongalwaysbroughttears（omyeyes.

那首老歌总是让我伤感得流泪。

beclosetotears/beonthevergeoftears快要哭了

例：Herhandswereshaking.ShewasonthevergeoftearsbutPauldidn'trealizethat.

她的手在颤抖，她快要哭出来了，但保罗一点也没有意识到这一切。

somebody'seyeswater（风、烟雾等）使眼睛淌眼泪

例：Joe'seyeswerewateringfromthesmokethatfilledtheroom.

乔的双眼正被充满房间的烟雾焦得淌眼泪。

2.与“笑”相关的短语

smilebitterly苦笑

例：Thestudentsmiledbitterlywhenhisteachercaughthimcopyinghishomework.

抄作业被老师抓到后，这个学生满脸苦笑。

forceasmile强作欢颜

例：Atthefuneral,heforcedasmileforanyonewhoofferedcondolences.

在葬礼上，他强颜欢笑面对前来吊唁的人。

crackasmile展颜微笑，莞尔一笑

例：Themanwaswillingtodoanythingtomakehiswifecrackasmile.

为了让他的妻子展颜微笑，他愿意做任何事情力

laughaheartylaugh/laughheartily放声大笑，开怀大笑

例：Uponhearingthathehadwontheloilery,ihemanlaughedheartily.

知道自己中奖了，这个男人开怀大笑。

翻译练习：

1.一阵狂笑声传入我们耳中。

答案：Aroaroflaughtergreetedourcars.

2.她不由得倒抽了口冷气，往后退了退。

答案：Sheshrankbackwithaninvoluntarygasp.

3.小女孩盯着橱窗里的玩具看。

答案：Thelittlegirlstaredatthetoysinthewindow.

4.吉姆瞪了保尔一眼，但却按住了怒火，一言未发。

答案：JimglaredatPaul,butcontainedhisanger,sayingnothing.

5.她站在窗前，若有所思地望着远处。

答案：Shestoodby(hewindow,gazing(houghifullyintothedistance.

三、典例分析

I，阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

RobertandHenryweregoodfriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.Oneday

RobertandHenryweregoinghomefromschoolwhenRobertshoutedatHenryandsaid,“Youarcacoward(胆小鬼),andI

won'tplaywithyou.''Withoutanywords,Henrywasalittleangryandwenthomealone.

ThenextdayHenrywenttoschoolasusual,butRoberttoldalltheboysthatHenrywasacowardandallofthemlaughed

atHenryagreatdeal.Robertdidn'tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,heplayedwithsomeotherboyswho

alsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn'tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewhereto

play.

Afewdayslater,Robertwasswimmingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andhestruggledinthewaterandsuddenlycried

“Help,help."Hisnewfriendsdidn'thelphimandranawayasfastastheycould.

注藏：续写词数应为150左右。

Robertwasstillstrugglingintheriver.__________________________________________________________________

Robert'slifewassaved.______________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Robertwasstillstrugglingintheriver.Itwasclearthathewasindanger.Hethoughtthathewoulddiesoonifnobody

cametohelphim.Justatthemoment,Henryhappenedtobepassingby.Hearingthecry,Henryrantotheriverside,threwoff

hisclothesandjumpedintothewaterquickly.HeswamtoRobertasfastaspossibleandhelpedRobertoutjustashecouldn't

swimanylonger.Byhisgreateffort,hesavedRobertatlast.

Robert'slifewassaved.RobertwasdeeplymovedbyHenry'sheroicdeedandburstintotears.Heandhisnewfriends

wereashamedathavingcalledHenryacoward.TheyrealizedthatHenryhadtruecourageandhewasarealhero,nota

coward.WhenRobertshookHenry'shandsandsaidsorrytoHenry,Henryforgavehimwithasmile.RobertandHenrywere

friendsagainandafterschooltheywenthometogetherhappilyasusual.

【解析】

本文是一篇读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，罗伯特和亨利是一个班级的好朋友，有一天罗伯特骂亨利是胆

小鬼，说不会再和亨利一起回家了，之后罗伯特还和其他同学说亨利是胆小鬼，并且一起嘲笑亨利。几天过去了,

罗伯特在和其他小伙伴在河边玩耍时不幸溺水，但是其他小伙伴并没有救罗伯特，而是跑走了。

【详解】

续写部分分为两段，第一段的开头罗伯特仍然在水里挣扎……，所以这里写罗伯特溺水之后的场景，此时亨利

恰巧路过，他立刻脱下衣服下河去救罗伯特，最终成功救出罗伯特。

第二段开头是罗伯特被救了……，所以这里要描写罗伯特被救之后的场景。罗伯特被亨利的行为深深地感动

了，他和他的新朋友也不再认为亨利是胆小鬼，认为他才是真正的英雄。亨利也原谅了罗伯特，从此以后他们又像

以前一样是好朋友，并且一起放学回家。

【点睛】

本文的续写比较有趣，故事情节比较吸引读者，使用了高级词汇和句子。如：atthemoment.happento,throwoff;

burstintotears,asusual等高级词汇。高级句式，如：主语从句Itwasclearthathewasindanger宾语从句和条件状

语从句Hethoughtthathewoulddiesoonifnobodycametohelphim.以及现在分词短语作状语Hearingthecry,Henry

rantotheriverside,threwoffhisclothesandjumpedintothewaterquickly.o

n.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

FortuneCookieFriends

Jennyfrowned（皱眉）asshehelpedhermotherandfathersetoutthecookingsuppliesintheshinysteelkitchen.Her

familyhadjustmovedherefromSanFrancisco,havingboughtasmallrestaurant,whichwassettoopeninthenextfewdays.

“Movingherewasadumbidea,“Jennycomplainedmostlytoherself.

"What'sthat?^^Hermotherasked,openingaboxandliftingoutseveralpots.

“Nothing,"Jennymumbled（咕哝）.Thegirlhadbeenangryaboutthemove,butherparentshadmadethedecisionand

werenowtoobusygettingreadyforthegrandopeningtolistentohercomplaints.

Thefirstfewdaysathernewschoolhadn'tbeeneasy,either.Shefoundithardtotalktopeopleshedidn'tknow,andit

seemedlikethestudentshadn'tevennoticedher.Jennysighedandgotbacktowashingdishes.

Onthedayofthegrandopening,Jenny'sparentswereallsmiles,welcomingcustomersintotherestaurant,brightly

decoratedingoldandred.EvenJennywasinagoodmoodassherushedaround,seatingguests,handingoutmenus,and

pouringtallglassesofwater.Thiswasabigdayforherfamily.

Atoneof（hetablessatafamilywithtwodaughterswhowereaboutJenny'sage.Asshefilledtheirglasses,Jenny

realizedthetwinswereinherclass.Jennycluckedherheaddownsoherlonghaircoveredherface,andsheturnedawayfrom

thetabic.

Jenny'smotherfoundhersoonafter,inthekitchenloadingthedishwasher.

“Honey,whatareyoudoingbackhere?Weneedyououtfrontwiththecustomers.”

“Mom,Idon'twanttobeoutthere.Therearekidsfromschool!”

“So?”hermotherasked."That'sgood!GototakethemsomefortunecookiesandsayheHo!”ShesaidtoJenny,pointing

atthefortunecookiespaperwhichread:"Manyfriendsarcfoundwithasinglesmile.”

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.____________________________________________________________

Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylooked(hegirlsintheeyes.

【参考范文】

Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Shesuddenlyrealizedsomething.Shegrabbedahandfuloffortunecookies

thattheygaveoutaftereverymeaLbutfirstshetoreopenawrapperandcrackedacookieopenforherself.Shepoppeda

sweet,crunchypieceinhermouth.Then,sheputahandfulofcookiesintoasmalltrayandleftthekitchen.Jennysighed.

Musteringuphercourage,sheapproachedthetabicwherethetwinsandtheirparentswerefinishingtheirmeal.

Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes."Thankyoufbrcoiningtoourrestaurant!”Jenny

saidwithasmile.t4Oh,fortunecookies,Ilovethese!^^criedoneofthegirls,reachingfbrthetray.Theothersisterlookedat

Jenniecarefullyandhereyeslitupwithrecognition.Thentheyintroducedthemselvestoeachother.Everyonewasveryhappy

andtheytalkedalotabouttheirschoolandclassmates.Latertheymadeanappointmenttohangouttogether.Jennytriedto

downplaytheswellofhappinessshefelt,butshewasn'tsucceeding.

【解析】

本文是一篇读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，父母买了一家小餐馆，Jenny一家就搬到了新家。珍妮对