2026《金版教程》高考复习方案英语主题版-读后续写 第2讲 读后续写语料积累

第二讲读后续写语料积累(一)高分开头仿写句式一无灵主语开头(没有生命的名词作主语)【示例】久别重逢让这对夫妻很开心。Thereunionafterlongseparationbroughtgreatdelighttothecouple.[仿写1]Hefeltabitsadinsidehim.翻译：他的内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。改写：A__ripple/flush/wave/surge__of__sadnesswelledupinsidehim.[仿写2]Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shecouldn'tsayaword.翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。改写：Words__fled__her,__withtearsstreamingdownherface.[仿写3]Suddenlyshefeltveryexcitedwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.翻译：突然她看到一个熟悉的身影，内心涌起一阵兴奋。改写：Suddenlya__wave__of__excitementseized/tookholdof/sweptoverherwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.[仿写4]Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Inoticedaflashofmovement.翻译：我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。一瞬间的动作引起了我的注意。改写：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.A__flash__of__movementcaughtmyattention.[仿写5]WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize,Ifeltveryexcited.翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心怦怦跳。改写：WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize,my__heart__was__thumping/pounding__with__excitement.仿写句式二倒装句开头【示例】只有这样你才能学好英语。OnlyinthiswaycanyoulearnEnglishwell.[仿写1]Ayoungmansatbythelakewithabookinhishand.翻译：一位年轻的男士坐在湖边，手里拿着一本书。改写：By__the__lake__sat__ayoungmanwithabookinhishand.[仿写2]Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.翻译：当他们回到家后，他们做了很多爆米花，并将其放在特殊的袋子里。改写：Hardly__had__they__got__homewhentheymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.[仿写3]Theirmotherneverexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.翻译：在任何情况下，他们的母亲也不会想到她的一天是以这样的暖心礼物开始的。改写：Under__no__circumstances__had__their__mother__expectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.[仿写4]Jennawassoashamedthatsheshedguiltytearswithheaddrooping.翻译：詹娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。改写：So__ashamed__was__Jennathatsheshedguiltytearswithheaddrooping.[仿写5]Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.翻译：我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看着我的样子。改写：Never__will__I__forget__thewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.仿写句式三对话或独白开头【示例】“太可怕了，”这个年轻人用颤抖的声音回答道。“Awfully，”theyoungmanansweredinatremblingvoice.[仿写1]RachelcalledtoseewhogottherefirstasshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。改写：“Let's__see__who__gets__there__first！”Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.[仿写2]Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.PaulshoutedatMacandtoldhimtogetintothecar.翻译：汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对马克喊道。改写：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.“Get__into__the__car，”PaulshoutedatMac.[仿写3]Theirfathertoldthemnottopanicandhandedeachofthemawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.翻译：“别慌！”父亲告诉他们并递给每人一块湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。改写：“Don't__panic！”theirfathertoldthemandhandedeachofthemawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.[仿写4]Thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptthankinghertwins.翻译：这个世界上最幸福的妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”改写：“Thank__you,__my__honey，”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthesewords.[仿写5]Theyshoutedenthusiasticallyandcheeredforhim.翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你能做到！我们为你自豪！”改写：“Come__on!__You__can__make__it!__We__are__proud__of__you！”theyshoutedenthusiastically.仿写句式四介词短语开头【示例】孩子们高兴地找到了出路。Indelight,childrenfoundtheirwayout.[仿写1]Theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresultssurprisingly.翻译：他们好奇地瞪着眼睛看着结果。改写：In__surprise,__theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresults.[仿写2]Themandidn'tsayawordandpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.翻译：那个男人一言不发地把吉姆从摩托车上扶下来。改写：Without__saying__a__word,__themanpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.[仿写3]Soonthekitchenwasfilledwithsweetsmell.翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。改写：In__a__flash,__sweetsmellfilledtherinthekitchen.[仿写4]Wewererelievedthattheysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile.翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。改写：To__our__relief,__theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile.[仿写5]ItiswithyourrecognitionandguidancethatIwrotethearticlewell.翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。改写：Without__your__recognition__and__guidance,__Icouldn'thavewrittenthisarticlewell.仿写句式五独立主格结构开头【示例】她的衬衫被钉子钩住了，她动弹不得。Hershirtcaughtonanl,shecouldnotmove.[仿写1]Ashisfriendswillcometonight,heisbusypreparingthedinner.翻译：他的朋友今晚要来，他正忙着准备晚餐。改写：His__friends__to__come__tonight,__heisbusypreparingthedinner.[仿写2]Astherewasnobus,wehadtowalkhome.翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。改写：There__being__no__bus,__wehadtowalkhome.[仿写3]Ifweatherpermits,weshallgothereonfoot.翻译：如果天气允许，我们将步行去那里。改写：Weather__permitting,__weshallgothereonfoot.[仿写4]SoonBernardreturnedwithanemptybasketandsomecoinswereinhishand.翻译：伯纳德很快带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着一些硬币。改写：Coins__in__hand,__Bernardsoonreturnedwithanemptybasket.[仿写5]Wheneverythingwassettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.翻译：一切安排妥当，父亲离开厨房，答应他们会保密。改写：Everything__settled,__Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.仿写句式六形容词开头【示例】又累又饿，安妮跪了下来。Tiredandhungry,Annekneltdown.[仿写1]Samwascurioustoknowwhoshewas,sohetiptoedintotheroom.翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此他踮着脚走进了屋子里。改写：Curious__to__know__who__she__was,__Samtiptoedintotheroom.[仿写2]Bobwasunabletosayawordandwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.翻译：那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话也说不出来，他惊呆了。改写：Unable__to__say__a__word,__Bobwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.[仿写3]Thoughshewasweak,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.翻译：尽管很虚弱，但珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。改写：Weak__though/as__she__was,__Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.[仿写4]Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AsIwasafrdthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.翻译：突然一只小兔子从我的马匹前跳出来。我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。改写：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Afrd__that__I__might__hurt__the__lovely__small__creature,__Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.[仿写5]Asshewasspeechlessandhappy,Mumheldthetwinstightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。改写：Speechless__and__happy,__Mumheldthetwinstightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.仿写句式七副词开头【示例】悄悄地，他一句话没说离开了。Quietly,heleftwithoutsayingaword.[仿写1]Arthurskippedupthestreetjoyfully.翻译：亚瑟高兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。改写：Joyfully,__Arthurskippedupthestreet.[仿写2]Soontheforestbecameverydark.翻译：黑暗立刻笼罩了整个森林。改写：Immediately,__anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.[仿写3]Aslongasweworkhard,wecancertnlyovercomethedifficultiesweface.翻译：当然，只要我们努力，我们就能克服我们面临的困难。改写：Certnly,__wecanovercomethedifficultieswefaceaslongasweworkhard.[仿写4]Itisapparentthatheisoneoftheseextremesportsnuts.翻译：很显然他是极限运动的铁杆爱好者。改写：Apparently,__heisoneoftheseextremesportsnuts.[仿写5]IproudlytookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.翻译：我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。改写：ProudlyItookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.仿写句式八现在分词开头【示例】好奇地四处闲逛后，吉姆溜进了厨房。Wanderingaroundwithcuriosity,Jimslippedintothekitchen.[仿写1]Heslowlywalkedacrossthegrassland,medatthelionandshot.翻译：他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准了狮子后射击了。改写：Slowly__walking__across__the__grassland,__hemedatthelionandshot.[仿写2]Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagn.ThoughJanefeltdisappointed,shehadtostayaloneforanothernight.翻译：但是再也没有直升机飞来，天又黑了。简感到很失望，不得不一个人再待一个晚上。改写：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagn.Feeling__disappointed,__Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.[仿写3]ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Asshefeltrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.翻译：简醒来的时候天已经亮了。她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪行走，寻找出去的路。改写：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Feeling__refreshed,__shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.[仿写4]Afterlookingatthewell­preparedbreakfast,thethreeexchangedanunderstandingsmile.翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。改写：Looking__at__the__well­prepared__breakfast,__thethreeexchangedanunderstandingsmile.[仿写5]Heheldmyhandsandsd,“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”翻译：他握着我的手说，“祝贺你！你是好作家，继续写下去！”改写：Holding__my__hands,__hesd,“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”仿写句式九过去分词开头【示例】这篇文章写得很匆忙，错误百出。Writteninahurry,theessaywasfullofmanymistakes.[仿写1]Ashewassurroundedbyhisgrandchildren,theoldmanfeltjoyful.翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。改写：Surrounded__by__his__grandchildren,__theoldmanfeltjoyful.[仿写2]Thegirlwaslostinthought,soshedidn'tnoticetheapproachingdanger.翻译：那个女孩陷入沉思，因此没有注意到危险正在靠近。改写：Lost__in__thought,__thegirldidn'tnoticetheapproachingdanger.[仿写3]Ashewastornbysorrowandcompassion,Franklinstoodsilently,weighingwhattosay.翻译：富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，他斟酌着该说些什么。改写：Torn__by__sorrow__and__compassion,__Franklinstoodsilently,weighingwhattosay.[仿写4]Fatherwasastonishedandwasrootedonthefloor,staringatthescenewitheyebrowsfrowning.翻译：父亲很吃惊，愣在原地，皱着眉头注视着现场。改写：Astonished,__Fatherwasrootedonthefloor,staringatthescenewitheyebrowsfrowning.[仿写5]Afterhewasencouragedbymywords,Davidlookedatmewithshiningeyes,withhisbigtoothysmileonhislovelyface.翻译：受我的话语的鼓励，戴维用闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。改写：Encouraged__by__my__words,__Davidlookedatmewithshiningeyes,withhisbigtoothysmileonhislovelyface.仿写句式十动词不定式开头(多作目的状语)【示例】为了准时到达那里，我们匆忙从家里出发。Togetthereontime,wehurriedlydepartedfromhome.[仿写1]Iturnedaroundandleftquietlyinordertoavoidembarrassment.翻译：为了避免尴尬，我转身悄悄地离开了。改写：To__avoid__embarrassment,__Iturnedaroundandleftquietly.[仿写2]Thefirefighterlddownhislifeinordertosavethechild.翻译：为了救那个孩子，消防员献出了自己的生命。改写：To__save__the__child,__thefirefighterlddownhislife.[仿写3]Sheslippedintotheroomandshutthedoorsoftlytomeethercuriosity.翻译：为了满足她的好奇心，她溜进了房间并轻轻地关上了门。改写：To__meet__her__curiosity,__sheslippedintotheroomandshutthedoorsoftly.(二)高分结尾精彩结尾一点题式点题式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时，通过一两句话点明文章主旨，突出文章的立意。一般可以通过总结阅读材料写出点题式结尾。[套用句式1](Whenever)Lookingbackon/Thinkingof＋theexperience/thejourney等名词，主人公＋always/still...(无论何时)回首/想到这次经历/旅程……时，主人公总是/仍然……①Whenever__thinking__of__that__heart­warming__scene,__Jennacouldn'thelpgettingdeeplymovedbytheselflessloveandcareofherneighbors.每当想起那暖心的场景，詹娜都会情不自禁地被邻居无私的关爱深深打动。②Andnow,whenlookingbackonthatexperience,Marystillfeelsthatitwasthatexperiencethattransformedherintoanaturelover.现在，当回顾那段经历时，玛丽仍然觉得正是那段经历把她变成了一个热爱自然的人。[套用句式2]衔接语，(形容词＋)无灵主语＋sounded/echoed/rang＋inone'sears/head/mind/...……在耳边/脑海中/……回响。③Sincethen,my__father's__pln__and__encouraging__words__have__always__echoed__in__my__mind,__guidingthewayofmylife.从那时起，父亲朴实而鼓舞人心的话语就一直在我的脑海中回响，指引着我的人生道路。[套用句式3](衔接语＋)(形容词＋)无灵主语＋有灵动词(如：enlighten,remind等)＋主人公＋that...……启发/提醒某人……④Thewholeexperienceremindedmethatteamworkwaskeytooursuccessintheproject.整个经历提醒我，团队合作是我们项目成功的关键。⑤The__special__experience__enlightened__me__thatcompanyisthemostimportantfortheelderly.这次特别的经历使我明白对老年人来说陪伴是最重要的。精彩结尾二主题升华式主题升华式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时，通过一句高度凝练的话来对主题进行升华，使文章上升到一定的高度，给读者以启示。这种话往往是一些名言或谚语。[套用句式4]衔接句＋Justasthesayinggoes，＋名言/谚语……正如俗话所说的，……⑥Throughtheexperience,welearnedthathelpingpeopleinneedmakesourdayaswell.Justasthesayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”通过这次经历，我们认识到，帮助需要帮助的人也会让我们的一天变得美好。正如俗话所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”[套用句式5]Justthen,a(n)old/famoussaying/sb'swordsflashedthrough/echoedinone'smind＋“名言/谚语”．就在那时，一句老话/名言/某人的话“……”闪过某人的脑海/在某人脑海中回响。⑦Justthen,a__famous__saying__flashed__through__his__mind,__“Keepyourfacealwaystowardsthesunshine,andshadowswillfallbehindyou.”就在那时，他的脑海中闪过一句名言：“始终面向阳光，阴影自然落在你身后。”精彩结尾三人生感悟式人生感悟式结尾是指在文章即将结束时，作者通过深入反思和体验，表达对人、事、景或物的独特感悟和理解。这种结尾方式不仅是对文章主题的升华，也是对读者思考的引导和启发。[套用句式6]Notuntilthendid＋主人公＋realize/learnwhattrue＋主旨名词＋was：感悟到的道理直到那时，某人才意识到/了解到什么是真正的……：……⑧NotuntilthendidIrealizewhat__true__friendship__was:__Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.直到那时我才意识到什么是真正的友谊：患难见真情。[套用句式7]Itis/was＋主旨名词＋that...,whichsbfeltdeepinone'sheart/mind.正是……，某人的内心深深地感受到了这一点。⑨It__is__love__and__care__that__make__the__world__go__around,__whichhefeltdeepinhisheart.正是爱和关心让世界运行，他在心里深深感受到了这一点。eq\o(○,\s\up1(10))Itwasthecross­countryadventurethatwasthestarttoalastingfriendshipbetweenhimandme.正是这次越野冒险开始了我和他之间持久的友谊。精彩结尾四寓情于景式寓情于景式结尾是指在文章的结尾处描写要借用的景物，以景物衬托情感。景物的选择要与情感一致，景物为情感服务，做到情景交融。[套用句式8]With＋the＋adj.＋sunlight/wind/r/snow...sb/sthdid...随着……的阳光/风/空气/雪……，某人/物做……⑪With__the__warm__sunlight__flooding__in,__theyhuggedtogether,feelingforgiven,lovedandtrusted.温暖的阳光照进来，他们拥抱在一起，感到被原谅、被关爱和被信任。⑫Afterawholedayofvolunteeringserviceinthenursinghome,weheadedforourhome,withthesettingsunshininguponourhappyfacesappreciatively.在养老院志愿服务一整天后，我们动身回家，落日赞赏地把余晖照耀在我们愉快的脸上。[套用句式9]Despite/Inspiteofthe＋adj.＋wind/rn/storm/r/...,sb/sthdid...尽管……的风/雨/暴风雪/空气……，某人/物做……⑬Despitethebone­chillingwind,IfeltawaveofwarmthandprideasIhadgottheloveandrespectofmyclassmates.尽管寒风刺骨，但我还是感到一阵温暖和自豪，因为我得到了同学们的爱和尊重。(三)高分句式01表示“感到……情绪与情感”场景[句式1]aflush/wave/feeling/senseof＋表情绪的名词一阵……[句式2]表情绪的名词＋floodedoversb/sweptoversb/seizedsb……涌上心头1．A__flush__of__pride__swept__over__himashewatchedhischildren.当他看着自己孩子的时候，一种自豪感涌上心头。2．Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Andmuchsoonerthancouldbeexpected,Bernardreturnedwithanemptybasket.Neverbeforehadheearnedsomuchmoneyinhislife.A__wave__of__happiness__flooded__over__him．一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。比预期的要快得多，伯纳德带着一个空篮子回来。他一生中从未挣过这么多钱。他感到高兴极了。3．Tomysurprise,Ilearnedthatmyessayhadrankedfirstinthecontest.A__mix__of__excitement__and__doubt__flooded__over__me．令我吃惊的是，我得知我的作品在比赛中排名第一。兴奋和怀疑交织的感觉涌上心头。02表示“直到……才意识到……”场景[句式1]Notuntil＋时间状语＋didsbrealizethat...[句式2]Itwasonly＋时间状语＋thatsbrealizedthat...1．Not__until__then__didherealizethatsomethingwaswrong.＝It__was__only__then__thatherealizedthatsomethingwaswrong.直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。2．IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.It__was__only__then__that__I__realizedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.我看着大卫和其他赛跑者一起向起跑线走去。比赛开始了。就在那时，我才意识到跑道对小孩子来说太长了，更不用说一个患有心脏病的孩子了。3．Eageranddelighted,Iheldupthechampionshiptrophy,andnot__until__then__did__I__realizethatthejourneyofwritingwasnotonlyfilledwithdisbeliefandself­doubtbutalsosupportandself­approval.我急切又高兴地举起冠军奖杯。直到那时我才意识到写作的历程不仅充满着不相信和自我怀疑，而且还充满着支持和自我肯定。03表示“一……就……”场景[句式1]upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相当于assoonas引导的时间状语从句[句式2]immediately/directly/instantly＋从句[句式3]themoment/minute/instant＋从句[句式4]nosooner...than.../hardly...when...[句式5]atthesight/thoughtof...一看到/想到……1．The__instant__I__saw__him,__Iknewhewasthepolicemanwhohadhelpedmecarrythebox.我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。2．“IgnorewhattheplayersfromotherteamswouldsayandIbelieveyoucouldmakeit！”Upon__hearingmywords,Davidbeamedabigsmile,stoodupandmovedtowardsthestartingline.“不管其他队的队员怎么说，我相信你能做到！”听到我的话，大卫笑了笑，站起来朝起跑线走去。3．Immediately__she__heard__the__sound__of__the__bell,__shegrabbedherbagandrushedoutoftheclassroom.一听到铃声，她就抓起书包冲出教室。4．No__sooner__had__I__stepped__intothisfamiliarroomthanIsawmyteachersittingamongpilesofpapers.我一走进这个熟悉的房间就看到老师坐在成堆的试卷当中。5．Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweat__the__sight__ofthisgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.一看到这只感恩的生物我就感到一阵宽慰和敬畏，当我爬进车里开走时我知道我会永远珍惜我们共同的回忆。04表示“(因为紧张、害怕……)心跳”场景[句式1]sbcouldfeelone'sheartpoundingwildlyinone'schest某人能感受到心在胸膛怦怦直跳[句式2]one'sheartthumped/beat/racedwildly/loudly/hard某人的心怦怦直跳1．Icouldfeel__my__heart__pounding__wildlyasIwentonstagetocollecttheprize.上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。2．Heunfoldedtheletter,his__heart__racing__wildly．他打开信，心跳加速。3．Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Their__hearts__began__to__thump__wildlyastheywereafrdofbeingscoldedbytheirfather.天哪！锅里的那片面包也变黑了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们害怕被父亲责骂，心开始怦怦直跳。05表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”场景[句式1]sbcouldnot/hardlywttodosth某人迫不及待地想做某事[句式2]withoutasecondthought不假思索；毫不犹豫地[句式3]withouteventhinking毫不犹豫地[句式4]withoutdelay立即；毫不延迟[句式5]withouthesitation毫不犹豫地1．Thewaterwasfreezingcold,butwithout__a__second__thoughttheyoungmanjumpedin.水冷得刺骨，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。2．Without__delay,__heclimbedupthetreequicklytoreachfortheleaf.他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。3．OnChristmasmorning,Icould__not__wt__to__openthepackage.Tomyexcitement,itwasabrand­newproficeskateswhichIwaseagerfor.圣诞节早晨，我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是，这是一双我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。4．Heacceptedthejobofferwithout__hesitation．他毫不犹豫地接受了这个工作邀请。06表示“流泪”场景[句式1]One'seyesgotmisty./One'seyesmistedwithtears.某人泪眼模糊。[句式2]beclosetotears几乎要哭了[句式3]tearsroll/streamdownone'seyes/cheeks/face泪水从眼睛/脸颊/面部落下1．Mymotherwas__close__to__tearswhensheheardIwasadmittedtoakeyuniversity.当得知我被重点大学录取时，母亲差点儿就哭了。2．With__tears__of__gratitude__rolling/streaming__down__his__cheeks,__PeterhuggedGreentightly,saying,“You'vesavedmetoday.Icouldn'tthankyouenough.”感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下来，彼得紧紧地拥抱着格林，说，“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”3．Onthedaywhenhelefthospital,hehuggedme,his__eyes__misting__with__tears,__saying,“Youareatrulygoodnurse,thankyou.”出院那天，他泪眼模糊地拥抱着我说，“你是个真正的好护士，谢谢你。”07表示“不知道做……”场景[句式1]sbdidsth,wondering/notknowing/unsureofwhattodonext某人做了某事，接下来不知该怎么办[句式2]sbwas/wereatalosswhattodo某人不知如何是好1．Iwasdesperateatthattime,not__knowing__what__to__do__next．当时我很绝望，不知道接下来该怎么办。2．Davidsatstillwithadeepbreath,wondering__what__to__do__next.Isdgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers'thoughts.”大卫静静地坐着，深吸了一口气，不知道下一步该做什么。我轻轻地说：“除了你自己，没有人能改变你的想法。如果你想挑战自己，那与别人的想法无关。”3．Facingthesituation，Ruthfeltherheartwaspounding,andchestpnsalmosttookherbreathaway.Shestartedtosob,totallyat__a__loss__what__to__do．面对这种情况，鲁斯感到心跳加速，胸痛几乎让她喘不过气来。她开始哭泣，完全不知道该怎么办。08表示“某人想到/明白……；有了主意”场景[句式1]Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat...＝Ithit/strucksbthat...某人突然想到……[句式2](idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb＝...came/flashedintoone'smind＝...crowdedintoone'smind某人想到(主意，想法……)[句式3]one'smindbegantorace头脑开始快速转动1．Suddenlyabrilliantideaflashed__into__his__mind．他突然想到一个好主意。2．His__mind__began__to__race,__tryingtothinkofawayout.他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。3．Therewasnomealonthetable.“Let'sprepareforthepartytogetherthistime，”AuntBeatricesdgladlydressedinthesameoutfit.It__suddenly__occurred__to__Mya__thatthethemethisyearwassupposedtobe“SweetLabor,SweetSixteen”．桌上没有饭菜。“这次让我们一起准备聚会吧，”比阿特丽斯阿姨穿着同样的衣服高兴地说。米娅突然想到，今年的主题应该是“甜蜜的劳动，甜蜜的十六岁”。09表示“因……颤抖”场景[句式]tremble/shakewithfear/panic/excitement/rage...因害怕/惊慌/兴奋/愤怒……而颤抖1．Herlipstrembled__with__rageandbigtearsrolleddownhercheeks.她气得嘴唇发抖，大颗的泪珠顺着脸颊滚落下来。2．Helaythereforalongtime,shaking__with__fear．他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。3．FarmerMike'shousehadbeenagreatplaceforthelittlemouseuntilthefarmermarriedawifewhohadacat.Zigfriedshook__with__fearwhenhethoughtofit.农夫迈克的房子对小老鼠来说一直是一个好地方，直到农夫娶了一个养猫的妻子。齐格弗里德一想到这件事就吓得直哆嗦。4．Suddenly,thedonkeyutteredashrillcry.Thetigertrembled__with__fear,__thinkingthatthedonkeywasgoingtokillit.突然，驴大叫一声。老虎以为驴要把自己吃掉，吓得直哆嗦。10表示“发出……(声音)”场景[句式1]Therewereloudshoutsandcheers(from...)when...当……时，(从……)传来喊叫与欢呼声。[句式2]Therewasastormofapplause(from...)when...当……时，(从……)响起了雷鸣般的掌声。[句式3]letoutacry/scream(ofhorror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pn...)发出了……叫声1．Thenightbeforelast,justbeforedinner,whilemyfatherwaslookingthroughtheeveningpaper,hesuddenlylet__out__a__cry__of__surprise．前天晚上，就在晚饭前，我父亲在看晚报时，突然惊讶地喊了一声。2．Whilemymindwaswandering,ourperformancetimecame.Itturnedoutagreatsuccess,loud__shouts__and__cheers__from__the__audiencefillingthetheatre.当我的思绪游荡的时候，我们的表演时间到了。结果这场演出取得了巨大的成功，观众的欢呼声和喝彩声响彻了整个剧场。11表示“转折”场景[句式1]Butbadluckforsb...但是某人真不走运……[句式2]Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat...让人惊讶(高兴)/奇怪的是，原来……[句式3]...,butinvn……，但徒劳无功[句式4]...,butwithoutsuccess……，但没有成功[句式5]Butonsecondthoughts,...但是转而一想，……1．But__bad__luck__forJack,hetrippedandfelltotheground.杰克真不走运，他绊了一跤，摔在地上。2．Herfriendtriedtopersuadehertogobackhomewithhim,but__in__vn．她的朋友想劝她和他一起回家，但是白费唇舌。3．WhenIgotupandlookedoutofthebedroomwindow,Ifound,to__my__surprise,__itwassnowingheavily.当我站起来，从卧室的窗户往外看时，我惊奇地发现，天正在下大雪。12表示“心里想”场景[句式1]Aninnervoicetoldsbthat...内心的声音告诉某人……[句式2]sbthoughttooneself...某人心里想……1．An__inner__voice__told__him__thatwhathehaddonewaswrong.心里的声音告诉他，他所做的是错的。2．Thatnightaftertheguestsleft,Susansataloneinherroom.Onherbedwasthepurpledressgiventoherasabirthdaygift.She__thought__to__herself,__“Itseemsthatthedressdoesn'tlookthatbad.Actually,IlikealltheclothesMomboughtforme.”那天晚上，客人离开后，苏珊独自坐在房间里。她的床上放着作为生日礼物送给她的紫色连衣裙。她心想：“这件衣服看起来没那么糟糕。事实上，我喜欢妈妈给我买的所有衣服。”13表示“感到欣慰，放下心来”场景[句式1]...breathedasighofrelief＝...sighedwithrelief……松了一口气[句式2](Awaveof)relieffloodedoversb某人如释重负[句式3]toone'srelief...使某人欣慰/放心的是……1．Ibreathed__a__sigh__of__reliefastheplanelandedsafely.＝A__wave__of__relief__flooded__over__meastheplanelandedsafely.＝To__my__relief,__theplanelandedsafely.飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。2．Afterstudyingthemap,wefiguredoutthatourcarwasparkedoverthreekilometersaway.Sheofferedusaridebacktoourcarandweacceptedgladly.To__my__relief,__Isawourrentalcaragn.Whatablessingtohavesuchanunforgettableexperience!在研究了地图之后，我们发现我们的车停在三公里以外。她让我们搭便车过去，我们欣然接受了。让我欣慰的是，我又看到了我们租来的车。有这样一次难忘的经历真是太好了！14表示“还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中”场景[句式1]one'swordsrangoutinone'sears某人的话在耳边回响[句式2]one'sheadwasfullof...＝...crowdedintoone'smind某人脑子里充满……1．Memoriescamecrowding__into__her__mind．往事涌上她的心头。2．Myteacheroftenencouragedmetostudyhardinordertobeadmittedintoakeyuniversity,andher__encouraging__wordsstillrang__out__in__my__ears．我的老师经常鼓励我努力学习，以便考上一所重点大学，她鼓励的话仍在我耳边回响。3．My__head__was__full__ofstrangethoughtsandworries.＝Strangethoughtsandworriescrowded__into__my__mind．我的脑子里充满奇怪的想法与忧虑。15表示“经历与教训”场景[句式1]Whata/an...lessonsbtaughtme!某人给我上的多么……的一课！[句式2]Whata/an...experiencesbhad!某人有多么……的经历啊！[句式3]Downdeepinone'sheart...在某人的内心深处……[句式4]...berootedinone'smemory……植根于某人的记忆中1．Down__deep__in__his__heart,__heknewhewouldrememberwhatavaluablelessonMrGreentaughthim.＝ThevaluablelessonMrGreentaughthimwill__be__rooted__in__his__memoryforever.在他的内心深处，他知道他会永远记住格林先生给他上的多么宝贵的一课。2．Finally,theteacherannouncedKaran'steamwasthewinner.Allthechildrenburstintothunderousapplauseonhearingthat.Karanandhispartnerswalkeduptothefrontwithgreatexcitement.TheyreceivedthesurprisegiftfromMangatMadam.What__a__wonderful__experience__they__had!最后，老师宣布卡兰的队伍获胜。听到这个消息，所有的孩子都爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。卡兰和他的伙伴们兴奋地走到前面。他们收到了来自漫戈塔夫人的惊喜礼物。他们有多么美妙的经历啊！(四)高分动作表达构造动作链句式一主语＋动作A＋动作Band动作C(三个动作依次发生，三连动)【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.仿写1Hetookataxitothepolicestation.→Hestoppedataxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳上车并对司机说，“请去警察局。”仿写2Theboysjumpedintothelaketoplay.→Theboysexcitedlyrushedtothelake,quicklytookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewatertoplay.男孩们兴奋地跑到湖边，快速脱下衣服，跳入水中玩耍。仿写3Shehuggedhersontightly.→Shedashedforwardwithouthesitation,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarmstightly.她毫不犹豫地冲上前，跪下来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里。仿写4Irushedhometogetthecottonhat.→Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhatsandgrabbedthecottonone.我冲到家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那顶布帽。仿写5ShelookedatthetrophyandthankedTUNTUN.→Sheglancedatthetrophy,tookadeepbreathandsd,__“ThankTUNTUN！”她看了一眼奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢吞吞！”仿写6Macjumpedoffthebicycletoshutthedoor.→Macjumpedoffthebicyclewithoutanyhesitation,dashedtothebackdoorandslammedthedoorheavily.麦克毫不犹豫地跳下自行车，冲向后门，猛地关上门。仿写7Iwenttoschoolinahurrythismorning.→Ipulledonmycoathurriedly,grabbedmyschoolbagandcycledtoschoolthismorning.我今天早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起书包，骑着自行车去上学了。仿写8Mymumgavefiftydollarstothepooroldman.→Mymumopenedthepurse,tookoutfiftydollarsandhandedittothepooroldman.我的妈妈打开钱包，拿出五十美元，将它递给了那个贫困的老人。仿写9Shepickedupthephotoandplaceditintothealbum.→Shepickedupthephoto,staredatitforawhileandplaceditcautiouslyintothealbum.她拿起照片，盯着它看了一会儿，然后小心翼翼地把它放进相册。仿写10Jimmyquicklythrewthemeatatthefiercewolf.→Jimmyquicklypulledoutthemeat,medatthewolfandthrewitstrghttothefierceanimal.吉米快速拿出肉，瞄准狼，将其径直朝那只凶猛的动物扔了过去。构造动作链句式二Havingdone...,主谓宾(表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作)【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Having__wtedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写1Afterhavingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.→Having__queuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.排了三个小时的队后，他被告知票卖完了。仿写2Shewanderedmlesslyinthestreetforhours,thenshefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.→Having__wanderedmlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。仿写3Afterhetoldthetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.→Having__toldthetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。仿写4Aftergettingmypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.→Having__gottenmypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.得到了我会照顾母亲的承诺后，父亲很放心，把行李放进了车里。仿写5Afterfightinginthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.→Having__foughtinthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.征战多年后，这个战士回到家中，结果却发现家人已经搬走了。仿写6AfterIpromisedthatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.→Having__promisedthatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.在承诺我们会在五点前到达那里之后，当汽车抛锚时，我突然陷入了恐慌。仿写7Aftershemadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindowandexpectedthearrivalofherdaughter.→Having__madefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindow,expectingthearrivalofherdaughter.做好充分的准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。仿写8AfterreceivingtheNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathedidn'tknowwhattodo.→Having__receivedtheNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathewasatalosswhattodo.哈利·波特收到光轮2000后高兴得不知所措。仿写9Afterwtingforalongti