Unit2单元话题写作讲练（课件）-七年级英语下册课件（新教材人教版）

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Rules,Noorder单元话题写作讲练Unit2LeadinLookandsay.DoyourememberAlice’srulesathome?Alicehastomakeherbedbeforebreakfast.Alicehastohurrytoschoolbecauseshecan’tbelateforschool.LeadinLookandsay.DoyourememberAlice’srulesathome?Alicehastofinishherhomeworkandpractisethepianobeforeplayingbasketball.Alicecan’tgooutwithfriendsonweekdays.LeadinLookandsay.DoyourememberAlice’srulesatschool?Alicecan’tuseherphoneinclass.Alicemustweartheuniform.LeadinYoucan’t...Youmust...Youhaveto...Youmustn’t...Ihavesomanyrulesinmylifetoo.Thisisawful!Ineedhelp!Youcan...Know

the

rulesDiscuss

the

rulesUnderstand

the

rulesWhyisEricunhappy?Becausehehastofollowtoomanyrulesathomeandatschool.SoEricalsowritesalettertoDr.Knowtoaskforadvice.Know

the

rulesDiscuss

the

rulesUnderstand

the

rulesDearDr.Know,Canyouhelpme?I__________followtoomanyrulesathomeandatschool.I___________cleanmyroomeveryday,andI__________letmydeskgetuntidy.Atschool,I___________wearmyownclothes.I__________wearmyfavouritecapeither.Afterschool,I_____watchTV,butonlyafterIfinishmyhomework,walkthedog,anddolotsofotherthings!I__________evenrelaxatweekendsbecauseI________practicetheviolineveryday!Ineverhavefun.WhatcanIdo?Yours,EricPleasehelpcompletethemissedwords.Know

the

rulesDiscuss

the

rulesUnderstand

the

rulesDearDr.Know,Canyouhelpme?I__________followtoomanyrulesathomeandatschool.I___________cleanmyroomeveryday,andI__________letmydeskgetuntidy.Atschool,I___________wearmyownclothes.I__________wearmyfavouritecapeither.Afterschool,I_____watchTV,butonlyafterIfinishmyhomework,walkthedog,anddolotsofotherthings!I__________evenrelaxatweekendsbecauseI________practicetheviolineveryday!Ineverhavefun.WhatcanIdo?Yours,Ericcanhavetomustcan’tmustn't.haveto/musthaveto/mustcan’t/musn’tcan’t/mustn'tcan’t/mustn'tcancan’t/mustn'thaveto/mustPrewritingReadEric’sletterandfillintheblanks.DearDrKnow,Canyouhelpme?Ihaveto/mustfollowtoomanyrulesathomeandatschool.Ihaveto/mustcleanmyroomeveryday,andIcan’t/mustn’tletmydeskgetuntidy.Atschool,Ican’t/mustn’twearmyownclothes.Ican’t/mustn’t

wearmyfavouritecapeither.Afterschool,IcanwatchTV,butonlyafterIfinishmyhomework,walkthedog,anddolotsofotherthings!Ican’tevenrelaxatweekends,becauseIhaveto/must

practisetheviolineveryday!Ineverhavefun.WhatcanIdo?Yours,EricEric’shomerulesmust/hasto_____________everydayandcan’t____________________.can’twatchTVbefore_____________________,_________________,and_______________________.must/hasto_______________everydayandcant’t______atweekends.Eric’sschoolrulescan’t_________________________.can’t_________________________.cleanhisroomlethisdeskgetuntidyfinishinghishomeworkworkingthedogdoinglotsofotherthingspractisetheviolinrelaxwearhisownclotheswearhisfavouritecapPrewriting2b.Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.Eric’shomerulesmust/hasto_____________everydayandcan’t___________________.can’twatchTVbefore_____________________,_________________,and_______________________.must/hasto_______________everydayandcant’t______atweekends.Eric’sschoolrulescan’t_________________________.can’t_________________________.cleanhisroomlethisdeskgetuntidyfinishinghishomeworkworkingthedogdoinglotsofotherthingspractisetheviolinrelaxwearhisownclotheswearhisfavouritecapWhyiseachruleimportant?Whatisyouradviceforeachrule?PrewritingWhyisthisruleimportant?Atidyandcleanroommakesusfeelbetter.Youcanimproveyourself-independencebycleaningtheroombyyourself.Whatisyouradviceforthisrule?Youcanputthingsawayafterusingeverytime.Rule1:Erichastocleantheroomeveryday.2b.Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.PrewritingWhyisthisruleimportant?It’snecessaryforustodosomethingmoreimportantfirst.Bydoinghousework,webecomemoreresponsibleandindependent.It’simportanttolightenyourparents’burden.Whatisyouradviceforthisrule?Youcandohomeworkwhenyou’refreeatschool.YoucanalsothinkdifferentlythatyouwillbereallyrelaxedbywatchingTVafterhomeworkandhousework.Rule2:Ericcan’twatchTVbeforedoingalotofthings.2b.Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.PrewritingWhyisthisruleimportant?Itcanhelpusfocusonlearningratherthanclothing.Wearingtheuniformbuildsschoolspirit.Whatisyouradviceforthisrule?Youcanwearyourownclothesonweekends.Rule3:Erichastoweartheuniformatschool.2b.Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.Whilewriting2c.WriteareplytoEricasDrKnow.Givehimsomeadvice.DearEric,Iknowitcanbedifficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbegoodforus...HowtowriteareplyasDrKnow?PrewritingReadDrKnow’sletterandanalyzethestructure.ShowunderstandingandopinionreceiverwriterbeginningbodyendingExplainwhyrulesareimportantGiveadviceShowunderstandindandattitudeagainDearAlice,Yes,therearemanyrulesinlife.Buttheycanhelpyoutobecomeabetterperson.Youmustn’tbelateforclass.Thatshowsrespectforyourclassandteacher.Youcan'tuseyourphoneinclassbecauseyouneedtofocusonlearning.Youhavetowearauniformbecauseitbuildsschoolspirit.Youcanalsothinkaboutthethingsyoucando!Youcanuseyourphone

athome.Youcanrelaxafteryoufinishyourhomework.Andyoucanhangoutwithfriendsatweekends!Iknowit'shard,butrulescanhelptomaketheworldbetter.Remember:Norules,noorder!Best,DrKnowDoyouknowhow

towriteareplylettergivingsomeadvice?DearEric,I

know

it

can

be

difficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbeforus.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.____________________________________________________________________________________.Best,DrKnowYourreasonswhytherulesareimportant.Youradvicefortherules.Yourunderstandingofrules.Finishtheoutlineaboutyourfavoriteanimal.

引出话题

Reasons总结

AdviceIknowitcanbedifficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbegoodforus.Youcan’t/mustn’t/haveto...because...Youcan...Ithinktheserulesaregoodforyou.Remember:Norules,noorder.MyreplyBeginningBodyEndingPre-writingFinishtheoutlineaboutyourreply.While-writingTherearemanyrulesinmyschool.Ithinktheyarestrictbuthelpful.Ihavelotsofstrictbuthelpfulschoolrules.Differentschoolshavedifferentrules.NowIwouldliketotellyouaboutmyschoolrules.你的开头：BeginningBodyEnding_____,I

mustn’tbelateforschool.

Ihavetobeontime.

Ihavetogetupearly._______,

Ihavetokeepmyhairshortandwearaschooluniform.Itsiboring.Ican’truninthehalways.______,Imustn'tfightinschool.I

thinkit’s

goodforstudents.Ican'teatintheclassroom_________wemustkeeptheclassroom

clean.Ithinkit'sagoodidea.___________,Ican'tlistentomusicinclass,____canlistentoitafterclass.It'srelaxing.______,IamveryhappytosayIcandosportsafterschool.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmystudents.It'sveryimportanttodosports.请用连接词“first,second,third,what'smore,last,but,because,so”

等完成下面的校规的主体部分，使其流畅可读性强。FirstSecondThirdWhat’smorebecausebutLastWhile-writingBeginningBodyEndingAllinall,wemustfollowthem..Theyarestrict,

buttheyarealsoimportantfor

ourlife...Tomakeourlifebetter,let'sfollowthem.Rulesarenecessaryinlifeandschool.Iagreethatfreedomdependsonrules.你的结尾：While-writingBeginningBodyEndingSalutation(打招呼)DearEric,

Bodyparagraph(正文)Iknowhowyoufeel.Peoplealwaystellus,“Don’tdothis!”or“Youcan’tdothat!”Buttherulescanhelpus./Iknowitcanbedifficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbegoodforus.Youhaveto/must…because…Youcan’t/mustn’t…because…Therearealotofthingsyoucando.Youcan…Iknowit’shard,butrulescanhelptomakeusbetterpersonsandtheworldbetter.1)Mainidea2)Supportingdetails3)FinalsentenceClosing(结束语)Goodluck!/BestWhile-writingTherearemanyrulesinmyschool.Ithinktheyarestrictbuthelpful.First,I

mustn’tbelateforschool.

Ihavetobeontime.

Ihavetogetupearly.

Second,

Ihavetokeepmyhairshortandwearaschooluniform.Itsiboring.Ican’truninthehalways.

Third,Imustn'tfightinschool.I

thinkit’s

goodforstudents.Ican'teatintheclassroom

because

wemustkeeptheclassroom

clean.Ithinkit'sagoodidea.

What’smore,Ican'tlistentomusicinclass,but

canlistentoitafterclass.It'srelaxing.

Last,IamveryhappytosayIcandosportsafterschool.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmystudents.It'sveryimportanttodosports.Schoolsmakerulestohelpstudents.Ithinkrulesareveryimportant.Sostudentsmustfollowthem.DearEric,I

know

it

can

be

difficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbeforus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Best,DrKnowYou

must

clean

your

room

every

daybecauseitkeepsthelivingenvironmentclean

and

tidy.Thatmakesiteasiertofocusonworkorstudy.You

can’twearyourownclothesinschoolbecauseithelpsyoutofocusonlearningratherthanclothing.You

can’t/mustn’twatchTVbeforeyoufinishyourhomeworkfirstbecauseithelpsyoufocusonwhat'sreallyimportantfirst.Hereismyadvice.Youcanmakeyourbedassoonasyougetup.Itjusttakesacoupleofminutesandmakestheroomlookmuchbetter.Youcanwearyourownclothesatweekends.aquietplacetodoyourhomeworkfirst.Thiswillhelpyoufocusbetterandgetitdonefaster.ThenyoucanhavemoretimetowatchTV.YoucanfindTheyarestrict,buttheyareimportantforourlife.Withoutrules,itwouldbeamesseverywhere.Remember:Norules,noorder!Timetowrite

本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题“班级与学校规则，规则意识”。写作时要运用祈使句和情态动词来表达请求、命令、劝告等。常见的写作任务是谈论学校的一些规章制度或家规。体裁多为说明文或议论文。◆开头句①As

students,we

must

follow

the

rules.②Different

schools

have

different

rules.③Now

I’d

like

to

tell

you

something

about

my

school

rules.◆中间句①When

we’re

in

school,we

mustn’t

use

our

phones.②In

class,we

should

be

quiet

and

focus

on

learning.③I

must

make

my

bed

after

I

get

up.④When

we

meet

our

teachers,we

should

say

hello

to

them.◆结尾句①The

rules

are

hard

to

keep,but

they

can

help

us

become

better

people.②Let’s

follow

the

rules

and

build

a

strong

school

spirit.③I

think

rules

are

very

important

in

our

lives.

They’re

strict

but

helpful.【谚语积累】①A

nation

has

its

rule

and

a

family

also

has

one.国有国法，家有家规。②Rules

are

the

principles

of

being

a

good

person.规矩是做人的原则。

作为学生，你们应该遵守学校的各项规章制度。你们学校都有哪些规定呢？你觉得它们是否合理呢？请以“My

School

Rules”为题写一篇短文，简单介绍一些你们的校规，并谈谈你的看法和理由。词数不少于70。

内容提示：

1.What

are

the

rules

in

your

school?

2.What

do

you

think

of

the

rules?

参考词汇：follow

the

rules

遵守规则,get

up

起床,be

late

for

迟到,be

quiet

安静,be

kind

to

对……友好审题指导1.文体：说明文2.人称：以第一人称为主3.时态：一般现在时思路点拨优秀范文My

School

Rules

There

are

many

rules

in

our

school.

As

students,we

①must

follow

the

rules.

②First,we

must

get

up

early

and

③can’t

be

late

for

class.

When

we’re

in

school,we

④mustn’t

use

our

phones.

In

class,we

⑤should

be

quiet

and

focus

on

learning.

We

should

also

keep

our

classroom

clean

and

tidy.点评：灵活运用①must，③can’t,④mustn’t,⑤should和⑧have

to等情态动词来谈论多个校园规则，覆盖了学生应遵循的基本行为规范。②First,⑥Then,⑦One

more

thing,⑥Then,after

class,we

should

finish

our

homework

on

time.⑦One

more

thing,we

⑧have

to

wear

our

school

uniforms

on

weekdays.⑨Besides,we

should

be

kind

to

our

classmates

and

treat

our

teachers

with

respect.

The

rules

are

hard

to

keep,but

they

can

help

us

become

better

people.

Let’s

follow

the

rules

and

build

a

strong

school

spirit.⑨Besides的使用，使文章衔接得当，内容紧密，条理清晰。本篇范文语言精练，表达流畅，灵活运用了本单元所学短语follow

the

rules，be

late

for，focus

on，treat

our

teachers

with

respect和build

school

spirit等，意思表达准确。续表

假如你是Tina，你有很多家规要遵守。请给你的好朋友Julie发一封70词左右的电子邮件，告诉她你的家规并谈谈你对这些家规的看法。

内容提示：

1.What

do

you

have

to

do

at

home?

2.What

can’t

you

do

at

home?

3.What

do

you

think

of

the

family

rules?Why?审题指导1.文体：________2.人称：__________3.时态：____________应用文第