2024年高考英语分类题库考点6 书面表达

温馨提示：此题库为Word版，请按住Ctrl，滑动鼠标滚轴，调节合适的观看比例，关闭Word文档返回原板块。一、提纲作文 -1-二、图画作文/漫画作文 -3-三、图表作文 -5-四、（半）开放作文 -5-考点6书面表达提纲作文(2024·新高考Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷·应用文写作)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:(1)你完成的作品;(2)你的感想。注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,ImwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,LiHua【试题分析】第1步:审题立意体裁:记事类记叙文;时态:一般过去时为主;人称:第一人称为主,第三人称为辅;要点:你的作品内容,你的感想。第2步:谋篇布局Para.1:礼貌问候朋友,然后简要介绍你上周五参与的活动(含时间:上周五;地点:公园;人物:全班同学;事件:在公园上美术课)。Para.2:具体介绍自己的作品内容,如看见了什么、灵感来源、画了什么等。Para.3:简要总结这次活动以及你的感想。第3步:丰富内容【高级句式】篇首句1.Organizedby...,agroupof...wentto...todo...lastFriday.上周五,由……组织的一群……去……做了……2.LastFridaymarkedaspecialartclassheldinthepark.上周五在公园上了一节特别的美术课。篇中句1.Onourarrival,Isawmany...,whichinspiredmycreativity.我们一到达,我就看到许多……,这激发了我的创造力。2.Ichosetopaintalandscapefeaturingacalmlakesurroundedbyvibrantflowersandsolemntrees.我选择画一幅风景画,画的亮点是一个宁静的湖泊,湖泊周围是生机勃勃的花朵和庄严的树木。篇尾句1.Iwillneverforgetthememorableday.我永远不会忘记那值得纪念的一天。2.Ifeltasenseofpeaceandrelaxationwhilepaintingoutdoors,whichwasacompletelydifferentexperiencefromourtraditionalclassroomsetting.当我在户外画画时,我感受到了平静和放松,这与我们传统的课堂环境完全不同。【参考范文】DearChris,ImwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.LastFridaywitnessedourgoingintothepark,auniquesettingthatinspiredmetocreateapaintingoftheserenelakesurroundedbylushgreentrees.Thetranquilityofnaturewastrulycaptivating.Notonlywaspaintingoutdoorsarefreshingchange,butitalsoallowedmetoseecolorsandshapesinanewlight.Moreover,itwasasensoryfeastthatheightenedmyperceptionandappreciationforthebeautyofournaturalworldevenmore.Needlesstosay,itwasadayfilledwithcreativityandasenseofpeace.Lookingforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!Yours,LiHua(2024·北京卷·应用文写作)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:(1)建议投稿内容;(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,

Yours,LiHua第1步:审题立意(1)体裁:应用文(建议信);(2)时态:一般现在时为主;(3)人称:第三人称为主,第二人称为辅;(4)要点:介绍新中国成立75周年中国的发展成就,并简要说明理由。第2步:谋篇布局Para.1:Thepurposeofwritingtheemail.Para.2:Theintroductiontotopicsofthearticleandreasons.Para.3:Theotherdetailsandwishes.第3步:要点盘点第一段:表明写作目的,即写作背景和乐于提供写作建议。(1)很高兴知道你计划向贵校校报的“今日亚洲”栏目投稿,关注中国所取得的发展成就,以此庆祝中华人民共和国成立75周年,我写信是为了给你的文章提些建议。Excitedtoknowyourplantocontributetothe“AsiaToday”sectionofyourschoolnewspaper,focusingonChinasdevelopmentachievementstocelebratethe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeoplesRepublicofChina,Imwritingtooffersuggestionsforyourarticle.

第二段:文章主体内容。1.写作内容简介;2.简要说明理由。(2)突出中国的经济增长及其向全球经济强国的转型将是一个很好的方面。这说明了这个国家显著的进步和稳定。HighlightingChinaseconomicgrowthanditstransitiontoaglobaleconomicpowerhousewouldbeagreataspecttocover.Thisillustratesthecountrysremarkableprogressandstability.

(3)讨论中国在技术方面的进步,比如在5G和其他尖端领域的领先地位,将展示中国的创新精神。DiscussingChinasadvancementsintechnology,suchasitsleadingrolein5Gandothercutting-edgefields,wouldshowcasethenationsspiritofinnovation.

(4)你可以写一篇关于中国文化影响的简短介绍,包括中国电影、音乐和传统在全球的传播。这将为国家的发展提供一个独特的视角。YoucanwriteabriefintroductionofChinasculturalinfluence,includingthespreadofChinesefilms,music,andtraditionsglobally.Thiswillprovideauniqueperspectiveofthecountrysdevelopment.

第三段:收尾点题,补充其他细节等。(5)这些观点为中国过去75年的历程提供了一个全面的视角。我相信它们会使你的文章引人入胜,内容丰富。ThesepointsofferacomprehensiveperspectiveonChinasjourneyoverthepast75years.Ibelievetheywillmakeyourarticleengagingandinformative.

(6)期待你的深刻见解!Lookingforwardtoyourinsightfulpiece!

第4步:润色升级1.用定语从句改写句(2)。HighlightingChinaseconomicgrowthanditstransitiontoaglobaleconomicpowerhousewouldbeagreataspecttocover,whichillustratesthecountrysremarkableprogressandstability.

2.将句(4)用无灵主语合并为一个句子。TouchingonChinasculturalinfluence,includingthespreadofChinesefilms,music,andtraditionsglobally,wouldprovideauniqueperspectiveofthecountrysdevelopment.

第5步:认真誊写DearJim,

Excitedtoknowyourplantocontributetothe“AsiaToday”sectionofyourschoolnewspaper,focusingonChinasdevelopmentachievementstocelebratethe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeoplesRepublicofChina,Imwritingtooffersuggestionsforyourarticle.

Thereisavarietyofaspectsthatcanbeinvolved,rangingfromeconomy,technologyandculture.Firstly,highlightingChinaseconomicgrowthanditstransitiontoaglobaleconomicpowerhousewouldbeagreataspecttocover,whichillustratesthecountrysremarkableprogressandstability.Secondly,discussingChinasadvancementsintechnology,suchasitsleadingrolein5Gandothercutting-edgefields,wouldshowcasethenationsspiritofinnovation.Lastly,touchingonChinasculturalinfluence,includingthespreadofChinesefilms,music,andtraditionsglobally,wouldprovideauniqueperspectiveofthecountrysdevelopment.

ThesepointsofferacomprehensiveperspectiveonChinasjourneyoverthepast75years.Ibelievetheywillmakeyourarticleengagingandinformative.Lookingforwardtoyourinsightfulpiece!

Yours,LiHua

二、图画作文/漫画作文(2024·全国甲卷·书面表达)英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotodaysconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.

第1步:审题立意(1)体裁:应用文(发言稿);(2)时态:一般现在时为主;(3)人称:第三人称为主;(4)要点:从共享单车、高铁、新能源汽车三个方面介绍中国交通的发展。第2步:谋篇布局Para.1:Putforwardthetopicofyourspeech.Para.2:IntroducethedevelopmentoftransportinChinaintermsofsharedbicycles,high-speedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.Para.3:Makeaconclusionandgivepersonalthoughts.第3步:要点盘点第一段:介绍发言稿的主题(1)从马车到今天的便捷交通,中国的交通有了巨大的发展。Fromthevehicleofhorsestotodaysconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.(2)今天,我想重点介绍一些重大发展,包括共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车。TodayIdliketofocusonsomemajordevelopments,whichincludesharedbicycles,high-speedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.第二段:文章主体内容(3)首先,共享单车给我们的短途旅行带来了极大的便利,它使得短途旅行更加灵活环保。Firstofall,thesharedbicyclehasbroughtgreatconveniencetoourshort-distancetravel.Itmakesourshort-distancetravelmoreflexibleandenvironmentallyfriendly.(4)另外,高铁以惊人的速度和高效率缩短了城市和地区之间的距离,促进了经济交流与合作。Besides,thehigh-speedtrainhasamazingspeedandhighefficiency.Ithasshortenedthedistancebetweencitiesandregions,promotingeconomicexchangesandcooperation.(5)目前,先进的新能源汽车已经进入我们的生活,这有助于减少空气污染。Currently,advancednewenergyvehicleshaveenteredourlives,helpingreduceairpollution.第三段:概括总结和个人的感想(6)总之,中国交通运输的发展是惊人的。Inconclusion,thedevelopmentoftransportinChinaisastonishing.(7)它不仅提高了我们的生活水平,而且提高了中国的国际地位和影响力。IthasnotonlyimprovedourlivingstandardsbutalsoenhancedChinasinternationalstatusandinfluence.(8)因此,我们需要努力学习,为交通运输的进一步发展做出贡献。Therefore,weneedtostudyhardandmakeacontributiontothefurtherdevelopmentoftransport.(9)谢谢你们的聆听!Thankyouforlistening!第4步:润色升级1.请用动词-ing形式作状语合并句(3)。Firstofall,thesharedbicyclehasbroughtgreatconveniencetoourshort-distancetravel,makingitmoreflexibleandenvironmentallyfriendly.2.将句(4)改为with复合结构作状语。Besides,withitsamazingspeedandhighefficiency,thehigh-speedtrainhasshortenedthedistancebetweencitiesandregions,promotingeconomicexchangesandcooperation.第5步:认真誊写(参考范文)DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotodaysconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.TodayIdliketofocusonsomemajordevelopments,whichincludesharedbicycles,high-speedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.Firstofall,thesharedbicyclehasbroughtgreatconveniencetoourshort-distancetravel,makingitmoreflexibleandenvironmentallyfriendly.Besides,withitsamazingspeedandhighefficiency,thehigh-speedtrainhasshortenedthedistancebetweencitiesandregions,promotingeconomicexchangesandcooperation.Currently,advancednewenergyvehicleshaveenteredourlives,helpingreduceairpollution.Inconclusion,thedevelopmentoftransportinChinaisastonishing.IthasnotonlyimprovedourlivingstandardsbutalsoenhancedChinasinternationalstatusandinfluence.Therefore,weneedtostudyhardandmakeacontributiontothefurtherdevelopmentoftransport.Thankyouforlistening!【范文赏析】1.本文的结构清晰,观点明确,要点齐全。2.词汇、语法丰富。好词:focuson集中于;bringconvenienceto给……带来便利;flexible灵活的;environmentallyfriendly环保的;highefficiency高效;promote促进;inconclusion总而言之;notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……;makeacontributionto为……做贡献。语法及句型:恰当运用定语从句、非谓语动词、with复合结构。三、图表作文无（半）开放作文(2024·新高考Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷·读后续写)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadntheardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.

文章基本要素分析

主要人物:我——旅行者,因暴风雨延误而在维也纳转乘布拉格的旅程中遇到困难。Gunter——出租车司机,帮助我解决问题,展现了极大的友善和信任。主题:人与人之间的善意和信任,以及这种人性的美好能够跨越陌生人之间的界限,构建意外的友谊。情节故事:开端:故事开始于我计划前往布拉格参加会议的旅程。由于暴风雨,我的航班延误,几乎错过了最后一班前往布拉格的巴士。发展:我匆忙地从飞机上下来,跳进了机场的第一辆出租车,遇到了司机Gunter。由于一系列的沟通困