Unit18写作指导（课件）译林版(三起)2012英语六年级下册

Unit1Thelionandthemouse素养主题写作本单元学习了使用一般过去时以及形容词和副词来讲述一则故事。[参考词汇]longlongago,oneday,someday,thenextday,atfirst,then,atlast,weak,strong,sadly,happily,quietly,quickly...[参考句型]开头句Longlongago,therewas/were...中间句1.Oneday,...

2.Atfirst,...结尾句1.Atlast,...

2.Fromthenon,...

[时态]一般过去时 [人称]以第三人称为主[段落布局]开头介绍故事的时间、地点、人物和起因中间根据时间顺序/情节发展顺序进行叙述结尾写清楚故事的结局,可以适当总结与评价

你听过“三只小猪建房子”的故事吗?请根据所给提示,用英语写一个小故事,不少于50词。提示:buildahouse,bricks,wolf,playatrick,angry,goaway,clever

Theyboughtalotofbricksandwantedtomakeahousewithbricks.Theythoughtthiskindofhousewasstrong.Oneday,awolfwantedtoeatthethreepigs.Butthethreepigsranquicklyintothehouseandplayedatrickonthewolf.Thewolfgotveryangry,buthecouldn’tgointothehousetocatchthem.

Atlast,thewolfhadtogoawaywithnothing.Howcleverthethreepigswere!

[佳作赏析]Therewerethreepigsintheforest.Theywerebrothersandlivedwiththeirmother.Thehousewastoosmall,sotheydecidedtobuildahouseontheirown.

你听过“狐狸和乌鸦”的故事吗?请根据提示,用英语写一个小故事,不少于60词。提示:apieceofmeat,beautiful,sing,dropthemeat,runawayOneday,acrowfoundapieceofmeat.Shewashappy.Shekeptitinhermouthandflewtoatalltree.Shewasjustgoingtoeatitwhenafoxwalkedby.Thefoxwantedtoeatthemeattoo.Hestoodunderthetreeandsaidtothecrow.“Hello!Howbeautifulyoulooktoday!”Thecrowwasverygladtohearthat.Thenthefoxsaidagain,“Ihearyourvoiceisbeautifultoo.Whydon’tyousingasong?”Thecrowwasveryhappy.Shebegantosing.Whensheopenedhermouth,shedroppedthemeat.Thefoxpickedupthemeatandranawayquickly.Oneday,acrowfoundapieceofmeat.Shewashappy.Shekeptitinhermouthandflewtoatalltree.Shewasjustgoingtoeatitwhenafoxwalkedby.Thefoxwantedtoeatthemeattoo.Hestoodunderthetreeandsaidtothecrow.“Hello!Howbeautifulyoulooktoday!”Thecrowwasverygladtohearthat.Thenthefoxsaidagain,“Ihearyourvoiceisbeautifultoo.Whydon’tyousingasong?”Thecrowwasveryhappy.Shebegantosing.Whensheopenedhermouth,shedroppedthemeat.Thefoxpickedupthemeatandranawayquickly.Unit2Goodhabits素养主题写作本单元学习了使用频度副词介绍生活和学习习惯。[参考词汇]sometimes,never,always,usually,early,late,habits,havemanygoodhabits,gotobed,gotoschool,getup,havebreakfast,dohomework...[参考句型]开头句I’m...Ihavesomegoodhabits.中间句1.Ioftengetup...

2.Idomyhomework...结尾句1.Iwillkeepmygoodhabits.

2.Ishould...Ishouldn’t...

[时态]以一般现在时为主 [人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头介绍自己的情况,引出“习惯”这一话题中间介绍自己的习惯结尾说明今后的打算

以“Mygoodhabits”为题,和大家分享一下你的好习惯吧!不少于50词。[佳作赏析]Mygoodhabits

Hello,I’magoodstudent.Ihavesomegoodhabits.

Igetupearlyeverymorning.Afterbrushingmyteethandwashingmyface,Ihavebreakfast.Iusuallyhavesomebreadandmilkforbreakfast.ThenIgotoschooltohavelessons.Afterschool,Igohomeatonce.Ifinishmyhomeworkbeforedinner.Afterdinner,Ireadsomebooks.ThenIgotobedatnine.Ibrushmyteethbeforebedtime.

Iwillkeepmygoodhabits.

下面是Peter和Helen两位同学的好习惯和坏习惯,请你分别以Peter和Helen的口吻介绍一下各自的习惯。不少于50词。名字好习惯坏习惯Peter保持房间干净,上课认真听讲晚睡Helen把东西摆放得井井有条,按时完成作业不喜欢运动Hello,I’mPeter.Ihavesomegoodhabits.Ilistentomyteachersatschool.Ialsodowellathome.Ikeepmyroomclean.ButIhaveabadhabit.Igotobedlate,soIsometimesfeelsleepyinclass.Ishouldgotobedearly.Hello,I’mHelen.I’magoodgirl.Iputmythingsinorder.Ifinishmyhomeworkontime.ButIdon’tlikesport.Ishouldexercisefortwohourseveryday.Itkeepsmehealthy.Hello,I’mPeter.Ihavesomegoodhabits.Ilistentomyteachersatschool.Ialsodowellathome.Ikeepmyroomclean.ButIhaveabadhabit.Igotobedlate,soIsometimesfeelsleepyinclass.Ishouldgotobedearly.Hello,I’mHelen.I’magoodgirl.Iputmythingsinorder.Ifinishmyhomeworkontime.ButIdon’tlikesport.Ishouldexercisefortwohourseveryday.Itkeepsmehealthy.Unit3Ahealthydiet素养主题写作本单元学习了如何在日常生活中养成健康的饮食习惯。[参考词汇]ahealthydiet,begood/badfor...,should/shouldn’t...,forbreakfast/lunch/dinner,drinkalotofwater,eatsomefruit,somemeatandvegetables...[参考句型]开头句Inahealthydiet,thereis...中间句1....isgoodfor...

2.Weshould/can...结尾句Doyouhaveahealthydiet?Let’shaveahealthydietandbehealthy!

[时态]一般过去时、一般现在时

[人称]以第一、三人称为主[段落布局]开头介绍健康饮食结构,引出话题中间说明哪些饮食习惯是健康的,哪些是不健康的,并提出建议结尾反问读者,引发思考;发出呼吁,表达美好祝愿

请你根据表格,描述Jack过去和现在的饮食习惯。不少于6句话。过去现在汉堡、巧克力、糖果……蔬菜、水果、鱼肉……

Jackdidn’thaveagooddietbefore.Healwayshadsomehamburgersforbreakfast.Afterlunch,heoftenatetoomuchchocolateandtoomanysweets.HealsodranklotsofCola.Thesewerebadforhishealth.Now,hehasahealthydiet.Heeatsvegetablesandfruiteveryday.Heofteneatsfishandeggs.Theyaregoodforhim.

Let’slearnfromJack.Wecanalsohaveahealthydietandkeephealthytogether!

[佳作赏析]Inahealthydiet,thereisalotofrice,fruit,vegetablesandsoon.

请以“Howtohaveahealthydiet”为题写一写健康饮食。不少于50词。HowtohaveahealthydietInahealthydiet,weshouldhavemanydifferentkindsoffood.Weshouldeatalotofriceandbread.Weshouldeatlotsofvegetablestoo.Wecanhavesomemeatandfishinourmeals.Wecanalsohaveafeweggseveryweek.Milkisgoodforus.Wecandrinksomemilkeveryday.Sweetfoodisnotgoodforourteethandhealth.Weshouldn’teatalot.Let’shaveahealthydietandbehealthy!Inahealthydiet,weshouldhavemanydifferentkindsoffood.Weshouldeatalotofriceandbread.Weshouldeatlotsofvegetablestoo.Wecanhavesomemeatandfishinourmeals.Wecanalsohaveafeweggseveryweek.Milkisgoodforus.Wecandrinksomemilkeveryday.Sweetfoodisnotgoodforourteethandhealth.Weshouldn’teatalot.Let’shaveahealthydietandbehealthy!Unit4Roadsafety素养主题写作本单元学习了道路安全知识和安全行驶的一些规则。[参考词汇]roadsafety,must/mustn’t,keep/staysafe,thegreen/redman,lookright/left,lookatthetrafficlights,lookoutfor...[参考句型]开头句Therearemanybusyroadsinthecity.中间句1.Wemust/mustn’t...

2.Tokeepsafe,wecan...

3.Tocrosstheroadsafely,wemust...结尾句Itisimportantforusto...

[时态]一般现在时 [人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头点明主题中间展开说明过马路时必须遵守的规则与禁止的事情结尾首尾呼应,再次强调遵守交通规则、安全过马路的重要性

请以“Howtocrosstheroadsafely”为题写一篇短文,呼吁同学们要安全过马路。[佳作赏析]Howtocrosstheroadsafely

Therearemanybusyroadsinourcity.Howcanwecrossthemsafely?

First,wemustlookforazebracrossing.Then,wemustlookatthetrafficlights.Whenthelightisred,wemustn’tcrosstheroad.Wemustwaitonthepavement.Whenthereisagreenman,wemustfirstlookleft,thenrightandthenleftagain.Afterthat,wecancrosstheroad.

Everyoneshouldfollowtherulesandstaysafeontheroad.

请根据图片提示,以“Classroomrules”为题,介绍你的班规。不少于5句话。

Wemustlistentoourteachersinclass.Wemustn’trunorplayintheclassroom.Weshouldn’tspeakloudly.Weshouldn’ttalkinclass.Weshouldstudyhard.Weshouldkeepourdesksandchairscleanandtidy.Wemustn’teatordrinkintheclassroom.Theseareourclassroomrules.Wemustfollowthem.Wemustlistentoourteachersinclass.Wemustn’trunorplayintheclassroom.Weshouldn’tspeakloudly.Weshouldn’ttalkinclass.Weshouldstudyhard.Weshouldkeepourdesksandchairscleanandtidy.Wemustn’teatordrinkintheclassroom.Theseareourclassroomrules.Wemustfollowthem.ClassroomrulesLook,theseareourclassroomrules.Look,theseareourclassroomrules.Unit5Aparty素养主题写作本单元学习了用一般将来时描述聚会安排。[参考词汇]...iscoming,...is/aregoingto...,singasong,watchafilm,haveagoodtime...[参考句型]开头句...iscoming.中间句...is/aregoingto...结尾句1....is/aregoingtohaveawonderfulday.

2....willhaveagoodtime.

[时态]一般将来时 [人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头介绍举办聚会的原因、时间和地点中间介绍大家为聚会做的准备结尾表示自己对聚会的期待

请你以“PlansforChildren’sDay”写一写你的儿童节计划吧!不少于50词。[佳作赏析]PlansforChildren’sDay

Children’sDayiscoming.Weareveryexcited.WearegoingtohaveapartyinourclassroomonChildren’sDay.

Mikeisgoingtoplaythepiano.

Lucyisgoingtothinkofsomepartygames.

IamgoingtosinganEnglishsong.Wearegoingtoplaywithballoons.Attheendoftheparty,we’regoing

towatchafilmtogether.

Ihopewewillhavealotoffun!

实验小学六(3)班将举办一场聚会,涛涛、玲玲、兵兵、贝贝和Mike正在为聚会做准备。请你以“Aparty”为题发挥想象,写一写他们分别做了什么准备,不少于5句话。ApartyThechildrenaregoingtohaveapartyintheclassroom.Mikeisgoingtobringsomeballoons.Linglingisgoingtobringsometoysfromhome.Taotaoisgoingtobringsomefruit.Bingbingisgoingtobringsomesnacksanddrinks.Beibeiisgoingtothinkofsomepartygames.Theyareallexcited.Theywillhaveagoodtime.Thechildrenaregoingtohaveapartyintheclassroom.Mikeisgoingtobringsomeballoons.Linglingisgoingtobringsometoysfromhome.Taotaoisgoingtobringsomefruit.Bingbingisgoingtobringsomesnacksanddrinks.Beibeiisgoingtothinkofsomepartygames.Theyareallexcited.Theywillhaveagoodtime.Unit6Aninterestingcountry素养主题写作本单元学习了如何介绍国家或城市。[参考词汇]alargeandbeautifulcountry,interestingplaces,enjoylotsofnicefood...[参考句型]开头句1.I’lltellyou...

2....is...中间句1.It’s...

2.You’llfind/see/enjoy...结尾句1.Welcometo...

2.Comeandvisit...

3.Doyouwanttogoto...?

[时态]一般现在时 [人称]以第二人称为主[段落布局]开头简单介绍对该城市/国家的整体印象中间从天气、运动、美食等不同角度介绍该城市/国家的风土人情结尾对读者发出邀请

请你用英语写一段解说词向外国友人介绍中国。不少于60词。[佳作赏析]Chinaisagreatcountry.

Therearelotsofinterestingplaces,suchastheGreatWallandtheBund.Thesceneryisverybeautiful.TherearemanybigcitiesinChina.BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Shanghaiisabigmoderncity.Lotsofvisitorscometovisitthemeveryyear.Youcaneatsomedeliciousfood,likejiaoziandtangyuan.

PeopleinChinaloveplayingtabletennis.

WelcometoChina!

请根据表格内容,向外国友人介绍苏州。要求语句通顺,书写规范,不少于50词。CityBasicInformationFoodOtherFeatureSuzhouRichhistoryCalledthe“VeniceoftheEast”Squirrel-shapedMandarinFishBraisedLion’sHeadSilkproductionYouwilllikethefoodhere.Squirrel-shapedMandarinFishandBraisedLion’sHeadarepopularchoicesamongbothlocalsandvisitors.Suzhouisalsoknownforitssilkproduction.Itisfamousforitsbeautifulsilkproducts,includingqipao,scarvesandartworks.WelcometoSuzhou!Youwilllikethefoodhere.Squirrel-shapedMandarinFishandBraisedLion’sHeadarepopularchoicesamongbothlocalsandvisitors.Suzhouisalsoknownforitssilkproduction.Itisfamousforitsbeautifulsilkproducts,includingqipao,scarvesandartworks.WelcometoSuzhou!Suzhouisacitywitharichhistory.Itiscalledthe“VeniceoftheEast”.Suzhouisacitywitharichhistory.Itiscalledthe“VeniceoftheEast”.Unit7Summerholidayplans素养主题写作本单元主要学习了如何介绍暑假计划。[参考词汇]summerholiday,will,first,next,then,visit,eat,havealotoffun...[参考句型]开头句Thesummerholidayiscoming.Iwill...中间句First...Next...ThenI/wewill...结尾句1.Iwillhavelotsoffunthissummer.

2.Ithinkitwillbeanicesummerholiday...

[时态]一般将来时 [人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头开篇点明主题中间按照时间的先后顺序或where、what等关键词的提示,介绍自己的暑假计划结尾表达自己对这个假期的期待或者其他感受

请以“Mysummerholidayplans”为题,写一篇小作文介绍你的暑假计划。[佳作赏析]Mysummerholidayplans

Thesummerholidayiscoming.I’mveryexcited.Ihavemanyplansforthesummerholiday.

IwillgotoBeijingtovisitmyaunt.Iwillstaytherefortwoweeks.Iwillreadsomebooksandhavedrawinglessons.Doingsportisveryimportant.Iwillruninthemorningandgoswimmingwithmyfather.Iwillalsoplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Icanalsohelpmymotherdosomehousework,suchaswashingthedishesandsweepingthefloor.

Iwillbehappythissummerholiday.

暑假快到了,实验小学六(1)班的老师和同学们正在谈论自己的暑假计划。来自英国的Jack将乘飞机回到伦敦,他将在那儿待一个月。Lucy和Lily将要去北京看望她们的爷爷奶奶,她们还将参观天安门广场和颐和园。MrsBlack将带她的儿子John去香港的迪士尼乐园和海洋公园。他们的计划很精彩吧!请根据以上提示,介绍他们的计划吧!JackwillgobacktoLondonbyplane.Hewillstaythereforamonth.LucyandLilywillgotoBeijingandvisittheirgrandparents.TheywillalsovisitTian’anmenSquareandtheSummerPalace.MrsBlackwilltakehersonJohntoDisneylandandOceanParkinHongKong.Theywillhaveawonderfulholiday.JackwillgobacktoLondonbyplane.Hewillstaythereforamonth.LucyandLilywillgotoBeijingandvisittheirgrandparents.TheywillalsovisitTian’anmenSquareandtheSummerPalace.MrsBlackwilltakehersonJohntoDisneylandandOceanParkinHongKong.Theywillhaveawonderfulholiday.Thesummerholidayiscoming.Theteacherandstudentsaretalkingabouttheirplansforthesummerholiday.Thesummerholidayiscoming.Theteacherandstudentsaretalkingabouttheirplansforthesummerholiday.Unit8Ourdreams素养主题写