考研英语（写作）模拟试卷39

考研英语（写作）模拟试卷39

一、大作文（本题共5题，每题7.0分，共5分。）

1、Parents*BurdenWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyour

essay,youshouldI)describethedrawingbriefly,2)interprelitsintendedmeaning,and

3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,parentsareholdinguptheirson.Surroundingthemare

numerousexpensestheyhavetocover:rangingfrompaymentfbrkid'sinterestclassesto

nutritionalmeals,fromschooluniformstopurchasingahousenearagoodschool.This

pictureillustratestheheavyfinancialburdenbornbyparents,especiallytheexorbitant

costoftheirkids'education.Inmyopinion,itisnotnecessaryfbrparentstoentertheir

kids'namesdownfbrvariousinterestclassesorafter-classschools.Insteadofforcing

theirkidstolearn,parentsneedtounderstandwhattheirkids,interestsare.Forexample,

iftheirchildsimplydoesnotlikestudyingmusicbutisreallygoodatplayingchess,itis

advisablethatparentssendtheirkidtoachessschoolandsavethemoneywhichwould

otherwisebespentonmusicinterestclasses.Toaccommodatechildren'sinterestisthe

bestwayofeducatingthem,becausetheywouldbemotivatedtolearnthingstheyenjoy,

andhaveabetterchanceofstickingtothem.Inconclusion,educationisindeeda

valuableinvestment,butturningablindeyetokids,interestisarecklessonethatwould

onlyaddtoparents'financialburden.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了一对父母为了教养孩子所承担的大堆费用，而其中

很大一部分是花在教育上，这不禁让我们反思现代教育成本之大。根据这一思路，

并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段箧要描绘图片，并指出图片的意

图：父母在教养孩子方面承担着巨大的经济压力，特别是在孩子的教育方面。第

二段提出个人看法：父母不必为孩子报读过多的兴趣班或补习班，不要强迫孩子去

学习，而要了解孩子真正的兴趣在哪。从孩子真实的爱好出发去教育孩子，才是真

正有价值的投资。第三段总结全文。

2、OutsidetheExaminationVenueWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthe

drawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainits

ints.

标准答案：Inthepicture,aplaceforcollegeentranceexamisfeatured.Underthe

scorchingsun,manyparentsareholdinganumbrella,waitingeagerlyoutsidethe

entrance.Thispictureimpliesthatparentsattachtoomuchemphasisoncollegeentrance

exam,consideringitas"theexamthatcanchangeakid'slife".Despitetheharsh

weather,parentsshowtheiremotionalsupportbystandingoutsidetheexamination

venue.Inmyview,parentsareoverestimatingtherolecollegeentranceexam,playsin

theirchildren'slife.Parentsholdthatsuccessintheexammightmeanabetterchanceof

receivingbetterhighereducation,gettingabetterjobofferandhencelivingabetterlife.

Nevertheless,theyneedtorealizethatlifeisneverthatsimpleanddeservesdiversified

interpretation.Forinstance.BillGatesdroppedoutofcollegeandstartedhisown

company.Hiscourage,visionanddeterminationarcallthemoreimportantthanagood

gradeinanexam.Hewouldnotbeassuccessfulasheisifhehadstucktothebeaten

path.Inconclusion,parentsshouldadoptanunbiasedviewpointoncollegeentrance

exam.Itisimportant,ofcourse,butnotthatimportanttoequateitwithlife-and-death

matter.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了一群家长在高考的考场外顶着烈日等待孩子的情

景。从家长的着急程度可以看出，高考被赋予了过大的期待。根据这一思路，并按

照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：

家长过于看重高考，认为高考是“能改变孩子一生的考试第二段提出个人看

法：家长应该正确看待高考。高考的成功无疑能给孩子带来一定优势，但这并不意

味着高考失败了就不能成功。以比尔?盖茨主动放弃大学教育为例，说明人生轨迹

可以多样化，不必全部冲注在高考上。第三段总结全文。

3、EducationFeesWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyour

essay,youshould1)(.meaning,and3)

giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,araggedstudentisbentoverbyalargebagofmoneysaved

forhiscollegetuition.Drenchedinsweat,heisploddinglaboriouslytoacollege.This

pictureillustratestheheavyfinancialburdenthatsomeimpoverishedstudentshaveto

takeonwhentheyareincollege.AsfarasIamconcerned,thegovernmentand

universitiesshouldadoptsomemeasurestoeasestudents'financialburden.First,

interest-freeloanscouldbeissuedtostudentswhohavetroublepayingfortheirtuition.

Onlyaftertheygraduateandfindajobwouldtheyneedtopayofftheirdebts.Second,

universitiesmayendeavortoreachouttosomeenterprisesforfinancialsupport.For

instance,ifauniversityisfamousforitsjournalismmajors,itcouldsolicitfinancial

assistancefromthemediaindustry.Thus,thetuitionofacertainnumberofstudents

couldbecoveredbynewspapers,magazinesorbroadcastcompanies.Ortheycouldoffer

part-timejobstohelpthedisadvantagedstudentsout.Inconclusion,highereducation

shouldnotbemadeinaccessibletostudentssimplybecausetheycannotaffordit.The

governmentanduniversitiesshouldtrytohelpthesefuturetalents.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了♦名出身贫寒的学生背着一大袋学费到大学报到的

情景。学生被压弯了腰，可见大学学费对他的压力不小。根据这一思路，并按照题

目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：贫

困的大学生承受着很大的教育经济负担。第二段提出个人看法：政府和大学要采

取一些措施来减轻大学生的经济负担。其一，可向经济有困难的学生开放贷款，帮

助他们解决求学期间的学费压力。其二，学校可向外界寻求经济支持。第三段总

结全文。

4、TheArtsClassandtheScienceClassWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthe

drawing.Inyouressay,youshouldI)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainits

intendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,twolargehandsaretearingapartagroupphoto.Ontheleft

markedby"artsclass"aremostlyfemalestudents,whilethe"scienceclass"ontheright

mainlyconsistsofmalestudents.Thispictureseemstodeplorethepracticeofdividing

studentsintotwogroups,namelyartsandscience,inseniorhighschoolinChina,raising

thequestionofwhetherthisdivisionisjustified.AsfarasIamconcerned,thedivisionis

necessarybeforewefindabetterchoice.First,thedivisionreducesstudents*studyload.

Unlikestudyingninesubjectsinthenon-divisionscenario,studentsonlyneedtofocuson

sixsubjectsinthedivisionscenario,whichoffersareductionofonethirdofstudyload.

Second,thedivisionenablesstudentstofixtheirattentiononthesubjectstheyare

interestedandexcellentin.Inconclusion,thedivisionmaypreventourstudentsfrom

beingajack-of-all-tradcs,anditmayseemawkwardtoseeonlyafewboystudentsinan

artsclassorafewgirlstudentsinascienceclass,butitisindeedthebestcompromisewe

canmakenow.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻划了我国学生在高中时期文理分科的情景。从图上一双

大手撕开班级照片来看，文理分科似乎比较残酷，使一个班级男女生比例悬殊。根

据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，

并指出图片的意图：谴责高中时期文理分科的做法，并质疑这种做法的合理性。

第二段提出个人看法：文理分科有其存在的合理性。其一，文理分科可使学生把主

要的学习时间限于文科或理科，减轻学习负担。其二，分科能让学生把精力集中于

他们感兴趣和擅长的科目。第三段总结全文。

5、CountlessExamsWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyour

essay,youshould1)(/k：ndedmeaning,and3)

学海无涯，苦命学生

giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Ascanbeseeninthepicture,astudentisrowingaboatlaboriouslyacross

thesea.Theboatisfilledwithallkindsofexampapers.Underthepicture,thecaption

reads:"Endlessexams,poorstudents!"Thispicturetriestodrawpeople'sattentionto

themagnitudeofthestudyloadshoulderedbyChinesestudents,whoaremuchconsumed

byvarioustests.Inmyopinion,thestudyloadofstudentsshouldbelessened.Chinese

studentsandteachersarcmuchconcernedwithgettinggoodgrades.Theyarcexam-

orientedandprioritizet