读后续写材料

秋季班续写讲义及额外材料补充

材料一

续写必背句子（每日背诵20句）

I.她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。Shetriedtohideheranger.（hideyourdisaDDoinimenl/anger…掩饰...）

2.地笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。Shelaughedtohidehernervousness.

3.这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。Thetreatmentoffersarayofhopeforcancersufferers

（arayofhope/light•线希里/光明）

4.一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。Raysoflightfilteredthroughthetrees.

5.池的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。

Hisstatementwasgreetedwithcriesofastonishmentandanger.

（begrccicdwilh/bysih被报以...）

6.走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。Completesilencegreetedusasweenieredtheroom.

7.也来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。

Ifeltarushofexcitementwhensheanived.

（arashof/asurgeof7awaveofanger/excitement/gratitude...一阵...）

8.业心中突然涌起•阵嫉妒。Arushofjealousysweptthrough（over）her.

9.烟在空中缭绕。Thesmokehungintheair.

（mist/smoke/smellhangsintheair在空中缭绕）

10.小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。Athickmisthungoverthetown.

11.乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。

Joe'sbeenillforweeksnow-it'sreallydragginghimdown.

（dragsbdown使人感到不愉快）

12.福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。Foresterstaredathiscar,tremblingwithrage.

（trembling/shakingwithrage气得浑身发抖）

13.卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。Sobbingwithrage,Carolwastakentothehospital.

14.他气得满脸通红。Hisfacewasredwithrage.

15.也嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。Hermouthquiveredslightlyasshet.imedaway.

16.他气得声音都打战了。Hisvoicewasquiveringwithrage.

17.好运在最后时刻降临到她头上。Luckhadcomeherwayattheverylastmoment.

（sthcomesb'sway意外地落在某人头上）

18她发现有个高高的黑影在注视着她。Shewasawareofatalldarkfigurewatchingher

19.他感到风在他脸上吹拂。Hewasawareofthewindinhisface.

20.他有时间反思他的成功和失败。Hehadtimetoreflectonhissuccessesandfailures.

（reflecton...反思；仔细思考...）

21.他惊慌地发现自己的车不见了。Hewasalarmedtodiscoverthathiscarwasgone.

（bealannedtosee/hear...惊慌地看到;听到…）

22.蒂姆是个笨手笨脚的孩子，老是捡到家具上。Timwasaclumsyboy,alwaysbumpinginto（hefurniture,

（bumpintosb/sth撞到...）

23.我吃力地下床走进浴室。1draggedmyselfoutofbedandintothebathroom.

（dragyourselfto/into/outof...费力地走至必进/出某处）

24.他停下来歇口气，然后继续上山。Hepausedforbreath,（hencontinuedupthehill.

25."不是的。”他不假思索地答道。"No,"hereplied,withoutpausingforthought.

26.查尔斯悲痛欲绝。Charleswasovercomewithgrief.

27.他的目光落在她的包上。"你是不是要去什么地方？"Hiseyesfellonherbag."Areyougoing

somewhere?"（sb'seyes/gaze/glancefall（s）onsth某人的目光落在某物上）

28.只有一个人尽力帮助我们，其余H勺人都只是一声不吭地袖手旁观。Onlyonemantriediohelpus,iherest

justlookedoninsilence.

29.他腾地站起身，冲过去追她"Hesprangtohisfeetandrushedafterher.

（springtoone'sfeet一跃而走己）

30.远处雷声隆隆。Thunderrolledinthedistance.

31.汤姆在露西身旁坐下，露西翻了个白眼。LucyrolledhereyesasTomsatdownbesideher.

32.她气色特别好，满面红光。Shelookedexceptionallywell,glowingwithhealth.

33.她抬头凝望着他,脸上洋溢着幸福。Shegazedupathim,glowingwithhappiness.

（glowwithpride/joy/pleasure由于自豪/高兴等而容光焕发）

34."唉，我们现在对此无能为力。”她叹口气说。"Well,there'snothingwecandoaboutitnow,"shesighed.

35.弗朗基凝望着窗外，深深地叹了口气。Frankiestaredoutofthewindowandsigheddecply（heavily）.

36.想到自己错过的一个个机会,他绝望地叹了口气。Hesighedwithdespairatthethoughtofallthe

opportunitieshehadmissed.

（sighwithdespair绝望地叹了口气）

37.他紧紧抓着我的手臂，快步往门口走去。

Hetookafirmgripofmyarmandmarchedmetowardsthedoor.

（takeafirmgrip/hold/graspof...紧抓;紧握...紧握,抓牢grip）

38.她脸上闪过十足的仇恨表情。Alookofpurehatredflashedacrossherface.

39.她在花园里跪着除杂草。Shewasonherknees,weedingthegarden.

（onyourknees=kneel跪着）

40.蒂姆跪下来开始祷告。Timfelltohiskneesandstartedtopray.

（sink/fall/drop（oyourknees跪下）

41.汤姆跪卜,来轻轻拍了拍那只狗。Tomkneltdownandpattedthedog.

42."随你爱待多久都行。"米歇尔愤怒地瞪了他"You'rewelcometostayaslongasyoulike."Michelle

shothimafuriousglance.

（shootsbalook/glance=shootaglanceatsb迅速地看某人一眼）

43.杰克焦虑地看了母亲一眼。Jackshotananxiouslookathismother.

44.值得表扬的是，杰米始终保持冷静。ToJamie'scredit,heremainedcalm.

（tosb'scredit值得赞扬某人的是）

45.应该感激菲奥娜使■切得以顺利进行。CreditmustgotoFionaformakingsureeverythingran

smoothly.

（Creditmustgotosbfordoingsth...应•友感激某人做了...）

46."I'vepassedallmyexams,"heannouncedwithsatisfaction.

"我通过了所有的考试。”他满意地宣布。（wiihsaiisfaciion满意地）

47.他羡慕地看着其他人。Hewatchedtheotherswithenvy.

（withenvy羡慕地:嫉妒地）

48.我看到他们在一起就感到一阵嫉妒。IfellarushofenvywhenIsawthemtogether.

（arushofenvy一阵嫉妒）

49.她石,得出其他女孩都很眼红。Shecouldseethatalltheothergirlsweregreenwithenvy.

（begreenwithenvy=feelalotofenvy眼红:感到嫉妒）

50.一阵喜悦涌上她心头。Asuddenwaveofjoysweptoverher.

（awavesweeps/washesoversb一阵…充满某人心头）

51.HethrewAnnaabigsmile.他对安娜粲然一笑。

（thnnvsbalook/glance/smile朝某人看了看/瞥了一眼/笑了笑）

52.他瞥了康纳一眼。HethrewaglanceatConnor.

53.Aftertheexplosion,aterriblesilencefelluponthescene.

爆炸之后，现场陷入一片可怕的寂静。（silencefallson/uponsth…陷入一片可怕的寂静）

54.一声高声尖叫打破了沉寂。Aloudscreamshatteredthesilence.

（break/shatterthesilence打破了沉寂使破碎）

55.我鼓起勇气一个人走了出去。Ipluckedupthecouragetogooutbymyself.

（pluckup（hecouragetodosth鼓起勇气做...）

56.救护车赶到时，司机仍然神志清醒。Thedriverwasstillconsciouswhentheambulancearrived.

57.想到要见•位真正的电影明星，他们就满心激动。

Theywerefullofexcitementatthethoughtofmeetingarealmoviestar.

（befullof/filledwithexcitement满怀激动）

58.那天早晨他醒来时情绪亢奋。Hewokeupthatmorningwithafeelingofexcitement.

（asense/feelingofexcitement激动的心情）

59.随着婚礼临近，她越来越兴奋。Herexcitementgrewasthedayoftheweddingcamenearer.

（sb'sexcitementgrows某人越来越兴奋）

60.她打开信时激动得双手颤抖。Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedtheletter.

（betremblingwithexciiemeni激动得宜发抖）

61.我一时激动,忘了拿钱包。Inalltheexcitement,Ileftmywalletbehind.

（in:heexcitement/inyourexcitement某人一时激动）

62.想到要去迪士尼乐园，孩子们激动不已。

ThechildrenwerefilledwithexcitementatthethoughtofvisitingDisneyland.

63.格林这会儿站了起来，气得全身直哆嗦。Greenewasonhisfeetnow,hisbodytremblingwithrage.

64.他俯过身来在我耳边低语。Hebenttowardsmeandwhisperedinmyear.

65.亚当在上班路上愉快地吹着口哨。Adamwhistledhappilyonhiswaytowork.

66.他们听着风在树林中呼啸oTheylistenedtothewindwhistlingthroughthetrees.

67.本悄悄地溜出了房间。Benslippedquietlyoutoftheroom.

68.Hetightenedhishold,refusingtolethergo.他抓得更紧了,不让她走。

69.我抓住她的手，小心地带她离开。Itookholdofherhandandgentlyledheraway.

70.抓住绳子爬上来。Grabholdoftheropeandpullyourselfup.

71.Thereweretearsinhereyes,buthervoicewassteady.

她眼里含着泪水，但声音很平静。

材料二

高分情绪描写

一、情绪描写之笑

smilebrightly:grinatsb:laugh:beam:light（sth）up:lightupwith:burstintolaughter:burstoutlaughing：

wearahright/l）roadsmile;givesbasnule

学一学：

beam:smileveryhappily

例：获胜者满意地笑了。

译法一：Thewinnerbeamed/smiledwithsatisfaction.

译法二：Thewinnerworeasatisfiedrmileonhisface.

lightup:ifsomeone'sfaceoreyeslightup,theyshowpleasure,excitementetc

lightupwith：HiseyeslitUDwithlaughter.

Herfacelitupwithpleasure.

lights【hup:iomakesomeone'sfaceoreyesshowpleasureorexciiemem

SuddenlyabriahtsmilelitUDherface/eses.

练一练：

看到直升匕机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。

［译法_］:Atthesiuhtof［hehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

【译法.：】：Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

［译法三］：Themomentshecaughtsightefthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.

［译法四］：Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eves.

二、情绪描写之高兴激动」

V.dance;whistle;junip/leapwithjoy;feelasurgeofhappiness/delighi/joy/excitement;beovercomewith

happines/delight/joy/excitement;(one'seyes)twinkle；(one'sheart)beat/poundwildly

Adj.happy;delighted;overjoyed;excited;thrilled;wildwithjoy

练一练：

当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。

【译法一］：Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.

［译法二］：Whensheknew(heresultof(hetest,here、estwinkledwithexcitement.

［译法三］：Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwasDoundiniwithwildioy.

［译法四】：Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,,awildexcitementtookholdofher.

【译法五】:Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.

【译法六］：Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.

三、情绪描写之生气「

feel/geiangry/furious：feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stonnoutoj7into/off;stonn(sayangrily);

sth.makessb'sbloodhoil(sthmakessbextremelyangry);claspone,shands:clenchone'sfists/teeth:speechless

练一练：

Sam感到非常生气。

【译法一】：Samfeltveryangry.

［译法二］：Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.

［译法三］：Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom.slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.

［译法四］:Boilinuwithraqe,Samshookhisfistalme.

【译法五】：Filledwithfury,Samwasunablet。utterasingleword.

四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦

sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;beovercomewith

sadness

练一练：

她伤心不已。

［译法一］：Shefeltextremelysad.

［译法二］：Asadnesscameoverher.

【译法三)：Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.

【译法四】：Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.

【译法五】：Feelingasur-eofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryiiwbitterly.

【译法六］：Sadnesssurqin，withinher,sheburstintotears.

五、情绪描写之哭

cn^;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutending;(one'seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtears

练一练：

I.他哽咽欲哭。Alunwcametohisthroat.

2.她的双眼哭得通红Hereveswareredfromerving.

3.她的眼里满含汨水。Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.

4.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.Tearscoursed/trickled/slreamed/randownhercheeks.

5.Oliver独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水Aloneiniheroom.Olivercriedbitter,lonely

tears.

6.Wilbur哭着直到睡着。Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.

六、情绪描写之害怕：

frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;be

rootedtothespot;freeze;runaway:flee;one'skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;

练一练：

我感到很害怕。

【译法一】：I加洋veryfri-htened/scared/nanieked.

［译法二］：Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.

［译法三］:Istoodrootedto(hespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.

【译法四】：Ifeltsoscaredihatmythroatlightenedandmykneesfellweak.

【译法五】：Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.

［译法六］：Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror:mypalmssweating.

材料三(背诵版)

Groupone(1-10)

01.Onlearningthetruth,Itotallydumbfounded(completelyshocked).Inasplitsecond,myheartstarted

tobeachingandcountlessthingsflashedthroughmymind.

02.Asthefamilywalkedtothedoortoleave,themothercamerunningback,gavemeahugandwhispered,

'Thanksforbeingourangeltoday/,

03.Feelingfamiliarwiththevoice,sheturnsroundandsaw...

04.Asmallsmilemaymakeabigdifference.

05.Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatmademeunderstandwhateverdifficulty(=nomatterwhatdifficulty)we

arefacedwith(=wemayface),wemustn'tgiveupourhope.

06.Whathappenedtodaymademerealizethatforgivenessisakindofvirtue.

07.HowcanIrewardmybelovedmomsobadly,whohassacrificedeverything,evenoneeye,forheronly

son!

08.1willtreasure/valueourfriendshipforever.

09.Jennifer'ssleepyeyesopenedwideandherfaceworeasmilethatbrightenedupthewholeroom.

10.Sheunderstoodthatherdaughtermeantmuchmorethananythingelseintheworld.

Grouptwo(11-20)

11.Dadclearedhisthroatandsaidinaseriousvoice,

12.Butitisusefultobearinmindthatallsuchchangescomefromtechnology...

13.However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.

14.AlthoughIdon'thavemuchmoney,1canlivehappily;butifIlosehonesty,Iwon'tbehappyanymore.In

alongrun,Iwillbealoser.

15.1keptavoidingeyecontactwithhim..........

16.1madeupmymindtofindout/figureouthowtofitinwiththem/howtogetalongwiththem.

17.Theteacherispayingparticular/closeattentiontoMary,whoisconstantlyputtingforwardquestionsin

classinordertorankamongthebestpupils.

18.Ittookhergreatcouragetotelldadthat....

19.Thiswillbeagreatfinancialsacrificeforherparentswhohavealreadybeenpayingforhercollege.

20.1leftthesiteintears.Inasplitsecondthedrunkdriverhadtornthepasser-byintopieces.

Groupthree(21-30)

21.Oneperson,onlosingajoboraspecialrelationship,mayfeelasifitistheendoftheworldandsinkinto

terriblesufferingformonths,years,orevenalifetime.

22.Nothingcanreplacewhatwehavelost,thefreshairandthebluesky.

23.Andthespiritofgenerositybehindtheprojectappearstobespreading.

24.1putasidemyuneasinessandsaid,...

25.44Therecouldn'tbeanythingthafsmoreincorrect,，'Mcringasaid.

26.Hewassoproudofhissuccessthatherefusedtolistentoadvice.

27.Lifecanbesowonderful,fullofadventureandjoy.Itcanalsobefullofchallenges,setbacks(挫折)and

heartbreaks.

28.NoinventionhasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethantheInternet.

29.Dozensofcasesshowthatwillpowerisoneofthemostimportanthabitsforaperson'ssuccess.

30.Withthehelpandencouragementofhermother,sheovercomemanydifficultiesandsucceededin

learning....

Groupfour(31-40)

31.AfterlearningwhatsituationIwasin.myteacher,Michaelencouragedmetostepoutoftroublebravely

andconfidently.

32.Carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.

33.Goodunderstandingamongfriendsmakeseachother,sliferich,careersuccessfi.il.Atruefriendmayshare

yoursorrowsaswellasyourhappiness.

34.Happinessisinthemind,notinoutsideeventsandcircumstances.

35.Hekeptwalkingupanddownrestlessly,hisfacepale,andhishandsshakingslightly.

36.It'ssoeasytobenegativewhenthingsgowrong,orblameothersfbrnegativeoutcomesinyourlife.Butdo

negativityandblamechangeanythingforthebetter?

37.Ifyouwanttomakeadifferenceintheworld,startwiththeworldaroundyou.

38.Sometimesyouhavetowalkawayfrompeople,notbecauseyoudon'tcare,butbecausetheydon,t.

39.It'satoughpilltoswallow,butit'snecessarymedicine.

40.Mostofthesuccessfulpeoplewerenotbornintosuccess;theysimplydo,andcontinuetodothingsthat

helpthemrealizetheirfullpotential.

Groupfive(41-50)

41.Successisnotfinal,andfailureisnotfatal(致命的).Itisthecouragetocontinuethatcounts/matters.

42.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?Theanswerisdefinitelythe

latter.

43.Continuetodoyourworkand,eventually,someonewillappreciatewhatyoudo.

44.1wokeupthismorning,andwalkecou(toexperienceasunriseofastonishingbeauty.

45.Immediately,Ifeeltheurgetosharethisbreathtakingmomentwithsb....

46.ThemostbeautifulsunriseI'deverseenwasslippingthroughmyfingers.

47.Whenyousetgoalsandtakeactioninyourlife,youwilleventuallylearnthattherewillbetimeswhenyou

succeedandtherewillhetimeswhenyoufail,andbothareequallyimportantinthelongrun.

48.Anythingworthachievingtakesgreateffort.

49.Thereisnoexercisebetterfortheheartandsoulthanreachingoutandliftingothersup.

50.WhileI'mnotagainstbuyingnewproductsthataddvaluetoourlives,mostofthemoneywespendon

thingswillnotmakeusanyhappierinthelongrununlesswe'reinvestinginourpersonalgrowthandtaking

actioninthemeantime.

Groupfive(51-60)

51.Obviously,(hatwassomethingsheshouldnotgothroughalone.Allofasudden,awarmfeelingof

sympathyroseupinmyheart.

52.Herwordsstillhurt,“Thetroublewithyouisthatyouwon'tputyourselfinmyplace.Can'tyousee

thingsfrommypointofview?”

53.1shookmyheadstubbornly.

54.ItwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmonioiKatmosphere.

55.Aheavyrainruinedmydinner.

56.Ourownexperienceworkingtogetheronhealth,development,andenergythelasttwentyyearshasbeenone

ofthemostrewardingpartsofourlives.

57.Whenaskedabouthappiness,weusuallythinkofsomethingextraordinary,anabsolutedelight.

58.Don'tmissthechanceoflendingyourwarmhandstohelpothers!

59.Literatureisabeautiful,richlyfurnishedroomwhereyoumightfindmanyanhourofrestand

refreshment.

60.Weallknowthatthecostofeducationwillcontinuetobeasignificantburdenonthefamilybudget.

Groupfive（61-70）

61.Responsibilityisthepriceeverymanmustpayforfreedom.

62.Ifyoubreaktherules,youwillbefined.

63.Mothers'devotiontochildrencanhardlybecalculated.

65.Oneday,mentallyexhausted,Iwrotedownallthereasonswhythisproblemcouldnotbesolved.

66.SometimeswhenIfeellost,Iliedownandshutmyeyes,thinkingofhome.

67.Hisappearancecreatedanatmosphereoftension.

68.1learntthatshoutingandthreatsofpunishmentwouldresultinadisaster.

69.Yearsago,acriticaleventoccurredinmylifethatwouldchangeitforever.

70.Students'respectisthebestrewardforateacher.

Groupfive（71-75）

71.Researchfindingsseemtoindicate:hatthecreationbyagreatartistisaspermanentanachievementasthe

discoverybyagreatscientist.

72.Aslongasthebuildinginquestionispleasinganddocsnotdominate（影响）itssurroundingstoomuch,it

oftenimprovestheattractivenessofthearea.

73.Twoyearsago,whileCathywaswatchingtheOlympics,adreamcameintohersweetlittlehead—tobea

swimmer.

74.Enjoyingthebeautyofnaturebenefitsone'shealth.

75.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.

材料四

1.Anadverb

Carefully,hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass,

heskippedupthestreet.

ParaI：（2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgetting

darkagain.Immcdiaicly,anabsolutedarknessruled（heforesi.（时间副词衔接+环境描写）

2.Anadj.phrase

Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.

Unable〔osavaword,hewasrootedto（hespot.

（2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdark

again.Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.（并列情绪形容词）

（2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Weakasshewas,

shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.（状态形容词+as/though引导的倒装句）

（2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）ParaI:Suddenlyalittleratbitjumpedoutinfrontofmy

horse.AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomtticallyletoulacrylostopmy

horse.（情绪形容词+从句）

（2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgot

dark.Exhaustadandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.

3.Aparticiple（-ingor-edword）

Lookingaroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.

Exhausted,hewasgladtheracewasfinallyover.

（2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Paral:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdark

again.FeelingdisaDDointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.（现在分词+情绪形容词）

（2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para2:IlwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Feeline

refreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.（现在分词+状态形容词）

4.Aconjunction

Ashewalked,hewhistled

Althoughhewasafraid,hejumpedrightin.

5.Aprepositionalphrase

Attheendofthelanehesuddenlystopped.

Atthesightofthesnake.thelittlegirlscreamedatthetopofhervoice.

6.Adialogueoramonologue

“Let'sseewhogetstherefirst!”Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.

“Holduntight!”Myfatheryelled.Wejustfinishedbuckinginasthecoasterjerkedintomolion.This

wasmyfirstrollercoasterride.

（2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim,"Getintothe

car."PaulshoutedatMac.

7.Acharacter

Markisastudiousboywholovesreadin口.Hisclassmalesoftenteasehimforbeinntoo

hardworkingandtheycallhimMr.Smart.Oneafternoon,whilestudyingathome...

8.Anemotion

ThemomentshesawhowshedidforherSciencetest,tearsstartedwellin。uj）inTina'sevesand

fallingdownherchecks.

9.Asetting

Iclosedmye、estoenjoythegentlebreezeandthesoundssftheclashingwaves.Gentlyopeningm。

eves、Isawmvparentslakinsarelaxingstrollalongihebeach.

Thecavewasdarkandeventhinewassilent.Icouldn'tevenseemvhandinfrontofmvface.I

knewthisadventurewasgoingtobesomethingthatIwouldneverforget.

（2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsof

greatsightsalong（heway.Ilookedoutof>hecarwindow,windinqrivers,loft、mountains,

sunnybeachesanddeepvalleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.（视觉+环境描写+拟人）

10.Anaction

FurrystartedwatQinghistailandrunningaroundincircleswhenhesawhismastertakingaleash

outfromthedrawer.Furrywasallreadyforhiseveningwalk.

（2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录）Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtent

wehadbroughtwithus.Dadexchangedaglancewithme.WhynotcamptesatisfyMom?（动作

描写+问句衔篆）

11.Soundeffects

BOOM,CRASH!Thewindwashowlingoutsideofmyhouse.Wewerehavingaterriblethunderstorm.

Iwasveryscared.

12.Aquestion

Haveyoueverbeenonaself・drivinutrip?Leimetellyouanexcitingtripmyfamilytookthis

summer.

Whydoestroublealwaysfollowmearound?DoIhavea"kickme"signonm、backorsomething?

fascination.（视觉+环境描写+拟人）

材料五（结合前面几个材料一并整理背诵〉

1.喜乐

①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。

②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。

③Arippleofexcitementranthroughhem.一阵激动声穿过他们。

④Laughterlingeredaroundiheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。

⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。

⑥Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.1种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛

像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。

⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。

⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。

⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。

⑪Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。

，⑫Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高兴得流I'了眼泪。

⑬Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。

®6hcwasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。

@Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。

⑯Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悦。

⑰wasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。

⑱Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。

2.愤怒：

①Iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。

②Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。

③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。

④Hecouldhardly/scarcclycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。

⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。

⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger他愤怒地看了我一眼。

⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的日光怒视着我。

⑨Heflaredupattheword.他•听到这个字就勃然大怒。

⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。

3.悲伤烦恼

①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站者，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。

②1feellikeIanifloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里,

③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颜抖。她快要哭了。

④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwkie刊f到这

个消息,他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒甲.。

⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。

⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。

⑦1triedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwith(cars.

我努力忍住眼汨。/我的眼里充满了泪水。

⑧Afrown(皱眉)nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。

⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。

⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。

@Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他满是悲伤...

@Thcywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。

©Thesedayshewasinlowspiriis.这些日子他情绪低落。

4.害怕：

①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。

@Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢悔地茎延到她身上。

③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen…她感到恐惧...

④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因恐惧而窒息。

©Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtherelongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。

⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.

他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了他。

©Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated(窒息).

她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。

⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。

5.感动：

①Toucheddeeply/immcnsely,we...被深深感动，我们..

②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。

③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,..

材料六

自主学习材料

1.修饰词汇的应用

修饰词汇/短语即对其他单词，短语，或句子起到修饰作用的词汇和短语。常见的有形容词，副词，名词短

语，介词短语等。

副词

例%:deepquickhappy

(deep)movedbyhisbehavior............

Heranaway(quick).

hewenthome(happy).

luckilyunluckily

fortunately____________unfortunately_________

loudly___________________suddenly_______________

quicklyslowly

excitedly_______________truly____________________

bravely_________________horribly_________________

cautiously______________anxiously_______________

inimediately________gradually_________

adequatelygrowingly/increasingly

readily____________ultimately_________

currently__________incredibly__________

occasionally_______potentially__________

练习：

I)Itwasn'tuntilshediedthatItrulyrecognizedhowmuchshemeanttome.

2)changemylife彻底改变了我的人生

3)“Thankyoufbryourpraise/*thedriveranswered.

4)Sheclosedthedoor.

粒语

试比较：

(1)Pappyannounced,"TodayisChristmasDayandthisisyourluckyday.”

(2)Afterthinkingforafewseconds,Pappyannounced,''TodayisChristmasDay

andthisisyourluckyday.

aftera