初三英语作文复习：常用过渡词+改错（学生版）

第三讲：冲刺满分作文之

Topic:常用过渡词+改错

熟悉写作步骤

1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；

2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；

3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点：

4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题：2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯

等；

5誉抄：不允许做任何的更改。

总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；

三思：词汇一＞短语一＞句式；

三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。

作文一般框架：文章分3段：

（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题：

（2）正文一主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句

话；

（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。

掌握常用过渡性词语

叙事文常用的句子间连接词

atfirst;atlast;intheend...

then/next/afterthat...

when/while/assoonas/not...until...

atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;

sothat

Toone'ssurprise/joy

Luckily/fbrtunately/unluckily/unfortunately...

inaword/inall

议论文常用连接词

表示并＞J:either...or;neither...nor;both...and;notonly...butalso;

表示递进的：besides;what'smore;what'sworse;(moreover);

表示原因的:because;fbr...;becauseof...;thanksto...;(forthereasonthat...);

表示结果的：so;asaresult;so...that...;therefore;

表示目的的：sothat...;inorderthat...;(inorder)to...;fbr...;

表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer...to...;wouldrather

do...thando...;

表示转折的：however;but;

表示举例的：fbrexample;fbrinstance;suchas...;like...;thatistosay...

表示总结的:inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;

表示利弊的：begood/badfbrsb.;beharmfi.iltosb.;doharmtosb.;...havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.

benefitsb.;sb.benefitfromsth.affect;haveaneffectonsb.;

表示喜爱的：lovc/likc/cnjoy...;befbndof...;beinterestedin...;showgreatinterestin...;loseoneselfin...;

putone'sheartinto...;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;

表达个人想法的：

Ithink/believe...;(as)fbrme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart,personally;

其他：

ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone'smind

todo;inaway;

改错：

【groupI].单句改错

1.Thereisnochance(hatBillwillrecoverhisinjuryinlimefortherace.

2.Inthefaceofgreatdanger»it'simportanttokeepcalmly.

3.Hisfriendhassufferedtheillnessforsomeyears,suffered后力「from

4.Havinggottiringofstayingindoorsfbrdays,wearelongingtogooutandrelaxourselves.

5.Shegladlygaveupherpart-timejobtodevoteherselfentiretoherart.

6.Hetoldmethatitwasthefirsttimethathehastalkedwithhisfatherfacetoface.

【group2].单句改错

1.IgotalongwellwiththegirlwhohasgoodcommandoftheGermanlanguage.

2.Althoughthisisthefirsttimethattheplanhasbeencomeupatthemeeting,ithascausedmuchconcern.

3.AsfarasIknow,hewasveryupsetbecausewhatyousaidjustnow.

4.Hefailedintheexam.Thatwaswhyhedidn'tstudyhard.

5.Whynotchangingyourmindnowthatyouhavefoundthatthereissomethingwrongwithyourplan?

【group3].单句改错

I.Oneofhisshortcomingisthathecan'tmakeuseofhistimetolearn.

2.Agreatnumberoftentshaveputupfbrthetourists.

3.Weallfbndofpopmusicandmoderndance»butwestillhavemanyproblemstosolve.

4.AlthoughIcan'thelpadmiringtheman'scourage,butIdon'tapproveofhismeihods.

5.Inmyviews,thereisnoneedtocaretoomuchaboutyourclothes.

【group4].单句改错

1.Whileonlineshoppinghaschangedourlife,notallofitseffecthavebeenpositive.

2.Themanwassleepingdownstairsv/hiletheearthquakehappened.

3.Itwasbothexcitingandfrightenedtobeupthere.

4.Intheearthquake,abouttwomillionspeoplelosttheirhomesandhousandsofhousesfellintoruins.

5.Theearthquakediddamagefortheareawheremanyhousesfelldownandmanypeopleweretrappedinruins.

6.Beforeyouwriteanarticleforanewspaper,itisnecessarytowriteaoutlinefirst.

【group5].单句改错

1.AsfarasIknow,hehasbeenoutoftheworkforseveralmonths

2.IfellinlovewiththecityfbrthefirsttimeIvisitedit

3.Nowadaysmanyschoolchildrendevotetoomuchtimetoplaycomputergames.

4.Foundingintheearly20thcentury,theschoolkeepsoninspiringchildren'sloveofart.

5.Severalhourslater,withthehelpofthepolice,thestudentsmanagedtoescapethedangerousplace,hungryand

frightened.

第二步：短文改错

【group1]下面是李明针对本文的习作，其中有5处语法错误，请你帮他纠正过来。

Inordertohavefriends,youhavegottobeahonestperson.First,you'dbetterjoininsomeclubsandtakepartin

someactivitiesmeetnewpeople.Second,onceyouhavefriends,trytobeconcernedabouthim.Don'tignorethematany

time.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldgetalonggoodwiththemandoftencommunicatewiththem.

【gro叩2】下面是李明针对本文的习作，其中有5处语法错误，请你帮他纠正过来。

Alprcscnl>Englishplayaniiiipcrlanlpartinourdailylifc.Wcshouldmakefulluseofeveryoppurlunilypiaclisc

EnglishsothatwecangradualenlargeourvocabularyandspeakEnglishfluently.Ifyouhaveawellcommandof

English,itisgoodofyourfuturedevelopment.

【group3】下面是李明针对本文的习作，其中有5处语法错误，请你帮他纠正过来。

SusanhadbeendreamingabouttraveltoLijiangandshepreferredMarytogowithhcr.AltkoughMarywas

stubborn,Susandeterminedtopersuadehertotraveltogcthcr.Final,Marygaveawayandagreedtotravelwith

her.Theyadmiredthewonderfulviewthere,(hatmadeMarysoexcitingthatshestayedawakeduring(henight.

【gro叩4】下面是李明针对本文的习作，其中有5处语法错误，请你帮他纠正过来。

Onenight,everythingbegantoshake»withthepipesburstingandtheelectricitycutoff.Itseemedasiftheworld

wasiranend.Somepeoplewereinjured,someburiedintheruinsandsomemissing.Judgedfromthesituation,there

wasanumberoftrappedpeoplewaitingfortherescue.Butallhope认asnotlost,becausesoldiersweresenttorescue

themrightaway.

Foodandfreshwaterweretakentothecity.Slow,thecitybegantobreatheagain.

【group5】下面是李明针对本文的习作，其中有5处语法错误，请你帮他纠正过来。

ThefirsttimewhenIheardofStephenHawking,Imovedbyhisdevotiontotheresearch.Inhisdailylife,he

wasingreattrouble.Onlywhenheturnedtothecomputerwasitpossibleforhimtospeak>readorwrite.However,his

contributionstotheworldhasnoequal.Andinmyopinion,nothingcouldbeinrewardforhiscontributionsfor

science.

【必背句型】

25.我们有理由相信…

Wehavereasonstobelieve(that)子句

例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。

Wehavereasonstobelievethatcorporalpunishmentshouldbestrictlyprohibited.

26.事实上?…

Asamatteroffact,...

=Infact,...

例：事实上?健康才是最重要。

Asamatteroffact,itishealththatcounts.

27.(A)例如?…Forexample,...

(B)拿…做例子Take...forexample.

例：例如?我们盲目地提高生活水准?却降低生活品质。

Forexample,weelevatethelivingstandardsblindly,butlower(hequalityoflife.

28.此外?我们不应忽视…

Besides(Inaddition),wcshouldnotneglect...

例：此外?我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。

Inaddition,weshouldnotneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.

29.相反地…

onthecontrary,...

=bycontrast,...

例：相反地?少数学生似乎还在鬼混。

Onthecontrary,afewstudents,itseems,arcstillfoolingaround.

30.另一方面…

ontheotherhand,...

例：政府应严格执法?另一方面。大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。

Thegovernmentshouldenforcelawsstrictly.Ontheotherhand,thepublicalsoshoulddevelopthegoodhabitof

reducingpollution.

31.然而很可惜的是…

However,itisapitythat子句

例：然而?很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。

However,itisapitythatheshouldalwayscramattheeleventhhour.

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