2014年雅思大作文总汇

1、2014年雅思大作文总汇,By Jason CHENG,2014年1月9日A类大作文题目： The best way for the government to solve the traffic congestion problems in cities is to provide free transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,第一段： 社会背景描述+ 正向/ 反向观点+ 自己观点 社会背景： government , traffic congestion + 正向

2、观点：理想策略-完全免费交通 +自己观点：1 提升基础设施2优化公共交通 The increasingly congested traffic in metropolises has perplexed the government for long. Some individuals deem that the ideal strategy to tackle such issue is to provide completely free public transportation. On the contrary, I deem that the available approaches

3、 to cope with such issue should include infrastructure upgrading and public transportation enhancement. =52,第二段： 论点+论据+例证+结论 论点：合理规划道路与城市建设的布局+ 论据：合理长期规划-起根本作用 +例证：北京交通现状+ 结论：此做法优势凸显 First and foremost, the key solution is the reasonable planning of roads and layout of urban construction. In other w

4、ords, without rational and long-range planning especially in conurbations, overcrowded transportation would fail to be worked out fundamentally. For instance, during the rapid development of urbanization, Beijing lacks rational and impeccable infrastructure of roadways and scientific road design, wh

5、ich give rise to serious traffic congestion, especially during rush hours. Hence, the superiority of such practice is prominent.,第三段： 论点+论据+例证+结论 论点：提升公共交通 + 论据： 公交不便- 驾驶私家车-交通拥挤 +例证：等车+拥挤状况 -浪费时间+丧失舒适度 结论：改善现有交通状况是必要的 Secondly, to upgrade public transportation services is another valid approach. Co

6、nspicuously, the inconvenience of the public traffic system compels people to drive private cars, which cannot shirk its responsibility of escalating traffic jams. For instance, the long wait time for buses or metros and the thronging situations on them mean a huge waste of time and sacrifice of com

7、fort to commuters, pushing some of them to commute in their own vehicles, a key factor to the formation of such status. Therefore, it is essential to improve the current transportation system. =90,第四段：让步段：另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳 另一种观点：全天候免费公交-合理 1 节省人们日常交通费用 2 便利公益服务 反驳观点：此做法不切合实际 1 造成政府财政负担 2 阻碍交通运营的维护以及监管

8、 Admittedly, round-the-clock free charge of public transportation has its own rationality. Not only will it save the traffic expenses of people in their daily life, but it will also become a convenient public service. However, such practice is impractical, in view of aggravating the financial burden

9、 on the authority and due to the shortage of funds hindering the maintenance and supervision of transportation operations which can induce the traffic accidence.=70,第五段总结段：总结观点+ 提出建议 总结观点：支持观点1 道路基础设施改善 2 交通系统改进 + 提出建议： 政府与市民积极合作 In brief, the upgrading of road infrastructures and improvement of the

10、 traffic system are the key to settling congestion in roads. Meanwhile, vigorous coordination between the government and citizens is also conducive to alleviating deteriorating road situations.,2014年01月11日雅思A类大作文题目： More young people in the workforce change their jobs or careers every few years. Wha

11、t are the reasons for this? Do disadvantages outweigh advantages?,第一段：社会背景+(正向/反向观点)+自己观点 社会背景：更换工作+ 年轻人 自己观点：1优点大于缺点 2 原因：1 自身发展 2 更好的就业机会 Frequent Job-hopping among young people has become an increasingly widespread social phenomenon. I am convinced that the benefits of such practice far outweigh

12、its risks. The reason can be ascribed to young peoples consideration of self-development and the availability of more suitable and better job opportunities.,第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论 论点：换工作职业规划的一部分 +论据：职业选择根据自身的性格以及喜好+例证：年轻人工作往往是盲目的，缺乏考虑 +结论：跳槽是正确的 First and foremost, changing jobs or careers may be part of o

13、nes career plan. In other words, only after young people work for a period of time can they make advisable career choices according to their personality and preferences. For instance, a great number of young people have no idea about what sort of job is suitable for them after graduation but to carr

14、y on with the jobs they take without cautious consideration. Hence, selecting job-hopping is a correct choice.,第三段：论点+论据+例证 论点：换工作更好的发展+论据：互联网上的大量的工作机会 +例证：就业网站提供机会导致年轻人换工作 Secondly, young people often change jobs for better development in other companies. Meanwhile, abundant working opportunities a

15、re well presented and promoted on the internet, making it possible for young people to be constantly informed of good opportunities. For example, on some job posting websites such as , job descriptions and requirements are continuously upgraded to furnish young people with plentiful and reliable emp

16、loyment information in diverse channels, which plays a significant role in making young people to alter jobs constantly.,让步段：另一种观点的合理性+对此观点反驳 另一种观点：换工作原来公司人才外流+ 信息泄露 对此观点反驳： 鉴于自身职业规划+更好的薪金 发展空间 Admittedly, a series of conflicts and issues can arise from frequent job changing. The conflicts include b

17、rain drains of original corporations and the outflow of core information, which can exert irreversible and negative consequences on the development of corporations. However, talent flow has turned out to be an inevitable trend, in view of peoples career planning and due to better salaries and develo

18、pmental space.,结论段： 总结观点+提出建议 1 总结观点： 支持观点：职业生涯规划 +更好工作机会 =换工作 2建议：公司个人携手规避由此导致不利影响 In brief, occupational planning of youngsters and better job opportunities are the root cause to job hopping. Meanwhile, both the enterprises and individuals should evade unfavorable consequences evoked by such pract

19、ice to the greatest extent.,2014年1月18日雅思A类大作文题目： Children find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in class. What are the reasons? How can we solve these problems?,Schools, which have been supposed to be imparting knowledge and shaping characters, have been less of a focus, if not totally i

20、gnored by children. The reasons are multiple and accordingly the solutions are varied.,Schools in this case are mainly responsible because of their to-be-updated teaching contents and directions. Despite the fact that it is difficult to seat children down in an orderly classroom, it is the responsib

21、ility of the school to research for appealing yet educational contents so that children willingly learn. Moreover, schools are to educate with more of a focus on real-life issues, in which case for example, school kids will not be misled to believe that they would be as successful if they drop out o

22、f schools as Bill Gates did Harvard.,Parents, against general belief, are to blame, too. They could have, as the past generations, reinforced to their kids the idea that schools are fun and helpful. However, most parents, because of their own education deficiency, their limited understanding about e

23、ducation or their busy schedule, fail to address the importance of schooling and thus their children lose focus and go astray. To address this problem, parents need to learn the significance of learning first.,Astonishingly, this essay believes that children have their share in the issue under discu

24、ssion, but are not responsible. For their young age and lack of life experience, their behaviours, pleasant or dissatisfactory, are understandable, and it is the responsibility of the school and parents to interest kids and nurture the desire to learn.,In sum, to make children interested in school l

25、earning, schools need improve their education contents and methods, and parents need to better knowledge of knowledge and the guidance of children.,2014年1月25日雅思A类大作文题目： The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels (e.g. gas and

26、oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?,With the ever-forward trend of this world, energy consumption and its depletion caught general attention: it is believed that the whole world should join efforts to cut fossil energy consumption. This essay sees truth in the resoluti

27、on, but deems it as a part of a more comprehensive plan.,In light of the unrecyclability of fossil energy resources, consumption reduction is wise. Fossil energy, gasoline or coal for example, is unrecyclable for what they are, especially when the short span of human society is taken into considerat

28、ion. Economising on the excavation and application of natural energy sources will definitely prolong the general social prosperity, which is almost soly based on traditional energy solution for the time being.,Moreover, cutting back on the reliance of fossil energy will help to contain and reduce po

29、llution. Greenhouse effect, haze, and water pollution are constantly threatening the livelihood of human beings, and lowering the usage of energy sources of coal and oil is the common cure. Though life comforts based on traditional energy forms deserve credits, life alarmed by constantly heavy CO2 e

30、mission is worth more concerns.,However, the view in question faces challenges. Advanced and cleaner energy forms, solar and nuclear energy for example, more often than not are inaccessible to certain countries and areas for different reasons. It is somehow impossible for the Middle East with its ri

31、ch fossil energy reserve to consider energy alternatives, as it is definitely impossible for relatively under-developed African regions to ultilise solar energy when food is scarce.,In sum, it is goodwill to reduce fossil energy consumption, but the actualisation of it asks for regional variations a

32、nd feasible solutions.,2014年2月1日雅思A类写作大作文题目： Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,014年2月13日雅思考试A类大作文题目： It is important that towns an

33、d cities are attractive places, so money should be spent on putting on works of art (like paintings and statues) in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,2014年2月15日雅思考试A类大作文题目： Some people think success of life is based on hard work and determination, but others think there are mor

34、e important factors, like money and personal appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.,2014年2月22日雅思A类大作文题目： Educating children is expensive and the government of some countries pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages of the government paying for the costs outweigh the dis

35、advantages?,题目解析：学生的教育是很昂贵，在一些国家，政府支付一部分或全部费用。优点大于缺点么? 关键词分析：Educating children 背景关键词;论点关键词：Government pays some or all of,The investment in childrens educational appropriations has influenced the level of their accepting education to some extent. Some people deem that the government shall partially

36、 or entirely undertake their expenditures, but I am convinced that laying out from government partly alleviates the family economic burdens while furnishes children with superior qualities of education,First and foremost, such practice of government is in favor of remitting the pressure of working f

37、amilies. Undeniably, partially or entirely free education for children should be part of the feasting social security. For instance, expenditures of an ordinary working family include disbursed elementary outgoings and repayment of corresponding loans, consequently, the investment in the all-round d

38、evelopment of children poses further pressure to the whole family. From this perspective, an assistance furnished by government conduces to improve the economic situation of common working families.,Furthermore, funding of education by the authority promises for a more comprehensive and systematic e

39、ducation for children. In other words, they have more accesses to personalized studies and the cultivation of competences. For instance, high-class instructional resources and supporting facilities invested by the government can satisfy the demands of children in their studies and development to mas

40、ter more advanced and practical knowledge and cultivate a wide range of interests. Hence, such a measure serves as a significant safeguard for the all-round and sound growth of children.,Admittedly, a series of issues occurred partially due to governmental investment in childrens education, such as

41、overriding financial burden, which can result in decreased rate of economic growth. Nevertheless, authority assumed that partial expenditure in childrens education turned out to be essential, in view of its role as holder of tax-payers money and protector of tax-payers rights when taking the progres

42、s and stable development of society into consideration.,Remitting civil financial strain while providing children with superior education through such a measure of the authority is beneficial for national stability, unity and sustainable development.,2014年3月1日雅思写作考试A类大作文题目： Some people think that li

43、ving in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,2014年3月8日雅思A类大作文题目： Some people say that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,Education is indispensible for chi

44、ldrens all-round development and growth. Some people deem that the merits of children receiving full-time schooling outweigh demerits. After serious consideration, I am convinced that compulsory education is conducive to childrens growth on account of their sound growth and reduced burden on parents

45、.=47,To begin with, primary and systematic education is an essential pathway for children to become mature. In other words, fundamental and comprehensive education ensures them to grow up in a socially acceptable and wholesome way. For instance, education makes it possible for children whose charact

46、ers are not fully developed and who lack logical and objective cognition to embrace correct values by keeping undesirable influences away. From this point, such an education can cope with numerous problems as children grow up.=80,Secondly, basic and comprehensive education contributes to alleviating

47、 parents anxiety and burden in the course of childrens growth. Conspicuously, sound development of childrens mind and body is the greatest aspiration of parents. For example, full-time schooling which allows children to mature with overall and well development contributes to relieve parents concern

48、and economic burden that are invested for juvenile growth. Hence, the superiority of compulsory education is noticeable. =68,Admittedly, a series of issues can arise out of full-time schooling, such as failure to provide tailored education according to ones aptitude, which inevitably throttles some

49、talents with potentiality. However, fundamental and all-round education is still suitable for a majority of children because it is affordable and offers children a chance to learn in an interactive environment.=57,In brief, sound growth of children and alleviation of parents pressure present apparen

50、t preponderance of compulsory education.=17,2014年3月13日雅思考试A类大作文题目： Many people believe that printed books are not good in the digital era, because computers can store more information, while others think printed books still play a significant role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.,2014年

51、3月15日雅思考试A类大作文题目： Some people think it is important for all the cities and towns to have large outdoor space for public use, such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree?,第一段： 社会背景+正向/反向观点+自己观点 (1 客观因素/外因 2 主观因素/内因) 社会背景： 城镇规划的公共场所在某种程度上影响城镇的发展 正向观点：一些人认为在城镇的广场以及公园的建立具有重要的意义。 自己观点： 我认为这样一种做法有

52、利于 人们身心的健康 以及 城市居住环境的改善,The scheme of cities and towns in public places has influenced urban development to some extent. Some people deem that the establishment of square plazas and public gardens is essential. After serious consideration, I approve that such a practice is conducive to peoples physi

53、cal and psychological health as well as the improvement of residential environment in urban areas. =58,第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论 论点：大型休闲广场的建立有利于市民的锻炼身体与放松心情 论据：大型室外场所有助于市民的身体健康以及进行娱乐休闲活动。 例证： 在城镇的大部分人都承受者来自生活的各个方面的压力，产生焦虑的情绪，这些娱乐场所可以缓解市民的这些压力与焦虑，以保持健康的身体与愉悦的心情。 结论：从这个角度讲，这样的公共场所对市民的健康起到了重要作用。,To begin with, outdoor space provides residents with a public place for physical a