很好的英语作文讲解 方法 四六级英语作文提高,.ppt

1、,I.,让你的英语作文 锦上添花！,闪光的英语作文包含四个要素：,1 完整性：句子结构完整，意义完整；,2 连贯性：句子之间的关系紧密,前后意思连贯，思想表达清楚 有序；,3 简洁性：言简意赅；,4 多样性：包括词汇多样性和句子多样性。,I. 1.词汇多样性：,改变：change，modify，alter，shift，fashion，transform，convert,变化：change，vary，convert，fluctuate， conscillate,保护：protect，conserve，safeguard,保存：save，preserve，conserve，keep，store,影

2、响：effect，influence，impact，infection,流行：popular，prevalent， prevailing，current，common，universal,认为：think，believe，hold，argue，maintain，deem，opine，reckon，figure,意识到：realize，be aware of/that，be awake to，understand，it/sth. dawns on sb.,想到：think of，come up with，occur to/strike sb.，come to，remind，suggest,看作：

3、regard as，look on/consider/view/see/takeas,看作：regard as，look on/consider/view/see/takeas,应该：should，ought to，it is/would be better，it is advisable to,因为：because，since，as，for，because of，owing to，thanks to，due to，as a result of，in virtue of，on account of，with，from，at，of,关于：about，on，with regard to，as re

4、gards，concerning，relating to,因此：so，therefore，thus，accordingly，consequently，hence，thereby,然而：however，nevertheless，nonetheless，whereas，though，still，yet,另外：moreover，in addition，besides，furthermore，one more thing,不同：different，difference，differ，vary fromto，conflicting，diverse，diversified，various，a variet

5、y of,吸引人的：attractive，appealing，taking，inviting，tempting，fascinating，charming，alluring，glamorous，absorbing，enticing,c,II. 句子多样性,1. 长短句变换：简单句、并列句和复合句交替运用,长句: 准确生动，长于说明推理；,短句: 简洁明快，意义明确，印象深刻，描述动作，表明主 旨，总结归纳，非短句不可,“段间长短不一，全篇句式万千”,结构多样化：,2. 结构多样化: 非谓语动词结构（包括不定式结构和分词结构），可以简化大部分英语从句，产生语言简练，结构丰富多样的效果,名词从句可转

6、化为非谓语动词结构,1. That John won the marathon surprised us., Johns winning the Marathon surprised us.,2. I have not decided whether I should vote for Clint., I have not decided whether to vote for Clint.,u 定语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构,1. The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.,2. The car (that was

7、) repaired yesterday by him is my mothers.,3. The next train that arrives is from New York., The next train to arrive is from New York.,u 状语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构,1. After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn., Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.,2. When they are heated metals

8、 expand., (When) Heated, metals expand.,3. Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice., Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.,4. I spoke slowly and clearly in order that the audience could understand me.,in order for the audience to understand me.,5. I

9、f we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail., United, we stand; divided, we fail.,6. Though he has lived in Canada for tree years, he still cannot speak English well., Having lived in Canada for three years, he still cannot speak English well.,无动词结构也是阅卷老师喜欢看到的亮点,u 形容词无动词结构,1.Big and fat, V

10、ictor went to the Gym(健身馆) every Sunday morning.（原因）,2.Speechless, Henry nodded and sat on a folding seat.（伴随状语）,3.Anxious for a quick decision, the chairman called for a vote.（原因）,4.（Although）always helpful, he was not much liked by people.（让步）,5.It has little taste, unless hot.（条件）,名词无动词结构,6.A fel

11、low Georgian（佐治亚人）, Jordan was well-known as a friend of the President.（同位语）,7.Bank loan or no bank loan, well buy the house.（让步）,8.Whatever the reason, his cordiality（诚恳）to her has won him a friend.（让步）,介词无动词结构,9.Because of his mistake several people died.（原因）,10.Without his sisters money, Harry wo

12、uld never be a doctor.（条件）,1b. Because he was big and fat, Victor went to the Gym every Sunday morning.,2b. Henry nodded and sat on a folding seat, and kept speechless.,III. 主语多样化：,中国人习惯于用人称主语，而英语中则常用无灵主语（inanimate subject），即无生命的事物做主语，如：,1The last two decades has witnessed earth-shaking changes in C

13、hina. 中国在过去的二十年中发生了翻天覆地的变化。,2 A strange peace came over her when she was alone. 她独处时感到一种特别的安宁。,u,3 I am very sorry that the pressure of other occupations has prevented me from sending an earlier reply to your letter. 由于我近来事务繁忙，没能给予及早回复，对此我表示深深的歉意。,4 The smallest excuse would have served. 其实，你随便找个哪怕最

14、小的借口就可以了。,5 That night sleep eluded me. 那天晚上我彻夜未眠。,u,6 The old house has seen better days. 这座老房子的主人曾过着更好的生活。,7 Everything at the party spoke of careful planning. 派对上的一切都说明主人进行了精心策划。,8 A terrible thought suddenly struck mehad I locked the door? 我突然产生了一个可怕的想法我锁门了吗？,9 When he had to speak, his confiden

15、ce suddenly deserted him. 等到不得不说话时，他却突然没了信心。,结构多样化：,1b. Great changes have taken place in China in the last two decades.,5b. I failed to fall into sleep that night.,5c. I kept awake all through that night.,9b. When he had to speak, he suddenly lost confidence.,I.,VI.开头多样化：,1 An expert in forest fire

16、 control, the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods.同位语,2 Angry, Mr. Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong arguments.形容词短语,3 Tired and dirty, the boys returned to the camp.形容词短语,u,4 Jogging every day, I soon increased my energy level.现在分词短语,5 Troubled by a dream, Ti

17、m woke up with a start.过去分词,6 To succeed in that course, you must attend every class.不定式短语,7 In the scientific laboratory, Madame Curie was an industrious worker.介词短语,I.,8 Because he was tired and discouraged, he did not want to rewrite the paper.原因状语句,9 What you impulsively do in haste you may regr

18、et( )in leisure.宾语从句提前,结构多样化：,V.运用修辞手法：排比；对偶,1. I came, I saw, I conquered. 我来了，我看了，我征服（凯撒大帝语）,2.He was well-known, well-respected, and well-loved.,3.The proof of gold is fire; the proof of woman, gold; the proof of man, a woman.火可以检验真金，金子可以检验女人，而女人可以检验男人。,4.Government of the people, by the people a

19、nd for the people shall not perish from the earth.这个民有、民主、民享的政府永远也不会从地球上消失,5.With this faith we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day. （摘自马丁路德金的著名演说I Have a Dream）,u,6. The

20、 power of French literature is in its prose writers; the power of English literature is in its poets.法国文学长于散文；英国文学优于诗歌。,7. A long journey tests a horses strength; a long acquaintance shows a mans heart. 路遥知马力，日久见人心。,以上例句中，前五个运用排比修辞格，节奏优美，语势强烈，感染力强；后两句运用对偶修辞格，言简意赅，意义隽永。,I.,Thank you,结构多样化：,1）Male, 25

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22、nshine After the Rain “Catch Me Quick” “The Red, Red Wine” “Wuthering Heights”, “Love Me Tender” “Two is Company” “Life is Best When Shared” “Are You the One?,” Am I Your Right”,u,3. 隐喻层出，含蓄幽默,1）Attractive, fiery, red-headed professional fire female, 24, seeks intelligent, professional male, 25-40, must wear glassed. If you know how to treat a lady, I promise you wont get your fingers burnt. 几个与“火”有关的词及短语既与其消防职业有关， 有