2012梅州质检题能否在高三时期上网 评讲.ppt

1、,Basic Writing,海丰仁荣中学刘先琴,第一部分 基础写作的推荐步骤：,一、认真审题 二、归纳、整合信息点 三、确定短语和句型 四、连词成句 五、组句成篇 六、检查修改,（分配5句话的信息）,议论文,人称：,时态,一般过去时,文体：,第三人称（Xiao Ming his father）,观点类文章结构层次（三个层次） 第一：开门见山，点明主题( one sentence) 点明即将要展开阐述的话题。 第二：呈现观点，说明原因(three sentences) 呈现各人的观点，阐明必要的理由和原因。注意层次。 第三：得出结论，发表评论(one sentence) 最后得出结论或是发表个

2、人看法总结。,引子,正方观点,反 方 观 点,小结,适用于：不同/正反观点； 变 化 类；,三、确定短语和句型 四、连词成句,把要点中能够成完整意义的单个词、词组和重点词语及信息作为翻译或表达的对象，尽量用多种表达形式，激发思维，产生联想，形成知识网络。,运用合适的句式、句型等把所表达出的信息或词语组成意义相同或相近的多种语句。,1)小明与他父亲就“能否在高三时期上网”这一问题进行讨论，并且达成了协议。,表 达 词 语,就.进行讨论,上网,Go online/ surf the internet,达成协议,Reach/come to/make an agreement,能否,Whether h

3、e can /can he/could he,连 词 成 句,Xiaoming , a senior three student, had a discussion with his father on whether or not he could surf the Internet.,discuss sth. have a discussion with. on/about,高三时期,In/during senior three,1. A discussion about whether. in senior three was held between .,2. About/on the

4、 topic of “whether.”, Xiaoming and his father expressed their own opinions and at last got an agreement.,3. and had a discussion on and their opinions are as follows.,2）小明的观点是网络便于获得信息，有利于放松心情。,表 达 词 语,连 词 成 句,便于,be convenient /make it easy for sb. to,小明的观点是,.hold the opinion .think/ believe /insist

5、that In ones opinion/viewpoint,获得,Get/gain information,有利于,Be helpful/of great help to do,放松心情,Relax oneself/release our stress/ease oneself /relax their mind (mood),Xiaoming insisted that surfing the Internet was a convenient way to get information and the rich entertaining contents could bring him

6、 relaxation.,In Xiaomings opinion, it is not onlyfor to get information on the internet but also to relax himself.,2. A senior three student as I am, I insisted that surfing internet , contributing to was a good access to gain,3. Xiaoming would like to go online saying that surfing the internet make

7、s it easy for us to get,(3).但是小明的父亲认为高三学生有很多作业要做，上网浪费时间，容易送到不良影响。,表 达 词 语,连 词 成 句,但是,But/however/on the contrary/unlike/,浪费,Waste/a waste of,影响,Effect/influence affect/influence,不良影响,Be harmed/do sb. harm / be affected by something bad online.,However, his father disagree with him because he thought

8、 that surfing the Internet was a complete waste of time and a Senior three student had a lot of homework to do. Furthermore, he was afraid that Xiao ming would be affected by the unhealthy information.,不同意,Disagree with/disapprove of/hold opposite opinion/didnt think so,Furthermore,表示关系的递进,Whats mor

9、e/ in addition/ besides/ apart from /moreover/furthermore/,Compared withhis father held an opposed opinion because it takestime, leaving much fewer time to finish,3. His father considered it a waste of time going surf ,4. Xiaomings father thought there were so much for that they should not waste, wh

10、ich is easily.,2.His father saidand he was likely to be affected byif he spent much time .,4).协议要求小明平时不能上网，只能周末上网,并且上网只能看新闻，文艺，体育类网页，不准玩游戏。,表 达 词 语,连 词 成 句,要求 .不能,Be requested/demanded not to,周末,Weekend at/on the weekend,Finally, they reached an agreement that Xiaoming could only surf the Internet a

11、t weekends for news, entertainment and sports programs but not games.,Be not allowed/be not permitted to,weekday,除了,Except/ but,看.网页,Look through/read through the website of/ .WebPages,不准,Be forbidden/ be not allowed/permitted,1. At last/eventually, they reached the agreement that only at weekend ca

12、n Xiaoming .,3. Xiaoming agreed that he would not play the computer except/but weekend and also promised that he only would read through the WebPages such as,4. The agreement also mentioned/ requested that games is also forbidden/not allowed/not permitted,5. He can only skim the information of news

13、, sports and the arts instead of the games.,2. They both agreed that,五、组句成篇,依据写作要求，适当添加关联词、连句成篇 根据具体的写作内容需要进行语篇理顺后，还要根据上下文、词语等之间的关系和特点，添加关联词(Linking words)，才能完成短文写作。,Please find out the linking words I have used in this passage!,Xiaoming , a senior three student, had a discussion with his father on

14、whether or not he could surf the Internet. Xiaoming insisted that surfing the Internet was a convenient way to get information and the rich entertaining contents could bring him relaxation. However, his father disagree with him because he thought that surfing the Internet was a complete waste of time and a Senior three student had a lot of homework to do. Furthermore, he was afraid that Xiaoming would be affected by the unhealthy information.,Finally, they reached an agreement that Xi