英语人教版八年级下册写作课.ppt

1、,Using an outline to write a topic composition,By Qiu Meixian From Lizhou Middle School,Yuyao,人们是如何在假期放松自己的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,How do people relax themselves on their holidays?,Background(背景) of writ

2、ing,The survey result,人们是如何在假期放松自己的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查， 右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,Step1 Find out（审）,文体: _ 时态: _ 人称: _ 信息点：_,A survey report,The simple present tense(一般现在时),The third person(第三人称),5,倡议假日休闲,A lot of people travel. （s+v） Some people stay at home. (s+v) Some othe

3、r people visit friends or parents.(s+v+o) A few people work.(s+v) Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.(s+v+o+oc),a lot of /most of,some,some other,a few,Step2. List out(列),What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays? We did a survey and here is the result. _ _ _ _,27 words,6-8,Put them

4、together?,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.,A lot of people travel.,They usually go for a travel with their family .,why ？ how ？ who？,Step3 Add （加）,A few people work.,They are crazy a

5、bout work .,They think work can give them a sense of achievement（成就感）.,Lets get more !,Some people stay at home.,They watch TV or surf the Internet .,They can have a good rest .,Its your turn!,Some other people visit friends or parents.,They have big meals together .,Lets relax ourselves in the holi

6、days.,It will make us healthier ! People who relax well work well!,What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays? We did a survey and here is the result. A lot of people travel, they usually go for a holiday with their family. Some people stay at home,they watch TV or surf the Internet. Th

7、ey can have a good rest. Some other people visit friends or parents,they have a big dinner together happily. A few people work, they think work can give them a sense of achievement. Lets relax ourselves in the holidays. It will make us healthier. People who relax well work well.,73 words,12-14,Lets

8、put them together!,方法一:用不同方式表达句子相似的意思,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,Reading is fun.,Reading makes us happy.,It is fun to do some reading.,A lot of people like to travel.,Some people would rather(宁愿) stay at home.,Some

9、 other people choose to visit friends or parents.,A few people enjoy working.,Step4 Beautify （美）,方法二:单句不如复句妙,A few people would rather(宁愿) work during the holiday. They think work can give them a sense of achievement(成就感).,A few people would rather work during the holiday, because they think work ca

10、n give them a sense of achievement.,方法三:多句不如合并好,Some people would rather stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. They can have a good rest.,Some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest .,What do people do to relax themselves on th

11、eir holidays? We did a survey and here is the result. According to the survey, a lot of people like to travel, they usually go for a holiday with their family. But some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest. Also, some other people choose

12、 to visit friends or parents, because they have a big dinner party together . However, a few people enjoy working because they think work can give them a sense of achievement. Lets relax ourselves in the holidays. It will make us healthier.People who relax well work well.,15-17,添加连接词-linking words,S

13、tep5 Connect（连）,yes!,What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays? We did a survey and here is the result. According to the survey, a lot of people like to travel so much that they usually go for a travel with their family on holidays. But some people would rather stay at home to watch TV

14、 or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest. Also, some other people choose to visit friends or parents, because they have a big dinner party together . However, a few people enjoy working because they think working can give them a sense of achievement. Its necessary for everyone to have

15、 a holiday.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays. It will make us healthier.As the saying goes:People who relax well work well.,18-19,110 words,固定句型来添彩,Step6 Copy（抄）,What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays? We did a survey and here is the result. _ _ _ _ _ _ _,According to the survey,

16、 a lot of people like to travel, they usually go for a holiday with their family. But some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest. Also, some other people choose to visit friends or parents, because they have a big dinner party together .,

17、_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,However, a few people enjoy working because they think working can give them a sense of achievement. Its necessary for everyone to have a holiday. Lets relax ourselves in the holidays. It will make us healthier. As the saying goes:People who relax well work well.,20,Congratulations!,

18、What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays?We did a survey and here is the result. According to the survey, a lot of people like to travel so much that they usually go for a travel with their family on holidays. But some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet

19、so that they can have a good rest.Also, some other people choose to visit friends or parents, because they have a big dinner party together . However, a few people enjoy working. They think working can give them a sense of achievement. Its necessary for everyone to have a holiday.Lets relax ourselve

20、s in the holidays. As the saying goes:People who relax well work well.,Beginning,Main part,Ending,An outline,Beginning(Background),Main part,Ending,A lot of people,Some people,A few people,Writing material（写作材料）:,学生需要做家务吗？针对此问题，某校对500名学生做了一项调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇报告。100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。,提示词：develop ones in

21、dependence, understand the idea of fairness,know how hard their parents are,its ones duty/job to, enough stress,a waste of,Is it necessary for students to do the housework at home?We did a survey about this and here is the result.,审,文体: _ 时态:_ 人称:_ 信息点：_,A survey report,The simple present tense (一般现

22、在时),The third and first person( 第一人称来表达自己的观点),7,Should students do chores at home,Pros:help to develop their independence help to understand the idea of fairness; help to know how hard their parents are,Cons:their duty is to study hard,not to do chores; have enough stress from school;there is no tim

23、e to waste for chores; it is the parents job,My opinion:I think we students should spend some time on the housework,列,加,and learn how to look after themselves;,to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children,no matter how busy we are,An outline,【佳作欣赏】,Is it necessary for st

24、udents to do the housework at home? We did a survey about this and here is the result.,to develop their independence and learn how to look after themselves. to understand the idea of fairness. ,it helps to know how hard their parents are. , think it is unnecessary for students to do the housework.Th

25、ey think it is the parents job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children.As students,their duty is to study hard,not to do chores. ,they have enough stress from school,so there is no time to waste for chores. In my opinion,I think we students should spend some time on the housework,no matter how busy we are.,美,thirty percent of the students agree to do chores at home.They think it can help,It helps them,most of the students,According to the result,also,Whats more,On the other hand,Besides,连,I