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2009年小作文DearEditors,Asalocalstudentwhohaslongbeenreadingyournewspaperwithgreatinterest,Iamconcernedaboutthewideuseofdisposableplasticbagsinourcity.Iwouldliketorenderseveralsuggestionsasfollowstoreversethesituation.Ononehand,measuresmustbetakentoprohibitandreducetheuseofplasticbagsinourlife.Ontheotherhand,rejectionofthedisposablebagsandadoptionoftherecycledonesshouldberewarded.Lastbutnottheleast,fashionableandbeautifulsubstitutions,suchaspaperbagsandclothbags,shouldbedeveloped.Ihopeyoucancallonthepublictoboycotttheplasticbags.Onlyinthiswaycouldthe''whitepollution"beeliminated.TrulyYours,Liming2008年小作文DearBob,I'mwritingtoapologizeformyforgetfulnesstoreturnthemusicCDtoyouwhenIleftCanada.SohurriedwasIthatIpackedeverythinginmyluggagewithoutexaminingthoroughly.HadIbeenmorecautiousthen,Iwouldn'thavemadesuchastupidmistake.Nowsomethingmustbedonetocompensateformycarelessness.IcouldeitherposttheCDtoyoubyexpressorpayforyourlossatareasonableprice.Pleaseletmeknowwhichsolutionyouprefer.Again,Iwouldextendmysincereapologytoyouandhopeyoucouldacceptit.FaithfullyYours,LiMing1998年大作文Theinformationwegetfromthepictureaboveisthatahenpromisestolayeggswhichareroundwithoutangelsandcorners,andhaveshells,eggwhitesandeggyellows.Funnyandoddasthecartoonis,whatitremindsusisaphenomenonthatvaincommitmentshavebeenpervasiveinourlife.Administrationdepartmentssweartoactfairlyandlegallywithoutcorruption;hospitalsanddoctorsguaranteetocuretheillpatientlyandheartilywithoutmaltreat;merchantsandentrepreneursassuretosellgenuinecommoditiespolitelyandenthusiasticallywithoutrudenessanddeceiving.Allthesecommitmentscanbeheardalmosteverywhereinthisancientland.However,theyarenothingbutordinaryobligationsandduties,andtheyshouldnotbehighlyvaluedasnobleandcivilized.Wearesituatedinasocietyofthemarketeconomycharacterizedbyfiercecompetition.Anyonewhoisdishonestwillbediscardedandrejectedeventually.Anoldsayingshouldbekeptinourmind,thatis,honestyisthebestpolicy.评语：语言表达流畅，自然。2001年大作文Undoubtedly,loveisthenoblestemotionofmankind,whichdistinguishesusfromotheranimalsandsustainsusthroughoutthefierceevolution.Justasthepictureconcernedpointsout,lovecanbecomparedtoalamp,whichshinesbrighterwherethereisdarker.Wearelivinginasocietyfullofloveandmutualhelp.Inthepastyears,thesouthernpeopleamongthedisastroussnowstormhadbeenmovedbythekindnessfrompeoplenationwide;theSichuanProvincehadwitnessedenormoushelpfromacrosstheworldafterthetragicearthquake;theBeijingcityhadbeentouchedbytheselflessassistancefromthevolunteersfromtheOlympicGames.Allthesefactsillustratethemeaningoflovefromvariousaspects,thatis,loveisgreatestwhereitisneededmost.Therefore,weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpotherswhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefamilymembersorcompletelystrangers.Onlybythisway,canwemaketheworldabetterplace.评语：文章层次清晰，逻辑严密。2002年大作文Asisd印ictedinthepictureabove,anAmericangirl,dressedinChinesetraditionalcostumeofminoritygroup,smileshappilyandbrilliantly.Theaccessories,suchasribbons,jewelryandnecklaces,addorientalcharmtoherlovelyappearance.Conspicuously,itisthephotothatstressestheimportanceoftheculturalcommunication.Initslonghistoryspanningover5,000years,magnificentcivilizationandexcellentculturearecultivatedintheprosperouslandofourcountry.Withthereformandopening-up,theChinesetraditionalcultureisintroducedtotheworldandwe,Chinesepeople,alsohavethechancetolearntheoutstandingculturefromothercountries.Culturalexchangeshavebeenpromotingmutualunderstandingamongcountriesandenhancingharmoniousrelationshipontheearth.Itismyviewthatourconventionalcultureshouldberegardedasourtreasuresandresources,anditshouldbewellpreservedandcarefullystudied.Plus,othersplendidculturesshouldbeabsorbedtodevelopourownones.Moreimportantly,suchinternationalactivitiesastheOlympicGamesandtheWorldExposhouldbeheldconstantlytoimproveculturalcommunication.评析：本文意思清楚，用词丰富。人生哲理型模板1特征：图画不具体，需要引申适用于批判丑恶现象。第一段，引用名言1句，名言可编造。描述图画3句，(描述若只有2句，则加1句套话)ToparaphraseanillustriouscoachNolimitation,nofreedom".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,ayoungadultisblowingaballoonsymbolizingfreedom.Withtheever-inflatingballoon,hecansoarinthesky.Whentheballoonfliestoitspeakandexplodes,hefallstothegroundheavily.(Itisthebalancebetweenlimitationandfreedomthatshouldbekeptinourminds.)第二段,套话2句，用themore...themore...,举例到更广泛现象2句，套话总结1句。Thepictureeasilygetsusinsightintothefactthatthemorefreedomwehaveaccessto,themoreattentionweshouldpayinourwordsandbehaviors.Thistruthisself-evidenttoeveryone,butnoteveryonewouldputitintopractice.Inthecontemporarysociety,alargenumberofnetizensaremakingfulluseoftheInternetwithoutbeingcautiousandprudent.Somerumorsarefabricatedandconveyedonthenet.Falsemessagesandirresponsibleremarksareleftatwillontheforumorbbs.SuchtrendhascontaminatedtheInternetanditshouldberestrictedurgently.第三段，套话3句。Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobecenteredonthisproblem.Asacollegestudent,Ishoulddoallinmypowertostrikeabalancebetweenfreedomandlimitation.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanmakeitifwemakecombinedefforts.下：Toparaphraseanillustriouscoach,"Nolimitation,nofreedom".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,ayoungadultisblowingaballoonsymbolizingfreedom.Withtheever-inflatingballoon,hecansoarinthesky.Whentheballoonfliestoitspeakandexplodes,hefallstothegroundheavily.Thepictureeasilygetsusinsightintothefactthatthemorefreedomwehaveaccessto,themoreattentionweshouldpayinourwordsandbehaviors.Thistruthisself-evidenttoeveryone,butnoteveryonewouldputitintopractice.Inthecontemporarysociety,alargenumberofnetizensaremakingfulluseoftheInternetwithoutbeingcautiousandprudent.Somerumorsarefabricatedandconveyedonthenet.Falsemessagesandirresponsibleremarksareleftatwillontheforumorbbs.SuchtrendhascontaminatedtheInternetanditshouldberestrictedurgently.Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobecenteredonthisproblem.Asacollegestudent,Ishoulddoallinmypowertostrikeabalancebetweenfreedomandlimitation.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanmakeitifwemakecombinedefforts.人生哲理型模板2特征：图画不具体，需要引申适用于鼓舞上进现象。第一段，引用名言1句，名言可编造。描述图画2句。ToparaphrasePhilJackson,anillustriousandlegendarybasketballcoach,"Self-satisfactiongoesbeforefailure".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,anindividualwithlittlelearningsaysNototheknowledgepot.Insharpcontrast,theotheronewithmuchknowledgewelcomesthepotandsaysthatheisingreatneed.第二段，套话2句，举例1句，强调结构1句，套话总结2句。Thespritofdissatisfactionconsistsoftheveryforcethatpropelledhumancivilizationforwardinthelongjourneyofknowledgepursuing.Stimulatedbythethirstforknowledgefromwithinandchallengedbytheharshnessoftheenvironmentfromwithout,manhasevolvedfromthemostprimitivetothemostadvanced.TakeEinstein,arenownedphysicistintheworld,aswhat'sgoingon.Itishisnever-contentattitudethatmakeshimadistinguishedscientistfromamiddleschoolteacher.Thereisalwaysathornyroadpavedwithsweatsbehindasuccessfulman.Modestyseemstobetheferryboat,bywhichwecancrosstheturbulentwavesoflife,andreachtheshoreofsuccess.第三段，套话3句，替换主题词。Aboveall,what'sthedrivingforceoftheconstructionoftheknowledgefield?Amodestanddissatisfactoryattitude,onmypersonallevel,isofsupremeimportance.Brimmingwithmodestyandthirst,wecaneffortlesslypaintourlifemorecolorful.ToparaphrasePhilJackson,anillustriousandlegendarybasketballcoach,"Self-satisfactiongoesbeforefailure".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,anindividualwithlittlelearningsaysNototheknowledgepot.Insharpcontrast,theotheronewithmuchknowledgewelcomesthepotandsaysthatheisingreatneed.Thespritofdissatisfactionconsistsoftheveryforcethatpropelledhumancivilizationforwardinthelongjourneyofknowledgepursuing.Stimulatedbythethirstforknowledgefromwithinandchallengedbytheharshnessoftheenvironmentfromwithout,manhasevolvedfromthemostprimitivetothemostadvanced,lakeEinstein,arenownedphysicistintheworld,aswhat'sgoingon.Itishisnever-contentattitudethatmakeshimadistinguishedscientistfromamiddleschoolteacher.Thereisalwaysathornyroadpavedwithsweatsbehindasuccessfulman.Modestyseemstobetheferryboat,bywhichwecancrosstheturbulentwavesoflife,andreachtheshoreofsuccess.Aboveall,what'sthedrivingforceoftheconstructionoftheknowledgefield?Amodestanddissatisfactoryattitude,onmypersonallevel,isofsupremeimportance.Brimmingwithmodestyandthirst,wecaneffortlesslypaintourlifemorecolorful.社会现象型模板1特征：图画具体，都是社会现象，基本都可以归结到社会核心价值观的丧失。第一段，套话1句。描述图画2句。Apicturejumpsintooursightwhenwetakealookatthetestpaper.Inthiscartoon,agoodnumberoffolkssittinginfrontofthecomputerareconnectedbyaspiderwebsymbolizingtheInternet.Withtheworldwideweb,theycantalkwithpeopleacrosstheearth,buttheyevenhavenointeresttosayhellototheirfriendsadjoiningtothem.第二段，套话3句，举例说明1句，套话总结2句或3句。Conspicuously,thepicturepresentedherecarriesmoremeaningsbehindthesurface.ItmirrorsatrendragingacrosstheChineselandscape:ahostofwebaddictionhasfounditswayintoourlivesandhasthepotentialtobecomeincreasinglyprevalent.FartoomanyindividualshavespentmuchtimeontheInternetintheirdailylives,neglectingnormalactivitieswiththeirfamilies,workmatesorfriends.Acoupleofdrivingforcesarebehindthetrend.Tonameonlyone,thenet-wormsarelosingthebalancebetweenthecyberworldandtherealone,becausethesocietydoesnotplaceahighvalueoneducation./asanancientlandenjoyingasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years,Chinaiswitnessingthelossofsometraditionalcorevalues,becausewedonotplaceahighvalueonmoraleducation.第三段，套话2句。Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobefocusedonthisproblem.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanturnbackthiseviltideifwemakecombinedefforts Apicturejumpsintooursightwhenwetakealookatthetestpaper.Inthiscartoon,agoodnumberoffolkssittinginfrontofthecomputerareconnectedbyaspiderwebsymbolizingtheInternet.Withtheworldwideweb,theycantalkwithpeopleacrosstheearth,buttheyevenhavenointeresttosayhellototheirfriendsadjoiningtothem.Conspicuously,thepicturepresentedherecarriesmoremeaningsbehindthesurface.ItmirrorsatrendragingacrosstheChineselandscape:ahostofwebaddictionhasfounditswayintoourlivesandhasthepotentialtobecomeincreasinglyprevalent.FartoomanyindividualshavespentmuchtimeontheInternetintheirdailylives,neglectingnormalactivitieswiththeirfamilies,workmatesorfriends.Acoupleofdrivingforcesarebehindthetrend.Tonameonlyone,thenet-wormsarelosingthebalancebetweenthecyberworldandtherealone,becausethesocietydoesnotplaceahighvalueoneducation.Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobefocusedonthisproblem.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanturnbackthiseviltideifwe2010作文回忆版Apicturejumpsintooursightwhenwetakealookatthetestpaper.Inthiscartoon,apotfilledwithdeliciousandnutritiousfoodisboiling.ThevarietyoffoodsymbolizingtheChineseKongfu,post-modernization,Einstein,Sheakspearandwhat'sgoingon,reflecttheculturalexchangeincontemporarysociety.Differentkindsofcultureconsiststheveryforcethatpropelledhumancivilizationforwardinthelongjourneyofhistory.Stimulatedbythethirstforvariouscultureandchallengedbytheharshnessofenvironment,manhasevolvedfromthemostprimitivetothemostadvanced.Asanancientlandspanningof5,000years,Chinahaswitnessedtheculturalharmonywiththeminority.Withthereformandopening-up,ourcountryhasexperiencedtheculturalcommunicationthroughouttheglobe.Inthisprocess,excellentcultureisstudiedandfeudalcultureisrejected.TheChineseculturehasbecomethemostexcellentandoutstandingintheworld.Onmypersonallevel,suchactivitiesasBeijingOlympicGamesandShanghaiInternationalExposhouldbeheldconstantlytoenhancemutualculturalunderstandingandcommunication.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanmakeitifwemakecombinedefforts.宏伟的开头：不要老说ASwecansee或asisdescribed,开头要有震慑力，whetheryouarealionoralamp,youmustsprinttosurvive_（可以改成：强者或弱者都要努力去成功）或Nothingcanmorecontributetomakeamanstrongerthanhasalwaysanemenyinhisview!再如Tobeornottobe:thatisaquestion.ThisoldShakespeare'spuzzlementmaybeobvirousinthispicture.（Tobeornottobe可以换成任意的动作行为，这一句可是任何一个英语老师的专业必修课，应该是大三时要详细分析的莎士比亚的文章，看到这句90%的老师都会回忆过去，感到无比亲切，想起那时的爱情神马的……）反正大家觉得哪句与众不同又切题就好，上来一棍子把老师打晕二、描写图画三、引出问题四、举例证明五、解决措施六、展望未来这六个部分可以组成一切文章，只需要每一个部分背5个好句子，中间加上简单句连接一下，就可以在25分钟内搞出一篇有地道口味的文章。而且不会担心字数不够，不用担心结构不好。在这里我不是反对背诵，只是背诵会束缚思维，想要背上原题等于做梦，看到题目时，如果自己没有背过，就会一下子蒙了，而且还会局限在“火锅”这样的干扰词汇上迟迟动不了手。任何作**只需要把寓意说明，加上自己的观点就可以，不要局限在模拟题的撰写者上,文章是你自己的，Ifyoudon'tlike.changeit!现在是冲刺，尤其不能信押题和背诵，而是把属于你自己的模板练好，切实搞好30句，行文的时候抽出6句，一篇行云流水的文章因运而生！！’30是个句子比150篇要好的多吧，而且很多模拟文章结构上都是两头小，中间大，改卷子是肯定会漏掉中间的内容，所以我的作文大概3段都是70字左右，按情况微调下，我不敢说比谁写的好，因为我只写简单句来过渡……长的、漂亮的句子都是从真题里抠的，这样拼起来……我想也不会有人说我写的不好吧！个人经验，不喜欢的也不要拍砖了，留着时间背你的模板吧，我是草根，我很顽强，我的理念就是：感动老师是外刊作者的事，我的任务是安排他们与改卷子的见面不知道有没有发过，错略看•下觉得不错，直接粘给大家看看，大家还有什么可以补充最好也都写出来，share一下哈。。。1、经济：economicglobalization（经济全球化）,sustainabledevelopment（可持续发展），unfaircompetition（不正当竞争），crackdownonfakecommodities（打假），boom（繁荣），fiercecompetition（激烈竞争），creditcrisis（信用危机），stabilizeprices（稳定物价）2、文化：greatandprofound（博大精深的），integrationandinteraction（融合交汇），crash（碰撞）,charming（极具魅力的），splendid（壮丽辉煌的），Englishfever（英语热）3、环保：environment-friendly（生态型的，环保的），threatofglobalwarming（全球变暖的威胁），promotefundamentalshiftsintheeconomicsystemandmodeofeconomicgrowth（促进经济体制和经济增长方式的转变），curbenvironmentalpollution/bringthepollutionundercontrol（治理环境污桀,developrenewableresources（开发可再生资源），alow-carboneconomy（低碳经济）4、科技:scienceandtechnology（科学技术），web-addiction（沉迷网络，computercrime（电脑犯罪），e-commerce（电子商务），virtuallife（虚拟生活），informationera（信息时代），cyberromance（网恋），surftheInternet（网上冲浪）5、就业:applicant（申请人），positionavailable/vacantposition（空缺职位），competent（能胜任的），bequalifiedfor（合格的），proficiency（熟练程度），jobarrangementandbenefit（工作待遇和福利），promotion（晋升），gender-biased（性别歧视的），appearance-biased（相貌歧视的）6、大学生活/教育：cultivate（培养），furtherone^sstudy（深造），qualityeducation（素质教育），fosterabilities（培养能力），relievetheburdenonstudents（减轻学生负担），beoccupiedwithsomuchschoolwork（忙于功课）placeemphasison（以…为重心），comprehensive（全面的，广泛的），practicalcapability（实际能力），duck-stuffing（填鸭式）7、社会现象：enlightening（富有启发的），causealarmandattention（引起了警惕和重视），setgoodexamplefor（为…树立榜样），dedicate（做贡献）,takeaction（采取行动），ensureimplementingactivities（确保执行）,vulnerable（易诱惑的，易受影响的），besupposedto（应该）8、人物特征、情感描写：strong-minded（坚强的），industrious（勤奋的），promising（有前途的），dynamic（有生气的），responsible（有责任心的），influential（有影响力的），profound（渊博精深的）,devoted（忠实的，投入的），warm-hearted（热心的）第二篇：句型，词组搭配.随着经济的繁荣withtheboomingoftheeconomy.随着人民生活水平的显著提高withtheremarkableimprovementofpeople，slivingstandard.先进的科学技术advancedscienceandtechnology.为我们日常生活增添了情趣addmuchspice/flavortoourdailylife.人们普遍认为Itiscommonlybelievedthat….我同意前者（后者）观点Igivemyvotetotheformer/latteropinion..引起了广泛的公众关注Sth.hasarousedwidepublicconcern./Sthhasdrawngreatpublicattention..利远远大于弊Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages..开阔眼界widenone,shorizon/broadenone'svision.考虑到诸多因素takemanyfactorsintoconsideration.从另一个角度fromanotherperspective.致力于/投身于becommitted/devotedto….日益激烈的社会竞争theincreasinglykeensocialcompetition.…有其自身的优缺点…hasitsownmeritsanddemerits/prosandcons.对…有害doharmto/beharmfulto/bedetrimentalto.交流思想/情感/信息exchangeideas/emotions/information.跟上…的最新发展keeppacewith/keepabreastwiththelatestdevelopmentof•••.…的健康发展thehealthydevelopmentof….把时间和精力放在…上focusone'stimeandenergyon….导致很多问题giveriseto/leadto/spellvariousproblems.可以替代think的词believe,claim,maintain,argue,insist,holdtheopinion/belief/viewthat.优先考虑/发展…give(top)prioritytosth..与•-•比较comparedwith…/incomparisonwith.提供就业机会offerjobopportunities大作文开头万能公式.开头万能公式一：名人名言有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？"，很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？经典句型：Aproberbsays,“Youareonlyyoungonce."（适用于已记住的名言）Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：Aseveryoneknows,Noonecandenythat....开头万能公式二：数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about78.9%ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：Honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。TravelbyBike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候苜选的交通工具是自行车。Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-dayWorkWeekBetterthanSix-dayWork?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：Arecentstatisticsshowsthat...结尾万能公式.结尾万能公式一：如此结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子:Obviously（此为过渡短语），wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！更多过渡短语：tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thus更多句型：Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat...,Therefore,wecanfindthat....结尾万能公式二：如此建议如果说“如此结论''是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！Obviously,itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly,Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.写作的“七项基本原则”一、长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、主题句原则国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐臧在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定耍写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam（主题句）.Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.三、一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的"标签''来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐,原因：俗）thefirst,ihesecond,thethird,thelast（不推荐，原因:俗）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly（不推荐,原因：俗）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（强烈推荐）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐）mostimportantofall,moreover,finallyontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于两点的情况）foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况）建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！四、短语优先原则写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点一精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：Icannotbearit.可以用短语表达：Icannotputupwithit.Iwantit.可以用短语表达：Iamlookingforwardtoit.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。五、多实少虚原则原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之类的形象词。再比如：走出房间，general的词是：walkoutoftheroom但是小偷走出房间应该说：slipoutoftheroom小姐走出房间应该说：sailoutoftheroom小孩走出房间应该说：danceoutoftheroom老人走出房间应该说：staggeroutoftheroom所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！六、多变句式原则1）加法（串联）都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短语可以用：besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover2）转折（拐弯抹角）批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.更多的短语：despitethat,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,notwithstanding3）因果（so,so,so）昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.更多短语：then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,sothat4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：Whentogo,Whyhegoesaway...5）附加（多此一举）如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.Idon'tenjoythatbookyouarereading.Mrliu,ouroralEnglishteacher,iseasy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成：定语从句一借用之前的关键词并且用其甫新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whomorthat关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。6）排比（排山倒海句）文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional,sophisticatedorsimple,thereisplentyinLondonforyou.Nowadays,energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil,coal,naturalgas,solarheat,thewindandoceantides.Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.（气势恢宏）要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！七、挑战极限原则既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单.，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：Theweatherbeingfine,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.Africaisthesecondlargestcontinent,itssizebeingaboutthreetimesthatofChina.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！文章主体段落三大杀手铜一、举实例思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！Inordertoattractmorecustomers,advertisershaveadoptedeverypossiblestimulativefactorinmakingads,suchassound,light,colours,cartoonfilmsandhumanperformance.Forinstance,toadvertiseacertainfood,advertiserswillaskanactororactresstositatatableanddevourtheseeminglydeliciousfoodwhiletheyfimehimorher.更多句型：Totake...asanexample,Oneexampleis....Anotherexampleis...,forexample二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点(throughcomparison)和不同点(throughcontrast)。下面是一些短语：相似的比较：incomparison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith...三、换言之没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字Iloveyou!Iamenthusiasticaboutyou.Thatistosay,Iloveyou.Iamwildaboutyou.Inotherwords,Ihavefalleninlovewithyou.或者上面我们举过的例子：Icannotbearit.可以用短语表达：Icannotputupwithit.因此可以这样说：Icannotbearit.Thalistosay,IcannotputupwithitorIamfedupwithit.更多短语：inmoredifficultlanguage,insimplerwords,putitmoresimplyAnygovernment,whichisblindtothispointmaypayaheavyprice.任何政府忽略这一点将付出巨大的代价Nowdays当前atthemerementionof—■提至IIInviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效地措施Itisdisputablethat无可争辩Althoughthisviewiswidelyheld,thisislittleevidencethat...Infact,wehavetoadmi