2019_2020学年高中英语Unit3ScienceversusnaturePeriodSixWriting—Writingaletterofadvice课件.pptx

,Unit 3,Science and nature,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Six WritingWriting a letter of advice,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议或忠告。建议可以是写给个人的，就某些问题提出自己的看法或建议；也可以是写给单位或机构的，这类信往往就改进其目前的不合理现状提出建议或忠告。 建议信要写出提建议的原因，建议的内容，以及如果被采纳可能会出现的积极结果。提出理由一定要合情合理，语气要委婉。建议信的写作要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。,写作指导,建议信的写作步骤： 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气要委婉。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉或说教，而不是提建议。 结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，展望建议被采纳后的良好结果，要注意礼貌用语，使被建议者容易接受。 友情提醒：写作这类题目时，考生要注意不要跑题，因为这类题很有可能写成议论文，如“我认为一二，所以要如何如何”。考生应该时刻记得书信的交际功能，要考虑到收信人的感受。在给对方提建议时应该不时地说到I和you，要让人时刻感受到这是一种交流。,1.我写信的目的是 Im writing to./I am writing with the intention of./I am writing intending to. 2.很遗憾我听说/我知道你在方面有困难 Im sorry to hear/know that you have some difficulty/trouble/problems with sth. /in doing sth.,常用表达,3.我的建议是： (1)May I suggest that you should.? (2)I wish./I really hope that. (3)What about.？/How about.? (4)My suggestions are as follows. (5)It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on. (6)When it comes to such a situation，I would like to suggest that you should. 4.如果你采纳了我的建议，情况是容易改变的。 The situation is easy to change if you follow/take my advice.,PART 2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你是高二一班学生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的不文明行为，请用英文给校长写一封100词左右的信，信中包括以下内容： 1.写信的目的； 2.对这些行为进行批评； 3.提出建议。 参考词汇：随意涂写scribble；乱丢垃圾litter,写作要求是写一封建议信，写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作时应注意书信的常规格式。 2.主体时态：一般现在时。 3.主体人称：第一、二人称。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.吸引的注意力于 _ 2.随意涂写和乱丢垃圾 _ 3.对某人来说做某事是不合适的_ 4.与此同时 _ 5.约束自己 _ 6.在的共同努力下 _,查看答案,draw/attract.attention to.,scribbling and littering,Its not appropriate/improper for sb. to do sth.,at the same time/meantime/meanwhile,behave/control/contain oneself,with the joint efforts of.,遣词造句,句式升级 1.我写信的目的是引起你对学生在校园内的一些不良行为随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的关注，这些行为使我们的校园脏乱并且不适宜学习。 I am writing to inform you of some improper behavior among us students on our campus：scribbling and littering，_ .(现在分词作状语) I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students on our campus：scribbling and littering，_ .(which引导非限制性定语从句),查看答案,making our school a dirty and unpleasant,place to study in,which makes our school a,dirty and unpleasant place to study in,2.很显然学生到处乱涂乱扔是不合适的。 Students tend to litter and scribble about， it is clearly an improper behavior.(并列句) is clearly not appropriate for students . (it作形式主语),查看答案,and,to litter and scribble about,It,Dear Mr Headmaster， I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，Senior .I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students on our campus：scribbling and littering，which makes our school a dirty and unpleasant place to study in.,查看答案,组句成篇,It is clearly not appropriate for students to litter and scribble about.My suggestion is that the school place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior.At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that，with the joint efforts of both