人教版高中英语高考总复习写作中关于“地点介绍”专题写作课件.ppt

,与为邻由组成坐落在当用有的历史/人口面积有.第三大城市因为/作为而出名,东边有一个极好的地方盛产,1.neighbor与为邻2.bemadeupof/consistof由组成3.belocated/situatedin/near坐落在4.serveas当用5.with/hasahistoryof有的历史6.with/hasapopulationof有7.coveranareaof面积有.,8.thethirdlargestcity第三大城市9.befamousfor以而著名10.bewell-knownfor/as因为/作为而出11.onitseastlies东边有12.afantasticplace一个极好的地方13.berich/abundantin盛产,1.Iwouldliketointroducemyhometowntoyou.我向你介绍一下我的家乡。2.Myhometown,neighboringHongKong,islocatedinGuangdongProvince.我的家乡,毗邻香港,位于广东省。,相关句式,3.Guangzhou,acitywithapopulationofaboutthirteenmillion,hasahistoryofmorethan2,200years.广州,拥有一千三百人口的一座城市,有三百多年的历史了。4.Coveringatotalareaof7,434squarekilometersthiscityhasapopulationofabouttenmillion.这座城市占地面积达7,434平方公里,人口大约是10,000,000。,5.Itisrichinnaturalsourcessuchascoalandgold,andhasmildclimate.它自然资源得天独厚,有丰富的煤和金矿,而且气候温和。6.Ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。,1.介绍或描述地点的基础写作,通常以表格形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性,另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容,不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译,如不能写成“ThelocationofGuangzhouisinthesouthofChina”这样不地道的句子,相应的表达应该是:GuangzhouliesinthesouthofChina.,2.确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。3.避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句,而应该具体写出描述的对象，如theGreatWall,HongKong等。但如果整篇文章多处用“it”等作主语,文章会稍显逊色,所以在写作过程中,可根据文意适当变换主语,如改写为theplace,thecity等。,你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。【信息要点】,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,例题导写1.按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间,也避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。2.草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。请翻译要点：(1)有(多久)的历史_,Ithasahistoryof.,(2)世界最长的城墙_(3)6000多千米长_(4)由石头,砖头做成_(5)由人工修建_,beconstructedbyhand,thelongestwallintheworld,6000kilometerslong,bemadeofstonesandbricks,6)防御外来入侵者_(7)每隔几百米_,everyfewhundredmeters,preventthecountryfrombeinginvaded;defendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,(8)著名旅游景点之一_(9)吸引许多外国游客_,oneofthefamousscenicspots;oneofthefamousplacesofinterest;oneofthefamoustouristattractions,attractmanyforeignvisitors,3.规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语过长,应转用“a/an/the+名词+of”的表达,例如,“两千多年的历史”应该写成“ahistoryoftwothousandyears”,而不能写成“twothousandyearshistory”。,4.变换表达,丰富句式。请按要求完成句子：(1)Itismorethan6000kilometersinlength,_(“是世界上最长的城墙”,使用非限制性定语从句)(2)ItwastheGreatWall_inancienttimes.(“帮助人们防御外来入侵者”,使用强调句),thathelpedpeoplefightagainsttheforeigninvaders,whichmakesitthelongestwallintheworld,(3)_,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.(“长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”,使用原因状语从句)(4)TheGreatWallisoneofthewell-knownplacesofinterestonearth,_.(“每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”,使用非谓语结构),(5)TheGreatWallis_afamoushistoricalattraction_itattractshundredsofthousandsofforeignvisitorseachyear.(使用“如此以致”的句型表达)(6)So_thatitattractshundredsofthousandsofvisitorshomeandabroadeveryyear.(“长城如此吸引”,使用倒装句),attractiveistheGreatWall,such,that,参考范文LadiesandGentlemen，WelcometotheGreatWall.TheGreatWall,whichismorethan6,000kilometerslong,isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadeofstonesandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutanymachine.,Asthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.Now,theGreatwallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChinaanditattractsmanyforeignvisitorseveryyear.,能力提高1.请根据中文提示,完成有关地点介绍的语汇积累。(1)位于_(2)靠近_,nextto/closeto,intheneighborhoodof,neighboring.,belocated/situatedin；lie(s)in,(3)有(多少)人口_(4)有(多久)历史_,Ithasapopulationof.;Withapopulationof.,sth.;Thepopulationhasreached.,Ithasahistoryof.;Withahistoryof.，sth.,(5)占(多大)面积_(6)表达“容量”Thehotel_(拥有)120rooms;Thebuildingcan_(容纳)5000people.,coveranareaof.(squarekilometers/squaremeters),possesses,hold,(7)是(多少)长/宽/深Itis._/_/_.=Itis.in_/_/_.(8)著名景点aplaceof_,ahistorical_,ascenicspot(9)表达“吸引、著名”sth._sb.;sth.be_(形容词);befamous_(因而著名);befamous_(作为而著名),as,long,wide,deep,length,width,depth,interest,attraction,attract/appealto,attractive/appealing/wonderful,for,2.请根据中文,完成短文。Guangzhou,thethirdlargestcityinChina,alsoknownasCityofFlowers,servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongand(1)_(政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心).(2)_(全市面积7434.4平方公里),itishometomorethan11millionpeople.,Covering/Withanareaof7434.4squarekilometers,LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong,northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity,Guangzhou(3)_(气候温暖湿润).Besides,itisafamouscitywith(4)_(有着2,200多年历史)andastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Guangzhou(5)_(旅游资源丰富).,enjoysawarmandwetclimate,2012年体育盛事奥运会将在伦敦举行。你校一年一度的英语体育节将至，请你根据以下表格内容,用英语写一篇介绍伦敦的文章，张贴在体育节的宣传栏上。写作内容,London,themostimportantindustrialcityofEngland,servesasthecentreofitspolitical,economicandculturallife.LocatedinthesoutheastofEngland,itcoversanareaof1580squarekilometers.Theweatherischangeableanditrainsoften.Peoplecanenjoytheconvenienceofthemeansoftransportation,butatarelativelyexpensiveprice.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Londonattractsvisitorsfromallovertheworld,leavingthemadeepimpression.,参考范文,精华点评,写作时,分清题目背景引入说明部分和真正的写作内容。本题中,“2012年体育盛事奥运会将在伦敦举行”、“你校一年一度的英语体育节将至”只是引入该基础写作的一个背景说明。根据题目要求,真正的写作内容仅仅是表格内的信息,写作时不能画蛇添足。对于信息量较大的句子,可考虑使用“with+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构,例如：(1)LondonissituatedinthesoutheastofEngland,withanareaof1580squarekilometers.,你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组，在汇报课上，各小组成员要介绍一个独具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的关于香港的信息。,参考词汇：澳门Macao南丫岛LemmaIsland写作内容请根据以上表格内容,介绍香港的有关情况。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,参考范文HongKong,acitysituatedclosetothesouthofGuangdongandtotheeastofMacao,isfamousfortraveling,food,shoppingandfilmindustryaswell.Inthismoderncity,therearevariouskindsofbrandsfromallovertheworldforpeopletochoosefrom,whichmakesHongKonganidealplaceforshopping.,HongKongisalsoanexcitingplacewherepeoplecanenjoytheirleisuretimeandholidaybyvisitingthefamousscenicspots,suchastheDisneyland,theOceanPark,theLemmaIslandandsoon.Intherestaurantsrunbythelocalpeople,visitorscanenjoythedeliciousfoodatareasonableprice.Whatsmore,HongKongpeoplearecreativeandpassionate,crea