湖北省谷城县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错训练（6）.doc

湖北谷城县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（6）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。my sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.she liked it at once.then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.as she did this，lots of tea splashed on his tshirt！i had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face！my sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.it was turned out to be her own cup，that shed left on the shelf by mistake.the assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for i just thought it was funny!【参考答案】：my sister saw a lovely cup when we shopping the other day. she liked it at once. then she bent down and picked up to look at price on it. as she did this, lots of tea splashed on tshirt！i had to try not to laugh at her shocked face! my sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over ot us. it turned out to be her own cup, shed left on the shelf by mistake. the assistant was clearly as as my sister, i just thought it was funny!短文改错。假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。recently i read an article in a magazine.it was of a mother who was worried about his son just because of he always kept his hair long.the mother thought that was not right，but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it.different generations have different opinions on the same thing.that is what is meaning by “the generation gap”we can see them in our daily lives.most of our parents like listening to old song while young people prefer pop songs. every time my father finds me listen to rock music，he always shouted，“shut it off.its awful！” how can we deal the generation gap?答案：recently i read an article in a magazine.it was a mother who was worried about son just because he always kept his hair long.the mother thought that was not night，but the son felt there was nothing about it.different generations have different opinions on the same thing.that is what is by “the generation gap”we can see in our daily lives.most of our parents like listening to old while young people prefer pop songs. every time my father finds me to rock music，he always ，“shut it off.its awful！” how can we dealthe generation gap? (2015新课标全国)one day，little tony went to a shopping center with his parent.it was very crowded.tony saw a toy on a shop window.he liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.after looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.tony was scared and begun to cry.a woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.five minutes later，tony saw parents.mom said，“how nice to see you again！dad and i were terrible worried.”tony promised her that this would never happen again.1解析考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。答案第1句：parentparents2解析考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。答案第3句： onin3解析考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so.that.为固定句型，意思是“如此以至于”，故去掉very。答案第4句： 去掉very4解析考查省略的用法。after之后省去了主语he，he与look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。答案第5句： lookslooking5解析考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。答案第5句： 去掉where或wherethat6解析考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was scared并列，因此，要用一般过去时。答案第6句：begunbegan7解析考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。答案第7句：tellingtold8解析考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。答案第7句：athe9解析考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。答案第8句：saw后加his10解析考查副词的用法。形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。答案第10句：terribleterribly (2015浙江高考)my old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.i enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.on the lefthand side of the class，i could easy see the football field.in the mornings，it was full of students exercising.the view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.farther in the distance，i could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.on the right side of the class was the road.i was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.the position of the classroom with its view made me felt like i was dreaming.if i was only a child when i studied in that classroom，i will never forget it.1解析考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。答案第一句：sidesides2解析考查固定表达。be made of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be made from是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。答案第一句：fromof3解析考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。答案第二句：sitsitting4解析考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。答案第三句：easyeasily5解析考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。答案第五句：iswas6解析考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数a beautiful park要用it。答案第六句：themit7解析考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。答案第七句：not去掉8解析考查固定表达。in a hurry匆匆忙忙。答案第九句：in后加a9解析考查非谓语动词。make sb do.使某人做某事。答案第十句：feltfeel10解析考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。答案最后一句：ifalthough/though(2015陕西高考)my soccer coach retired in last week.i wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.my mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so i decide to ask her for help.mum taught me some basic step of baking.i insisted on doing most of the baking myself.i thought the biscuits were really well.my only mistake was that i dropped some on the floor after i was packing them up.at a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“i might have to retire again next