安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作外教旁批写作 (14)

安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作（十五）考查方式课堂考试学期论文(term paper)完成时间2小时2周内容老师限定可任选一个你感兴趣的课题地点课堂上课外完成方式独立完成，不得带参考书可讨论，并可查阅相关资料学生习作外教批改Nowadays1 Traditionally，almost_of2 most the3 students have had to study4 sit for a5 an exam in order to text_their_marks6 test their understanding of what they had learnt.But a_new_kind_of_way_can_be_chose_by_them 7 now they can choose a new way.Its the8 term paper.Traditional exams only offer the students about 2 two hours to prove their ability while9The students who choose the term paper own have 2 two weeks to finish it.The Students must be_have_their_own interest10 be motivated.It is said，“Interest is the best teacher for_student11.” Interest12 Having an interest in the subject will make them study more successfully.Look_for_knowledge_can_let_the_ thinking_of_the_students_wider_and_righter.13 When students are interested in the subject they are studying，they are more likely to research the topic in greater depth and broaden their knowledge. The_way 14 That is why the term paper will be welcomed by the students.They will get_a_new_idea15 come up with new ideas and_study_hobby16 as they study what interests them and the study will never hard17be difficult.旁批1用词不当。nowadays指现在，而这里在谈过去的考试方式。2almost of the students在语法上是错误的。almost是副词，意思是“几乎；差不多”；most是代词，意思是“最多，最大”。3most后直接跟名词。4不能说study an exam，只能说take an exam或sit for an exam。5注意不要犯这类初级错误，以免丢分。6表达错误，参见改写后的句子。7最好用主动语态使前后一致。8这里特指学期论文这种方式，因此要用the。9原句意思不完整。要说明学生在两小时内做什么。10语法错误。参见改写后的句子。11此处不必加for student。这个观点适用于所有人。12对什么的兴趣？要写具体些。13意思不清楚。参见改写后的句子。14表达不清楚，参见改写后的句子。15更常用的说法是come up with new ideas。注意不是an idea，因为你的想法可能不止一个。16表达不清楚。改写的句子仅供参考。17the study will never hard这种表达方法在语法上不正确。参见改写后的句子。will后面应该有一个动词，而hard是形容词。这是一篇较差的作文。作者使用了一些复杂的句式，大胆地使用了一些单词，但没能很好地运用它们，没有把想法表达清楚。尤其是最后一段，写得含糊不清。作者也没有回答题目的要求，只是泛泛地讨论了问题而没有从个人的角度来分析。写作前要仔细阅读题目要求。高分作文秘诀之八：使用较复杂句式。例如：Instead of (不要说：)She is a girl.She is 15 years old.Use (要说：)She is a girl aged 15.Instead of (不要说：)Last winter holiday I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandma.Use (要说：)My father and I spent our last winter holiday in the countryside，visiting my grandma.Instead of (不要说：)We hadnt been there for many years and were greatly surprised at the changes.Use (要说：)As we hadnt been there for many years，we were greatly surprised at the changes./Not having been there for many years，we were greatly surprised at the changes.Instead of (不要说：)I passed my driving test.This surprised my father.Use (要说：)I passed my driving test，which surprised my father.体会下列句子的句式结构：1We should try to make proper use of the computer，making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.2Absorbed in the games, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves，leaving their homework undone.宣传环保的方式很多，其中有漫画形式，有诗歌形式。两处方式各有特点。请你按照下列要点写一篇120词左右的英语短文：1漫画形式：形象，有趣，易懂，省时；2诗歌形式：语言优美，寓意深刻，想象空间大；3你喜欢的形式和理由。_参考范文：There are different ways to popularize environment protection，among which are the cartoon form and the poem form.The cartoon form can transform boring and abstract warnings into realistic pictures，which are quite vivid and interesting.In addition，they would save a lot of time for readers because the information contained in pictures is more concentrated and easily understood.With a good sense of rhythm，poems are usually written in rhyme.The languages used in poems are so nice that readers are easily attracted.Furthermore，poems usually convey deep thou