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1、高中英语写作扩句 扩句的方法在学习扩句法之前,先对学生进行五个简单句句型,并列句和复合句的专项训练,打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基础上,添加各种修饰成分,使句子得到扩展,即根据表达的需求增加定语,状语,同位语等成分,或者举例子补充细节内容,或者添加谚语俗语等。1 1. We arrived in Sanya.- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. (添加副词)2 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.- I like to make friends with my classmates, w
2、ho have the same interest as mine. (添加定语从句)3 3. We were happy and returned home.- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.(添加状语从句)4 4. I like reading books.- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.(通过举例补充细节)5 5. We shoul
3、d study hard.- As we all know, “Practice makes perfect”. So we should study hard.(添加谚语)6 6. I often join in many activities.- I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind. (添加目的状语)三 具体应用试题要求:假如你是一名中学生,请以My colorful school life为题,写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结
4、尾已经给出,不计入总数。要点提示:1:上课认真听讲 2:课后完成作业 3:经常参加体育锻炼 4:去图书馆阅读Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. _ May there always be colorful life around my school. 学生的习作:Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. I list
5、en to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library. May there always be colorful life around my school.点评:该学生能完整的写出各个要点,没有出现太大的语法错误,表达通顺,单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够,没有达到100个字左右,字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次,句子的表达过于平淡无奇,没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇,固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而
6、且,没有使用连接词,上下文的连接不够顺畅。 改进方法:步骤一:列要点 把要写的内容要点化,做到要点齐全。 1: Listen to the teacher carefully 2: finish my homework 3:take part in exercise 4: often read in the library步骤二:造简单句 充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充,使其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性,语法是否正确,说法是否符合英语表达习惯。 1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class. 2: I fi
7、nish my homework after class. 3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates. 4: I do some reading in the school library.步骤三:扩展句子 1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.(增加目的状语从句) 2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of
8、 cake for me.(增加定语从句) 3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton etc.(举例说明) 4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.(增加时间状语从句)步骤四:润色句子 根据高考(海南)英语作文评分细则,第五档的要求:24-25分,至少有3个复杂句,2种从句形
9、式,语气自然,敬语得体,无中式英语,语言基本功扎实,词汇丰富。这就要求我们在谴词造句方面下工夫。“润色句子包括词语的选择与句型的运用。” 比如可以用高级词汇,短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式,倒装句,it当形式主语和形式宾语,非谓语动词等,使用多种句式,使其多样化。 1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. (把第一句换成it当形式主语的用法,使句式多样化。) 2: I take
10、 homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.(增加了takeseriously和in time两个短语,是句子更加生动) 3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.(增加了in order to
11、 do sth目的状语和different kinds of使句子的意思更完整。) 4: Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.(使用过去分词短语当状语,再添加短语develop the habbit of 使文章增加亮点)步骤五:连句成篇 “过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用,它好比一座桥梁,能将全文各句有机地联系在一起,从而使句子不再是孤立的独立的个体。”使用表示转折,并列,递进,因果关系等连词把句子连
12、接起来,“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”使上下文更加通顺,逻辑性更强。Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard.(原文已给) First of all(过渡词), it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. Whats more(过渡词), I tak
13、e homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition(过渡词), In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally(过渡词), Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to th
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