初中英语作文指导

1、第一讲：句子的写作2. 案例分析例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。过去的表现现在的表现经常与别人吵架与别人相处融洽乱扔垃圾爱护环境沉溺于电脑游戏积极参加各种活动l 参考作文对比，注意划线部分。三类一般作文一类优秀作文We are very glad that Li hua has made great progress. Before the activity, he often quarreled with other students, and never

2、said sorry to others. He always threw trash in the classroom. Sometimes, he played computer games for a very long time. But now, he can make good friends with others. Also, he is very active in taking part in a lot of activities, such as playing basketball, visiting the museums, go swimming. We all

3、like him very much.We are very glad that Li Hua has made great progress. But he used to be impolite and even often quarreled with others. He threw litter about and made our classroom dirty. After class, he usually lost himself in playing computer games. After this activity, Li Hua has changed a lot.

4、 He gets on well with others and is ready to help them. He also takes good care of the environment. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities, too. We are all glad of his progress.（初一、初二）练习题：通过讨论、分析以下例题，找出写作题材、要点、人称和时态。例题：下面六幅图描述了十月九日星期三早晨你所经历的一件事。请根据这些图画，用英语写一篇日记。注意：1. 日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细

5、节，使其连贯。2. 词数：100 左右。. 句子的写作 1. 写作指导-五种基本句型（1）主语+谓语 My father smokes a lot. Some are dancing, some are singing.（2）主语+连系动词+表语She is an English teacher.The one in red shirt is my uncle.（3）主语+谓语+宾语He likes learning Chinese.We all donated our pocket money.（4）主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语Mr. Wang teaches us English.I l

6、ent her my book.【注意】并不是所有得动词都能用于此句型。除以上两词外，能用于此句型的动词主要有两大类: (1) bring, give, sell, show, take, tell, throw, write等；(2) buy, find, get, leave, make, save, choose等。（5）主语+谓语+宾语+宾补I often ask him to help me with my homework.We chose him our monitor.练习题（一）、请将下列词连成句子。1). walk, supper, shall, we, have, aft

7、er, a ?_2). I, him, my, considered, friend, best._3). has, homework, he, not, done, his._4). to, work, finish, we, difficult, the, it, found._练习题（二）、分析句子并改错。1). There was no people to take care of the children.改：_2). There are a desk and two chairs in the room.改：_3). Mr. Wang went to bed until 12 la

8、st night.改：_4). When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.改：_5). When I get to the station the train leave.改：_6). Could you tell me where shall we meet tomorrow?改：_7). Watch TV too much is bad for our eyes.改：_8). Though we were very tired, but we felt very happy.改：_2. 满分作文 用优美的语言描写你的学校。要

9、求：请你用英语写一篇短文，词数80左右。短文要求达意、正确、连贯。My SchoolAt the foot of the mountain there is a river. By the river there is a small school.The school has no tall building. It has only four old houses. Though old, it is funny and interesting.Before the houses there is a wooden yard. Students can play freely there

10、after classes. Behind the houses there is a nut garden. When autumn comes, the nuts are in harvest. They are delicious.On the top of a house there stands a big iron bowl. Do you know what it is? It is used to receive TV programs. Wth its help students can know the world far away. Its amazing, isnt i

11、t? This is my school. Please come and see it.3. 必备（背）词句。要求仿例模仿造句。be crazy about 发狂的喜欢例句：I am really crazy about Michael Jackson's rock'n'roll. 造句_ give sb. a hand / give a hand to sb. 帮助某人翻译：向危难之人伸出援助之手。_ the 比较级 the 比较级 越越翻译：你越努力，你进步越大。_ make (full) use of （充分）利用翻译：我们应该充分利用水。_ Theres no

12、 point in doing sth. 做某事无意义、没必要翻译：等待毫无意义。 _ would rather do sth. than do sth. 宁愿（可）做 不愿做翻译：我宁愿在家看电视也不愿去看电影。_.4. 实战演练：佳句仿写a) To tell you the truth, all of us were born in the year of goat. 实话告诉你吧，我们都是羊年出生的。 实话告诉你吧，她是我们班学习最好的。_.b) Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我见过最美丽的女孩。 张

13、老师是我遇到的最仁慈的老师。_.c) Reading is good for our mind. 读书对我们的心智有益。 做早操对我们有好处。_.d) Nothing is difficult to do as long as you want to have a try. 只要肯尝试，任何事情都不难！只要你需要我，我就愿意伸出援助之手。 _.第二讲：句子的写作-简单句和复合句1. 写作指导-精彩的简单句2. （1）连词词组、介词短语和动词固定搭配的使用：此部分内容需考生熟练掌握。a) 连词词组：bothand, neithernor, eitheror, as well as等b) 介词短语

14、：fromto，till/until, by means of, in favor of等c) 动词固定搭配：make progress, have fun, take time, keep a promise等（2）感叹句的使用：熟练使用以how和what引导的感叹句，突出说话人的强烈情感。a) what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语(it)+谓语(is)!b) How+adj.(adv.)+主语(it)+谓语(is)!（3）强调句的使用：强调句的种类繁多，也是考试的难点之一。在使用时，考生需要根据自身实力酌情选择。以下是书面表达中易掌握的强调句式。a) do(does/did)+动词

15、原形b) It引导的强调句：It is (was)+被强调部分+that (who)+句子其他部分c) 倒装句：倒装是考试难点中的难点。书面表达中可能用到的两种倒装句式：l Only+状语+助动词(情态动词)+主语+谓语l so(neither/nor)+助动词(系动词/情态动词)+主语 (so表示肯定意义、neither/nor表示否定意义)2. 练习：用以下词组填空by means of keep promise in favor ofas well as neithernor take time1) _ I _ she is a teacher.我和她都不是老师。2) Fei Junlo

16、ng _ Yang Liwei are the national heroes.费俊龙和杨利伟一样也成为了人民英雄。3) She tried to explain _body language.她试着通过肢体语言来解释。4) Im _his opinion.我同意他的观点。5) English studying_.学英语很花费时间。6) I must _my _.我得遵守诺言/我不能食言。. 满分作文快餐在中国很流行，但快餐对人体却没什么好处。请根据下面中文提示，以“Fast Food”为题，写一篇80词左右得英语短文。提示：（1）快餐十分流行，尤其是儿童很喜欢；（2）快餐受欢迎的原因：方便(

17、convenient)、省时；既可在快餐店吃可以带家吃；（3）从营养角度讲快餐食品不利于健康；（4）建议：如时间来不及可吃快餐，但儿童应尽量少吃。要求：句子通顺，语言表达正确，可适当增加细节使内容连贯。Fast FoodFast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children.There are several reasons for the fast food. First, it is very convenient and save time. Second, you can eithe

18、r eat it in the restaurant or take it home. Third, the service is quite good.However, eating fast food too much will do harm to our health. I think fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry. Its good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible. 必备（背）词句a) bot

19、h and 和都例句：Both you and I are good students.你和我都是好学生。b) either or 不是就是/或例句：_.你可以在早晨或在临睡前记单词。c) not until 直到才例句：_.直到中午我们才赶到目的地（destination）。（尝试用倒装句表达）d) make progress 取得进步例句：We are eager to make progress.我们很渴望取得进步。e) not only but also 不但而且例句：_.我不但喜欢音乐，而且还喜欢体育。(尝试用倒装句表达)f) too to 太以至于不例句：I was too exc

20、ited to go to sleep.我太兴奋了以至于无法入睡。根据下列内容提示，些一篇80词左右得日记。内容要点：（1） 2月8日（星期六，晴天）上午8：30；（2） 两支足球队：老年队（the Aged Team）和少年队（the Teenagers Team），最大的队员91岁，最小的队员9岁；（3） 上半场老年队以3-2获胜，第二场老年队体力欠佳，最后少年队5-4赢得球赛。Saturday February 8th Fine There was a special football game today. It attracted many people. The game was

21、between the Aged Team and the Teenagers Team. The oldest player was 91 years old while the youngest was only 9. The game started at 8:30 in the morning. The Aged Team won the first half. The score was 3 to 2. But in the second half, they felt a bit tired. The teens were still fully of energy. The au

22、dience cheered for both teams. In the end, the Teenagers Team won, and the score was 5 to 4. How wonderful the game was!. 必备（背）词句a) as soon as 一 就 例句：_.一看到见她我就知道出事了/有事不对了。b) as + adj. + as possible / as many(much)+可数(不可数)名词+as possible尽可能.的例句：_.他尽可能多的问了很多问题。c) be famous for 以而闻名、著名例句：_.我们学校以篮球著称。d)

23、had better (not) do sth. 最好（不）做例句：_.你最好不要吃太多快餐。e) It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人做某事花了多长时间。例句：_.我花了2个月完成了这项调查。f) Its time for sth. / Its time for sb. to do sth. 是做的时间了、该做.了例句：Its time for school.该上学了。_.我们该休息休息了。g) prefer to do sth. 宁可、更愿意做 / prefer doing to sth. 更喜欢做不喜欢做例句：I prefer to listen to

24、 some in my spare time.空闲时间，我更愿意听听音乐。_.比起游泳，我更喜欢钓鱼。h) used to do sth. 过去曾经、常做（现在不做了）例句：_.以前他每天上课都迟到。-开头、主体和结尾练习一：根据背景提示编写出文章的开头。为了保护环境，节约能源，中国政府出台了一条禁令：从2008年6月1日起，禁止超市和商店使用超薄塑料袋。如客户有需要，需付费。请针对此禁令发表你的看法。提示词汇：ban(禁令)，stopfrom doing sth. provide, free(免费), protect, cause.你的开头：_ _练习二：为以上文章编写一个的合理的结尾你的结

25、尾：_ _. 满分作文After three years of staying together, you will say goodbye to your teachers soon. You must have much to say to your teachers.We want to know:l What you want to say to your English teacher most.l Why you want to say sol What you want to tell her about your future plan要求：1词数：60-802. 不要出现真实

26、的人名和校名敬爱的老师，我想对你说：Dear Mrs. Guo,I want to say Thank you most at the moment when I have to say goodbye to you.I really appreciate what you have done for me. I used to be too shy to speak English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped me out. I can still remember your smile on the day

27、when I won the first prize in the English speech contest. It was you who gave me the confidence.I have a dream of going to the Beijing University in the future. Though its hard for me, Im sure your love will encourage me to achieve. Yours, Tom. 必备（背）词句a) try ones best to do sth. 努力做某事例句：_.老师希望我们竭尽全力

28、取得尽可能大的进步。b) notuntil 直到为止例句：_.过去，直到10：30我才能去睡觉，现在我9：30就可以睡觉。c) in order to do sth. 为了例句：_.她努力学习为了能考取北京大学。d) practice doing sth. 练习做某事例句：_.你最好多练习些听力。e) get ready for sth. 做准备例句：_.我在准备明天的考试。f) all kinds of 各种各样的例句： _.他喜欢各种各样的水果。g) so that 如此以至于例句：_.瑞安市如此的害怕以至于他的书本掉到了地上。h) share sth. with sb. 与某人一起分享例

29、句：_.我很乐意与她共用一本字典。-书信、电子邮件I. 书信1. 写作指导 英文书信一般由以下五部分组成：（1） 信头：即写信人的地址和写信的日期、要写在信纸的右上角；（2） 称呼：指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号“，”；（3） 正文: 信件的主体部分。写在称呼的下一行，一般由左边第三或第五个字母处开始写起；（4） 结束语: 指正文下面的结尾客套语。位置应低于正文一、二行。一般从信纸的中间稍右写起，第一个字母大写，末尾用逗号。常用的结束语有Yours sincerely, Yours, Sincerely yours, Yours truly等；（5） 署名: 写

30、在结束语的下面。练习题：圣诞节快到了，你收到了一封来自圣诞老人的信。根据来信内容及提示信息，完成回信正文部分的开头、主体和结尾。Dear Tom (Mary),Not long from now, I'll be leaving the North Pole for my long trip on Christmas. Although it's a long journey, I am still eager to visit you in Beijing soon.My elves (精灵) tell me that you have received a high mar

31、k in your final English exam this year, that's excellent! I think you are such a smart boy (girl) for your age. I'm so proud of you! I must go now to check on the busy little elves in the workshop where they are making all the toys and gifts for the good boys and girls. Let me know what pres

32、ent you want for the coming Christmas. We will be loading (装) the sleigh(雪橇) soon and heading your way!Im looking forward to your message.Merry Christmas and Warmest Wishes! Santa Clause(1) 正文开头的提示：很高兴/兴奋收到您（圣诞老人）的来信。Dear Santa,Its _(2)正文主体的提示：我想告诉您我现在正在做我又长大一岁了，我最想要的礼物是，因为我会把红袜子挂在床头上，您一定要来哦！_(3)正文结

33、尾的提示：最后，非常感谢您对我的鼓励，我会继续，争取代我祝福那些辛勤工作的小精灵们，并期盼您的到来。_ Yours, Tom (Mary)2. 满分作文江苏盐城市2005年中考 小明和小华是在“手拉手”活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。前不久，小名来信向小华询问如何学好英语。请你以小华的名义给他写封信。内容包括: (1)学习英语的基本方法（listen carefully; speak much; read widely; learn by heart; practise writing; ）； (2)你的体会和其他建议。Dear Xiao Ming,Im very glad to receive y

34、our letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English. Now Ill tell you something about it.I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Youd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You should

35、practise writing often. Of course there are many other ways. You can also see English movies, learn to sing English songs or make pen-friends with foreigners. They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Im sure youll learn English well. Yours, Xiao Hua 3. 必备（背）词句(1

36、) Its very glad(happy) to 很高兴例句：_非常高兴收到你的来信。(2) everything goes well/everything is all right 诸事顺利、诸事安好例句：_希望你那里一切都很顺利。(3) tell sb. about sth. 告诉某人某事例句：_信里面你问我在中国学习一事，现在我来告诉你有关情况。(4) Im afraid 恐怕例句：_我恐怕得停笔了。(5) Im so sorry(happy) to hear that 得知.（听到.消息），我很难过(高兴)。例句：_得知你英语考试不及格，我很难过。(6) Im writing to

37、此信是为了例句： _写此信是为了感谢你对我英语学习方面的帮助。(7) send best regards to sb. 代我问候某人例句： _请代我问候你的父母。(8) Im looking forward to sth. 期盼某事例句：_2. 满分作文根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David 的E-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其自述不计入所完成的短文内。）提示词语：Ch

38、inese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important, listen, talk, read, writeDear David,Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from Engl

39、ish. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.

40、 If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in BeijingYours,Wang Ming3. 必备（背）词句(1) receive 收到例句：_你的电子邮件我已收到。(2) give advice 提建议例句：_ 请就如何养成良好习惯给我提些建议。(3) thank sb. for sth. 感谢某人做了某事例句：_非常感谢您帮我解决了这个问题。(4) invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事例句：_我写这封信是想邀请你

41、参加我的生日聚会。(5) keep(stay) in touch 保持联络第六讲 应用文的写作-发言稿、通知. 发言稿1.写作指导(1) 称呼。顶格书写。常用的称呼有Dear Mr./Mrs./Miss., Dear Sir/Madam, Ladies and gentlemen, (2) 正文(3) 结束语1. 满分作文假设你将代表你校2008届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿内容要点如下：回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助祝愿考生自拟、至少两点注意：1. 词数80左右。 2. 发言稿必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可

42、适当发挥。 3. 不得使用审视人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates,It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2008.It has been threes years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parents supports and our classmates help. At this moment, I would like to thank a