2014届高三8月摸底考读写任务讲评

1、2014届高三8月摸底考读写任务讲评审中文以“人生需要帮助”为话题搜要点概括(概括短文的主要内容)一个小男孩在从沙箱里搬走一块大石头时遇到困难。虽然努力尝试，仍然搬不动。最后在父亲的帮助下成功了。 抓首句正文第一段(读完文章的感受)读完这篇文章后，我十分赞同父亲的话。他帮助儿子认识到帮助的重要性。正是因为他的帮助，他儿子最终才成功了。 正文第二段（以自己的亲身经历谈谈帮助的重要性）我也曾有类似的经历。（我也曾经是从别人的帮助中获益的一员。）我还记得去年夏天的时候，我正独自一人去北京旅游。不幸地我丢失了行李。更糟糕的是，我身无分文，回不了家。正是在当地警察的帮助下我才能安全地回来。我的经历教会了

2、许多帮助对于我们犹如阳光对生物。 正文第三段（你是否会帮助别人，为什么？）如果看到有人遇到困难我也会毫不犹豫尽量提供帮助。正如我们所知，帮助别人是一种美德，它会使问题容易解决，使人们感受到别人的温暖，使我们的生活越来越美好。 IV 写作 第二节 读写任务参考范文：In the passage, the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work, such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality/necessity for the organi

3、zation of the society, and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly. There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is much harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand, they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are sill in the sweet

4、sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street whether it shines strongly or snows, winds heavily. Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we go, there is rubbish

5、. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this! From the above, I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most seeming