2020中考英语作文热点素材范文16与父母相处

1、热点16与父母相处1热点预测2020年中考与父母相处无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来很大的影响。今天，选择的 英语写作预测话题是：与父母相处。【预测题目】(一)根据要求完成作文，词数：80100词。假如你的邻居李涛即将升入初中，他很想了解一下初中的学习和生活，请你给他写封信谈一谈，包括以 下内容并适当发挥。不得出现真实姓名。(1)学习方法上建议。(2)与老师同学融洽相处。3）与父母之间的沟通。【参考范文】Dear Li Tao,I m glad to share something with you. I think it s the most important to liste

2、nto the teacherscarefully in class. It s not necessary to do too many exercises. Weshould try to find the right method to solve them. We can collect the problems we haven t worked out correctly. Go over them at times. The harder you work ， the better grades you will get. We should get on well with o

3、ur teachers and class to keep us happy. Try to be more active and help each other. We d better notargue with our parents when we re in disagreement. Have a talk with them. We should help themdo housework after school. Don t spend too much time on the Internet. It s not good for ourhealth. Good luck!

4、【解析】试题分析：这是个给材料作文。提示中已经给出了作文的写作要点。在写作时，注意将要点理清，不要遗漏。在整理文章的结构后，用正确的语言把意思表述清楚。文章可使用一般现在时，并且注意主谓一 致。句子之间可适当的使用连词，使文章逻辑更紧密。写作亮点：短文叙述清楚，层次分明：第一点是关于学习方法上建议；第二点介绍如何与老师同学相处，最后介绍如何处理与父母之间的关系。 The harder you work ， the better grades you will get. We d 27re in disagreement. 都是比较经典的句子。better not argue with our

5、parents when we（二）你的好朋友Linda ， 现在面临很多压力，爸爸妈妈总是把她与其他同学相比较，因此她最近心情很不好。请你给她写一封信，建议她1. 与父母好好沟通， 2. 通过做运动，听音乐等方式学会放松。要求： 1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑， 2. 70 词左右。Notes ：compare with 与 . 相比较； learn to relax 学会放松；get on well with 与 . 相处融洽； in a bad mood 心情不好；pressure ； stress 压力。【参考范文】Hi! Linda, I am sorry to hear that you

6、 are stressed out these days and your parents oftencompare you with your classmate. I have the same problems as yours. I am very sad,too! But I know my parents want meto study harder and get better grades so they are strict with me. So I communicate with them. And now I understand them and they unde

7、rstand me. So you can try to communicate with your parents. Or you can listen to some quiet music and watch some games to relax yourself. AndI hope you will become happy later!【解析】试题分析：根据题目要求可知，本文主要以第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态，在写作时可适当 使用一些连接词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑。要注意把每个要点都表达出来，不可遗漏任何一个。写作亮点：本文首先对朋友的烦恼表示同情，同时说出自己也有类似的

8、烦恼，并讲述自己解决的一些方法。符合本题要求及要点提示。同时，本文中多次使用连词如and、or、so为文章增色不少。真题再现（一）在微信上，Jack跟Bruce谈到他跟父母关系不好，并向 Bruce寻求帮助。假设你是Bruce ,请根据下面的提示，给Jack回复信息。要求：1）必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥（至少两点）；2）词数：100左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 ）。内容提示：现象我过去经常跟父母吵架，有时几大耳、说话。原因父母过分担心我的成绩，给我太大的压力。我不帮父母做家务，也没有意识到 帮父母的重要性。相反地，我每天花至少两个小时玩电脑游戏。措施现在我能和父母相处得好。我认

9、为我们该和父母沟通。Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parent either.Best wishes to you.【参考范文】Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parents, either.I used to argue with myparents,sometimes we didn t say a word for a few days. Because my parents really worried about my gr

10、ades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn t help them do any housework, because I didn t think it was important to do housework. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day. But now I can get on well with my parents. I think we should often communicatewith my pare

11、nts. In our free time, we can do some housework with parents. Wecan also spend weekend with our parents. We can share our happiness and sadness with our parents. In this way, we can get on well with our parents.【解析】这篇作文要求我们以 Bruce 的身份给 Jack 写一封信，背景是Jack 与他的父母关系不好，想寻求你的帮助。题目中用表格的形式呈现了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的

12、英语将这些内容表达出来。通过审题可知： 1. 这篇短文应用第一人称来叙述，根据表达的需要用 I 或者 we； 2. 短文应以一般现在时态和一般 过去时态为主，具体来看，第一个内容和第二个内容应用一般过去时态，谓语动词用过去式形式；第三个内容应用一般现在时态。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能逐词去翻译表格里的内 容，而应用英语中的句式结构来表达，如常见的主谓宾和主系表结构，构成简单句；在文章中穿插使用并 列句或者复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等，提升文章的档次，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感。同时语 句之间应注意使用恰当的连接成分，如副词、连词或者短语等，使文章整体意思连贯。【点睛

13、】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。短文内容主要包括三个方面：首先作者介绍了过去他和父母相处的情况；接下来分析了自己与父母相处不好的原因然后介绍了他与父母现在关系好了，并结合自己的具体做法给Jack提了一些建议。整篇文章层次清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称为主，使用了一般现在时态和一般过去时态，符合语言的表达需要，谓语动词形式准确，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，语法规范。第三，文章句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯，短文中既有简单句，也有复合句或并列句，如Becausemy parents really worri

14、ed about my grades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn' t help them doany housework, b ecause I didn ' t think it was important to do housework.中两个原因状语从句。其他的较好的句型和短语有 On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games everyday. 、 I think we should often communicate with m

15、y parents.、 In this way, we can get on well withour parents. 等。（二）假如你是班长，学期结束时你要给同学作简短的评价。你班的李华这个学期变化很大，请你根据提示 写一篇简评。过去功课不好，常与同学争吵，垃圾被他撒的满地都是，课桌总是一团糟。现在自从老师和他沟通后，后了很大变化。（学习、与同学相处、生活）结果父母、老师对他很满意。希望在即将到来的考试中取得好成绩。汪思：短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；括号部分须用3、4句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥;词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。【参考范文】Li h ua

16、has improved a lot this term.In the past he didn' t do well in his subjects. He oftenquarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was alwaysin a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hardat his lessons. He g

17、ets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parentsand teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.【解析】试题分析：本文的写作对李华的过去的，情况进行描写，不擅长于功课he didn ' t do well in hissubjects. 与朋友吵架 quarreled with his classmates.垃圾被他撒的满地都是Rubbish was spread

18、 allover the floor by him.课桌总是一团糟 His desk was always in a mess.然后对他现在的情况进行描写,如与同学能很好的相处 gets along well with his classmates.等，再对现在的结果是父母、老师对他很满意 His parents and teachers are satisfied with him.最后提出希望 I hope he will get good gradesin the coming exam.点评：本文不难写，对于作文的写作要注意详略得当，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常 用的表达多

19、个好处的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同 时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写 出文采。（三）我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱请以" Love AroundMe （我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下:爱你的人爱的表现父母为你做早餐；送你上学老师传授知识；照顾你同学一起学习；和睦相处朋友在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼写作要求：1.根据表格提示父母的爱、老师的爱、同学的爱和朋友的爱都要写齐。2.词数90词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名参考词7匚：r

20、eceive love ; get on .with ; chat online;There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.【参考范文】Love around meThere is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from myparents, myteachers, myclassmates and myfriends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks deliciousf

21、ood for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look afterme well but also teach melots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often sharemy pleasure

22、and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decisionto study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“ Love Around Me （我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。结合所给材料，可 知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见

23、句式的应用，比如： There is .,Every day I can , my lovely mothercooks, I chat online with , I make a decision to , I should .等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了在我的日常生活中有很多爱我的人，接下来介绍爱我的人的表11现，最后我对他们的爱表示感谢。此处at school, look after, get on well with, chat with, make adecision, make gre

24、at progress 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。（四）最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“ How to Get on Well with Our Parents? ”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。一、写作要点提示1. 与父母和谐相处很重要。2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：（ 1 ）理解与尊重父母（如倾听与有礼貌表达想法）；（ 2 ）多与父母交流

25、（如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼）；（ 3 ）为父母做一些力所能及的事。3. 与父母和谐相处的感受。二、写作要求短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在 80 100 词。How to get on well with our parents?It s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along wellwith our parents? Here is some of my advice.We should understand and respect

26、our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us.We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we d better be ina polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we d better help them do some thin

27、gs.I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.Let s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.【解析】试题

28、分析：本题是一篇提纲作文，要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。本题要求谈论怎样与父母和谐相处，根据提示，短文要从与父母和谐相处的重要性、怎样相处及自己的生活感受几个方面进行写作。短文用第一人称，一般现在时态，可以用恰当的情态动词来帮助表情达意。写作亮点：短文第一段提出观点：与父母融洽相处很重要。开门见山，直奔主题。第二段是对如何与父母融洽相处的建议，详略得当，重点突出，中心明确。第三段谈论自己的生活感受；最后号召人们同父母融洽相处结尾。短文层次清楚，语言连贯。短文用 should, be supposed to, had better 等等不同的形式来表示人们的责任与义

29、务，生动具体。其中用到的动词不定式，时间状语从句，宾语从句等，也增加了本文的文采。常用表达1. I get on well with my parents.2. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends.3. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble.We love each other.4. Let' s get on w

30、ell with our parents because they are our parents.5. It ' s very important for us to get on well with our parents.6. There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.7. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day.8. I think we should often communicate with m

31、y parents.9. In this way, we can get on well with our parents.10. In a word, wherever we are, we should behave well to be good students.11. If we do, our society will be better and better.12. I think it ' s because we are too busy.13. If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.14

32、. If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.15. I hope what I say here can help you a lot.写作模板The topic of （主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides ofopinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for th

33、e reason of （支持 A 的理由一）What is more, 理由二）.Moreover, （ 理由三）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,（ 支持 B 的理由一）.Secondly （besides）, （理由二） .Thirdly （finally）, （ 理由三）.From my point of view, I think （我的观点）.The reason is that （ 原因）.As a matter of fact, there

34、are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise必背简文（一）良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以Howto get on with parents ?为题写一篇80词左右的文章。（文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数）与父母友好相处的要点主动交流：每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师，同学和学校的事;创造机会：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做饭、逛商店等；讨论问题：遇事多与父母讨

35、论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。How to get on with parents ?For teenagers, it's important to get on with parents.What should we do?【参考范文】How to get on with parents ?For teenagers, it's important to get on with parents. What should we do?Firstly , we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For

36、example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We'll improve our relation with them in this way. Thirdly, we'd better discuss our problems with them

37、. They will help us find better ways to solve them.It's not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲作文。提纲作文，要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。写作要涉及所有提示要点。提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。语言表达要符合英语习惯。短文用一般现在时态。写作亮点：短文结构合理，层次清楚。第一段提出自己

38、的观点：和父母相处融洽重要；第二段就如何与父母相处提出详细的建议；第三段简要地概括结尾。第二段中用 firstly, secondly, thirdly等等引出各要点，让人一目了然。短文详略得到，中心突出。第一、三段略写，第二段对短文中心内容则作了非常详细的表达。短文生动具体，词汇运用得当。文中用到的 spend some time doing sth, 定语从句等等，给本文增色不少。（二）在提倡和谐的社会里，我们怎么样才能成为一名“讲文明，礼貌，守纪律”的中学生？请根据下面的提示，以“ How to be a cool s tudent? ”为题写一篇词数80 词左右的短文。提示： 1. 家

39、庭表现：爱父母，帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务等。2. 学校表现：遵守校规，与同学友好相处。3. 公共场合表现：勿大声喧哗，坐公车时应主动让位给老人等。要求： 文章必须包括所给提示中 1 3 项的内容， 可展开思路， 自由地适当发挥。 文章中不能出现真实姓名，校名和其他真实信息。15【参考范文】How to be a good student?As a student. it's necessary and important to behave well.When we come back home from school, we should try our best to help

40、 our parents. When we are at school, we should get on well with our schoolmates and teachers. We should also help each other .We should follow the school rules, too. In public ,we should be ready to help others who are in trouble. We'd better not talk or laugh loudly. When we are on a bus, we sh

41、ould offer our seats to the old and the women with babies.In a word, wherever we are, we should behave well to be good students. If we do, our society will be better and better.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以“ How to Be a Cool Student? ”为题，就怎样成为一名“讲文明，礼貌，守纪律”的中学生写一篇短文。短文可以从“在家庭的表现”、“在学校的表现”、“在公共场合的表现”几个方面展开讲述。短文用一般现

42、在时态，可以用 when 引出的时间状语从句， if 引出的条件状语从句等等来设置不同的情境来谈论人们的行为规范。要注意语言的选择及句型的运用。要做到主题鲜明，思想积极向 上。写作亮点：短文开门见山，直奔主题：行为规范、举止文明很必需而且重要。第二段具体讲述如何成为一名“讲文明，礼貌，守纪律”的中学生。本段用“ When we -, we sho uld”排比句型，从“在家庭 的表现”、“在学校的表现”、“在公共场合的表现”几个方面展开讲述。条理文明，生动具体。其中的try one's best, get on well with, be ready to do , had bette

43、r等等结构为本文增色不少。第三段再次强调中心：无论在哪儿，我们都应该举止文明做好学生。并进一步升华主题：如果我们举止文明，我们的社会就会越来越好。17（三）提示：当前，大多数孩子普遍存在逆反心理，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大。作为一名初中生，你会怎样与自己的父母相处呢？请以“ How to get on well with our p arents ”为题，写一篇英语作文。要求：1 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 60 个；2 语言流畅、书写规范，卷面整洁。【参考范文】How to get on well with our parents?Nowadays， we can not

44、 communicate with our parents well. I think it s because we are too busy.We don t have enough time to stay together.How to communicate with your parents? Here are some suggestions.First, both you and your parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to you. Third, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them.If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.【解析】1. 题干解读：因为