高中英语 新外研必修二U2 课时6 Writing 课件

1、深圳市教育科学研究院 2022 年3月深圳教育云资源平台建设教学教材：外研版高中英语新教材必修二教学内容：Unit 2 Lets celebrate!第六课时：Writing执教人：赵春丽/深圳实验学校光明部March 14th, 2022基于大观念的单元整体教学设计Unit 2 Lets celebrate了解多元节日文化理解节日深刻内涵培养节日文化自信Lesson 1: Starting out & Vocabulary了解世界各地庆祝季节变换的节日了解节日相关词汇、节日庆祝原因Lesson 2: Understanding ideas理解英国作家Tolkien通过圣诞节信表达对孩子深沉的

2、父爱Lesson 3: Using language 学会情态动词表推测的用法掌握如何对节日进行描述Lesson 4: Listening & Speaking学习如何发出和接受节日邀请Lesson 5: Developing ideas了解人们对春节团圆饭习俗的不同观点思考传统习俗是否应该改变Lesson 6: Writing写信给编辑（对春节走向世界的看法）Lesson 7: Presenting ideas & Reflection创造节日：陈述创造原因单元大观念 了解各国特色节日及庆祝原因的多样性，学会理解并描述不同节日，提升多元文化视野；增强对中外不同节日文化的了解，增强国家认同感，

3、有意识地主动弘扬和传播中华优秀文化；理解和辨析不同节日的意义和内涵，通过创造新节日，联系自身实际，实现知识与思维能力的迁移。Unit 2 Lets celebrate!Developing ideasWritingWriting a letter to express ideasStudents can enhance a sense of national identity, and learn to spread Chinese culture.Learning objectives To use related vocabulary to write personal views and

4、 feelings on certain cultural phenomenon.Language Competence1Cultural Consciousness2Thinking QualityTo analyze the reasons behind certain cultural phenomenon.34Learning AbilityTo learn to evaluate, edit and improve their writing.To enhance a sense of national identity, and learn to spread Chinese cu

5、lture.Lead inLets watch a video “The painting journey” performed at 2022 Chinese Spring Festival Gala.1. What impresses you most in this poetic dance performance?2. How does the dance show Chinese traditional culture?3. Why did 600 foreign media outlets(外媒) from over 170 countries and regions broadc

6、ast the Gala live(现场直播春晚)? What does it imply?Lead inLets watch a video “The painting journey” performed at 2022 Chinese Spring Festival Gala The poetic dance, “The Painting Journey The Legend of a Panorama of Mountains and Rivers,” highlights the aesthetics of traditional Chinese painting and combi

7、nes spellbinding dance moves with traditional Chinese painting.富有诗意的舞蹈诗剧只此青绿突出了中国画的美学，将引人入胜的舞步与国画相结合。 The painting, “A Panorama(全景) of Rivers and Mountains,” is the only extant work by Song Dynasty (960-1279) painter Wang Ximeng (1096-1119) who created it at the age of 17.The painting is a represent

8、ative of “blue-green landscape.” 这幅画千里江山图是宋代（960-1279）画家王希孟(1096-1119）17岁创作的唯一现存作品。这是青绿山水画的代表作。 Audiences follow the dancers to explore the legendary world of traditional Chinese art. 观众跟随舞者探索中国传统艺术的传奇世界。 “We designed undulating movements in the choreography to hopefully remind audiences of mountain

9、s, rivers, the sun and the moon or scattered rocks and endless peaks from some paintings.” said the director Han Zhen.导演韩真说 ：“我们在编舞中设计了起伏的动作，希望能让观众想起一些画作中的山脉、河流、日月或散落的岩石和无尽的山峰。”The Painting Journey 只此青绿1. What impresses you most in this poetic dance performance?2. How does the dance show Chinese tra

10、ditional culture?3. Why did 600 foreign media outlets(外媒) from over 170 countries and regions broadcast the Gala live(现场直播春晚)? What does it imply?只此青绿Answer the following questions.千里江山图What impresses you most in this poetic dance performance?2. How does the dance show Chinese traditional culture?3.

11、 Why did 600 foreign media outlets(外媒) from over 170 countries and regions broadcast the Gala live(现场直播春晚)? What does it imply?Answer the following questions.This poetic dance highlights the aesthetics of traditional Chinese painting.It shows the growing popularity of the Chinese Spring Festival Gal

12、a across the world. The elegant dance, together with the atmospheric scenic(舞台布景的)design, showcased(展现)traditional Chinese art and cultural charms.Read the editorial on P23 and answer the questions.Pre-writing1. Which countries are mentioned and how do they celebrate Chinese Spring Festival?2. Which

13、 event would you like to attend most? Why?3. Why do you think Chinese Spring Festival is “going global” ?Russia, Ghana and the United States.Russia: The 2017 Grand Chinese New Year Concert was held in St Petersburg, with its tickets sold out and 90% of the audience local Russians.Ghana: Over 1,000 G

14、hanaian junior high school students got up on stage to perform Chinese songs and dances to celebrate the 2017 Spring Festival.The United States: Students in New York City have since 2016 been able to enjoy an official days holiday for Chinese Spring Festival.1.Which countries are mentioned and how d

15、o they celebrate Chinese Spring Festival?2. Which event would you like to attend most? Why?Go to the temple fair（庙会）Watch CCTV gala Watch the Chinese New Year ConcertWatch the liondanceSet off firecrackersJoin a New Year parade3. Why do you think Chinese Spring Festival is “going global” ?PoliticsEc

16、onomyCultureTourismGrowing politicalinfluence；Chinese governments promotionofthisfestival.The cultural deposit文化底蕴and cultural values such as win-win progress, unityand harmony “以和为贵”;The long-cherished family values ;Embracing diverse culture.Increasing economic influence.Economic vitality活力 caused

17、 by the festival brought joy to the global market.The desire for overseas stores and recreational venues休闲场所 to profit from the celebration;Increasing overseas Chinese population and their efforts to help the festival go global. Before writing a letter to the editor to express your ideas,please brai

18、nstorm about the content and complete the notes.Genre, topicTense&Person(人称)Structure&Key pointsDear editor,Li HuaGenre&topicTense&PersonKey points(reasons)Structure How to write a letter to express ideas?Letter, Spring FestivalSimple present tense 一般现在时为主； Third Person 第三人称为主。1.更多的中国人去国外，极大地促进了中国节日

19、的传播;2.中国政治经济实力的提升吸引了更多的人了解中国文化;3.中国节日本身的文化魅力和内涵。Para1: The phenomenon of Spring festival going global介绍春节正在变成全世界庆祝的节日的现象;Para2: Reasons of this phenomenon 现象背后的原因;Para3 :Personal views and feelings表明自己对这件事的看法。第一段. 引入现象:Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of . has caused/aroused/captured publ

20、ic/popular/wide/worldwide concern.Recently the issue/phenomenon of . has been brought into focus/has been brought into public attention.Nowadays, there is a growing/widespread concern about the problem/phenomenon that .Nowadays, an increasing number of people/people in growing numbers come to realiz

21、e/are aware of the importance of . Recent years have seen a boom in the number of . . is gaining increasing popularity with . Recently, there aroused a phenomenon that . / Recently the issue has aroused great concern among . How to write a letter to express ideas?Sentences第二段：阐述原因: A number of facto

22、rs account for (解释)the phenomenon,but I think the following may be the leading one . The reasons for this are as follows. On the one hand ., on the other hand., the third contributing factor(影响因素)is . There are three reasons for this. The chief reason is that . , A further reason is that . , . may a

23、lso have led to . First of all/Firstly/To begin with/In the first place/First and foremost, . ; Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/In addition, . ; Lastbutnotleast/Most important of all, . .play a key/vital(重要的) role in .have a profound influence on .be inseparable from . .与.是分不开的Sentences第三段：总结: In concl

24、usion/to conclude; In short/In brief; In summary/ to sum up; As has been noted, .表达观点及情感: As far as I am concerned . /As for me . In my opinion/ In my point of view . Proud, take pride in, feel obligated (有义务的) to do,呼吁: Lets make combined efforts to .让我们共同努力去. I do hope that ., only through joint e

25、fforts can we .Sentencesa growing number of people overseas1.越来越多的海外人士2.希望、团聚和幸福3.晚会、庙会4.受益于5.中国日益增长的 经济和政治影响力6.旅游收入7.尽自己的一份力量将更多的中国文化传统带到世界各地8.拥抱文化的多样性9.中国经济繁荣的反映hope, reunion and happinessgala performance, temple fairsbenefit fromChinas growing economic and political influencetourism revenuesdo hi

26、s or her part to bring more Chinese traditions worldwideembrace the diversity of cultureWords and phrasesa reflection of Chinas economic boom1.近年来，春节在海外的传播速度在不断地加快(spread , accelerate)2.中国的春节越来越国际化，受到世界的欢迎。3.(具体事实细节)一些国家将春节定为法定节假日，其他国家在春节举行各种庆祝活动。(recognize as, a public holiday ,while)Translation In

27、 recent years, the spread of the Spring Festival to overseas countries has been accelerating. Chinas Spring Festival is becoming increasingly internationalized and celebrated by the world. Some countries recognize the Spring Festival as a public holiday while other countries hold various celebration

28、s during the Festival. 4.随着中国经济的飞速发展，越来越多的人意识到，要想与中国合作伙伴合作，就必须更多地了解中国文化。(With句式,if句式)5.随着春节期间出国旅游的人数越来越多，许多国家都在庆祝春节，让中国游客有宾至如归的感觉.(With句式/As原因状语从句;so that) With the rapid development of Chinese economy, more and more people come to realize they must learn more about Chinese culture if they want to c

29、ooperate with their Chinese partners. As more people travel abroad during the Spring Festival, many countries are embracing the Spring Festival so that Chinese tourists can feel at home.Translation6.数以百万计的中国人在春节期间出国度假，这为他们的热门目的地带来了巨大的旅游收入。这极大地促进了中国春节的传播。Millions of Chinese spend their holiday overse

30、as during the Spring Festival, and it brings huge tourism revenues to their popular destinations. This greatly contributes to the spread of Chinese Spring Festival. Millions of Chinese spend their holiday overseas during the Spring Festival, bringing huge tourism revenues to their popular destinatio

31、ns, which greatly contributes to the spread of Chinese Spring Festival.高级表达（非谓语，定语从句）Translation普通表达7.春节的流行也离不开其独特的文化魅力和底蕴，春节强调社会凝聚力和家庭团聚。(be inseparable from, 定语从句 )8.中国春节正在走向世界，因为它代表着世界不同文明认同的家庭价值观，如团聚、平安、富足、健康。(as原因状语从句, done做定语) The popularity of Spring Festival is also inseparable from its uniq

32、ue cultural charm and deposit, which stresses social cohesion and family reunion. The Chinese Spring Festival is going global, as it represents family values shared and honored by different civilizations across the world，such as reunion, peace, affluence, and good health.TranslationPhenomenonReasons

33、OpinionsAs far as I am concerned . /As for me.I do hope that.A number of factors account for the phenomenon, but I think the following may be the leading one.First of all. / Moreover./ Lastbutnotleast . Nowadays, an increasing number of people overseas come to. Recently, there aroused a phenomenon t

34、hat Chinese Spring Festival Going GlobalLets review itNow its time for you to write(25m).WHile-writing写作评价标准表Lets learn how to evaluate your writing.post-writing 评价级别参照标准A14-15B11-13C8-10D1-7师评同伴评内容完整性覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容A语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇语法结构或词汇方面应用

35、基本准确，有些许错误语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解文章语法错误较多，词汇很有限，影响理解A文章逻辑性有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；A格式，卷面，书写格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改，字数不够B综合评价14Dear editor, These days, a growing number of people overseas are celebrating

36、Chinese Spring Festival, an important traditional festival(同位语) that features(是的特色) hope, reunion and happiness. Various Chinese cultural activities, such as gala performances, film shows, temple fairs and other forms of celebrations, are held overseas. There are several reasons accounting for this

37、phenomenon. To start with, the spread of Chinese Spring Festival is partly due to the increasing overseas Chinese population. Whats more, more and more countries have noticed or benefited from Chinas growing economic and political influence, so they are also embracing(欣然接受) our culture and tradition

38、s. Also, many overseas stores and recreational venues(休闲场所) are taking the opportunity to profit from the celebration. Last but not least, the Chinese government and various institutions(机构) have made great efforts to help the festival go global. I think its not only a good opportunity for foreigner

39、s to know about China, but a sign of Chinas growing influence on the world. I hope everyone can do his or her part to bring more Chinese traditions worldwide, and more people around the globe will embrace the diversity(多样性) of culture. Li Hua, a senior high school studentWhat the phenomenon isWhat r

40、easons lie behind it How you feel about itSample Writing OneDear editor, It seems that more and more countries around the world are holding celebrations of Chinese Spring Festival. I think the reasons are as follows: First and foremost, millions of Chinese spend their holiday overseas during the Spr

41、ing Festival, bringing huge tourism revenues(旅游收入) to their popular destinations.(非谓语) This greatly contributes to the spread of Chinese Spring Festival. Whats more, with the rapid development of Chinese economy(with结构), more and more people realize they must learn more about Chinese culture if they

42、 want to cooperate with their Chinese partners. Last but not least, the popularity of Spring Festival is also inseparable from its unique cultural charm and deposit(文化底蕴), which stresses social cohesion and family reunions(定从). All in all, I think this phenomenon is a reflection of Chinas economic b

43、oom and I believe more Chinese culture will be accepted by the world. Li Hua, a senior high school studentSample Writing TwoWhat the phenomenon isWhat reasons lie behind it How you feel about itnumbergreatly promoting/which greatly promotessAbove allthe.评价级别参照标准A14-15B11-13C8-10D1-7师评同伴评内容完整性覆盖所有内容要

44、点,观点明确虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解文章语法错误较多，词汇很有限，影响理解文章逻辑性有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；格式，卷面,书写格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改

45、，字数不够综合评价the phenomenonreasonsHow you feel about it？?尾段总结了现象，现象原因及现象好处；不太符合题目要求，应聚焦于自己对此现象的看法及观点。师评：10分，漏掉一个要点，所用语法词汇有较少的错误，有简单的连接成分，卷面整洁。Dear editor,Li HuaLets evaluate this article according the CriterionCBBB10attentionfoster the sense.评价级别参照标准A14-15B11-13C8-10D1-7师评同伴评内容完整性覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确虽漏掉1、2个次重点

46、，但覆盖所有主要内容虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解文章语法错误较多，词汇很有限，影响理解文章逻辑性有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；格式，卷面,书写格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改，字数不够综合评价phenome

47、nonreasonsPersonal feelings and opinions尾段总结了现象并提出展望，提到民族自豪感和人类命运共同体意识，非常好，不过结尾最后一句可以再升华一下。师评： 12分，覆盖所有内容要点，有些许表达错误，应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇，有连接成分，卷面整洁。In theattractedDear editor,Li HuaLets evaluate it.ABBB12评价级别参照标准A14-15B11-13C8-10D1-7师评同伴评内容完整性覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解文章语法