高中英语写作教学6年英语议论文写作-精讲版课件

1、作文常用关联词表示时间关系：first, second, then, finally/at lastin the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently表示对称顺序关系：for one thing. for the other thing, on one hand,.on the other hand，above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally，the former.the latter, 表示递进关系：what is

2、more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition，whats worse表示换一种方式表达：in other words ,that is to say,表示举例说明：for example, like, such as, for instance 表示陈述事实：in fact ,actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth表示总结：on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in short, in conclusion, from wh

3、at I have said above表示因果关系：as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequently,表示转折：but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only .but also表达自己的观点：in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think, as we all know ,It is known to us all that.范例1：假如你事实李华，你

4、班同学最近开长了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点比例你的观点观点支持反对主要理由应该明天进行体育锻炼做早操，打乒乓球，打篮球，但时间不要过锻炼能增强质减少疾病锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好锻炼浪费时间锻炼使人疲劳锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习锻炼中可能受伤1.关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤take exercisesdo morning exercisesbuild up the bodyreduce the diseasehave a reststudy more

5、effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt2.作文结构1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas .2.55%of the students think.such as(举例).（原因）.3.On the other hand,45%

6、of the students believe.(原因）.4.In my opinion, I prefer to 3.范文： Recently , we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exer

7、cises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that th

8、eir study will be more effective. On the other hand,45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And its possible to be hurt in sports.In my opinion, I prefer to take proper e

9、xercises in my spare time. 练习：“你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗？”请根据下面提供的信息写一偏短文，客观的介绍下讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点比例观点上大学无所谓不上大学理由增长知识，提高素养，利于择业成功的路不只一条学费高，就业难我的看法关键词语：widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior students关键句子：of us consider it necessary to go to college 10% of students think it no use going

10、to college 30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”范例：某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。 老年教师 青年教师教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新 你的观点?注意：1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯学生作品1： Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly

11、 teachers. There are some reasons below. For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For anoth

12、er thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students. This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.点评：亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。1)2)3)1) Compared2) more

13、3) try to make the classes lively and interesting不足之处：1、个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young ones think thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience.

14、 However, the others have a differentopinion. They think the teachers who areyoung are full of energy. Besides, theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both can learn a lot.点评：亮点：1、段落清

15、楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较熟练。需要改进的地方：1）2)3)4)1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones2) with explanations3) the 去掉4) The young teachersOne possible version: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers hav

16、e more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usual

17、ly they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.范例：人们