读后续写：勤劳的Henry 学案-高三英语写作专项

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Thereisafarmnotfarfromthecoastline.ItbelongstoamancalledTom.Tomcouldn'tdoeverythingbyhimselfonthefarm.Thus,heneededtohireonemantohelphimrunthefarm.However,nooneworkedonhisfarmforlong.Why？Becausetheworkwastootiring.Sincethefarmisnearthesea,thereareoftenstormsfromtheseathatstrikehisfarm.Whenastormcomes,Tomandthemanhehiredhavetogetupquicklyandtrytoreducethelosses

causedbythestorm.Therefore,noonelikedworkingthere.Tomhadtolookforpeopletoworkforhimallthetime.

Oneday,amancalledHenryreadtheposterthatTomhadputupandthencametohisfarm.“Sir,

Icanworkforyou

,”

saidHenry.TomlookedatHenry.

Thisyoungmanwasneitherstrongnortall.“Areyousure?”askedTom.“Yes,

sir.

Icandotheworkwell.

Butyoumustpaymetwicewhatyoupaidothersbefore,”

saidthatyoungman.Tomwassurprised.

Hedidn'treallybelievesuchamancoulddotheworkwell.

Butitwasreallyhardforhim

tofindsomeoneelsetoworkforhim.

Atlast,

hedecidedtogiveHenryatry.However,

beforehiringhim,

hesaid,“Canyoureallybeagoodhelper？Theworkonthefarmishardandtiring.

Andthereareoftenstorms.”Henrysmiledandsaid,“Don’tworry.Icanbeagoodhelper

.You'llsee.

Andstormswon'tbeaproblem.Theywon'tevendisturboursleep.

Wecansleepverywellevenonstormynights.”AndthenHenrystayedonthefarm.

ToTom'sjoy,

Henryworkedhardanddidhisworkwell.

Itwasobviousthathehadn'tlied.However,

onenight,

therewasabigstorm.

Tomwaswokenupbythestrongwind.

Hewasworriedthatthestormwouldcausegreatlossesforhisfarm.

Andhesawhishelpernowhere.Paragraph1

TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.__________________________________________________________Paragraph2

Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.____________________________________________________________文章分析和写作指导1.主旨大意。这篇文章主要说的是主人公Tom在靠近海边的地方有一个农场。因为海边暴风雨比较多，当暴风雨来的时候，需要巨大的工作量。Tom雇佣的工人因为受不了繁重的劳动而辞职。后来，Henry来应聘，他提出双倍工资，但是，他很能干，是个好助手。2.续写思路。一个风雨交加的晚上，Tom需要Henry一起去防护农场，但是看不到Henry的人影。段首指导语第一段Tom以为Henry在睡觉，第二段Tom认为自己雇佣错了人。这两句话基本设定了故事发展的主题。我们可以大胆的想象出：当Tom去Henry房间找他的时候，他的确在睡觉，而且拒绝和Tom一起去抵御暴风雨。而当Tom对Henry很失望，正准备自己去工作时，发现Henry早在暴风雨来之前已经做好了准备工作。农场上的东西井然有序，他们不需要在暴风雨中再做什么了。其实，他找到的是一个很好的员工。3.写作风格。注意语言、动作、心理、情感等细节描绘。尝试使用动词、形容词、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、非谓语动词以及被动语态来刻画人物的语言、动作、心理、神态以及环境氛围。注意运用恰当的代词、逻辑衔接词把句子连接成文。重点词汇：anxious

adj.焦急的

violently

adv.暴力地rage

n.狂怒

calm

adj.镇静的

peaceful

adj.平静的respondv.回复

disappointment

n.失望

nevertheless

adv.然而unexpected

adj.意外的

seize

v.抓住重点短语：1.

takeholdof

抓住2.

filledwithsth.

充满3.

inadvance

提前重点句型：1.so...that...

结果状语从句的倒装结构。2.Itbeextremelyevidentthat...

that引导的主语从句。3.nosooner...than...

时间状语从句的倒装。4.Itbe...that...强调句。Paragraph1

TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.So

anxious

washethat

heknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroom

violently.（描写Tom在暴风雨来临的时候，找不到帮手那种焦急的情绪。）ToTom’sastonishment,Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.（令人意外的情况，与Tom的极其焦虑相比较，Henry好像没事一样。）Itwas

extremelyevident

thatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.（Henry在这样严重的暴风雨天气还在坦然的睡觉，很明显他没有意识到情况有多么糟糕。）Filledwith

rage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”（看到这个场景，Tom更加愤怒）Calmandpeaceful,Henry

responded,“Sir,haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”（然而，Henry却异常平静，无动于衷。）

Hearingthewords,

awide

disappointment

tookholdof

Tom.(此情此景，留给Tom的只有失望。)

Paragraph2Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.（孤身作战，Tom感到很无力。）Nevertheless,nosoonerhadhegone

outsidethanan

unexpectedscene

cameintohissight,alltheroofscoveredandallhischicken,horsesandcowssettled.（然而，当他到室外正准备干活时，看到了意外的场景，一切都井然有序。）Tomwas

seized

byastrongsenseofrelief,tearsstreaming

down

hischeeks.（这种强烈的转折令他如释重负。）ItwasHenrythatdidalltheworkwell

inadvance

beforethestormcame.（此时此刻金他才明白，原来是Henry早在暴风雨来之前就把农场整理好了。）Herealizedhehadhiredthebestman.（结局皆大欢喜，Tom找到了最好的员工。）

学案TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.________________________________________________________________（Tom非常着急，使劲地敲Henry的门）。_________________（令他感到吃惊的是),Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed._______________________________________________________________________________________（很明显,Henry没有意识到情况多么严重）。______________________________（Tom

生气地喊道）“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”_______________________________(Henry平静地回答)“Sir,haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Why

notjustgobacktosleep?”

_________________________________________________________________________________（听到这些话，Tom

感到很失望)

。Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.

___________________(感到无助)，herushedouttoworkonhisown.______________________________________________________________________________________（然而，他刚到户外就看到意外的场景，房顶都被遮盖好了，所有的鸡，马和牛都被安置妥当。）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________(Tom松了一口气，眼泪流下来)___________________________________________________________________________________________（是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了）Herealizedhehadhiredthebestman.优秀范文Paragraph1

TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.SoanxiouswashethatheknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.ToTom’sastonishment,Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,

“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”

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