GRE写作这5种低级语法错误不能忍

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GRE写作这5种低级语法错误不能忍这些不规范写法用法抓紧改正

不全都问题

所谓不全都不光指主谓不全都，还包括了单复数不全都、时态不全都以及代词不全都等。比如：Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.

分析：one是第三人称单数，因此本句的have应改为has;want应改为wants,本句是典型的主谓不全都。

改为：Whenonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo).

修饰语错位

英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点考生们往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误会。比如：IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.

分析：better位置不当，应置于句末。

句子不完整

在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种状况经常在主句写完以后，又想加些补充说明时发生。比如：Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.

分析：本句后半部分ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。

改为：Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.

悬垂修饰语

所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的规律关系混乱不清。比如：Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.这句中attheageoften只写出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时，按一般推理不行能是mygrandfather,假如我们把这个悬垂修饰语改得明确一点，读者或考官在读句子时就不会误会了。

改为：WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.

词性误用

“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。比如：Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.

分析：negative系形容词，误作动词。

改为：Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney.

以上就是GRE写作中常见的各类语法错误汇总，盼望大家能够在写作时加强留意，避开此类错误的发生。

GREissue写作优秀实例：道德与法律

题目：

Manyproblemsofmodernsocietycannotbesolvedbylawsandthelegalsystembecausemoralbehaviorcannotbelegislated.

现代社会的许多问题是法律和立法系统无法解决的，由于道德行为是无法用法律约束的。

正文：

Thepropositionassertsthatthelawsandthelegalsystemcannotresolvemanyproblemsproblemofthemodernsocietysincemoralbehaviorcannotbelegislated.Inmypointofview,Ifundamentallyagreewiththespeaker,asdiscussedbelow.

Firstofall,Iconcedethatthelawsandthelegalsystemareessentialtothemodernsocietyandtheycanresolvemanyproblems.Commonsensetellsusthateveryonehashisownpositionandbehavior,dependingontheirbeliefs,experiences,knowledge,professionsandemotionalconcern.However,wecannotsimplyleteveryonedoeverythingthatheorshewants,sincethiswillleadtomessandmayharmthestabilityofthesociety.Thus,thegovernmenthastoannouncethelawsandbuildajustlegalsystemtorestrictthecitizens.Onlybydoingthis,canthesocietygettoabalanceandharmoniousstatus?Forinstance,theindustrialfactorieswanttoexpelthepollutedwaterintotheriverwithoutmakingitclean.Ifthereisnotalaworalegalsystemtorestrictthefactoriesfromexpellingthepollutedwater,thepoisonedwatermaygetintotheriver,eventhesea.Thiswillbereallyharmful.Itmayfirstlykilltheanimalslivingintheriver,itmayalsofurtherharmthehumanbeingsiftheyhavedrunkthewateroreatenthepollutedfish.Itmaybringdamagetotheenvironmentaswell.Consideringthis,wehavetoestablishlawstopreventthefactoriesfromexpellingpollutedwaterandotherdetriments.Fromthiscase,wecanseehowimportantlawsandlegalsystemsare.

However,wehavetoadmitthatthelawsandthelegalsystemscannotresolvemanyproblemsinthemodernsocietyaswell,suchastheusageofeuthanasia,thehomosexualmarriage.WhentheWatsonandCrickfoundthedouble-helixstructureofthegeneandthescientistsfurtherfoundthewaytoclone.Itbringsmanysocialproblemsthatthelawsandlegalsystemscannotresolve.Shouldthescientistsclonehumanbeings?Ifyes,thenwhatistherelationshipbetweenthetwo?Dotheclonedpeoplehavethesamerightwiththeotherhumanbeingorevenwhethertheyarehumanbeingsornot?Thoughthelegalsystemsinmanycountriesbanthescientistsfromcloningpeople,somescientistsstilldothissecretly.Allthesequestionscannotsimplyberesolvedbythelawsasitisrelatedtothemorality.

Additionally,thelawscannotinvolvethemoralbehavior.Ifthelawsconsiderthemoralbehaviorstoomuch,itwilllosejustice.Nevertheless,onlyconsideringthelawswithoutmoralsmaycausemistake.Forinstance,inIndia,theirlawisstatutesgivenbythegovernmentandthejudgecanonlyhisjudgesonthebasesoftheexistinglaws.Once,amotherinIndiakilledherson,whoisamurdereranddidlotsofbadthings.ThepoliceinIndiatriedtocatchhimforyearswithoutanyresult.Hecommittedsomanycrimesthatevendeathcannotatonefortheoffence.Hismotherknowsthathersonwillkillmanymorepeopleifshedoesnotkillhim.Thus,whenhersoncamebacktoseeheroneday,shekilledhimwiththepoison.Inthiscase,tokillthemotherisprobablynotthebestchoice,sincethismaymakepeoplethinkthatbeingjustiswrong.Butaccordingtothepresentlaw,thejudgerhadtosentencedthemothertodeath,andthisbroughtawidelydebatethoughtoutthecountry.

Further,onlythemoralitycanmakepeopletounderstandwhatisrightandwhatiswrong,andtorestrictpeoplewithmoralitywillbeagoodway.Underthepressureoflawsandlegalsystems,manypeoplejustdothebadthingsecretlybecausetheydonotknowthattheyarewrong.Andmanypeoplemayeventhinkthatthelawsarewronganddisobeyorevenresistthelaw.Theymaycommitcrimesagainaftertheyarepunished.Onlywhenapeoplehaveknownthemoralityandfindtherightmeasurementtodistinguishrightandwrong,theycanfindtheirmistakesandbecomeabetterperson.AstatisticsinvolvingmanyprisonsinChinafindthattheprisonerswholearnmoralityandknowtheirmistakeshaveamuchlowerrateofcommittingcrimeagain.

Inthefinalanalysis,wecanseethatthelawsandlegalsystemcannotresolvealltheproblemsinthesocietyandthereforeweshouldagreewiththeauthor.

GRE写作优秀实例：学问让事情变得神奇

题目：

Asweacquiremoreknowledge,thingsdonotbecomemorecomprehensible,butmorecomplexandmoremysterious.

当我们获得越来越多的学问，事情并没有变的更加透彻，相反是变的更简单更神奇。

正文：

Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,naturalscienceandsocialsciencehelppeoplelearnmoreabouttheworldandthethingsseemstobeclear,actually,undersomecircumstance,in-depthresearchesonthingscausethreeconsequencesatthesometime:comprehensible,complexandmysteriousratherthanmerelyunderstand.

Accumulatedknowledgehelpsproblemsortheoriestobeexpressedclearlyandlucidlysothatpeoplefeeleasytounderstandtheissues.Forexample,Galileo,whowasafamousItalianastronomerwhodespisetheprejudicesandbooklearningoftheAristotelians,whoputhisquestiontothenatureinsteadoftheancient,andwhodrewhisconclusionfearlessly.Eventually,hisexperimentandobservationestablishedanewtheoryandoverthrewtheoldonefromAristotle.Becauseofhissuccessandtheories,peoplelearnhowtoobservetheskywithtelescopeandbegintounderstandanotherspace,whichisfarfromtheearth.Obviously,withoutknowledgefromGalileo’stheory,universemightalsobeainspirationandevenavacancy.Takeanotherscientistforexample,Edison,whoinventedelectricbulbbymakingthousandexperimentandbroughtthesocietyintoabrilliantcentury.Recently,peopleliveinasocietywhichfulloflightandhelpthemtolearnwhattheycanseeandobserve.Withtherevolutionofhumanbeings,knowledgesolvesvariousproblemsandcreatesamorecomprehensibleandcomfortablelifetothepeople.

However,thoseknowledgemakesustoconsideredthereasonandoriginforhumannatureofcuriosity,asaresult,theworldbecomeincreasinglycomplex.Takethesameinstancewhathavepointedabove,althoughpeoplelearntousetelescopetoobservethesky,peopleunsatisfiedwithsuchaobservationanddesiretotouchwiththeouterspaceandunderstandotherplanets.Inthiscase,scientistsinventedthespacecraftwhichhavesuccessfullylandedontheMoonandMars,aftertheseexperiments,peopleknowthattherearenowaterandfewgravitationinMoon,andtheMasmighthavethesimilarconditionoftheearth.however,thecomplexproblemscomeout,becausepeoplefeeldifficultytoexplainthephenomenaintheouterspace.

Therefore,theresearchonastronomybecomescomplexandinvolved.Notonlythisfield,butalsoallscientificareabecomescomplicate.Whenpeopleunderstandasurfaceofthings,theywillfeelanxioustolearnthecoreofthem,however,thedeeperpeopledoresearches,themorecomplicationsexist.

Additionally,in-depthlearningcausesdesireofresearchingformystery,whichfollowstheexi