观点类作文课件

Welcometomyclass!Athousand-handmotherbusytiredWhatisthemotherbusywith?

choresSheisbusywithalotofchores.Shouldchildrendochoresathome?No?Yes?Inmyopinion,childrenshoulddochoresbecause...

G1&G2G3&G4Inmyview,childrenshouldn'tdochoresbecause...(在我看来）

VSInmyview（在我看来）,childrenshould/shouldn'tdochoresbecause....Inaddition(另外）,…2.Inmyview,childrenshould/shouldn'tdochores.Foronething(一方面）,…Foranother（另一方面）,…4.In

myopinion,childrenshould/shouldn'tdochores.

Firstofall（首先）

,…What’smore（而且）,…3.Inmyopinion,childrenshould/shouldn'tdochores.

Ontheonehand

(一方面）,…Ontheotherhand

（另一方面）,…★★★Conjunctions(连接词）canhelpmakeourcomposition(作文）better!

RecentlystudentsofClass9haveahotdiscussionaboutthetopic“whetherchildrenshoulddochoresathome”.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.不同的人有不同的观点。shoulddochores1.learnhowtolookafterthemselves;2.developchildren’sindependence(独立性）;3.helpparentsrelax;GirlsThegirlsthinkthat____________________________.

childrenshoulddochoresathomelearnhowtolookafterthemselves.childrencandevelopchildren’sindependence.itcanhelphelpparentsrelax.Firstofall,What’smore,doingchorescanInaddition,shoulddochores1.learnhowtolookafterthemselves;2.developchildren’sindependence;3.helpparentsrelax;Girls

Thegirlsthinkthatchildrenshoulddochoresathome.Firstofall,childrencanlearnhowtolookafterthemselves.What’smore,itcanhelpdevelopchildren’sindependence.Inaddition,doingchorescanhelpparentsrelax.

opinion(观点)reasons(原因)Shouldn’tdochores1.awasteoftime;2.toomuchhomework;3.parents’duty(职责）;BoysTheboysthink______________________________.

childrenshouldn’tdochoresathomeawasteoftime.doingchoresistoomuchhomework.childrenhaveparents’dutyitistodochores.Foronething,Foranother,Besides,Shouldn’tdochores1.awasteoftime;2.toomuchhomework;3.parents’duty(职责）;BoysTheboysthinkchildrenshouldn’tdochoresathome.Foronething,doingchoresisawasteoftime.Foranother,childrenhavetoomuchhomework.Besides,itisparents’dutytodochores.opinion(观点)reasons(原因)Checkthefollowingparts:1.Structure(结构：beginning---body---ending)2.Contents(内容：opinionsandreasons;useallofthekeywords)3.

Conjunctions(连接词）4.Grammarandspelling(语法和拼写）

5.Writeclearly（书写清楚）Should(70%)

shouldn’t(30%)relaxing,freshair…noteasytotakepublictransportation…Exciting…crowded,expensive…在英语课上,老师组织了“Shouldchildrendochoresathome”的话题讨论。请根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文，汇报讨论结果，并写出你的看法与理由。注意：（1）短文必须包含表格中的所有信息，并作适当发挥；（2）文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；（3）80—100词，所给的文章开头供选择，不计入词数。IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopic“Shouldchildrendochoresathome?”.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________70%studentsthinkthatchildrenshoulddosomechoresathome.Foronething,...Foranother,...What’smore,…30%studentsdisagree.Theythinkchildrenshouldn’tdochores.Ontheonehand,...Ontheotherhand,...Besides,…

Allinall/Inaword/Inshort（总而言之）,theseareouropinions.Canyoutellmeaboutyourideas?Ending（结尾）Checkthefollowingparts:1.Structure(结构：beginning---body---ending)2.Contents(内容：opinionsandreasons)3.

Conjunctions(连接词）4.Grammarandspelling(语法和拼写）

5.Writeclearly(书写清楚)中考作文评分标准作文满分为20分，其中书写2分，作文分为18分，按四档给分。档次分值评分标准第四档15～18描述了所有的信息，内容合理、丰富；用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基本没有语言错误；行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰。第三档11～14描述了大部分的信息，内容比较合理；用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语言错误，但不影响理解；行文基本连贯，连接词使用基本恰当，指代基本清晰。第二档6～10描述了小部分信息，内容不合理；有较多的语言错误，一定程度上影响理解；行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰。第一档0～5交白卷或描述的内容与主题无关；有大量语言错误，影