英语观点对比类作文写作分析

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观点对比类作文

写作技巧第4页/共40页

高三英语写作-----Howtowriteanargumentation（议论文）第5页/共40页词汇,句型,语法多样化

1.覆盖了所有的要点

2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇

3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？第6页/共40页1.(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with第7页/共40页2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,__________（所以）we’llhavelessfieldtogrowrice.thereforeSoasaresult/consequencethus结果第8页/共40页3.Therentisreasonable,__________,thelocationisperfect.

房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。what’smoremoreover/furthermoreinadditionbesides另外(递进）第9页/共40页4.Theyoungmandidn’tenjoyhisoldjob._________(相反

)hefindsthenewjobveryinteresting.

Onthecontrary,However,转折But/yet/while第10页/共40页5.__________(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.IngeneralInaword/allinall总结Inshort/briefGenerallyspeaking第11页/共40页6.______________(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.weshouldspendtimeandmoneyonothermoreimportantthings.AsfarasI’mconcernedInmyopinion/it’smyopinionthat个人观点Ithink/believe第12页/共40页

thestructureofthearticle

topicsentence

fortheopinion

againsttheopinionendingsentence

第13页/共40页介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：1.我们举行了一场讨论/调查，讨论内容是……Recentlywehadaheateddiscussionon/about…Wehadadiscussion/surveyon…Accrodingtoarecentsurvey,…Thereismuchdiscussiontodayabout…2.当说到…时Whenitcomesto…，3.…问题引起了越来越多的关注Thetopicof…isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat…第14页/共40页Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,hold/havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.Differentpeople,however,thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter.People,

however,

differ

in

their

opinions

on

this

matter.People,

havetaken/adopteddifferent

attitudes

towards

this

matter.过渡句第15页/共40页介绍正方观点：Somepeopleagreewith/approve/supporttheopinion/decision/idea/viewthat…Someofthemholdtheopinion/viewthat…Mostofthenareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathinkthat…Thosewhosupportitthinkthat…Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefor

theidea.Supportersthink/believethat…第16页/共40页介绍反方观点However/But/Onthecontrary/Incontrast/Oncontrast/Ontheotherhand/…,othersareopposedto/areagainst/disagreewiththeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,…ofthemholdadifferentview.Differentfromthose…,peoplethink……ofthestudentsthink

that…However,othershavedifferentopinions.Othersarguethatidea,intheiropinion,theythink/believethat...第17页/共40页进一步介绍观点What’smore…Furthermore/moreover,...Meanwhile,…What’sworse…Inaddition,…Besides,…Plus,…First,…Second,…Third,…第18页/共40页总结句(未达成一致)Inshort,noagreementhasbeenreachedyet.Sofar,noagreementhasbeenreached.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.第19页/共40页本人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Personally,Forme,It’smyopinionthat…,because/thereasonisthat/foronething,...foranotherthing,...Ithink...I

firmly

support

the

view

that…I’mforthefirst/secondview.第20页/共40页对比类写作

实战模版

第21页/共40页第22页/共40页过渡句观点一论据一论据二论据三观点二论据一论据二总结第23页/共40页可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一(支持)，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二（反对），继续用论据进行说明。最后总结自己的观点。第24页/共40页你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。Recentlywehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.__________________________________________支持饲养宠物反对饲养宠物安慰孤寡老人人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣促进体育锻炼，提供人与人交流的机会造成环境污染吵闹声，甚至伤人花钱第25页/共40页赞成：

安慰孤寡老人和谐相处，增添生活乐趣促进锻炼，提供交流机会反对：环境污染噪音，伤人花费大myopinionbebadforenvironmentmaketoomuchnoiseattackpeoplecostalotofmoneygetcomfortfrompets/getalonggetonwellwithanimals/makelifeinteresting/keepfit/communicatewithothershavedifferentviewsonsthreacttosthindifferentways.differintheirattitudestowardssth.Recentlywehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.Beginningconclusion第26页/共40页Recentlywehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.第27页/共40页Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.Someofthestudentsthinkitisagoodideatokeeppetsbecausemanyoldpeoplewholivealoneathomecangetmorecomfortfrompets.What’smore,gettingalongwellwithanimalswillmakeourlifeinteresting.Peoplewhoownpetswillhavemorechancestowalk,thusgivingthematimetocommunicatewithothers.Ontheotherhand,theotherstudentsareagainsttheidea.Intheiropinions,iftoomanypeoplekeeppetsathome,itisbadfortheenvironment.What’sworse,petsmaymaketoomuchnoiseandevenattackpeople.Inaddition,itcostslotsofmoneytokeeppets.Inshort,theyhavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.some过渡句观点一论据一论据二论据三观点二论据一论据二论据三第28页/共40页Inmyopinion,Ilikeanimals,soIdon’tthinkitisbadtokeeppetsathome.Butwemusttakesomemeasurestopreventthemfrompollutingourenvironment.总结第29页/共40页

作文模板1

__________hadadiscussionaboutwhether__________.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.________ofthestudentsthink______________________.What’smore,_______.

Ontheotherhand,______ofthestudentsthink_____________.What’sworse,______.

Inshort,_______havenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.本人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned……./(Inmyopinion,…….;It’smyopinionthat……),Foronereason,……….Foranotherreason………Inaword,…….第30页/共40页

模板2Wehadaheateddiscussionabout/on___________.Students’views/ideas/opinionsonitvary/differfrompersontoperson.Somestudentssay/think/believethat…,However,othersholdtheviewthat……AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminfavorofthefirst/secondview/Iwouldliketo…./Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,……Secondly,……Inconclusion/Inaword,……第31页/共40页模板3

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat（作文题目）Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.

Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一_.Intheirviewstherearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,原因一.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,原因二.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat观点一.第32页/共40页People,

however,

differ

in

their

opinions

on

this

matter.

Some

people

holdtheideathat观点二.Intheirpointofview,foronething，原因一.Foranotherthing,原因二.Therefore,there

isno

doubt

that观点二_.

AsfarasIamconcerned,I

firmly

support

the

view

that观点一或二.

It

isnotonlybecause____,butalsobecause____.……第33页/共40页对比观点题型

（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1．有一些人认为...2．另一些人认为..3．我的看法..

Thetopicof__________（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplesay__________（观点一）.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthat__________（支持的理由一）Whatismore,__________理由二).Moreover,__________(理由三).

Whileothersthinkthat__________(观点二）inthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,__________(支持的理由一).Secondly(besides),__________（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),__________(理由三).

Frommypointofview,Ithink__________（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat__________(原因).

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Thetopicof

usingcellphonesinschool

isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplesaycellphonescandogoodtousstudents.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthatcellphonescanbeusedtohelpuskeepintouchwithothers.Whatismore,theycanhelpuswhenweareindanger.Whileothersthinkthatcellphonescandoharmtousstudentsinthefollowingreasons.Firstly,

wewouldspendtoomuchtimeonthemandaffectourstudy.Secondly,

theycandestroyourbodyhealth.Frommypointofview,Ithink

weshouldnotusecellphonesinschool.Thereasonisthatasstudents,weshouldpaymoreattentiontostudy.第35页/共40页

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrancefeeDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，

会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木2002年高考题范文第36页/共40页DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforpark