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读后续写2024届高考英语读后续写模拟练习课课件目录1、原文速览2、情节梳理3、关键句分析4、词汇热身5、句型预备6、范文赏析3OnafreezingJanuarymorning,JonnyBenjamin,thena20-year-oldcollegestudent,climbedontheedgeofWaterlooBridgeinLondon.Thatmorning,Jonnyescapedfromamentalhealthhospital,wherehe’dbeendiagnosed（诊断）withschizo-affectivedisorder.Heheadedstraighttothebridge,beingconvincedthathisdiseasewasalifesentence(徒刑).Hundredsofpeoplepassedby.OnlyonemancalledNeilLaybourn,then25,calmlyandquietlywalkedtoJonny’sside.“You’realright,man?Whyareyousittingonthebridge?”原文速览whenWho1Who2铺垫1铺垫2WhyAtfirstJonnywantedNeiltoleavehimalone,butsomethinginNeil’scalm,down-to-earthmannerstruckachord.Jonnyfeltfaith,likehecouldtalktohim.“It’scoldhere.Whynothavesomecoffeeinawarmcafe?EverythingwillbeOK.”Forthefirsttimeafterthediagnosis（诊断）JonnyfeltperhapsitreallymightbeOK.Heclimbedback.Thepolice,havingreceivedcallsfrompassers-by,werewaitingthere.Theyquicklyputhimintoapolicecar,incasehewastopanicandjump.HelostsightofNeil,thepersonwho’dbroughthope.4How铺垫3情节梳理Backtohospital….Treatment25yearsoldCalmandwarmheartedGiveJonnywarmthandhopeNeilLaybourn520yearsoldstudentSuffera

mentaldiseaseDesperate/WanttosuicideJonnyBenjamin6Paragraph1:Jonnyendedupbackinhospital..______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Jonnywasover-excitedwhenNeilcalledhimtwoweeksafterhispost（发帖）._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四句关键句A1：B1：A2：B2：治疗效果如何——是否康复——返校读书？想起Neil,发布post找Neil两人相遇——说什么——什么感受主题：感谢thank,hope,kindness续写预测7Backtoschoolandfinishthedegree….BecomehealthyandpositiveKeepremindofthemanandpostonline续写预测8ReadthepostReunioninthecaféThanksforhiskindnessandwarmth1词汇热身1、returntouniversity______________________2、finishhisdegree________________________3、thoughtaboutthestranger_________________4、postedanonline_________________________5、hadareunion______________________________返回校园结束学业想起这个陌生人在网上发布重逢句型预备Overthenextsixyears,Jonnyoftenthoughtaboutthestrangerwhohadtalkedhimaround.定语从句原因状语从句Manypeoplewalkedpast,butbecauseofNeil’skindnessandsympathy,I’velivedagoodlife着手续写

15mins12第一段Jonnyendedupbackinhospital.Eventually,hewaswellenoughtoreturntouniversityandfinishhisdegree.Overthenextsixyears,Jonnyoftenthoughtaboutthestrangerwhohadtalkedhimaround.Eagertothankhiminperson,hepostedanonlinemessagenicknamingthegoodmanMike.Hispostwassharedmillionsoftimesaroundtheworld,asfarasCanada.13第二段Jonnywasover-excitedwhenNeilcalledhimtwoweeksafterhispost.Theyhadareunion,finallyhavingth