初中英语作文复习课件

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荣光学校九年级（2）班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会，并且以“OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?”为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有些担心。请根据表格中的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。乐观者的观点：1.越来越多的人将成为环保主义者。2.政府将采取更多的措施改善环境。担心者的观点：1.大量的树木仍将被砍伐。2.私家车将越来越多。你的观点及你的打算 学生自拟（至少两点）提示：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。

2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。

3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80.注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：optimisticadj.乐观的

governmentn.政府takemeasuresto采取措施privateadj.私有的OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?Manystudentsareoptimisticaboutourenvironmentintenyears._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2017年衡阳市书面表达书面表达。中国日报（ChinaDaily）教育版近期举办英语征文竞赛，其主题为构建和谐社区（HarmoniousCommunity）。假设你是Tony，住在湘江社区，请以HowtoCreateaHarmoniousCommunity为题，谈谈你的看法：创建和谐社区家人之间的和谐相处 尊敬长辈，听取家人建议…（补充一点）邻里之间的和谐相处 对邻里友善，互帮互助…（补充一点）人与环境的和谐共存 爱护花草树木，不乱扔垃圾…（补充一点）提示词：harmonious：和谐的要求：1.短文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、地址、学校等相关信息。2.文中应写出自己的补充的三个观点。3.书写工整、语句通顺连贯、词数不少于80。注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。HowtoCreateaHarmoniousCommunityMynameisTony.IliveinXiangjiangCommunity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2018年衡阳市书面表达

假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节，请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。注意：1.80~100词左右。2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhatdoyouthinkoftheDragonBoatFestival?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiuWeikeys英语写作基本技能分成合理三段想到简单内容造出正确句子进行句式升级初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】123常见问题词汇量不足；句式单一

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语法结构混用初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】词汇量不足；句式单一1句式；短语表达多样化初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key1表达多样化我喜欢英语IlikeEnglishIamcrazyaboutEnglishIamfondofEnglishmyfavoritelanguageisEnglishIfallinlovewithEnglishatthefirstsight.初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key1表达多样化我喜欢英语因为它是一门重要的课程IlikeEnglishbecauseitisimportantforourlessonsThereasonwhyIlikeEnglishisthatitisimportantforourlessons我热爱运动因为它有利于我的健康IlikeexercisebecauseitisgoodforourhealthThereasonwhyIlikeexerciseisthatitisgoodforourhealthIlikeexercisebecauseithasgoodinfluenceonourhealth初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key1表达多样化她是一个多么漂亮的女孩.Sheissuchanice/good-looking/eye-catchinggirlWhatagood-lookinggirlsheisWhataneye-catchinggirlsheisHowbeautifulsheis初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key1表达多样化她是一个多么漂亮的女孩，有着长长的卷发；圆圆的脸SheissuchanicegirlwithlongcurlyhairandaroundfaceSheissuchanicegirlwhohaslonghairandaroundface阅读一个提升自我能力的好方法；既有用又高效Readingisagoodwaytoimproveourability，itisbothusefulandeffectiveReadingisagoodwaytoimproveourability，whichishelpfulandeffective初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key1表达多样化复习和预习对于学习很重要PreviewandreviewisimportanttostudyItisnecessaryforourstudytopreviewandreviewIthinkitnecessaryforourstudytopreviewandreview初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key1表达多样化复习和预习对于学习很重要，因为他们在学习中扮演着关键的作用Previewandreviewisimportanttostudy，becausetheyplayankeyroleinstudying保护环境很重要，因为自然环境对于我们的日常生活不可或缺protectingtheenvironmentisimportant，forthereasonthatnaturalenvironmentplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】组织结构不清2逻辑连接词；开头；结尾万能公式初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key3逻辑连接词First

secondtobeginwithfirstofallfirstandforemostattheoutsetthenfurthermoremoreoverwhat’smore初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key3逻辑连接词thirdSolastbutnotleastlastlyasafinalpointlastofallhencethusthereforeasaresult初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key3万能开头句当谈到…；涉及到Whenitcomesto…Whenitcomestogettingthingsdone,he'suselessWhentalkingabout…Whenwetalkabouthowteenagersaregettingworseandworsenow,mostyoungpeopledon’tagree.Whenwetalkabout…WhentalkingabouttheMid-autumnFestival,wethinkofmooncakesandfamilyreunion.初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】初中英语作文复习教学PPT-（PPT45页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Key3万能开头句古语有云....Asanoldsayinggoes,Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Wellgoesanoldsaying，Itisanoldsayingthat...Asanoldsayinggoes，knowledgeispowerKey3万能开头句据报道…;据研究…;…显示Accordingtoasurvey/study/report，Accordingtoanewsurvey,students’safetyhasbecomeabigproblemAsurvey/study/reportshowsthat…Asurvey/study/reportshowsthatexerciseisimportantforusKey3万能开头句随着…的发展；进步

Withthedevelopment/advanceof…Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,smartphoneisbecomingmoreandmorepopularandimportantinpeople’sdailylife.Asscienceandtechnologydevelop,…Asscienceandtechnologydevelop,wecanenjoymoreconveniences.Key3万能开头句很明显….

Itisobviousthat…Itisobviousthathehasbeenathome(becauseshephoneduswithhishometelephone）很清楚；很明显Itisclearthat…Itisclearthattheeffectsoftheseenvironmentalpollutantsareveryreal.Key3万能开头句毫无疑问的是.

Thereisnodoubtthat…Thereisnodoubtthatwewillbesuccessful.不容否认的是Noonecandenythat…Noonecandenythatthefactthatsmokingcouldleadtocancer.Key3万能结尾句

我认为，…AsfarasIamconcerned，...Frommypointofview,…Inmyopinion，…AsfarasIknow，…Tomymind，…Inmyopinion，keepinghealthyisofgreatimportanceKey3万能结尾句因此，可以得出这样的结论：Hence,itcanbeconcludedthat...因此,我们能够发现;Therefore,wecanfindthat...我们可以得出结论;wecandrawtheconclusionthat...Key3Advantages1.挣钱Wecanearnsomepocketmoneytobuyourfavoritebooks.2.利用好时间Wecanmakegooduseofoursparetimetodosomevaluablethings.4.交朋友NotonlyourEnglishbutalsoourinterpersonalskillscanbeimproved.3.提高能力Wecanmakesomeclosefriendswithcommonintereststoshareourlifeexperiencewitheachother.Key3Advantages

5.有益于身心健康Itisbeneficialforourphysicalandmentalhealth.

6.既有意义又有趣Itisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.

7.培养兴趣，开阔视野，丰富课余生活Itcancultivateourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafterschoollife.

8.面对困难，克服挑战，达成目标，实现梦想Itcanenableustofacedifficulties,overcomechallenges,achieveourgoalsandrealizeourdreams.Key3Disadvantages

1

.浪费时间，浪费精力

Notonlyourprecioustimebutalsoourenergywillbewasted.

2.浪费金钱

Itcostssomuchmoneythatmanyordinaryfamiliescannotevenaffordit.

3.影响身心健康

Itneverfailstodoalotofharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealth.4.影响学习Ourstudyalsobenegativelyaffected.5.影响人际关系Itisalsobadforourinterpersonalrelationship.Key3Disadvantages

6.让人上瘾Itmaygradually/eventuallygetyouaddictedtoit.7.污染环境

Itmaycauseseriousairpollutiontothisworld,whichisalreadyfarfromperfect.8.导致无法预测的麻烦和问题Itmayendupwithsomeunexpectedtroublesandproblems.9.让我们忘记XXX的真正意义WemayforgetthetruemeaningofXXX.Key3paragraph（1）重要性Needlesstosay,XXXisofgreatsignificance/importanceforourlife/society.Asforthereasons,firstandforemost,…..Additionally,…Lastbutnotleast,…（2）我的观点AsfarasIamconcerned,…..Thereasonissimple:justasanoldsayinggoes,……Key3paragraph(3）解释原因Therearethreemainreasonswhysbdosth.First

andforemost,…Additionally,…Lastbutnotleast,….

（4）建议措施Herearesomesuggestions.123Practicalandeffectivemeasuresmustbeputintopracticeimmediatelytoimprovethecurrentsituation.123.语法结构混用3先写主干；再添枝叶Key

4语法结构

我喜欢这个男孩IliketheboyIliketheboyverymuchIliketheboyverymuchbecauseheisbothlivelyandlovely.Key

4语法结构

他正在画画Heisdrawing.Heisdrawingintheclass.HeisdrawingintheEnglishclass.HeisdrawingahorseseriouslyintheEnglishclass.Key

4语法结构

我们老师将给我们做演讲ourteacherwillgiveusaspeech.ourChineseteacherwillgiveusalessonabouthowtowriteagoodpassage.ourChineseteacherwithtwobigeyesandapairofglasseswillgiveusalessonabouthowtowriteagoodpassage.真题练手4孰能生巧Key3Example我们应该多读书Thereisnodoubtthatwearesupposedtoreadmorebooks.Asforthereasons,firstandforemost,itisobviousthatbooksareuseful,whichcancultivateourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafterschoollife.Additionally,itgoeswithoutsayingthatreadingbooksisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Lastbutnotleast,noonecandenythatweneedtopassalotofexams;asaresult,weneedtheknowledgelearnedfrombooks.Key3Example我们要适当地玩手机

Thereisnodoubtthatusingtelephoneshassomedisadvantages,firstandforemost,itisobviousthatitmaygraduallygetyouaddictedtoitifyouuseitimproperly.Additionally,

Itisclearthatnotonlyourprecioustimebutalsoourenergywillbewasted.Lastbutnotleast,noonecandenythat

Wemayforgetthetruemeaningofstudying;asaresult,Itmayendupwithsomeunexpectedtroublesandproblems.Key

5真题练手随着科技的发展和社会的进步，快速更新的智能手机受到全民热爱，人们的生活似乎已经离不开手机；智能手机的出现确实给人们的生活带来了很大的便利，但同时也带来了许多问题，作为中学生的我们，该如何正确及使用手机呢？要点：1.智能手机带来的便利2.智能手机带来的问题.3.我的观点Key

5真题练手提纲=（分段+内容）-利弊分析型1.总-xxx（随着…发展，xxx受欢迎/引发讨论）2.分-赞同的观点+理由1.2.3反对的观点+理由1.2.3

3.总-我的观点（套话）Key

5真题练手

Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandsociety，Thereisnodoubtthattelephonesplayanimportantpartinourdailylife.Whetherstudentscantaketelephonetoschool,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutthisquestion.Ontheonehand，Somepeoplethinkit‘sgreatforstudentstousetelephones

,becausetheycanmakesomeclosefriendswithcommonintereststosharetheirlifeexperiencewithothers.What’smore，theirparentscangettousquicklywhentheyneed.Ontheotherhand,someotherpeopledonotagreewiththem.Theyholdtheviewthatthestudentswhousethetelephonewillplaygames,watchmovies,sendmessagesandsoon,evenduringtheclass,whichwilldoharmtothem.andItneverfailstodoalotofharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealth.

asfarasI’mconcerned,bring