狗救小孩儿+读后续写写作指导学案 高三英语一轮复习写作专项

Z20读后续写:AFour-leggedGuardianAngel微专题：狗的描述1.眼睛：(与人的眼睛描述一样;仅举几例)眼睛专题后面附带Hiseyes___________________________________________________(闪闪发亮)Thecutedoglookedupatmewith___________________________________(大大的且又聪明的眼睛)Thedog’seyes___________________________________________________(紧紧地盯着桌子上的肉)Thedog________________________________________________________(忧伤无助地看着我)鼻子：急切地闻/嗅我的手:__________________________________把鼻子放在爪子上休息:________________________________________嘴巴:狗吠/低吼:______________________________________________汪汪汪：_______________________________________________小猫(喵喵叫):_______________________这条狗咬住她的腿不放。___________________________________________________咬住衣角:________________________________________大声地喘着气:____________________________________舌头:舌头伸到嘴外:_________________________________________舔:__________________________________小心翼翼地舔了一下地上的食物:_______________________________________________________舌头耷拉着，滴着口水。__________________________________________耳朵：竖起耳朵:____________________________________身体：趴在地上:________________________________狗伸了个懒腰，抖了抖身子，又转了几圈。_____________________________________________________后腿支起全身:_________________________________________________缩成一团:_____________________________________________________跳起来:_______________________________________________________蹲下身/向...猛扑:Thedog____________________________,readyto_____________________thechicken.仰面躺着，慢慢地打滚:______________________________________________________爪子：挠；抓:_____________________________________尾巴：这只狗使劲地摇着尾巴:____________________________________________________________练笔：句子Spottylookedatme,and___________________________________________________________(舔着我的脸，好像要告诉我什么).狗欢快地叫着，摇着他的大尾巴，向门口跑去。Thedog______________________________________________________andhedashedtowardsthegate.Ismiledasmydogcamerunningoutfromthebackyardatthesoundofmyarrival.①____________________________________________________________________________________________(使劲地摇着尾巴，高兴地汪汪叫)②____________________________________________________________________________________________(跳起来舔我的脸，将行礼箱撞到在地).狗站起来，抖了抖身子，伸了伸腰，过来迎接主人。_________________________________________________________________________________________________练笔：微写作Onewarmspringday,alittledogfollowedmydaughterhomeafterschool.Ithad___________________(金色的黄毛)like____________________(柔软的棉花)withashortandcutetail,lookingatmewith_________________________(大大的且聪明的眼睛).Time_____________(tick)by,thelittledogstayedwithus_____________________________(形影不离地)andbecameamemberofmyfamily.Everytimemydaughterreturnedhomeafterschool,thedog___________________________(立刻朝我的女儿跑去),_____________________________(高兴地跳起来)and______________________________________(开心地舔着她)withitstails__________________(摇摆)cheerfully.Atthesametime,mydaughter________________________________(蹲下来)and_______________________________________(把它抱在胸前),___________________________________________________(不停地抚摸它的头).Whatabeautifulandheart-touchingscene!Version1:Z20读后续写参考范文AFour-leggedGuardianAngelThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Then____________________________(令我恐惧的是),I________________________________(看到)Forrest’syellowsleeper(睡衣).Brigittewasbravelydoingherbestto______________________________(使他漂浮着)byholdingontohissleeperwithhermouth.Atthesametime,shewas_______________(desperate)tryingto___________________________________________(游向浅水区).__________________________________________________________(直到那时我才意识到倒装句)Forresthadsomehowopenedthedoor,_____________________________(溜了出去)and___________________________________(掉进游泳池)._____________________________________(刹那间),I_________________(跳了进去),________mybaby_______________(抱出来)andcarriedhiminside.Hands_____________(tremble),Icalled911andwe___________________________________(我们被快速地送往医院),_____________thedoctorkepthimfor_____________(observe)foronenight.Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.Atthis,I___________________________(如释重负).___________________________(一到家),ourdogBrigitte_______________________________(开心地叫着)and______________________________(高高跳起)togiveuswarmandwetkisses,_____________________________________(开心地摇着尾巴v-ing作状语).Lookingdirectlyintohereyeswith______________(感恩)andabitof______________(愧疚),I_____________________________________________________(把它紧紧抱在胸前),unwillingto___________________________(让她走)forasingleminute.______________________________________________________________________(也就是在那时，我突然意识到强调句型)lifesometimescanbe____________(残酷的)and______________________(糟糕的),buttherewasalwayssomeoneorsomething____________(guide)you,_______________(protect)you,and________________________________________________________(用无条件的爱和忠诚陪伴着我们).Ourdogwasjustourguardianangel,___________________________________________(我们家的一员),__________________________________________________(我永远不会放弃非限制性定语从句)检测版本：ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Then____________________________(令我恐惧的是),I________________________________(看到)Forrest’syellowsleeper(睡衣).Brigittewasbravelydoingherbestto______________________________(使他漂浮着)byholdingontohissleeperwithhermouth.Atthesametime,shewas_______________(desperate)tryingto___________________________________________(游向浅水区).__________________________________________________________(直到那时我才意识到倒装句)Forresthadsomehowopenedthedoor,_____________________________(溜了出去)and___________________________________(掉进游泳池)._____________________________________(刹那间),I_________________(跳了进去),________mybaby_______________(抱出来)andcarriedhiminside.Hands_____________(tremble),Icalled911andwe___________________________________(我们被快速地送往医院),_____________thedoctorkepthimfor_____________(observe)foronenight.Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.Atthis,I___________________________(如释重负).___________________________(一到家),ourdogBrigitte_______________________________(开心地叫着)and______________________________(高高跳起)togiveuswarmandwetkisses,_____________________________________(开心地摇着尾巴v-ing作状语).Lookingdirectlyintohereyeswith______________(感恩)andabitof______________(愧疚),I_____________________________________________________(把它紧紧抱在胸前),unwillingto___________________________(让她走)forasingleminute.______________________________________________________________________(也就是在那时，我突然意识到强调句型)lifesometimescanbe____________(残酷的)and______________________(糟糕的),buttherewasalwayssomeoneorsomething____________(guide)you,_______________(protect)you,and________________________________________________________(用无条件的爱和忠诚陪伴着我们).Ourdogwasjustourguardianangel,___________________________________________(我们家的一员),__________________________________________________(我永远不会放弃非限制性定语从句)2020年浙江卷：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,

Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhis

parents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情绪)getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntothe

university

wherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamily

hugged

andsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.The

boy

liftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit.”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andthey

watched

ashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothe

dog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbe

back

tovisit,Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusual

cheerful

self.Herownersstartedtogetworried,“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabig

box.Poppy

welcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(摆动)eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Para1.Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Para2.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写：眼睛的描写：1.睁开眼睛/闭上眼睛:open/close/shutyoureyesJoeclosedhiseyesandtriedtogetbacktosleep.Islowlyopenedmyeyes.2.揉眼睛/擦眼睛rub/wipeyoureyesAnnarubbedhereyeswearily(疲惫地).Hewipedhiseyeswithhishandkerchief.3.眼睛向下看loweryoureyesInsteadofansweringthequestion,heloweredhiseyes.抬起眼睛：raise/liftyoureyes(=lookupatsomeoneorsomething)Sheraisedhereyestowardsthesky.5.眯着眼睛：narrowyoureyesThewomannarrowedhereyesathimsuspiciously.6.翻白眼：rollyoureyesWhenIaskedhertotidyherroom,sherolledhereyesandsighed.7.遮住眼睛：shade/shieldyoureyesTheygazedouttosea,shieldingtheireyesfromthesun.8.转移目光：avertyoureyes或lookawayfrom...Heavertedhiseyesfromthebody.9.快速浏览run/castyoureyeoversth(=lookatorreadsomethingquickly)Iaskedhimtorunhiseyeovermyreport.10.注视着某人/某物set/lay/clapeyesonsb/sthHehadlovedherfromthemomentheseteyesonher.11.peer:v仔细看，端详；费力地看tolookcarefullyorwithdifficultyThedriverwaspeeringintothedistancetryingtoreadtheroadsign.司机费力地看着远方，想要看清路标。Whennoone

answered

the

door,shepeered

through

the

window

to

see

ifanyonewasthere.gazeat:凝视，注视，盯着看Annettegazedadmiringly

at

Warrenashe

spoke.沃伦说话时，安妮特一脸崇拜地注视着他。One’seyesfell/landedonsth:眼睛注视着...Hereyesfell/landedonthephotosofherandmeatherfourthbirthdyaparty.瞥见:catchaglimpseof或glanceatsb或castaglanceatIcaughtaglimpseofhimashewalkedintotheroom.环视:lookaround直视某人的眼睛:lookstraightintoone’seyesShelookedstraightintoone’seyes,sofocusedthatIhadtolookaway.上下打量某人:eyesbupanddownThepolicemanonatreetcornereyedhimupanddownsuspiciously.意味深长地看某人:shotsbameaningfullookTheoldmanshottheboyameaningfullook.眼睛一直盯着:withone’seyesgluedtosth或one’seyesgluetosthWithhiseyesgluedtothephone,itwasnotuntiltheteacherpattedherontheshoulderthatsherealizedtheteacherwasstandinginfrontofher.垂眸地面:one’seyesdroptotheground看见，看出；注意到:spotThe

\o"police"police

spottedhimdriving

a

\o"stolen"stolen

\o"car"car.怒视:glareatsbHeglaredatmewithhisfistsclenched.对某人眨眼睛:winkatsb扫视:glancearoundSheglan