雅思G类小作文省名师优质课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件

第1页Task1G---letterwriting Thistaskassessesthecandidate’sabilitytofollowEnglishletterwritingconventions(i.e.whatordertoputinformationin,whatstyletouse,howtostartandfinishaletter),touselanguageaccuratelyandappropriatelyandtoorganizeandlinkinformationcoherentlyandcohesively第2页Thesituationstheyareaskedtowriteaboutarecommon,everydaytopics.

suchaswritingtoacollegeaccommodationofficeraboutproblemswithaccommodationwritingtoanewemployerabouttimemanagementproblemstheyarehavingwritingtoalocalnewspaperaboutaplantodevelopalocalairportwritingtoarentingagencytosortoutproblemswiththeheatingsystemintheirhouse第3页Thestyleofwritingthatcandidatesusedependswhotheyareaskedtowriteto.

Candidatesneedtowriteinastylethatisappropriatefortheiraudienceandthatwillhelpthemtoachievetheirpurposeforwriting,e.g.writingtoafriend(informal)writingtoamanager(semi-formalorformal).第4页Alltheinformationfromthebulletpointsmustbeincluded.Candidatesshouldnotethattheywillbepenalizedforirrelevanceiftheresponseisoff-topicorisnotwrittenasfull,connectedtexte.g.usingbulletpointsinanypartoftheresponse,ornoteformetc.Theywillbeseverelypenalizediftheirwritingisplagiarized(i.e.copiedfromanothersource).Candidatesdonotneedtoincludeanyaddressesattheheadoftheirletters.第5页Candidatesmayberequiredtorequestorgiveinformationand/orexplainasituation.Todothis,theymayneedtodosomeofthefollowing:

askforgeneralfactualinformationprovidegeneralfactualinformationexpressneeds,wantsexpresslikesordislikesexpressopinions/feelingexpresscomplaintsmakerequestsmakesuggestions/recommendations

第6页剑6P113---FORMAL

YouandyourfamilyarelivinginrentedaccommodationinanEnglish-speakingcountry.Youarenotsatisfiedwiththeconditionofsomeofthefurniture.Writealettertothelandlord.InyourletterIntroduceyourselfExplainwhatiswrongwiththefurnitureSaywhatactionyouwouldlikethelandlordtotake第7页正式信函格式信头DearMr/Mrs+Sirname/SirorMadam/officer/professor:开头段参考模板句型+写信目标正文段1每段围绕一个点展开:要求1+自编信息正文段2每段围绕一个点展开:要求2+自编信息正文段3每段围绕一个点展开:要求3+自编信息结尾段参考模板句型+重申写信目标信尾Bestregards/Bestwishes，署名fullname:JasonYin/YiYin注:不用写地址,使用齐头式,顶格靠左,段和段之间空一行。第8页DearMrSmith,IamyourtenantfromFlat3onRiversideStreet.WemeteachotherwhenIsignedtherentalagreementinyouroffice.IhavelivedhereformonthsnowandIamwritingtocomplainaboutsomeofthefurniture.Asyoumayremember,thediningtableisinverypoorconditionandhasunevenlegs.Italsodoesnotmatchthediningchairsastherearetoolowtobecomfortableforatableofthatheight.WhenIfirstpointedthisouttoyou,youagreedtoprovideabrandnewdiningset.However,youhavenotdonesoandIwouldreallyliketoresolvethismatterassoonaspossible.Ifitismoreconvenientforyou,perhapsyoucouldsimplyreplacethetablebyfindingoneofasuitableheightforthechairs.Thiswouldsolvetheproblemswithouttoomuchcost,soIhopeyouagreetothisproposedsolution.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou,Yourssincerely,M.M.Egil第9页剑桥真题8P116---INFORMALYouhaverecentlymovedtoadifferenthouse.WritealettertoanEnglish-speakingfriend.InyourletterExplainwhyyouhavemovedDescribethenewhouseInviteyourfriendtocomeandvisitBeginyourletterasfollows:Dear…..,第10页半正式信函格式信头Dear+givenname,开头段参考模板句型(或自己措辞)+写信目标正文段1每段围绕一个点展开:要求1+自编信息正文段2每段围绕一个点展开:要求2+自编信息正文段3每段围绕一个点展开:要求3+自编信息结尾段参考模板句型(或自己措辞)+重申写信目标信尾Fondly/Love/Lotsoflove/XX:kiss&hug,署名givenname:Jason注:不用写地址,使用齐头式,信尾开始靠右顶格第11页DearDave,Iamwritingtoletyouknowthatatlastwehavemovedtoabiggerhouse！Wejustcouldn’tgoonlivinginthetwo-bedroombungalownowthatthetwinsaregrowingupandthenewbabyhasarrived.Sowestartedlooking---andonethingledtoanotherandfinallyhereweareinournewhome.I’msureyou’lllikeit.Wehavethreebedroomsnow,andaverymodernbathroomandkitchen.Thekidsarehappybecausethereismuchmorespacewiththebiglivingroomandthegardenoutside.ButMichelisthehappiestofallbecausehedoesn’tneedtodomuchdecorating.Whydon’tyoucomeroundthisweekendandseewhatyouthinkofournewplace?Wewouldalllovetoseeyouandiftheweatherisgoodwecanhaveabarbecueinthegarden.Ournewaddressandphonenumberarebelow,sogiveusacallandletusknowwhentoexpectyou.Lotsoflove,Francoise第12页G类信函词汇语法注意事项正式与半正式informal&semi-formalNoun＞Verb＞PhraseVerbconsideration＞consider＞thinkaboutFrench/Latin(30%)＞

Germanic(70%)inform＞tell,schedule＞setthedate礼多人不怪bepoliteapologize＞verysorry＞sorryinform:上级对下级,I’dlikeyoutoknow下级对上级,第13页G类信函词汇语法注意事项过去时＞现在时

进行时＞普通时Iwaswondering/Iamwondering/Iwonder语态voice:passive客观,active主观被动语态描述事实,主动语态表述观点,不要用简写noabbreviationE.g.ASAP,AAMOF,LOL,第14页雅思G类小作文惯用句型10种常考信函投诉信/求职信/推荐信/道歉信/感激信邀请信/问询信/请求信/失物信/提议信注意正式和半正式句型区分第15页1.投诉信开头惯用句式Iamwritingtocomplainabout…IamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwithsbaboutsthIamwritingtoinformyouthatIamdissatisfiedwithyour…Iregrettohavetoinformyouthat…1.投诉信结尾惯用句式Iwouldliketohavethismattersettledbytheendof…Itwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtakethismatterintoconsideration.Iunderstandyouwillgiveimmediateattentiontothismatter.Ihopethattheabovesituationwillbeimprovedassoonaspossible.Youreffortto…willbehighlyappreciatedbyall.Wewillappreciateyourwillingnessto...Iamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.第16页2.求职信开头惯用句式Iamwritingtoexpressmyinterestinyourrecentlyadvertisedpositionfora…Iamveryinterestedinexploringthepossibilityofobtainingapositionas…2.求职信结尾惯用句式ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme,pleasecontactmeat…Iamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.第17页3.推荐信开头惯用句式Iwouldliketopresent…foryourconsiderationinyoursearchfora...Withreferencetoyourrequirements,Ishall,withoutreservation,recommend…asanidealcandidate.3.推荐信结尾惯用句式Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommend…astherightpersonforyourconsideration.Anyfavorableconsiderationtothisletterwouldbeconsideredapersonalfavor.第18页4.道歉信开头惯用句式Iamwritingtoapologizefor…Iamwritingtosaysorryfor…4.道歉信结尾惯用句式Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.Pleaseacceptmysincerestanddeepestapology.Iapologizemostsincerelyfor…Iamtrulysorrytohavedone…Pleaseforgiveme…IoweyouanapologyIamsosorrytohaveputyouthroughsomuchtrouble第19页5.感激信开头惯用句式Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudefor…Iamgratefultoyoufor…IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.Itrulyappreciateyourkindness.Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyoufor…Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks“toexpressmyappreciationforyourgeneroushelp.5.感激信结尾惯用句式Imustthankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.Manythanksforyourkindnessandhospitality.Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartfor…Thankyouagainforyourkindness.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmthankstoyou.第20页6.邀请信开头惯用句式Iamwritingtoinviteyouto…Iwonderifyoucouldcome…6.邀请信结尾惯用句式Iwouldfeelhonoredifyoucouldcome.Wewouldbelookingforwardtoyourparticipationintheparty.Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.It’sapleasureformetoinviteyouto…Wesincerelyhopethatyoucanmakeit.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.第21页7.问询信开头惯用句式Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmeinformationregardingsth.Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding…Iwouldliketorequestsomeinformationabout…Iamgreatlyconcernedabout…Iwouldliketoobtainsomeinformationabout…7.问询信结尾惯用句式Yourpromptattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.Iamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.第22页8.请求信开头惯用句式Iamwritingtoseekforyourassistancein…Iamwritingto